Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
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Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2018 07:42 AM · On: Only you can make all this change in me

Story is marvelous..aweome work.

Reviewer: aglaja5 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2016 08:46 PM · On: Only you can make all this change in me

 

 

I love this chapter because there is such a great development between them. You’ve done a great job in showing how Brian finally loses his fears about getting hurt and realizes what is really important. They are so cute together, beautiful. I love their texting. While reading it the first time I worried more and more about Justin, but today I already knew and I’m so afraid…. Warmest regards, a.

 

 



Author's Response:

Yeah, I want a gradual process and not too forceful. They both need time especially Brian. Justin was fighting his own feelings too but for totally different reasons, which you already have figured out by now, I think:)

Reviewer: WhiteSnowFox (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2016 10:33 PM · On: Only you can make all this change in me

Jess is very protective of Justin, that seals it.  There's something wrong with him.  It's his brain.  A tumor or something?  Ohhh this is going to be so painful...But I can't stop myself from reading.  They're moving in the right direction and I just want them to be happy, even if it doesn't last for very long.

You're doing a great job!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Kelly (Anonymous) · Date: September 14, 2016 03:09 AM · On: Only you can make all this change in me

Now there is the Brian we all know and love. Glad to see him back. You said he needed time and I'm glad it was only a couple of chapters that he was being mean to Justin. Glad to see him admitting his feelings to himself and come to terms with them and Justin. I wonder why Jesse is always acting worried about Justin? Now I'm finding myself really wanting to read more now. Lol. I'm glad that I stuck with the story.



Author's Response:

Thank you for sticking with it. I hope you'll like how I ended it. Thank you:)

Reviewer: Sharon (Anonymous) · Date: September 14, 2016 03:01 AM · On: Only you can make all this change in me

Also I am looking forward to find out what happen to Justin. Is it going to be somthing that Justin needs Brian to comfort Him? Will it help them get closer ,what ever it is?



Author's Response:

Justin will need Brian and his family and yes, it will make them closer than ever. Thank you!

Reviewer: Sharon (Anonymous) · Date: September 14, 2016 02:59 AM · On: Only you can make all this change in me

Just wanted to say that I'm glad that I listened to you and didn't get sacred off from reading this story because Brian was acting horrible towards Justin. He is back to his caring self and now I am really enjoying the story. Looking forward for them to get closer. Just a thought, maybe a authors comment at the end of the one or two chapters where Brian is being an a-hole to Justin that it's only temporary or that he has to get passed his anger or somthing, it might help the readers not get so upset of angry Brian. Just a thought. Happily awaiting the next chapter.



Author's Response:

There are still ups and downs in next chapters. I hope you will stick through it. Thanks!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2016 11:40 PM · On: Only you can make all this change in me

Sigh. Taking it slow is great, but would it hurt for Brian to admit to Justin that they are dating? Mikey is getting a little creepy again. Jess, on the other hand, is rapidly replacing Daphne.

Author's Response:

Mikey isn't finished, he'd creep you more out. Yes, Jess was a great friend and cousin. Thank you!

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2016 02:09 PM · On: Only you can make all this change in me

Brian is so gone over Justin. He needs to stop rip-roaring around and lay all his cards out on the table and let his "partner" know. Great story!



Author's Response:

Brian was kind of right not to tell Justin about what he wants/feels. Justin would have totally pulled away from Brian if he did. Thank you for reading:)

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