Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2018 09:05 AM · On: For it's true, you are my destiny
Beautifully written...i am a crying mess.
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2017 06:42 PM · On: For it's true, you are my destiny
I'm crying uncontrollable... Even though I've read this before it's still so heartbreaking... You're a great writer, but the angst is killing...
Hugs Kathleen
Author's Response: Thank you for the compliment, and it's great to hear that especially coming from someone who writes with the best of them:)
Reviewer: Mary (Anonymous) · Date: October 18, 2016 01:20 AM · On: For it's true, you are my destiny
I really wish you would have put the major character death on the begining of this fic.
Someone I loved very much and was going to spend my life with died of brain cancer so the last thing I want to read is a fic about it. I read fanfic to get away from real life, not to relive the worst experience of my life.
Please put a warning on your next fic if one is needed.
Author's Response: I'm so sorry to hear about your love. My heart goes to you and to all who have lost their loved ones.
I didn't write a warning when I first posted this story, I admit that. But an MCD tag was there since chapter 7. I hope you didn't miss that when you started reading.
Im sorry if my story makes you remember the pain of losing someone so dear to you.
Hugs, Nadine
Reviewer: aglaja5 (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2016 12:14 PM · On: For it's true, you are my destiny
Ahh, and in the beginning of this chapter I’m suffering with Brian. I think it hurts a lot not knowing what is up to Justin, why he seems to push him away and tries to pair him off to Eric. And then finally this heartbreaking and painful talk. But also a long needed talk. And I think there is finally so much trust. Again, you’ve done a great job, it’s so well written I think. And what I also love about it, is the way Brian reacts and tries to be strong for Justin and asks him again to marry him. It is so sad, painful but also beautiful. Warmest regards, a.
Author's Response: Thanks for the compliment, I really appreciate it:)
Reviewer: WhiteSnowFox (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2016 10:43 PM · On: For it's true, you are my destiny
So...It was nice of Justin to try to set Brian up so he wouldn't be alone but...isn't that kind of Brian's choice? Also, he was kind of giving Eric expectations that wouldn't come true which would suck for Eric. That being said, I'm very relieved Brian isn't even entertaining the idea (I don't do well when either of the boys are with someone else emotionally). And his promises to Justin at the end were just heartwrenching...
Such a great job on this chapter. I loved it. :)
Author's Response: I also find it hard to read an emotional involved Brian to others too. I have read a few but it always left something heavy in my gut, haha.
Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2016 07:56 PM · On: For it's true, you are my destiny
At first I was all like: how could you kill off Justin and not warn us? Then I read the notes and reviews from other readers and realized differently. I usually avoid death fics but your story is very good. For a first story, I think it is exceptional. Hope you update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm so glad you decided to read it till the end. I'll update as soon as I received the chapter from my beta:)
Reviewer: Steff (Anonymous) · Date: September 22, 2016 05:01 PM · On: For it's true, you are my destiny
I like your story! Is it your first? Well done!!! Found it yesterday and couldn't stopp reading. (Although it made me cry a bit). Will enjoy the remaining two chapters, too. Thank you for sharing!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much. Yeah, this is my first QAF, but I have written a few stories with other fandom. I'm so glad you enjoyed this, I hope you will like how I ended it:) Thanks again!
Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2016 08:04 AM · On: For it's true, you are my destiny
Well, I just knew somthing wasn't right with his brain, I just hadn't realized it was cancer. Great work! Patiently waiting for the next chapter :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I hope you'll like the next one:)
Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2016 04:26 PM · On: For it's true, you are my destiny
Oh boy, this is going to be a heartbreaker. It is great to see Brian and Justin together and so much in love, though.
Author's Response: Yes, they will stay that way for years and years:)
Thanks!
Reviewer: Tom (Anonymous) · Date: September 21, 2016 01:30 AM · On: For it's true, you are my destiny
I am not sure if I can continue reading this. I can't read death fics, Hence the warnings! I guess it all depends on how you end this story. Can you tell me if Justin dies soon and young or does he die of old age from cancer or natural causes. I realize you want it to be a suprise but at this point that is moot.
Author's Response:
I don't know if it's a surprise anymore but B&J will have decades of living together. I only have 2 more chapters, so, I don't think it will be long to find out. That is if you decide to stick with it, but I understand if you won't. Sorry to upset you, really. Thanks for reading though:)
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 21, 2016 01:24 AM · On: For it's true, you are my destiny
If the ending isnt written yet ,Maybe the ending could have Brian AND Justin not dying or at least out living the gang. Or dying when they are in their 90's of natural causes. Not putting that warning in wasn't cool but it was a mistake. Maybe you can make it up to us with an ending that we can love. Lol Just a thought!
Author's Response: I already written the whole story before I posted the first chapter, and I know it's my fault for not indicating a proper tags. I'm trying to edit the category now, but I just can't seem to figure it out. Maybe because I'm using a phone and not laptop, I don't know. Anyway, sorry if I happen to upset you. Still I want to thank you for reading and commenting:)
Reviewer: britinmanor (Anonymous) · Date: September 21, 2016 01:00 AM · On: For it's true, you are my destiny
i think it's really crappy for you to not put in your major character death warning. i would have never started to read this. really awful of a writer.
Author's Response: I'm sorry.
Reviewer: Penny (Anonymous) · Date: September 20, 2016 11:38 PM · On: For it's true, you are my destiny
Yes, I am upset that you did not inform us and encouraged us to Continue reading and there will be a happy ending. You said that they will have happy decades together. I'm not sure if I can continue reading, depends on Justin's future. Do you mean that Justin doesn't die from cancer, get some kind of operation or somthing and Brian and Justin live a real long life together married, after his operation, and live on earth, alive on earth?. Or did you mean that Justin would wait in heaven for Brian to be together. I'm confused. If the deaths are at the end when they are old men then it's a normal life progression to die elderly and might not of needed a major death warning. I dont know . If Justin dies young because of Cancer then that would be a major character death. So please tell me which is it? Does Justin have a long life happy married with Brian on earth and die elderly or does he die from cancer young. I don't know if the ending is wtitten but the author can make up what they want anytime.
Author's Response:
Justin will be with Brian on earth and not in some magical/other dimentional kind of life. The story is already completely written and I have only 2 more long chapters and yes they will be together for some time. Thank you for reading and I'm sorry if I upset you with me not placing the proper tags:)
Admin note: Unless a major character (Brian or Justin) dies in the story while still young, you don't need a MCD tag added.
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2016 08:03 PM · On: For it's true, you are my destiny
Wonderful story, wonderful writing, still loving this. I knew there was something terrible wrong with Justin, but this * sigh * . I hope the doctors at Akron can cure him and they live till their 50th anniversary. That was my first thought. Then I read your end notes and it was oops ... no happy end. But you don't need to apologize, it's your story. After that I read some comments and saw that you wrote "They'd still have a great decades of living a happy life". Don't know why people are angry with you.
* hugs *
Author's Response: Thank you so much. That was my reason for not putting the MCD warnings, I don't want people to think that Justin will die so soon. I'm so glad you're going to stick to the end and I'm hoping you'd like it.
Reviewer: Draccone (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2016 05:39 PM · On: For it's true, you are my destiny
Oh my god. How could you? I get into it and then Justin is dying! Ahhhh! So you made this place up... can you make a cure up? God, this is so not right. Soooooo not right. Can't wait for the update.
Author's Response: Sure, and I guess I just did;)
I'll update as soon as the new chapter will come from my beta reader.
Thank you so much for reading and commenting. Have a nice day!
Reviewer: TheWickedStepmother (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2016 03:34 PM · On: For it's true, you are my destiny
Wow..... I'm not sure what to say. That was not a nice move from you...really. In response to a reviewer you said it's a happy ending story, can't see that right now.
Nevertheless, I will continue to read. The last chapter was absolutely well written!
Author's Response: Yeah, I know and I'm so sorry for it. Thank you for deciding to continue reading it though. I hope you'll like the last 2 chapters:)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2016 02:09 PM · On: For it's true, you are my destiny
Wow. We knew something was wrong, but cancer and the possibility of Justin dying? Great story and I will be impatiently waiting for another chapter. Knowing that Brian will be with him is great, whether he survives or not!
Author's Response: Thank you so much and I'll update as soon as my beta will send the new chapter back:)
Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2016 02:03 PM · On: For it's true, you are my destiny
I've been saving this story to read as soon as life slows down a little (RL refuses to give me all the time to read all the wonderful stories appearing at the moment) but I have been saving it to my computer to read as soon as I have the chance. I admit I have quick glimpses to see what's happening. I was aware that something was wrong with Justin and when I saw in this chapter that he had brain cancer I had to have more than a glimpse. I wanted to cry for both Brian and Justin and for myself - I lost my best friend to brain cancer two years after she had breast cancer. I remember telling her that when she was well we'd be sewing and shopping again - sadly that wasn't to be. Cancer is a bitch and over the past few years I've lost 3 people close to me to it, the latest my stepfather just a few weeks ago. I'm hoping that someday something like your Akron laboratory and it's procedures will be real and that there will be lasting hope for cancer sufferers or better yet a cure...
Because of your notes at the end of the chapter I had a peek at the reviews and decided that I needed to write something now rather than wait until I had time to give your story the time it deserved as a couple were a little negative because Justin is dying - or at least very ill. (Something about not putting a warning on the story) You explained he would have decades with Brian - so really not a major character death at all - well not for a long time. I just wanted to encourage you to keep writing this story the way it's meant to be - and honestly I don't think you need to apologize at all - if anything perhaps an ‘angst’ tag would have given people a clue to something serious – but aren’t all the best stories filled with some angst. Dying after a long life is natural. Living through serious trials part of life. All I want, is that at the end Brain and Justin love each other for whatever time they have - long or short.
Even if ‘major character death’ is in the tags I will always read it – Tin For The Firefly by No Chaser is a wonderful story where Justin died after the bashing – to not read it because of the tag would have been a tragedy – life, death – what really matters in the end is love.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for that kind words, it really means a lot to me. I'm sorry for your loss and I know how hard it is to lose some people that you love to cancer, I have lost my dad and grandma to it too.
This story is already complete and will only have 2 more long chapters. Hoping to wrap this up in few days or so. I hope you'll like how I ended it and yes they will still have a long life to live together:)
Thank you so much for commenting, I really appreciate it.
Have a nice day!
Reviewer: Sharon (Anonymous) · Date: September 20, 2016 06:45 AM · On: For it's true, you are my destiny
Does Justin die in this story. I want to know because I cannot continue reading if that is the case. If he has no memories of Brian also I would like to know. And yes a warning should 9f been placed from the begining. I never would of thought this was a death story.
Author's Response: The ending is an overview of all of the gangs' lives until they are in their old age. So deaths are really there. As for Justin, he will have a life with Brian after this scare, decades actually. But I know it's not an excuse not to put an appropriate tags. I'm sorry, I really am.
Reviewer: Kelly (Anonymous) · Date: September 20, 2016 06:39 AM · On: For it's true, you are my destiny
I need to know if Justin dies in this story or has some brain damage or somthing. You have been saying that the ending is happy so how can that be if he dies. We kept reading all through Brian acting mean and now this. I would of never started reading this story if I knew that it was a death fic. I invested myself in it and now I am a little upset. So if you could please, answer. This is somthing that a warning should of been posted before a reader gets emotionally invested in a story.
Author's Response: I really messed this one up. I know. I'm sorry to all for not indicating the major warning. I said it was a happy ending because they will have decades of being together and that was mainly my only reason for not writing the MCD warning. I'm so sorry.
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