Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2019 07:17 AM · On: End of the Line...Not!

Oh wow what a last chapter, their lovemaking was beautiful in all the places they passed through. I hope they took time to eat lol. I loved Mr Murphy’s reaction and the boys reaction to it. I like him I wouldn’t mind seeing him again. I didn’t want to see this story end just like all your stories. You have a beautiful way of writing them you take me into the a world of magic with them. 

 

Incredible work x



Author's Response:

Since I gave the businessman one of my family's last names and used my favorite male name for his first one I couldn't make the guy anything but delightful.  LOL!  Thank you so much for checking out my very first story and for all your comments on it.  They mean the world to me, Vicki.  Warmest hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2019 07:59 PM · On: The Games People Play

Lol Justin is a cheeky little thing isn’t he. Loved how he went to their table engaging in conversation then deliberately forgetting Brian’s name that made me laugh. You really did a fantastic job with this chapter even when Bruan surprised Justin in the shower lol .



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, Vicki.  This chapter was a lot of fun to write.  Since this was my first story, I knew I wanted to include some of the things that happened on the show but give it a little twist by letting Justin tease Brian with them.  I'm so glad you enjoyed their 'games'.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2019 12:27 PM · On: The Challenge

Lol I laughed all the way through this it was brilliant. Justin was a little devil wasn’t he. I could hear Brian in my head muttering what he will do to him once he gets his hands on him. I could see this actually happening on an episode of the show in fact it would be perfect. Then I could see Brian doing it back to him lol 

 

Fantastic work x



Author's Response:

One of the things I loved best about this couple on the show was the way they amused each other so easily.  For instance, I loved that scene with Hunter in the bar when Hunter was coming on to Brian with Justin right there.  LOL!  It was easy to imagine Justin playing games like this with Brian on the train too.  So glad you also had a bit of fun with them.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2019 03:04 PM · On: Room Service, Sir!

Brian’s reaction was perfect, I could feel his heart ful up so fast with joy and excitement at seeing Justin standing there. Lol the woman passing them with her family I’m sure was shocked I’m just sorry she didn’t see them kiss lol. There passion was enough to power the train all the way to Chicago I’m sure. The poor guy Vrian was meant to see is probably still waiting in the dining car lol . 

 

Beautiful chapter x



Author's Response:

This has to be one of the top favorite chapters I've ever written.  I just tried to imagine how I would feel if I was offered this kind of 'room service' by someone I loved while traveling by train and the words flowed.  LOL!  I'm so glad you enjoyed reading it as much as I did writing it, Vicki.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2019 07:25 AM · On: All Aboard!

I could really feel Brian’s annoyance at being away from Justin and wh did it have to happen at this time of year. It’s great that their bond is so strong that these things matter to him to them both. I love Justin rushing to the station I can hear him curing in his head muttering all sorts trying to get there and track down the man he loves. I can’t wait to see what Brian’s reaction is on seeing him. 

 

Fabulous chapter x



Author's Response:

Time certainly does crawl when you have so little of it and you really, really want to get somewhere quick.  LOL!  But fate can be kind sometimes too.  Hope you enjoy Brian's reaction to Justin's little plan.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2019 08:46 PM · On: Becky to the Rescue

It’s so adorable they are not even separated an hour and they miss each other so much. My heart is hurting Grimaldi and her husband. I hope everything will be ok. It’s horrible to see anyone unwell like that. 

 

I pray Justin gets there on time and if he does Brian will be so surprised.

 Fantastic work x



Author's Response:

Sadly, the Grimaldi family emergency is just the ticket that Justin needs to fulfill his dearest wish... the chance to share a train ride with Brian.  Now all he has to do is get there in time.  I can't count how many times there were long delays in making a departure when I was still riding the train on vacations, so there is still that chance.  Hugh Hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2019 03:49 PM · On: Shopping, Packing, and Saying Goodbye!

They move together like perfect dancers so in sync and reading each other’s minds. They have the right balance and that will power them through. Lol their shopping I’m sure was brilliant and I bet they had fun trying to figure out what to buy.  I hope something can be done to keep them together xx



Author's Response:

Our boys are always together, even when miles apart.  But you have to remember how clever Justin can be.  LOL!  He just might have something up his sleeve for the holidays.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2019 01:33 PM · On: Cleaning up the Problem

They really do take care of each other don’t they and that’s a beautiful thing to see. I love that Brian doesn’t like going away and leaving Justin so close to the holidays. I really hope something can be done for this hot and sexy couple. 

 

Hotness chapter x



Author's Response:

This was the very first time I ever tried writing a really hot chapter and I was as nervous as all get out that it would sound unbelievable or corny.  I'm so glad that it turned out to be okay in the end.  Now, if only the boys didn't have to be separated with the holidays coming up.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2019 12:52 PM · On: Let's Sit Down and Discuss the Problem

I wanted to hold Brian as he was telling Justin what he has to do. I know it might seem like much to others but being with Justin and his son is very important. I hope the guys work something out. Sending them hugs 🤗 xx



Author's Response:

The important thing about this chapter is to show how much Brian and Justin support each other.  They tend to think of how the other one feels even more than for themselves.  In other words, they are true partners in life.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2019 12:47 PM · On: Honey I'm Home...And I've Got News

Poor Brian, that really sucks that’s all on hi shoulders now. Maybe if he had done his shopping online it wouldn’t be as bad for him. That trip he has to take I can feel how draining it might be for him. It’s always a pain to travel when you do t want to. 

 

Brilliant first chapter x



Author's Response:

Brian will do anything for his clients, but he is a man who likes to get right to things quickly.  Train travel is a slow way to go and he's never used it before, so he's not too thrilled about this coming business trip.  What's worse is the length of time he'll be away from Justin.  If only Justin could go with him.  LOL!  I am super excited to see what you think of the very first story I ever wrote.  I owe it all to the young lady, Becky, who was also a fanfic writer.  She encouraged me to give it a try after reading my comments on her amazing stories and then volunteered for a while to be my beta.   She is the only author that I trusted enough to read an mpreg story that she posted.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: August 20, 2013 09:04 AM · On: End of the Line...Not!

I remembered you saying this was your first story, so I thought it would be fun to go back and read the first, right after reading your most recent (hopefully not your 'last'). I was going to say that your writing has gotten better over time, but I don't think that's completely true. Your writing, even in this first story, was always wonderful, so there wasn't really any improvement needed. Thanks again for writing all these great stories! TAG



Author's Response:

My dear Tag, your comments are among the most generous I have ever received.  I think that I have learned to express my ideas better with the experience I've gained with each story, but I have to admit that the plots of some of my earlier works are still among my favorites.  The one thing that brings me the most joy is that my stories are still being read and appreciated.  That is the utmost compliment to an amateur like myself.  Thank you for bringing such happiness to my day, and for doing it so many times.  I am very appreciative.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: October 17, 2012 11:58 PM · On: End of the Line...Not!

Just browsing through old fics, trying to find some inspiration, and I found this sweet little gem. I loved it! I adore train travel myself - although it's almost impossible in our fast paced world to find the time for it. But, I can definitely see our boys enjoying the forced slower pace. Great story. Thanks. TAG



Author's Response:

I am so happy to hear from you about this particular story, Tag.  It was the very first story I ever wrote and my inspiration was my great love of train travel.  It was the reaction of the readers that gave me the courage to continue writing.  Thank you very much for checking it out and letting me know that you enjoyed it.  Warmest hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Katia (Anonymous) · Date: October 16, 2011 11:29 PM · On: End of the Line...Not!

Wonderful story!! thank you for sharing your ideas!! :D



Author's Response:

This is such a fantastic thrill to still hear a comment on my very first story written over 4 years ago.  Thank you so much, Katia.  You have made my day.  I appreciate it more than I can say.  Warmest hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2010 05:35 PM · On: End of the Line...Not!

Oh what a lovely amusing fic. You have their voices so clear I can actually imagine Justin being the bratty little sod at Brian's expense. Thanks Chris



Author's Response:

Justin does have a wicked sense of humor.  I loved some of the horseplay between those two during the series and enjoyed trying to picture some other games for them.  I'm so glad you enjoyed this partiular trip.  Thank you very much for commenting, Chris.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2010 12:23 AM · On: End of the Line...Not!

An excellent idea for another story; a cruiseliner. This was a very fun read.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked this story, JT.  It actually was my very first story.  I was so nervous about whether it would be enjoyed or not.  The feedback I got was so good that I knew I had to continue writing.  I actually made several friends from this story that I am still close to after nearly 3 years.  I chose the train since it is my personal favorite means of transportation, and I actually took a one month trip around the entire continental United States via train as my treat to myself when I retired.  The older large lady in the dining car was me.  Hee hee!  I couldn't help thinking how much I would have enjoyed sharing a train trip with those two.  As for them taking a cruise, I haven't written a long story like that but if you get the urge to check out another short story I have one set on a cruise called 'Treading on Water in the Deep End'.  You might enjoy the adventure on the big seas.  Again, may I tell you how very much your reviews have made me happy.  I am thrilled to hear from you every single time.  With much love, Grammy

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2010 12:12 AM · On: The Games People Play

I'd make boy have to stand up for a week before he could sit down.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2010 12:01 AM · On: The Challenge

Justin is known to have horns holding up his halo.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2010 11:46 PM · On: Room Service, Sir!

I wonder if the client got an earfull too.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2010 11:29 PM · On: All Aboard!

Room service; cute.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2010 11:12 PM · On: Becky to the Rescue

I knew you would get  them together someway.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2010 11:03 PM · On: Shopping, Packing, and Saying Goodbye!

Hummm....where do we go from here?

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2010 10:47 PM · On: Cleaning up the Problem

I think Justin can find a way to stole away on the Love Train.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2010 10:37 PM · On: Let's Sit Down and Discuss the Problem

I'm on a vacation from writing having created over a million words in one year and how better to spend it than reading your work? Justin knows how to bring Brian to his knees by getting on his knees. How sweet!

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2010 10:29 PM · On: Honey I'm Home...And I've Got News

I skip your one shots and seek the next story with chapters that interests me. Others did too but perhaps this banner sucked me in  :P

And the thought of sex on a train....oh baby!

Reviewer: lougenessis (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2008 04:01 AM · On: End of the Line...Not!

Well you can officially wring me out and hang me out to dry; what a beautiful  and loving story.  I get so emotional when I read your work, your stories always, always warm my heart.  Thank you for "getting" their love and writing it out so beautifully.

Author's Response: This is one of the nicest compliments I've received Lougenessis.  Thank you so very much.  This particular story is so dear to my heart simply because it was my very first one.  I'm thrilled to know that it is still being read and enjoyed.  You have made my day.  Thank you again.  Hugs, Grammy

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