Reviewer: Sksfan (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2020 02:46 PM · On: Chapter 1

I loved this story! Great job

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2018 11:02 PM · On: Chapter 12

Love it

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2018 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 5

love the part with grNDMA, YOU WRITE GOOD, LAUGHED so hard, still do.

Reviewer: bellawu (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2018 09:06 PM · On: Chapter 12

Im not ready to part wirh them yet.... please write the sequel....i love all of them. Iblove justin parents, grams, molly, ted.

thanks for writing...if you write the sequel i promise i will reviews every ch

Author's Response:

Hey, I'm so glad you enjoyed reading my story. I will think about writing a sequel, maybe when I have more free time to write. Thank you very much! :)

Reviewer: bellawu (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2018 08:46 PM · On: Chapter 10

Gram always know everything. Im so sad that this story slmost over. 

Reviewer: bellawu (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2018 01:44 PM · On: Chapter 2

Lol made up fiancee.... 

Reviewer: qafqueenbee (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2017 04:01 AM · On: Chapter 12

Nice story

 

lah

Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2017 12:40 PM · On: Chapter 12

Aw, they're so adorable together. Thank you for this great story Sarah! I enjoyed it immensely :)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much, it was a joy to write this story! :)

Reviewer: peacock (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2017 05:36 PM · On: Chapter 12

This was a lovely, romantic, lighthearted, humorous, positively uplifting story! It was a pleasure to read! Well done!

Author's Response:

Oh my god, that's so awesome to hear, thank you very much! :)

Reviewer: arakiss (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2017 04:34 PM · On: Chapter 9

I was expecting Ethan to show up, instead Molly displayed unusual skills and determination :)
You keep the intrigue going pretty well!

Author's Response:

Molly is a real smart kid, just like her brother :)

Thank you very much!

Reviewer: arakiss (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2017 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 5

“Are you sexually repressed, Brian?”

:)))))))))))))))))))))))

Author's Response:

I bet he's never heard that sentence before... :D

Reviewer: arakiss (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2017 07:45 AM · On: Chapter 2

Oh my... Brian-Ethan ...
I'm enjoying this so much :D

Author's Response:

Poor Brian, what an awful name :D

Reviewer: aem_mza (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2017 04:10 AM · On: Chapter 12

Muy buena historia.

Author's Response:

Muchas gracias! :)

Reviewer: cookiebun (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2017 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 9

Holy shit, Molly is a smart kid, and why would she think her father stole the patent... how will she feel when she learns it really was stolen?

Reviewer: cookiebun (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2017 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 5

I wish Brian could tell Justin the truth, but as agitated as he already is, I'm not sure Justin could handle it at this point. :( 

Reviewer: cookiebun (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2017 02:38 AM · On: Chapter 4

Brian can't sleep with Justin while not being honest... he actually cares!!! That's huge

Author's Response:

I think it was a very unusual thing to do for Brian and it showed how much he cared for Justin right from the beginning.

Reviewer: cookiebun (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2017 09:56 PM · On: Chapter 3

I like Daphne helping the "couple"

Author's Response:

Daphne was a Britin shipper all along. *grin*

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2017 03:07 PM · On: Chapter 12

Hi, Sarah! I loved this from beginning to end! And since you sort of left that threat from Ethan hanging in the air, maybe a one shot where he returns to cause trouble  and he confronts Gram, who takes care of him as only she can? Or maybe make that a epilogue to this one?

I love your writing style. Can't wait to see what you come up with next! ~Kim

Author's Response:

Hi Kim, I will definitely think about it, a meeting of Ethan and Gram would be priceless! Thank you so much for your support :)

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2017 11:50 AM · On: Chapter 5

I really need to stop because I have a shitload of things to do, but I think I will just indulge in one last chapter... Loving this!

Author's Response:

Oh, I can really relate to that- the day should have more hours so it's possible to read all fanfictions on this site.

So glad you liked the chapter! 

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2017 12:03 AM · On: Chapter 11

Hi, Sarah!  I both loved and hated that ending - ha!  I can't wait to see what that little weasel does now.  I was kind of surprised that Justin allowed his father to walk him down the aisle, but I guess he has to 'play the part' until they get proof of his father's duplicity?  Ethan may very well wind up spoiling their ruse now.  But I suspect he may be too late, and they will already have the evidence they need. 

So glad the two men professed their true feelings for each other, and I loved Brian proposing for real to him! Brian's vows were soooo cute!  About the puppy, the shower, the Dramamine...and I just adore Gram!! Love that character!

I, too, will hate to see this story end.  I adore all of your stories, Sarah.  I hope there will be a new one soon after this one is done.  (No pressure - ha!). 

Thank you for being one of our writers on here.  It is much appreciated, and we are blessed to have your talent on here.  :)  ~Kim

 

 

Author's Response:

Hi Kim, it makes me very happy you liked the vows so much! :)

Yes, Justin had no choice but to go along with the original ceremony, otherwise it had possibly mixed up the whole wedding. Ethan showed up at a really inconvenient time, but I'm sure they will know how to get rid off him.

I'm glad to tell you that I've already written two chapters of a new story that is very different from all of my other stories...you will see! 

 

It's very touching to hear that, thank you so so much for all of your motivating reviews! <3

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2017 08:49 AM · On: Chapter 9

Wow now it's all unraveling I do wonder how Justin takes the news Brian should have been honest

Author's Response:

It won't be easy for Justin to learn the truth, that's for sure...

Thanks for leaving a review! :)

Reviewer: Camlaw (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2017 11:01 PM · On: Chapter 8

OMG!!!! I love Gram... And I don't buy it for one minute that she had the camera out to take pictures of a possible ghost....

I hate that this story is coming to an end. Most defintely needs a sequel...Daily Adventures With Gram perhaps....  :)

Author's Response:

Gram's the best! I will think about writing a sequel :)

Thanks for your review! 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2017 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 8

Ya have to love Granny.  This just proves they were made for each other and Craig is in sooooo much trouble.  I bet Granny would side with Brian.

Author's Response:

She's a hoot, isn't she. I think so too, she definitely would!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2017 08:47 PM · On: Chapter 6

How did I miss reviewing this chapter.  It was amazing.  Brian a hero for rescuing the little girl.  Dogs chasing a cat.  Justin showing Brian his fav place.  I firmly believe if Brian told Justin what he is looking for Justin would help him.

Author's Response:

I think you're right, but Brian probably thought Justin would hate him after he told him the reason for his stay.

Thanks for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2017 05:20 AM · On: Chapter 7

Well this could get a little complicated.

Author's Response:

For sure, and it already is! Thanks for your review :)

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2017 01:19 AM · On: Chapter 6

Hi, Sarah!  Grrr....Ethan! I had forgotten about him (must have been that sex scene). ;) 

I suspect that Justin will find out before Brian has a chance to properly explain, and that will create some angst (which is fine with me; I love a little drama!).  Now if you can throw in some jealousy on Brian's part when it comes to Ethan reappearing somehow, I would like that. I love a jealous Brian!

Loved the ending scene - hot but tender. Glad the two found a way to be alone. This continues to be one of my favorites!  But I know how RL can interfere, so I'll be waiting as patiently as I can until you are able to update again.

Thank you for posting your stories on here!  I have enjoyed each one very much so far.  ~Kim

Author's Response:

That's possible ;)

There will certainly be some angst, however probably not right away in the next chapter. A jealous Brian is definitely included in this story! :D

Thank you very much! :)

 

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2017 09:13 AM · On: Chapter 5

Oh dear I don't want them to break up and I wish Brian could be honest with Justin and Daphne. I just know Molly is going to find out and spill the beans

Author's Response:

Maybe he will in the next few chapters, stay tuned! Molly going to find out is very likely.

Thanks for commenting! :)

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2017 06:28 AM · On: Chapter 5

I am looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm glad you like the story! :)

Reviewer: LauraB725 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2017 02:21 AM · On: Chapter 5

The scene with Brian and grams was hilarious! Love this story. I see a train wreck coming though ugh! Justin will be furious when he finds out Brian's initial motive and Brian will have a hard time explaining that he truly fell in love. I'm anxious to see if they do indeed get married and how this patent mess plays out. Looking forward to the next update!

Author's Response:

I loved writing this scene so much! :D

It's certainly a very difficult situation- Maybe Brian will even have to decide what's more important for him, saving his business or finding true love.

The next few chapters are going to be very interesting ;)

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: March 05, 2017 06:44 PM · On: Chapter 4

Brian must have had a brain fart! They both wanted each other and suddenly Brian begins to think--wrong time Kinney! I can only guess Ted's arrival will make things worse,used your head Brian and not the one on your shoulders.

Author's Response:

Even if they would've certainly had a great time together, I think Brian's decision only showed how much he already cares about Justin, not wanting to use him and hurt his feelings afterwards. 

Ted's arrival will make things even more complicated for sure!

Reviewer: Oliviatheolive (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2017 11:58 PM · On: Chapter 3

Oh goodness- So many great elements in this one. Overprotective Molly is amazing. I really felt her distrust of Brian in this chapter. So happy that Daphne is present.  I'm super conflicted on whether to root for Brian or to pray he comes clean about this before the shit hits the fan. But Daphne is right---- Brian definitely is feeling something towards Justin. 

Olivia.

Author's Response:

Thank you very much! =)

I always like it when stories have Mollly in it because I wondered what she would be like as a teenager later on :)

You're right, Brian may not like it but he definitely can't deny his feelings forever.

 

Reviewer: Oliviatheolive (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2017 11:53 PM · On: Chapter 1

Ohhh, I really like where this is going. I've never heard of the Wedding Pact, but I'm liking this story. Poor Brian and his business. I hope he's able to accomplish what he set out to do. And Justin---ohh, he better tell his family about the break-up! I can't believe he wanted this long. 

Olivia. 

Author's Response:

I guess only time will tell ;)

Of course it would have been better to tell Justin's parents, but then he wouldn't have such a magnificent fake-fiancé by his side :D

I'm so glad you like my story!

Reviewer: greatyoj (Anonymous) · Date: February 19, 2017 05:50 AM · On: Chapter 1

a great beginning of a story... funny and witty :)

Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2017 10:11 AM · On: Chapter 1

What a pickle Justin is in, I hope he can get out of it. I love the banter between Justin and Briam and I love it more the way you wrote it and they just met.

 

Brilliant start. X

Author's Response:

Thank you very much, I try to keep them as much in character as possible :)

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2016 11:59 PM · On: Chapter 3

Hi, Sarah!  I was thrilled to see an update to one of my favorite current stories!  This is such fun to read!  And I love to read any story with Daphne in them.  Something tells me both men's plans are not going to go as they think. ;)

I'll be looking forward to reading the rest of this story! Thank you for posting this on MW!  ~Kim

Author's Response:

Yeah, Daphne's the best! :)

Thank you so much for your kind review- I will try to update soon :)

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2016 03:55 AM · On: Chapter 2

Brian and The airplane departure had me laughing my head off. He has Justin over a barrel so Sunshine just needs to give up and give in for now. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response:

They are just perfect for each other- I'm sure Justin will get used to the situation sooner than he thinks ;)

Thank you!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2016 01:19 AM · On: Chapter 2

Justin is soooo funny.  He doesn't have any reason to be angry.  Personally I think he should go along with it after all it is an answer to his prayers.

Author's Response:

He really is hilarious :D

I'm pretty sure even if he's not really thrilled right now, he'll go along with it in the end :)

Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2016 03:54 PM · On: Chapter 1

Great story I can not wait to read. More of this story your a great writer

Author's Response:

Thank you very much! :)

Reviewer: Dark_Oreo27 (Anonymous) · Date: November 14, 2016 11:29 AM · On: Chapter 1

It's looking very promising! I'm looking forward to the next chapter. 😄

Author's Response:

Thank you very much, it's great that you like my story :)

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2016 04:07 PM · On: Chapter 1

Hi Sarah!  So excited to see you starting a new story,  and I'm loving it already!  Looking forward to reading more of this, as well as eagerly waiting for the rest of "Trapped." You have a great way of pulling in the readers' attention.  TY for posting your stories on here. a86; ~Kim

Author's Response:

Thank you very much, that's great to hear! Trapped will definitely be updated soon. :)

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2016 02:07 AM · On: Chapter 1

I really liked this beginning.  A passed out Justin and an already slightly interested Brian.  Anxious to see where you go with this story.

Author's Response:

That's good to hear! And yeah, the next chapter will be very interesting, I guess :D

Thanks for commenting!