Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
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Reviewer: Calliesky (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2024 05:56 PM · On: My one and only you

Not sure how I've never read this. It's heartbreakingly beautiful. 

Thank you so much for sharing this ❤️

Reviewer: Oh_Viv (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2020 10:34 PM · On: My one and only you

Oh my God, I haven't cried that much for a story in a long time, I must've used 20 pi of  tissues!

But it's a great story, no matter how sad, I'm also truly touched by Brian & Justin's love.

Thank you.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2018 09:48 AM · On: My one and only you

Banner was spectacular too..loved it.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2018 09:47 AM · On: My one and only you

I was crying while reading it...i dont know how you wrote it it must have be hard for you to write such emotional scenes..i cant imagine..i loved it very much.thank you sharing such a wonderful story with us.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2018 09:05 AM · On: For it's true, you are my destiny

Beautifully written...i am a crying mess.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2018 08:33 AM · On: And fill my heart with love for only you

Love love love.

Lots of love

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2018 07:42 AM · On: Only you can make all this change in me

Story is marvelous..aweome work.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2018 06:25 AM · On: Only you can make all this world seem right

Fantastic writing

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2018 06:03 AM · On: Only you and you alone, can thrill me like you do

What is going on..,??? What happened to justin...i so wanna know...cant wait to read.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2018 05:40 AM · On: Only you can make the darkness bright

This promises to be a great story like your other one,looking forward to the next chapter now.

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2017 03:25 AM · On: My one and only you

So touching, so sad. I'm glad they had a life together with children.  Well done.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and commenting, I appreciate a lot:)

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2017 06:42 PM · On: For it's true, you are my destiny

I'm crying uncontrollable... Even though I've read this before it's still so heartbreaking... You're a great writer, but the angst is killing...

Hugs Kathleen

Author's Response:

Thank you for the compliment, and it's great to hear that especially coming from someone who writes with the best of them:)

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2017 02:49 AM · On: Only you can make the darkness bright

Hopefully Brian will put his snarky attitude behind him and embrace what's been missing in his life...

Hugs Kathleen

Author's Response:

Thanks for the comment, Kathleen:)

Reviewer: Erbear4474 (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2017 02:19 AM · On: Only you can make the darkness bright

This is a beautiful story, so in depth and moving, crying my eyes out over here. Brian's scene at dinner at Deb's laying his heart out to Justin was perfect. Don't even get me started on the last chapter, it will get me started again. Do you have anymore up your sleeve, you have a great voice and perspective.

Totally added this one to my favs. 🙂

 



Author's Response:

Hi! Thanks for reading and commenting. I'm so happy to know that you liked it. I may have one story coming up in few days. I finished writing it, just needs a little polishing. Thanks, again:)

Reviewer: Avampiregirl (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2016 07:20 AM · On: My one and only you

So much goodness and sadness all rolled up together! Now I'm crying in bed at 2am. Loved it. Thanks

Author's Response:

Thank you for the feedback, dear. I'm really glad you liked it:)

Reviewer: Mary (Anonymous) · Date: October 18, 2016 01:20 AM · On: For it's true, you are my destiny

I really wish you would have put the major character death on the begining of this fic.

Someone I loved very much and was going to spend my life with died of brain cancer so the last thing I want to read is a fic about it.  I read fanfic to get away from real life, not to relive the worst experience of my life.

Please put a warning on your next fic if one is needed.



Author's Response:

I'm so sorry to hear about your love. My heart goes to you and to all who have lost their loved ones. 

I didn't write a warning when I first posted this story, I admit that. But an MCD tag was there since chapter 7. I hope you didn't miss that when you started reading.

Im sorry if my story makes you remember the pain of losing someone so dear to you.

Hugs, Nadine

Reviewer: Mary (Anonymous) · Date: October 16, 2016 06:35 AM · On: Only you can make the darkness bright

What happened to the rest of Chapter 6???

I really like this so far but would like to read all of chapter .



Author's Response:

Hi. I really don't know what you mean. I take it you couldn't access the whole chapter 6? I just checked it and everything was fine. Maybe you just need to reload the page again.

I hope you'll enjoy the rest of the story. Thanks.

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2016 05:22 PM · On: My one and only you

I also would not have read this if I had known it was a death fic ( don't like sad endings, dnt want to ball my eyes out) BUT I must say that it was very well written and you a very good story teller. I hope to read more (living haha) stories from you in the future.

Author's Response:

Thank you! Yeah, I'll make sure the next one will be a non MCD:)

Reviewer: rulisteningbj (Anonymous) · Date: October 05, 2016 02:27 AM · On: Only you can make the darkness bright

You are very talented.  If there had been a warning about this being a death fic, I would not have read it.  But alas I was in deep before you warned us.  Beauitfully written story.  Hope to see more from you.

Dee Dee



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. Sorry for the late warning, but I'm glad you stick with this til the end:)

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2016 02:08 PM · On: My one and only you

Beautiful story. I really hope to read more from you in the future :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, Alois. Maybe I'll have another one soon:)

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2016 12:15 AM · On: My one and only you

Hi, Nadine - I think you did a great job of portraying B and J's enduring love for each other, and you wrote their time together beautifully.  Thank you for posting this on here.  I hope to see more stories from you in the future.:)   ~Kim



Author's Response:

Thank you, Kim. I just might have another one soon:)

Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2016 07:04 PM · On: My one and only you

Great read and featured story quality. Angst isn't for everyone; however, you deal with it in an excellent way. You're a terrific writer, Nadine. Thank you for sharing this with us.



Author's Response:

Hey, Bob. Thanks for that blue ribbon, I didn't expect it and it really made my day! Thank you so much:)

Hugs, Nadine

 

It was a team decision. ~bob

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2016 02:45 PM · On: My one and only you

God, what a long and well thought out final chapter.  You gave us updates on everybody.  Brian, who lived a long life and finally went to be with his husband years after Justin dies.  Justin who became a sucessful painter and a father of a baby girl.  Bianca, or Binky, who's milestones marked significant changes.  Gus, who ended up living with his dads and later took over Kinnetik, married and gave Brian and Justin a grandson, BJ.  Lindsay who made so many bad relationships and ends up broke and lonely.  Mikey who disappoints his daughter, reunites with Dr. Dave and once the Dr dies only ends up with $1000 for each year they were together.  LOL.  Loved that.  Losing Vic, Deb, Jen and Blake.  I do agree that Brian and Justin are living happily ever after in heaven.  Thank you for a wonderful read.



Author's Response:

I know I'm not kind with Michael and Lindsay in this story, I don't hate them, it's just fun toying with Michael especially. In my country, 10k is almost half a million, so I thought I'm already being generous with him. Haha I loved all the characters on the show, including Mikey, I swear:)

Thanks for the support, I really appreciate it:)

Reviewer: Gingabread (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2016 12:46 PM · On: My one and only you

This was beautiful. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much:)

Reviewer: qafqueenbee (Anonymous) · Date: October 02, 2016 01:56 AM · On: My one and only you

I enjoyed your story. I cried at the end, but I still think it was a great story.

 

 

 

lah



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. Glad you enjoyed it:)

Reviewer: aglaja5 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2016 06:18 PM · On: My one and only you

An answer to your answer and a question: Was this your first story? I hope to read more from you! Warmest regards!



Author's Response:

Yeah, this is my first QAF, but I have written a few stories with another fandom. But the last story I did was like more than 3 years already. I felt so rusty when I decided I wanted to write again. I'll try to write some more, but I like to finish the story before posting anything, so maybe it will take some time. Thanks, again:)

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2016 05:40 PM · On: My one and only you

Wowww beautiful but so ... pff  * sobs * ... couldn't type a letter through my tears. My girls ask what is wrong with me.

Loved every letter you wrote, thanks.

 

* hugs *



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, sweetie. I'm sorry for making you cry but I'm happy that you loved the story:)

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2016 05:21 PM · On: My one and only you

A wonderful ending to a lovely story. Thank you...



Author's Response:

You're welcome and I want to thank you, too. I'm glad you liked the ending:)

Reviewer: Mariana (Anonymous) · Date: October 01, 2016 10:18 AM · On: My one and only you

You made me cry. Beautiful story.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it:)

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2016 11:42 PM · On: My one and only you

Excellent story and perfect ending.  A real tearjerker!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much:)

Reviewer: aglaja5 (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2016 08:08 PM · On: My one and only you

I have no words… speechless. You really made me cry. Can’t remember the last time that I was crying so hard just because of something I read. Awesome. I don’t know what to say. You really did it. Great job. On the one hand beautiful, because they’re getting their happy end and live together for a long time (it’s so beautiful how you described the hospital scene with Justin waking up in the beginning. And also their first raw  - in this case I don’t want to call it fucking but making love, it’s so hot, but also beautiful) – but on the other hand it’s so tragic, painful because it seems as if they could never have enough time together. But okay in the end they are in some way together again. After reading this, it is so hard to say something about the other details of this chapter. I really like how you describe everyone’s development. I wished Michael and Lindsay would have come to some senses, but well, who cares.

Altogether I would like to thank you for this wonderful and amazing story. It was exciting and painful as well as beautiful, cute, hot, sometimes funny and and and. And both Brian and Justin had made such an awesome development. Very well written. I was deeply moved and I’m sure I’ll read it again someday (but maybe I’ll stop at the moment when Justin learned about the relapse J ). Thank you so much and warmest regards, a.



Author's Response:

Your reviews really make me smile like this --> :))))) haha Thank you so much for sticking with this story till the end and I'm so glad that you liked it. It's fascinating to know that some people loved what I have written, it surely makes me happy:)

Thanks, again! Godbless!

Hugs, Nadine

Reviewer: aglaja5 (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2016 04:35 AM · On: You're my dream come true

Beautiful. After reading it the second time I love your story even more. They are so cute together. And it’s so great to see this important development not only in Brian but also in Justin. In your first chapter you wrote: “He made a promise to himself that he'd make sure not to let anyone get that closed to him again. He'd continue to be the stud of Liberty avenue. That was what he always would be. It was better than to feel so hopeless when someone you care about was on the operating table and you couldn't do anything except wait. Anything was better than that.” – It’s great to see how much Brian had changed and that he is now able to  accept and endure such insecurity. I am soooo curious about the last chapter and again: Thank you for this wonderful story! Warmest regards, a.



Author's Response:

Yes, that's what I was going for, Brian turning 180, I just hope the transition work. The pace of the story is so important to me. I really, really thank you for the support. It means a lot to me. The last chapter will be so long, 20k+ words and hopefully most of you will like it. Thanks again for reading and commenting:)

Hugs, Nadine 

Reviewer: aglaja5 (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2016 12:14 PM · On: For it's true, you are my destiny

Ahh, and in the beginning of this chapter I’m suffering with Brian. I think it hurts a lot not knowing what is up to Justin, why he seems to push him away and tries to pair him off to Eric. And then finally this heartbreaking and painful talk. But also a long needed talk. And I think there is finally so much trust. Again, you’ve done a great job, it’s so well written I think. And what I also love about it, is the way Brian reacts and tries to be strong for Justin and asks him again to marry him. It is so sad, painful but also beautiful. Warmest regards, a.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the compliment, I really appreciate it:)

Reviewer: aglaja5 (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2016 09:49 AM · On: And fill my heart with love for only you

 

 

I think I love this chapter even more than the one before. They are sooooo cute together. And Brian saying “I love you” in this situation in the shower, later letting Justin top and then the song at Woody’s. Beautiful. Cry…. But Justin seems to getting worse and worse. It hurts. I’m always amazed, when a story can induce such feelings in the reader. Wonderful story. I’m still hoping for an happy-ending! Warmest regards, a.

 

 



Author's Response:

This one has a bittersweet ending. I'll post it as soon as I have it from my beta. Thank you:)

Reviewer: aglaja5 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2016 08:46 PM · On: Only you can make all this change in me

 

 

I love this chapter because there is such a great development between them. You’ve done a great job in showing how Brian finally loses his fears about getting hurt and realizes what is really important. They are so cute together, beautiful. I love their texting. While reading it the first time I worried more and more about Justin, but today I already knew and I’m so afraid…. Warmest regards, a.

 

 



Author's Response:

Yeah, I want a gradual process and not too forceful. They both need time especially Brian. Justin was fighting his own feelings too but for totally different reasons, which you already have figured out by now, I think:)

Reviewer: aglaja5 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2016 06:26 PM · On: When you hold my hand, I understand the magic that you do

It’s funny but sometimes also painful to see Brian so confused about Justin. Painful because Brian haven’t got trust in Justin and thinks Justin don’t care about him resulting in Brian trying to hurt Justin through tricking. So stubborn and afraid. But I must admit I am so glad that in this chapter there is finally the change in his behavior. It’s so beautiful how you describe Brian at least admitting to himself he’d missed Justin. I have to say it again. I think you’ve characterized Brian so well. Amazing.



Author's Response:

Thank you, it was so hard to do Brian's head, because well, he is Brian Kinney. I'm glad you liked it. 

Reviewer: aglaja5 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2016 03:20 PM · On: Only you can make all this world seem right

 

 

I really like the scene at Woody’s when Justin and Jess performed. It’s so good to see Brian surprised and speechless. What I also like a lot is the impression you created that Brian who wanted to be the one in control not only about Justin but also about his feelings for Justin seems to lose this control little by little although he pretends he wouldn’t care. While reading it the first time I wondered why Justin is so reluctant and seems to endure this all, but okay... Now I know. The last scene in this chapter is so heartbreaking, it makes me suffer with Justin. Great story. Thanks!!! Warmest regards, a.

 

 



Author's Response:

I want to emphasize with Justin's other talents how Brian didn't really know even half of Justin's life, or how they hadn't communicated really well when they were together the first time around. That they were so messed up, Justin hadn't even opened up some important part of his life to Brian.

Reviewer: aglaja5 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2016 12:55 PM · On: Only you and you alone, can thrill me like you do

Hello again! Another great chapter. I really like the way you verbalised Brians thoughts. The sarcasm  - "one sunshine wasn't enough” :-) - and his anger towards Justin. And although he had realized how cruelly and meanly he sometimes had treated Justin in the past, he plans on doing it again. A kind of revenge. I felt sorry for Justin and it hurts but it was good to see that Brian also hurts himself with his actions. When I read this chapter for the first time I wondered about the “don’t fall in love with me again”. It brought much tension into the story and was one reason why I couldn’t stop reading yesterday! J Great story, thanks and warmest regards, a.

 

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Brian used anger as a defense. He thought Justin had moved on and he didn't expect that to hurt him too much, not when he was just fine after six years without Justin. Thanks:)

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2016 10:49 AM · On: You're my dream come true

The wedding was beautiful. What a pity we only have a final chapter left to this touching story. I hate to see it end. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I have a very long last chapter, around 20k. I hope you'll like it:)

Reviewer: aglaja5 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2016 10:16 AM · On: Only you can make the darkness bright

Hi! I've found your story yesterday and started reading it and I couldn't stop myself. It's great! Amazing! I like it very very much. So much that I must admit I've read it too fast, too fast to get all the little wonderful details. But I think after each chapter I just wanted to know how it continues. So, now after I've finished I decided to re-read it and try to give you some reviews.

I really like how you started this story with this little summary of their first two years from Brian's point of view. I think you have done a great job in the way you characterised him and his feelings, his fears about allowing himself to fall in love, his actions and his thoughts about his behavior especially toward Justin. And not just that, but also describing his feelings about the way Justin left, how it affected him and made him feel. Very good written.

After reading the whole 8 chapters and re-reading the first I noticed many points which now make so much sense. For example the headaches from which Justin already suffered while being with Ethan.

So, enough for now. Great story! And I'm very curious about the last chapter. I've read a few reviews and your answers but I must admit at last I haven't understand if Justin will live or die, but I try to be patient... :-) Hopefully they will get their happy ending! I'm also not an english native speaker, but I hope there are not to many mistakes.

Warmest regards! And Thanks for this wonderful story! a.

 



Author's Response:

Hey, I'm so glad you liked my story. Yeah, I put a little hint from the start, just a little that I think many hadn't really realized they were there for a reason. Thank you so much for the support. I hope you'll like it till the end:) Godbless!

Reviewer: starfire64 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2016 02:52 AM · On: You're my dream come true

I finally sat down and read all 8 chapters ; ) I really like this story, very emotional and I loved how you did this chapter, beautiful. Looking forward to the next/last chapter and hopefully more stories from you as well : ) *Hugs* Janet



Author's Response:

Thank you, Janet. I'm so glad you liked it:)

Reviewer: WhiteSnowFox (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2016 10:47 PM · On: You're my dream come true

Brian's future for them is so beautiful.  I really hope they get the chance to live it.  They really deserve it.

Please update soon!  :)



Author's Response:

I will, as soon as I received it from my beta:) Thank you!

Reviewer: WhiteSnowFox (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2016 10:43 PM · On: For it's true, you are my destiny

So...It was nice of Justin to try to set Brian up so he wouldn't be alone but...isn't that kind of Brian's choice?  Also, he was kind of giving Eric expectations that wouldn't come true which would suck for Eric.  That being said, I'm very relieved Brian isn't even entertaining the idea (I don't do well when either of the boys are with someone else emotionally).  And his promises to Justin at the end were just heartwrenching...

Such a great job on this chapter.  I loved it.  :)



Author's Response:

I also find it hard to read an emotional involved Brian to others too. I have read a few but it always left something heavy in my gut, haha.

Reviewer: WhiteSnowFox (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2016 10:37 PM · On: And fill my heart with love for only you

Ah!  They finally said it!!  Yay!

I'm glad that they're getting this second chance, even with what I suspect to be impending doom.  :)



Author's Response:

They will face it together:)

Reviewer: WhiteSnowFox (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2016 10:33 PM · On: Only you can make all this change in me

Jess is very protective of Justin, that seals it.  There's something wrong with him.  It's his brain.  A tumor or something?  Ohhh this is going to be so painful...But I can't stop myself from reading.  They're moving in the right direction and I just want them to be happy, even if it doesn't last for very long.

You're doing a great job!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: WhiteSnowFox (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2016 10:32 PM · On: When you hold my hand, I understand the magic that you do

Awww....They're falling into a relationship.  And it's so perfect for them.  I like it...still worried about Justin.  I'm starting to think there's something wrong with him, and he had to leave for some reason.  Was it health issues?



Author's Response:

I guess you already have figured it by now:)

Reviewer: WhiteSnowFox (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2016 10:28 PM · On: Only you can make all this world seem right

Oh wow, can Brian be more jealous?  I don't think so...And poor Justin...Just happy to have any moment with him that he can. 

Also, if I may offer a suggestion; you switch point of view very often without any sort of divider which can be hard to keep track of.  We'll be in Justin's head, then Brian's, then back and sometimes I'm not sure who it is.  Just a small thing.

Anyways, I'm really liking this!!  :)



Author's Response:

It was mainly Brian's pov, and yes, sometimes Justin's, sorry for the confusion. Something I have to consider next time. Thanks!

Reviewer: WhiteSnowFox (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2016 10:05 PM · On: Only you and you alone, can thrill me like you do

Bitter much, Brian?  ;)

Despite how mean he's being, I kind of like that he's so hurt - it just proves how much he still cares.  I hope Justin can take it.  He's older, and wiser.

 

Though I am a little concerned about his 'don't fall in love with me' comment...This isn't 'A Walk to Remember' story is it?

In any case, loving it!



Author's Response:

I stole that line from A walk to remember actually. Thank you so much for reading and commenting, I appreciate it:)

Reviewer: WhiteSnowFox (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2016 09:59 PM · On: Only you can make the darkness bright

I've been so busy I didn't have a chance to read this when you first started posting, so my apologies!  I have some time now, however, and have to say I like this beginning.  It's a nice recap of everything from Brian's point of view and I like Justin's surprise entrance.  ;)



Author's Response:

No need for an apology. Thank you so much for liking it and I hope you will until the end. Thanks again:)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2016 02:55 PM · On: You're my dream come true

For Brian this is a dream come true.  Thankfully he pulled his head from his ass and admitted that he wanted Justin in his life.  He's giving Justin everything and hoping that they have many years of travel in their life.  Love Emmett for being there for them, not liking Michael and Lindsay for their attitudes.  Can't wait to see how you finish this and hope that Mikey and Lindsay get what they deserve.  Now you just need to find someone else for Eric.



Author's Response:

I think I have for that, I mean for Michael, Lindsay and Eric. Thank you so much:)

Reviewer: Draccone (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2016 01:30 PM · On: You're my dream come true

I'm scared of what you are posting next. Ahhhh.

Author's Response:

I hope you will like it :)

Thanks!

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2016 07:56 PM · On: For it's true, you are my destiny

At first I was all like: how could you kill off Justin and not warn us? Then I read the notes and reviews from other readers and realized differently. I usually avoid death fics but your story is very good. For a first story, I think it is exceptional. Hope you update soon.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, I'm so glad you decided to read it till the end. I'll update as soon as I received the chapter from my beta:)

Reviewer: Steff (Anonymous) · Date: September 22, 2016 05:01 PM · On: For it's true, you are my destiny

I like your story! Is it your first? Well done!!! Found it yesterday and couldn't stopp reading. (Although it made me cry a bit). Will enjoy the remaining two chapters, too. Thank you for sharing!



Author's Response:

Wow, thank you so much. Yeah, this is my first QAF, but I have written a few stories with other fandom. I'm so glad you enjoyed this, I hope you will like how I ended it:) Thanks again!

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2016 08:04 AM · On: For it's true, you are my destiny

Well, I just knew somthing wasn't right with his brain, I just hadn't realized it was cancer. Great work! Patiently waiting for the next chapter :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I hope you'll like the next one:)

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2016 07:31 AM · On: And fill my heart with love for only you

Playing catch up and really enjoying this :) I'm waiting for the big reveal, so next chapter, here I come :)



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're still enjoying it. A big thank you for the support:)

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2016 04:26 PM · On: For it's true, you are my destiny

Oh boy, this is going to be a heartbreaker.  It is great to see Brian and Justin together and so much in love, though.



Author's Response:

Yes, they will stay that way for years and years:)

Thanks!

Reviewer: Tom (Anonymous) · Date: September 21, 2016 01:30 AM · On: For it's true, you are my destiny

I am not sure if I can continue reading this. I can't read death fics, Hence the warnings! I guess it all depends on how you end this story. Can you tell me if Justin dies soon and young  or does he die of old age from cancer or natural causes. I realize you want it to be a suprise but at this point that is moot. 


Author's Response:

I don't know if it's a surprise anymore but B&J will have decades of living together. I only have 2 more chapters, so, I don't think it will be long to find out. That is if you decide to stick with it, but I understand if you won't. Sorry to upset you, really. Thanks for reading though:)

 

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 21, 2016 01:24 AM · On: For it's true, you are my destiny

If the ending isnt written yet ,Maybe the ending could have Brian AND Justin not dying or at least out living the gang. Or dying when they are in their 90's of natural causes. Not putting that warning in wasn't cool but it was a mistake. Maybe you can make it up to us with an ending that we can love. Lol Just a thought!



Author's Response:

I already written the whole story before I posted the first chapter, and I know it's my fault for not indicating a proper tags. I'm trying to edit the category now, but I just can't seem to figure it out. Maybe because I'm using a phone and not laptop, I don't know. Anyway, sorry if I happen to upset you. Still I want to thank you for reading and commenting:)

Reviewer: britinmanor (Anonymous) · Date: September 21, 2016 01:00 AM · On: For it's true, you are my destiny

i think it's really crappy for you to not put in your major character death warning.  i would have never started to read this.  really awful of a writer.



Author's Response:

I'm sorry.

Reviewer: Penny (Anonymous) · Date: September 20, 2016 11:38 PM · On: For it's true, you are my destiny

Yes, I am upset that you did not inform us and encouraged us to Continue reading and there will be a happy ending. You said that they will have happy decades together. I'm not sure if I can continue reading, depends on Justin's future. Do you mean that Justin doesn't die from cancer, get some kind of operation or somthing and Brian and Justin live a real long life together married, after his operation, and live on earth, alive on earth?. Or did you mean that Justin would wait in heaven for Brian to be together. I'm confused. If the deaths are at the end when they are old men then it's a normal life progression to die elderly and might  not of needed a major death warning. I dont know . If Justin dies young  because of Cancer then that would be a major character death. So please tell me which is it? Does Justin have a long life happy married with Brian on earth  and die elderly or does he die from cancer young. I don't know if the ending is wtitten but the author can make up what they want anytime. 

 

Author's Response:

Justin will be with Brian on earth and not in some magical/other dimentional kind of life. The story is already completely written and I have only 2 more long chapters and yes they will be together for some time. Thank you for reading and I'm sorry if I upset you with me not placing the proper tags:)

Admin note: Unless a major character (Brian or Justin) dies in the story while still young, you don't need a MCD tag added.

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2016 08:03 PM · On: For it's true, you are my destiny

Wonderful story, wonderful writing, still loving this. I knew there was something terrible wrong with Justin, but this * sigh * . I hope the doctors at Akron can cure him and they live till their 50th anniversary. That was my first thought. Then I read your end notes and it was oops ... no happy end. But you don't need to apologize, it's your story. After that I read some comments and saw that you wrote "They'd still have a great decades of living a happy life". Don't know why people are angry with you.

* hugs *



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. That was my reason for not putting the MCD warnings, I don't want people to think that Justin will die so soon. I'm so glad you're going to stick to the end and I'm hoping you'd like it.

Reviewer: Draccone (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2016 05:39 PM · On: For it's true, you are my destiny

Oh my god. How could you? I get into it and then Justin is dying! Ahhhh! So you made this place up... can you make a cure up? God, this is so not right. Soooooo not right. Can't wait for the update.

Author's Response:

Sure, and I guess I just did;)

I'll update as soon as the new chapter will come from my beta reader.

Thank you so much for reading and commenting. Have a nice day!

Reviewer: TheWickedStepmother (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2016 03:34 PM · On: For it's true, you are my destiny

Wow..... I'm not sure what to say. That was not a nice move from you...really. In response to a reviewer you said it's a happy ending story, can't see that right now.

 

Nevertheless, I will continue to read. The last chapter was absolutely well written!



Author's Response:

Yeah, I know and I'm so sorry for it. Thank you for deciding to continue reading it though. I hope you'll like the last 2 chapters:)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2016 02:09 PM · On: For it's true, you are my destiny

Wow.  We knew something was wrong, but cancer and the possibility of Justin dying?  Great story and I will be impatiently waiting for another chapter.  Knowing that Brian will be with him is great, whether he survives or not! 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much and I'll update as soon as my beta will send the new chapter back:)

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2016 02:03 PM · On: For it's true, you are my destiny

I've been saving this story to read as soon as life slows down a little (RL refuses to give me all the time to read all the wonderful stories appearing at the moment) but I have been saving it to my computer to read as soon as I have the chance. I admit I have quick glimpses to see what's happening. I was aware that something was wrong with Justin and when I saw in this chapter that he had brain cancer I had to have more than a glimpse. I wanted to cry for both Brian and Justin and for myself - I lost my best friend to brain cancer two years after she had breast cancer. I remember telling her that when she was well we'd be sewing and shopping again - sadly that wasn't to be. Cancer is a bitch and over the past few years I've lost 3 people close to me to it, the latest my stepfather just a few weeks ago. I'm hoping that someday something like your Akron laboratory and it's procedures will be real and that there will be lasting hope for cancer sufferers or better yet a cure...

Because of your notes at the end of the chapter I had a peek at the reviews and decided that I needed to write something now rather than wait until I had time to give your story the time it deserved as a couple were a little negative because Justin is dying - or at least very ill. (Something about not putting a warning on the story) You explained he would have decades with Brian - so really not a major character death at all - well not for a long time. I just wanted to encourage you to keep writing this story the way it's meant to be - and honestly I don't think you need to apologize at all - if anything perhaps an ‘angst’ tag would have given people a clue to something serious – but aren’t all the best stories filled with some angst. Dying after a long life is natural. Living through serious trials part of life. All I want, is that at the end Brain and Justin love each other for whatever time they have - long or short.

Even if ‘major character death’ is in the tags I will always read it – Tin For The Firefly by No Chaser is a wonderful story where Justin died after the bashing – to not read it because of the tag would have been a tragedy – life, death – what really matters in the end is love.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for that kind words, it really means a lot to me. I'm sorry for your loss and I know how hard it is to lose some people that you love to cancer, I have lost my dad and grandma to it too. 

This story is already complete and will only have 2 more long chapters. Hoping to wrap this up in few days or so. I hope you'll like how I ended it and yes they will still have a long life to live together:)

Thank you so much for commenting, I really appreciate it.

Have a nice day!

Reviewer: Sharon (Anonymous) · Date: September 20, 2016 06:45 AM · On: For it's true, you are my destiny

Does Justin die in this story. I want to know because I cannot continue reading if that is the case. If he has no memories of Brian also I would like to know. And yes a warning should 9f been placed from the begining. I never would of thought this was a death story.



Author's Response:

The ending is an overview of all of the gangs' lives until they are in their old age. So deaths are really there. As for Justin, he will have a life with Brian after this scare, decades actually. But I know it's not an excuse not to put an appropriate tags. I'm sorry, I really am.

Reviewer: Kelly (Anonymous) · Date: September 20, 2016 06:39 AM · On: For it's true, you are my destiny

I need to know if Justin dies in this story or has some brain damage or somthing. You have been saying that the ending is happy so how can that be if he dies. We kept reading all  through Brian acting mean and now this. I would of never started reading this story if I knew that it was a death fic. I invested myself in it and now I am a little upset. So if you could please, answer. This is somthing that a warning should of been posted before a reader gets emotionally invested in a story.



Author's Response:

I really messed this one up. I know. I'm sorry to all for not indicating the major warning. I said it was a happy ending because they will have decades of being together and that was mainly my only reason for not writing the MCD warning. I'm so sorry.

Reviewer: Artfuleye66 (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2016 12:17 AM · On: And fill my heart with love for only you

I am really loving this story ,can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

I just updated, I hope you'll like it. Thank you:)

Reviewer: chaval (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2016 09:42 PM · On: Only you can make the darkness bright

Excellent. Très très bon début.



Author's Response:

Thank you, I appreciate the comment:)

Reviewer: anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 16, 2016 07:09 PM · On: And fill my heart with love for only you

Galing! Great story so far.

I just hope this will not end in tragedy on Justin's part because  I do not read major character death, angst pwede pa 😊 so please warn me now kung dun papunta. It will make me sad as I enjoyed your story very much. Thank you!



Author's Response:

Salamat. Sorry di ko nalagyan ng warning. Pero they will be together for decades pa naman before most of them will be gone from old age. Sana bigyan mo ng chance, pero salamat talaga:)

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2016 03:45 PM · On: And fill my heart with love for only you

Love these nice, long chapters.  I'm thinking that Justin is gradually going to lose his memory, due to the head trauma he experienced.  Am I close?  Brian is being so wonderful with him now.  I'm hoping they will be happy together.

 



Author's Response:

They will be happy together that's for sure, regardless of the new warning I just put, they will have a long life together. I'm story for that, though.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2016 11:27 PM · On: And fill my heart with love for only you

PS-Finding Michael in Brian's apartment going through his private papers was beyond creepy. Surely you have plans for bringing this to everyone's attention, especially if it happens again.

Author's Response:

We will have an overview for Mikey's future in last chapter, chapter 9.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2016 11:23 PM · On: And fill my heart with love for only you

Wow. We went through Thanksgiving and Christmas in this chapter. I don't understand why they are still keeping their relationship a secret though. They are so sweet together. I'm just guessing, but does Justin have memory problems? Really, really want another chapter soon.

Author's Response:

The next chapter is up. I hope you will like it. Thank you:)

Reviewer: Kelly (Anonymous) · Date: September 14, 2016 03:09 AM · On: Only you can make all this change in me

Now there is the Brian we all know and love. Glad to see him back. You said he needed time and I'm glad it was only a couple of chapters that he was being mean to Justin. Glad to see him admitting his feelings to himself and come to terms with them and Justin. I wonder why Jesse is always acting worried about Justin? Now I'm finding myself really wanting to read more now. Lol. I'm glad that I stuck with the story.



Author's Response:

Thank you for sticking with it. I hope you'll like how I ended it. Thank you:)

Reviewer: Sharon (Anonymous) · Date: September 14, 2016 03:01 AM · On: Only you can make all this change in me

Also I am looking forward to find out what happen to Justin. Is it going to be somthing that Justin needs Brian to comfort Him? Will it help them get closer ,what ever it is?



Author's Response:

Justin will need Brian and his family and yes, it will make them closer than ever. Thank you!

Reviewer: Sharon (Anonymous) · Date: September 14, 2016 02:59 AM · On: Only you can make all this change in me

Just wanted to say that I'm glad that I listened to you and didn't get sacred off from reading this story because Brian was acting horrible towards Justin. He is back to his caring self and now I am really enjoying the story. Looking forward for them to get closer. Just a thought, maybe a authors comment at the end of the one or two chapters where Brian is being an a-hole to Justin that it's only temporary or that he has to get passed his anger or somthing, it might help the readers not get so upset of angry Brian. Just a thought. Happily awaiting the next chapter.



Author's Response:

There are still ups and downs in next chapters. I hope you will stick through it. Thanks!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2016 11:40 PM · On: Only you can make all this change in me

Sigh. Taking it slow is great, but would it hurt for Brian to admit to Justin that they are dating? Mikey is getting a little creepy again. Jess, on the other hand, is rapidly replacing Daphne.

Author's Response:

Mikey isn't finished, he'd creep you more out. Yes, Jess was a great friend and cousin. Thank you!

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2016 02:09 PM · On: Only you can make all this change in me

Brian is so gone over Justin. He needs to stop rip-roaring around and lay all his cards out on the table and let his "partner" know. Great story!



Author's Response:

Brian was kind of right not to tell Justin about what he wants/feels. Justin would have totally pulled away from Brian if he did. Thank you for reading:)

Reviewer: Alfred004 (Anonymous) · Date: September 13, 2016 12:53 PM · On: Only you can make the darkness bright

Great update. I love your Brian! He is so determinate to make it up for Justin. He has already won his batle with himself, now its time to win Justins' trust. I am afraid there is a lot of angst ahead of us. I am soo looking forward the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Yes, there are still more angst to come. Thank you!

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2016 09:56 PM · On: When you hold my hand, I understand the magic that you do

I need more ;) So thank you for the fast updates. I have an idea about what is happening to Justin, so I think I will have to keep reading to see if I'm right or not :)



Author's Response:

You might be right with your guess;) I'll update soon. Thank you so much:)

Reviewer: TheWickedStepmother (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2016 06:56 PM · On: When you hold my hand, I understand the magic that you do

I really like your Story. But what's going on with Justin? Probably some health issues. Can't wait to find out. Btw, what's your native language?

Author's Response:

I'm afraid I can't tell you what's going on with Justin. But I'll update soon, I promise. I'm a Filipino but living in Middle East for nearly 2 decades now.

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2016 06:48 PM · On: When you hold my hand, I understand the magic that you do

This is intriguing.  It's obvious there is something wrong with Justin and Jess is protecting him.  Brian can sure be an ass when he wants to be.  Great story so far!



Author's Response:

Yes, we'll learn about Justin soon. Thank you so much:)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2016 12:55 PM · On: When you hold my hand, I understand the magic that you do

Okay, something is definitely wrong with Justin. He's constantly writing things down.

Author's Response:

Yes, there's something wrong with Justin. Thanks:)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2016 12:37 PM · On: Only you can make all this world seem right

It's one step forward, three steps backward. Very frustrating.

Author's Response:

Yeah, sorry. I hope you will like the next one:)

Reviewer: alfred004 (Anonymous) · Date: September 10, 2016 08:16 AM · On: Only you can make the darkness bright

God! Story is hilarious! I am totally hooked. Pleas, update as soon as possible. I cant' wait for the next chapter. I hope Brian would ask Justin to spend all night soon. I hate when he is leaving for night. 

 

 

 

 

 



Author's Response:

I'll update soon. Thank you so much:)

Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: September 10, 2016 07:23 AM · On: Only you can make all this world seem right

Brian in the sex slave business? Justin becomes a doormat to be stepped on? Don't care for either of them right now? For someone who doesn't care he sure is trying real hard to convince himself. Why would Brian be upset that he didn't know about Justin's hidden talent? They fucked not talked.



Author's Response:

Brian acknowledged that he really didn't get to know Justin before because they were both had issues. Hope it will change soon. Thank you:)

Reviewer: feet526@comcast.net (Anonymous) · Date: September 10, 2016 12:52 AM · On: Only you and you alone, can thrill me like you do

Oy vey!!! Be still my heart!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much:)

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 09, 2016 11:00 PM · On: Only you and you alone, can thrill me like you do

What chapter number does Brian stop treating Justin and stop using him.



Author's Response:

The next two chapters are vital. Chapter 3 might aggravate you if you didn't like the way Brian was on chapter 2. I needed the transformation to go swiftly, and you feel that shift on chapter 4 onwards. I hope you'll give this story a chance, it's angsty but definitely with happy ending :)

Reviewer: Kelly (Anonymous) · Date: September 09, 2016 07:56 PM · On: Only you and you alone, can thrill me like you do

I like this and I understand that Brian feels pain from Chin Rat when Justin left him but Brian was part cause. He could of stopped it. As for Justin moving away was wrong in not telling Brian but Brian should ask him what happened before treating him like this. I'm surprised at Brian for saying he could still use Justin for the sex. Why was Justin ok with wanting to see Brian again like a trick or sex Toy? Does he have a self esteem problem because he acts nervous around Brian? When will we find out why he left and did somthing happen to him that he told Brian not to fall in love again with him? Brian is still in ,love with Justin but Is Justin still in love with him? I hope the next chapter can shed some light on things? Sorry for all the questions Lol. I hope Brian stops using Justin.  Hope next chapter soon.



Author's Response:

I'm afraid the next chapter would aggravate you more, but Brian only needed time. He needed to process it, that Justin was back, and that he was still in love with him. He needed to let go of his fear.  We will learn about Justin in later chapters, and yes, Justin was still in love with Brian. Thank you for the feedback:)

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2016 07:40 PM · On: Only you and you alone, can thrill me like you do

I can't believe how childish and petty Brian is behaving.  Apparently Justin has no idea he hurt Brian by leaving six years ago. They should have talked instead of jumping into bed. Can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

It wasn't easy for Brian to open up. I agree that if they just sit and talk it all out, they would both understand the other better. But it wasn't the case with Brian and justin. I hope you will like the next chapters. Thanks for reading:)

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2016 06:46 PM · On: Only you and you alone, can thrill me like you do

Oh, I'm loving this. I can actually see Brian acting like that, even if he is being a real asshole. I wonder why Justin is asking him not to fall in love again. I suspect Justin's story will help us understand. And kuddos to you for the built-up tension here. Looking forward to the next chapter :)



Author's Response:

Yeah, Justin has his own baggage too. I'm afraid we have to wait for the later chapters for that, though. But the angst has just started, there are more to come. Thank you for the feedback, I appreciate it a lot:)

Reviewer: Sharon (Anonymous) · Date: September 09, 2016 06:42 PM · On: Only you and you alone, can thrill me like you do

Another thought was that besides Brian being hurt what about Justin being hurt. Brian didn't ask Justin what he went through, to make him leave like that. And how he felt about the whole Ethan thing. They both felt heartbreak but didn't tell eachother. Doesn't Brian need to know some how,  how Justin felt to and Justin needs to know how Brian feels. Will they talk soon and stop with the games so they can move on and find their way back to eachother?




Author's Response:

Brian was scared, he knew he still love Justin but too afraid to even think about it. So he focused more with his anger because he thought Justin had moved on from him. Communication was always Brian and Justin's problem. But Brian needed time to fully grasp that Justin was really back and that he still loved him. He needed to let go if that fear. Justin has his own baggage too. It would reveal in later chapters. Thank you for the feedback:)

Reviewer: Sharon (Anonymous) · Date: September 09, 2016 06:24 PM · On: Only you and you alone, can thrill me like you do

I liked the first chapter but the second one, I didn't like the way Brian is thinking of ways to get back at Justin who he really loves but doesn't want to admitted it outloud. I get that he is hurt but they broke up with it being both their faults. Why is Brian acting like an ass, spoiled kid. He wanted to hurt Justin and make him feel humiliated and small. That's not a Brian that I want to read about. He should talk to Justin not calculate plans to hurt him, that was terrible what he did to Justin. I also didn't like reading Justin being so needy and let Brian sleep with him and do that to him. Why didn't he tell Brian off and make it clear that they aren't going to do this or somthing. Is this the way Brian will be towards Justin in upcoming chapters?  And will Justin just take it? I always hated that scene in the show where Brian says that his eleven o'clock was there. But he didn't plan it . It was Brian being Brian. I will read the next chapter and give it a try.



Author's Response:

I'm afraid Brian would be cruel for a little bit longer. Justin has his own reasons for letting this happen, we would know it in time. I hope you'll give this a chance, you might be surprise how it turns out to be. Thank you so much for reading:)

Reviewer: Cathy (Anonymous) · Date: September 09, 2016 06:07 PM · On: Only you and you alone, can thrill me like you do

If it's going to take a while for them to get back together, I hope Brian is going to treat Justin with respect and not like a trick or play these games with him. I didn't care for Justin running back to Brian and allowing Brian to treat him like that. And Brian playing these hurtful games with Justin, not cool. He's so immature and it's his fault as well as Justin's that the had broken up in the first place and if Brian couldn’t move one and let go of his feelings,  that isn't Justin's fault and he should talk to Justin and not plot against him. I think Justin should have more back bone and stand up for himself. Is Brian going to stay this way for a while? And why doesn't he want anyone to know that he slept with Justin? Don't care for this Brian's actions.



Author's Response:

Justin has his reasons. He is a little out of character here, but it's because of that same reason. As of Brian, he just needs time to grasp with his feelings. Thanks for reading:)

Reviewer: Rebecca (Anonymous) · Date: September 09, 2016 05:57 PM · On: Only you and you alone, can thrill me like you do

This chapter has Brian being an uncaring ass. Just because he can't admitt his true feelings for Justin and is pissed that he still has them , he is mad at Justin. And because Justin left without giving him a second thought and now that he's back because he is acting like Brian is no one special he is pissed because he still care about him.  Brian is acting like an uncaring ass and I hope that isn't going to last long. He is being a big baby and playing games with Justin. I don't care for that kind of a Brian. Will this treatment of Justin go on for many chapters?

 

 



Author's Response:

Just a couple more chapters. Brian needs time. Thanks for the feedback:)

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 09, 2016 05:44 PM · On: Only you and you alone, can thrill me like you do

I don't like that Brian is treating Justin like that. It was his fault just as much as it was Justin's for them breaking up. It would be nice for Justin to ignore Brian and not sleep with him and make himself have some dignity and not let himself be used and treated bad by Brian. I hope that Brian starts treating Justin with respect. And why does it have to be on Brian's terms, why is he more important then Justin. Awaiting next chapter.



Author's Response:

Brian already acknowledged that it was equally their fault. He even tried to look for Daphne to ask about Justin after two years he left Pittsburgh. He guarded himself again and was so sure that he wouldn't do the relationship thing again. Then Justin came back and he felt so affected that it scared Brian, hence, focusing on his anger. Because he thought Justin wasn't as hurt as he was when he left. He focused on that and let his anger boils down.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2016 01:15 PM · On: Only you and you alone, can thrill me like you do

I get that Brian is angry, he doesn't want to admit that he cared. But how will that anger affect the story. Is there a chance that he'll not be an uncaring asshole?

Author's Response:

The anger was just a diversion, a defense against to his true feelings. Though, Brian liked it or not, he already loved Justin.  Thank you for the feedback:)

Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: September 09, 2016 01:02 PM · On: Only you and you alone, can thrill me like you do

Gentlemen, to your corners. Next round come out swinging.



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Reviewer: tatiana rita (Anonymous) · Date: September 09, 2016 09:58 AM · On: Only you can make the darkness bright

the beautiful story. I had promised myself that i do not read more than unfinished, just i could not stop reading this: a Brian deluse say more the behavior of Justin, and now wants to make him pay for the silence of the past six years to worder where to mistaken.

We hope that the chapters, will lead to an understanding between the two, but i see black saw thas one is reluctant to show how much suffering, the other to show how much suffering now.

thanks and i hope to come soon new chapters.



Author's Response:

Hey, Tatiana. I can assure you that our boys JB will be just fine in the end. This is more about the journey they would take, the ups and downs of life. I'll post the 3rd chapter tonight, my time here. Thanks for reading:)

Reviewer: Sharon (Anonymous) · Date: September 09, 2016 05:04 AM · On: Only you can make the darkness bright

I like this so far. A great start. Please don't take to long for the next chapter. Awaiting what Brian's reaction will be.



Author's Response:

It's already posted actually. I'm posting the next one tonight. Hope you'll like it:)

Reviewer: Sharon (Anonymous) · Date: September 09, 2016 05:03 AM · On: Only you can make the darkness bright

I like this so far. A great start. Please don't take to long for the next chapter. Awaiting what Brian's reaction will be.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much:)

Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: September 09, 2016 12:57 AM · On: Only you can make the darkness bright

I loved this. Firstly, it was a nice long chapter. They're the best. Secondly, Brian going through the stages of grieving. He fought his feelings but they won. Thirdly, Justin's surprise return. What a set up for a battle. Can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Yeah, it will be a battle, a long battle indeed. Thanks for the feedback:)

Reviewer: Therese (Anonymous) · Date: September 08, 2016 09:28 PM · On: Only you can make the darkness bright

so enjoying this, looking forward to next chapter



Author's Response:

I just posted the next chapter. I'll update later tonight (my time zone) with chapter 3. Thanks for reading and commenting;)

Reviewer: Neuza (Anonymous) · Date: September 08, 2016 09:02 PM · On: Only you can make the darkness bright

Adorei, mau posso esperar o próximo capítulo!



Author's Response:

I wish I can understand but thank you for the comment :*

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2016 08:35 PM · On: Only you can make the darkness bright

Wow. You recapped the series very well. Now that Justin is back, do we learn what he's been up to for the past six years?

Author's Response:

Eventually, yes, but not so soon. I need to establish some things before that can happen. Thanks for leaving a comment:)

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2016 07:20 PM · On: Only you can make the darkness bright

Hi Nadine!


Okay, I'm definitely interested...looking forward to your next chapter :)


And congratulations on publishing your first story!



Author's Response:

Hey, Alois! Thanks for the feedback, really appreciate it. 

Reviewer: Sunsuso65 (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2016 01:20 PM · On: Only you can make the darkness bright

Great chapter. I like this story.

Kisse



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading:)

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