Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2016 08:12 PM · On: Chapter 1

Bravo!!!

ok first thing I want to say is you had me in tears by the end.
You truely have a way with words. Gifted writer, truely.

Truthfully, when I saw that this was about Brokeback" I was like ehhh. and keep it moving. While I know of the movie, it really did nothing for me, I guess due to the fact that I didn't feel the chemistry between the actors ( unlike 2 others I won't mention hehe)
BUT how you wrote this on paper!!! HOT! It was like it was Jack, Ennis and ME!!!! we were all in that together!!
lol

I am I didn't skip over it this time and decided to give it a read. Well Done.
ps don't make me cry anymore! haha

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for taking the time to comment. That's the only real reward a fan fic writer ever gets. If you're interested, there is a sequal to the story. It's much longer, and some of it is quite sad, but it also attempts to make things come right in the end.

Cyn