Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Only You
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2018 05:40 AM · On: Only you can make the darkness bright

This promises to be a great story like your other one,looking forward to the next chapter now.

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2017 02:49 AM · On: Only you can make the darkness bright

Hopefully Brian will put his snarky attitude behind him and embrace what's been missing in his life...

Hugs Kathleen

Author's Response:

Thanks for the comment, Kathleen:)

Reviewer: Erbear4474 (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2017 02:19 AM · On: Only you can make the darkness bright

This is a beautiful story, so in depth and moving, crying my eyes out over here. Brian's scene at dinner at Deb's laying his heart out to Justin was perfect. Don't even get me started on the last chapter, it will get me started again. Do you have anymore up your sleeve, you have a great voice and perspective.

Totally added this one to my favs. 🙂

 



Author's Response:

Hi! Thanks for reading and commenting. I'm so happy to know that you liked it. I may have one story coming up in few days. I finished writing it, just needs a little polishing. Thanks, again:)

Reviewer: Mary (Anonymous) · Date: October 16, 2016 06:35 AM · On: Only you can make the darkness bright

What happened to the rest of Chapter 6???

I really like this so far but would like to read all of chapter .



Author's Response:

Hi. I really don't know what you mean. I take it you couldn't access the whole chapter 6? I just checked it and everything was fine. Maybe you just need to reload the page again.

I hope you'll enjoy the rest of the story. Thanks.

Reviewer: rulisteningbj (Anonymous) · Date: October 05, 2016 02:27 AM · On: Only you can make the darkness bright

You are very talented.  If there had been a warning about this being a death fic, I would not have read it.  But alas I was in deep before you warned us.  Beauitfully written story.  Hope to see more from you.

Dee Dee



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. Sorry for the late warning, but I'm glad you stick with this til the end:)

Reviewer: aglaja5 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2016 10:16 AM · On: Only you can make the darkness bright

Hi! I've found your story yesterday and started reading it and I couldn't stop myself. It's great! Amazing! I like it very very much. So much that I must admit I've read it too fast, too fast to get all the little wonderful details. But I think after each chapter I just wanted to know how it continues. So, now after I've finished I decided to re-read it and try to give you some reviews.

I really like how you started this story with this little summary of their first two years from Brian's point of view. I think you have done a great job in the way you characterised him and his feelings, his fears about allowing himself to fall in love, his actions and his thoughts about his behavior especially toward Justin. And not just that, but also describing his feelings about the way Justin left, how it affected him and made him feel. Very good written.

After reading the whole 8 chapters and re-reading the first I noticed many points which now make so much sense. For example the headaches from which Justin already suffered while being with Ethan.

So, enough for now. Great story! And I'm very curious about the last chapter. I've read a few reviews and your answers but I must admit at last I haven't understand if Justin will live or die, but I try to be patient... :-) Hopefully they will get their happy ending! I'm also not an english native speaker, but I hope there are not to many mistakes.

Warmest regards! And Thanks for this wonderful story! a.

 



Author's Response:

Hey, I'm so glad you liked my story. Yeah, I put a little hint from the start, just a little that I think many hadn't really realized they were there for a reason. Thank you so much for the support. I hope you'll like it till the end:) Godbless!

Reviewer: WhiteSnowFox (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2016 09:59 PM · On: Only you can make the darkness bright

I've been so busy I didn't have a chance to read this when you first started posting, so my apologies!  I have some time now, however, and have to say I like this beginning.  It's a nice recap of everything from Brian's point of view and I like Justin's surprise entrance.  ;)



Author's Response:

No need for an apology. Thank you so much for liking it and I hope you will until the end. Thanks again:)

Reviewer: chaval (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2016 09:42 PM · On: Only you can make the darkness bright

Excellent. Très très bon début.



Author's Response:

Thank you, I appreciate the comment:)

Reviewer: Alfred004 (Anonymous) · Date: September 13, 2016 12:53 PM · On: Only you can make the darkness bright

Great update. I love your Brian! He is so determinate to make it up for Justin. He has already won his batle with himself, now its time to win Justins' trust. I am afraid there is a lot of angst ahead of us. I am soo looking forward the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Yes, there are still more angst to come. Thank you!

Reviewer: alfred004 (Anonymous) · Date: September 10, 2016 08:16 AM · On: Only you can make the darkness bright

God! Story is hilarious! I am totally hooked. Pleas, update as soon as possible. I cant' wait for the next chapter. I hope Brian would ask Justin to spend all night soon. I hate when he is leaving for night. 

 

 

 

 

 



Author's Response:

I'll update soon. Thank you so much:)

Reviewer: tatiana rita (Anonymous) · Date: September 09, 2016 09:58 AM · On: Only you can make the darkness bright

the beautiful story. I had promised myself that i do not read more than unfinished, just i could not stop reading this: a Brian deluse say more the behavior of Justin, and now wants to make him pay for the silence of the past six years to worder where to mistaken.

We hope that the chapters, will lead to an understanding between the two, but i see black saw thas one is reluctant to show how much suffering, the other to show how much suffering now.

thanks and i hope to come soon new chapters.



Author's Response:

Hey, Tatiana. I can assure you that our boys JB will be just fine in the end. This is more about the journey they would take, the ups and downs of life. I'll post the 3rd chapter tonight, my time here. Thanks for reading:)

Reviewer: Sharon (Anonymous) · Date: September 09, 2016 05:04 AM · On: Only you can make the darkness bright

I like this so far. A great start. Please don't take to long for the next chapter. Awaiting what Brian's reaction will be.



Author's Response:

It's already posted actually. I'm posting the next one tonight. Hope you'll like it:)

Reviewer: Sharon (Anonymous) · Date: September 09, 2016 05:03 AM · On: Only you can make the darkness bright

I like this so far. A great start. Please don't take to long for the next chapter. Awaiting what Brian's reaction will be.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much:)

Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: September 09, 2016 12:57 AM · On: Only you can make the darkness bright

I loved this. Firstly, it was a nice long chapter. They're the best. Secondly, Brian going through the stages of grieving. He fought his feelings but they won. Thirdly, Justin's surprise return. What a set up for a battle. Can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Yeah, it will be a battle, a long battle indeed. Thanks for the feedback:)

Reviewer: Therese (Anonymous) · Date: September 08, 2016 09:28 PM · On: Only you can make the darkness bright

so enjoying this, looking forward to next chapter



Author's Response:

I just posted the next chapter. I'll update later tonight (my time zone) with chapter 3. Thanks for reading and commenting;)

Reviewer: Neuza (Anonymous) · Date: September 08, 2016 09:02 PM · On: Only you can make the darkness bright

Adorei, mau posso esperar o próximo capítulo!



Author's Response:

I wish I can understand but thank you for the comment :*

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2016 08:35 PM · On: Only you can make the darkness bright

Wow. You recapped the series very well. Now that Justin is back, do we learn what he's been up to for the past six years?

Author's Response:

Eventually, yes, but not so soon. I need to establish some things before that can happen. Thanks for leaving a comment:)

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2016 07:20 PM · On: Only you can make the darkness bright

Hi Nadine!


Okay, I'm definitely interested...looking forward to your next chapter :)


And congratulations on publishing your first story!



Author's Response:

Hey, Alois! Thanks for the feedback, really appreciate it. 

Reviewer: Sunsuso65 (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2016 01:20 PM · On: Only you can make the darkness bright

Great chapter. I like this story.

Kisse



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading:)

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