Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
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Reviewer: Lisajean (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2017 08:19 PM · On: Chapter 20

Hi Ladies,

 

 I knew you would come through!!! But of course you had to make me doubt a little in the beginning lol  This was an Awesome chapter!  It is thrilling that Justin finally gets his eye sight back and get to see what Brian beauty! Woohoo lol  Also he can see how much Brian loves him. What a touching moment <3

 

Awe..it was sweet to read about Daphne's display of emotions over Justin's sight returning. It was funny how Brian got indignant over Daphne using his 'precious' designer clothes as her tissue lol 

 

What a Beautiful love scene between the boys.  I felt bad that Justin did not get to top Brian, but I loved how you used this scene to show how much Brian cares for Justin's well being. It also showed how much Justin wanted to show him he loves him by getting to top Brian. 

 

What an Awesome way to end this chapter by Brian admitting he loved justin! My heart's aflutter lol  The build up was worth the weight!  Thanks for all your work!

 

BIG HUGS~Lisa <3

 

 



Author's Response:

Hi Lisa!

Aw, thank you as always for another beautiful review! We tried to scare the readers a bit (haha) but not for long 😉 Writing about Justin's recovering his sight was great, although we had a lot of pressure to do it right. Glad you liked it!!!

And at first, Justin almost topped Brian here, but then, Brian was just too scared lol. Really, they have a mind of their own. Brian saying I love you? I swear he didn't told us until it was written and I was like, what the hell just happened? haha

As always, thank you for bearing with us during this journey. We're so grateful for you being one of our reader d84;a039;

* BIG HUGS BACK TO YOU *

~ Alois and addict_writer ~

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2017 08:48 AM · On: Chapter 20

Omg this was amazing, I cried happy tears reading this. Justin must have been so scared I could feel everyone's nerves waiting to see the result. I love how Brian is with him and I pray nothing goes wrong to undo all the good that was created by this operation. 

 

This is has given me hope that my eye can be fixed. 

 

Thank you you for writing this xx



Author's Response:

Aw, we're so glad this chapter had touched you! We wanted it to be special, but actually writing it was a challenge, even though we're happy with the result. We hope, too, that your eye can be fixed and are thinking of you and sending tons of love <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 

We're honored to have you as a reader of this story. A big hug to you!

~ Alois and addict_writer ~

Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2017 03:32 AM · On: Chapter 20

I love how Justin can get so excited just from sketching Brian, LOL! But I'm sure it's killing both of them having to leave the more "strenuous" activities until Justin is healed. ;p



Author's Response:

 He is like a kid in a candy store, LOL! And about them not having more 'strenuous activities', it killed us too haha, but realistically, they couldn't have sex so soon. We have a feeling they will make up for the lost time very soon :D

Thank you so much for your support Trish!

~ Alois and addict_writer ~

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2017 02:08 AM · On: Chapter 20

Thank you. Thank you.  great chapter and so glad that Brian is admitting that he loves Justin and didn't freak out at the proclamtion.  I love this story and I know sometimes it is hard to write, but I jsut wanted to tell you it is such a great read.  I can't wait to Justin fully heals and he can really have sex ( make love) with Brian.  That will be a very hot read, for sure.  ( even if it is fade to black) the emotions are so evident. 



Author's Response:

You're welcome Sandy :) It is sometimes hard to write, but hopefully the inspiration always comes back, and we have been very inspired for this chapter. Such a boost to have feedbacks like yours.

So, you want Justin to make love to Brian? Dully noted ;D

Thank you as always for your amazing support.

~Alois and addict_writer ~

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2017 01:02 AM · On: Chapter 20

Yay, Justin has his sight back.  Nay, no sex.  But Brian has no problem telling Justin that he loves him, so back to yay.



Author's Response:

LOL! Love your resume, Phyllis! 

Thank you for reading :D

~ Alois and addict_writer ~

Reviewer: xJustSayingx (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2017 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 20

Oh my God it nearly made me cry when Justin saw Brian for the first time, it was so beautiful and touching...thank you!



Author's Response:

Aw, thank YOU Sarah! We're so happy with your review as we wanted this chapter to be extra special :D

~ Alois and addict_writer ~

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2017 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 20

Justin voit ! Super nouvelle, j'espère que l'autre oeil sera aussi réussi! Beaucoup de sensualité dans ce retour au loft! Merci pour ce chapitre !

Author's Response:

Merci à toi! Toujours un plaisir de savoir que tu aimes cette histoire :D

~ Alois and addict_writer ~

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