Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2023 06:33 PM · On: Chapter 1
Fun story, great ending.
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2019 12:58 PM · On: Chapter 1
Just love your stories, grammar problems and all
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2018 12:35 AM · On: Chapter 1
I just found this story today, and from start to finish it was great!! And what an ending!!
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: April 16, 2017 02:16 AM · On: Chapter 1
Sorry, forgot to mention Andrew calling Ethan Ian was a hoot, he had no way to know that his daddy always called ethan that, and when meeting Brian the twins came to him to shake hands-- just cute as a button
Author's Response: Of course we can not forget about that!!!!! Andrew is definitely is father's son!!!!
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: April 16, 2017 02:11 AM · On: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed your story,the twins were so cute. Of course mikey had to act like the dumb ass that he is. I loved how the kids acted when Andrew said they were a surprise. It amazes me that the tortured childhood Brian had and how muc he loves his kids, Gus will never have to wonder if he is love and wanted and neither will the twins, I think he has love for Jenny because mikey is to self centered to love anybody but himself.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Really glad you enjoyed!!!
Reviewer: qafqueenbee (Anonymous) · Date: April 08, 2017 02:32 PM · On: Chapter 1
I ejoyed reading this story agin. I needed to update before reading the follow up story.
lah
Author's Response: Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: February 17, 2017 05:10 AM · On: Chapter 1
Good story. Great kids. Glad to there's a sequel.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading :-)
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: February 14, 2017 06:12 PM · On: Chapter 1
Rachel,
Still a few grammatical/ spelling errors but what an AMAZING story!! I would definitely love for you to continue this storyline especially now that Brian and Justin have 'found' each other again and are building a life together. Besides, there is so much fodder to be had in the aftermath of the 'Hidden' revelations.
Great Job!
Author's Response: Thanks so much. Promise the grammar was better then before but I'll go back and check again. Squeal should be posted here soon check it out on A3O if you would like
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2017 06:20 AM · On: Chapter 1
U covered everything...i loved it ...thank u for sharing...super work.
Author's Response: So glad you enjoyed :-)
Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2017 04:16 AM · On: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed the story. Very different take on the story of Brian and Justin but had a happy ending and that's what matters. Loved the twins. Thanks for sharimg this story. Bill
Author's Response: Thanks for reading
Reviewer: qafqueenbee (Anonymous) · Date: January 20, 2017 12:36 AM · On: Chapter 1
Nice, will you be adding to the story.
Author's Response: Yes, there is a sequel but it's probably going a while before I post it. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: rulisteningbj (Anonymous) · Date: January 19, 2017 10:30 PM · On: Chapter 1
What a lovely story. I liked a good MPreg fic and this fit the bill. Great idea. I have no talent in writing, but I would like to make a suggestion: Ask Kim to help you find a great beta. I would offer but my grammer and punctuation skills are really awful. Welcome and hope to see a lot more stories.
Dee Dee
Author's Response: Thanks so much. Glad you liked it. And I will ask her for a beta and thank you for the slightly but not really offer. Lol :-)
Reviewer: chandrika (Anonymous) · Date: January 18, 2017 09:36 PM · On: Chapter 1
great story thank you for writing and sharing
Author's Response: Thanks
Reviewer: orhida43 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2017 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 1
Earlier, I read this story and see the story back much much improved.Thank you, I enjoyed.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. Glad you enjoyed now that it was fixed :-)
Reviewer: Acadian Proud (Anonymous) · Date: January 17, 2017 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 1
I liked this story. Thank you for writing it. I alway like stories that have Brian finally telling his 'family' that he is tired of how they have treated him.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Glad you liked it
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2017 06:40 AM · On: Chapter 1
I totally loved this. It's a shame that it took 4 years for Justin to tell Brian, but in the end it all worked out. And now Brian will finally be around from the beginning for their next child.
Author's Response: Thanks for your comment. Glad you like it
Reviewer: mcm (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2017 05:28 AM · On: Chapter 1
NICE LONG READ.
GOOD JOB
Author's Response: Thank you glad you enjoyed.
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2017 03:02 AM · On: Chapter 1
Welcome to MW, Rachel! Thank you for becoming a member, and for posting your story here! I'm off to bed soon, but will be looking forward to reading this. Looks very interesting! Thanks for your support of the site! ~Kim
Author's Response: Hey, Kim. Thanks for the welcome. I'm so happy to be here. :-)
|
