Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2019 10:28 PM · On: The Show
good one
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2018 11:35 AM · On: The Show
Wow wee they stayed in amazing rooms, I wish I could afford luxury like that. I’m so happy Justin’s show went well he deserved something amazing to happen for him like that.
Brilliant work x
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2018 02:44 PM · On: Christmas at Britin
That was a perfect Christmas for them and I am so happy that Joan played nice. Let’s hope that she continues to and not go back to her wicked ways .
Brilliant work x
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2018 01:56 PM · On: Tay-Kin Art
Yeah the girls and the kids are coming back to Pittsburgh that makes me so happy. I can’t wait to see how it goes and and how they get on working for the boys 💕
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2018 11:03 AM · On: Horses and electronics
Brian has such a huge heart to buy those for Gus and Jenny as well proves that. I can’t wait for Mel and Micheal to find out. Grrrr Craig Taylor that ass I am so glad cat and Craig saw what a scum ball he is and not work with him he is pure dirt.
Loving this so much I’m loving the family.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2018 10:37 AM · On: Meeting Cat and her family.
Happy tears, so amazing those horses sound so perfect for the family I can’t wait to see what their names are and how they get in with them. I love Catcand Ger family they will fit in so wel with the rest of the family. It will bring lots of laughs and love I’m sure. Thank you for this amazing chapter 💕💕💕
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2018 09:10 AM · On: Family
Wow a new sister and one that is nice I’m so glad that Brian now has her. I can’t wait to see how the rest of the family meet her. I’m so proud of the boys for giving John a great birthday and wow his present was amazing x
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2018 08:23 AM · On: Set-backs at work and the honeymoon
Awe you melted my heart with this. Their Honeymoon was perfect ami love Niagara Falls it’s shch a beautiful place. Plus for Justin to arrange time with Gus and the others was amazing 💕💕
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2018 07:20 AM · On: The 'devil' returns
That was so hard for the boys. I’m so glad that Dan got Chris out of there fast. Brian and Justin did the right thing by taking to the boys about why they were so down and their reaction was perfect. I hope wherever they go for a break helps them.
Brilliant work x
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2018 08:04 PM · On: Claire visits.
Claire could have been nicer to her kids and more respectful towards Brian and Justin for all they are doing. She is lucky they could look after the boys. As for Joan the less said the better she is just evil.
Brilliant work
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2018 09:59 AM · On: The Party
That party was great I’m so glad the new friend enjoyed themselves so much. As usual Micheal has to be the one with sour grapes. He needs to grow up big timeZ
brilliant work x
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2018 09:50 AM · On: Meeting the parents
Loved this, I love how they all got along and had some laughs as well. I’m glad the boys stayed natural around them I think it helped in meeting the parents and the kids.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2018 09:05 AM · On: A sleepover planned
This gave me happy tears reading this chapter, I love the way the boys called Justin uncle that really touched my heart. I also loved the phone calls to the boys friends parents. I think Brian and Justin will get new friends as well.
Brilliant work x
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2018 07:29 AM · On: First day at school
I’m so glad the boys had a good first day at school and made friends. I can’t wait to see how they continue to get on.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2018 07:20 AM · On: Married at last
The guys really are doing good by the boys. I hope they feel more comfortable soon and enjoy living there with them.
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 24, 2017 08:30 AM · On: The Show
A really wonderful story-seeing Brian with a husband and a house full of kids, he shouldn't have any question as to him being a loving husband or a loving family man.
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 24, 2017 07:53 AM · On: Christmas at Britin
Joan must have been lonely as she behave for the most part.When Brian told Joan that Justin was the one who wanted Joan there I'm sure she was surprised. Hopefully Joan will wake up one day and realize, Brian is happy sucessful, and a good person.
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 24, 2017 07:09 AM · On: Tay-Kin Art
Hooray!! Gus is coming home and daddy and pops are thrilled. Gus has his horsey here and all his family including his cousins. wonderful chapter
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 24, 2017 06:58 AM · On: Horses and electronics
Well Craig missed a big customer, and inside I bet Brian is doing a happy dance. Justin's father is insufferable I'm always glad when he is called out for the miserble sob he is.
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 23, 2017 05:54 PM · On: Meeting Cat and her family.
Wonder when Joan will make of her secret is revealed.I'm glad the family were pleased. Brians world is getting larger and so is his happiness, of course mikey is a dumb ass he is concerned with mikey's introduction. Whenis he going to learn the world doesn't revolved around him.
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 23, 2017 12:38 PM · On: Family
John got a car for his birthday of course Claire doesn't approve-who cares what she thinks Brian told her John at end of the school term with a 3.0 rating and is doing well I doubt she even checked if homework was done and certainly not bright enough to help them. Brian and Justin met Cat that will blow Joan's mind when she finds out.
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 23, 2017 11:01 AM · On: Set-backs at work and the honeymoon
Glad they finally got away for a few days and seeing Gus,who they both missed
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 23, 2017 09:40 AM · On: The 'devil' returns
I know when I watched the series I couldn't believe the legal system was so awful to give Hobbs community service when he damn near killed Justin, hopefully when some crimes can be identifed as hate crimes everyone deserves justice regardless of your personal beliefs, being gay,black, etc. biggoted people shouldn't have right to dismised crimes in the name of justice
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 23, 2017 09:14 AM · On: Claire visits.
No wonder why the boys were a hard sell, between Joan and Claire they have certainly put a black mark on motherhood
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 23, 2017 08:55 AM · On: The Party
As usuall mikey is a child like brat, I don't understand how he has any friends! He made an ass out of himself with the entire family watching. I'll never understand why Ben stays with him, can't wait for the entire family just walks away from the queen. If he thinks he can intimidate Justin then he's as dumb as he looks
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 23, 2017 04:55 AM · On: Meeting the parents
It would seem that Brian and Justin have found new friends, that seem to have quiet alot in common. That would make everyones kids very happy.
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 23, 2017 04:18 AM · On: A sleepover planned
Hope the party goes well, not only do John and Peter need to make new friends but it be nice for Brian and Justin to meet some new people since they don't live in the Pitts.,anymore
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 23, 2017 03:54 AM · On: First day at school
John is becoming to realize the boys are not his enemy. The time they spend together, riding lessons and buying horses and both boys making friends at their new school. For the first time people care about them.
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 23, 2017 03:11 AM · On: Married at last
I think the boys were caught off guard-the limo,the large house, their own room,and a bathroom for them, of course the media room was a special treat for them. Peter will do fine, John mistrusts everyone.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2016 06:55 AM · On: Tay-Kin Art
Gus and JR are moving home. Hurray!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2016 06:55 AM · On: Horses and electronics
Ponies and Craig Taylor. An eventful chapter.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2016 06:51 AM · On: Meeting Cat and her family.
Trying to keep all the family names straight is going to be a challenge.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2016 06:46 AM · On: Family
John had a great birthday and Brian found a long lost sister. Amazing.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2016 06:42 AM · On: Set-backs at work and the honeymoon
A trip to Niagra Falls. Well deserved.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2016 05:23 AM · On: The 'devil' returns
Hobbs showed up? Let's hope that's the last we see of him.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2016 04:36 AM · On: Claire visits.
Does Joanie want to influence Brian's son the way she did Claire's?
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2016 04:26 AM · On: The Party
You gotta feel sorry for Mikey. He has a one track mind.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2016 02:29 AM · On: Meeting the parents
It's great that everyone gets along.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2016 08:43 PM · On: A sleepover planned
The kids have friends. How nice.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2016 08:42 PM · On: First day at school
Looks like things are improving for Brian's nephews.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2016 08:37 PM · On: Married at last
Hope John comes around. Living with teens is going to be tough.
Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2015 11:06 AM · On: The Show
Beautiful story. Love the dynamics of new family and friends:-)
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: June 03, 2014 03:47 AM · On: The Show
Excellent
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Reviewer: Al (Anonymous) · Date: February 02, 2013 03:53 AM · On: The Show
Good Story!
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 03:14 AM · On: The Show
Very good story. Your English is excellent I may say; better than many Americans would write. Thanks for another wonderful read.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, that means a lot to me :)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 03:06 AM · On: Christmas at Britin
A mending with Joan was a nice touch; isn't fandom fun where we can create the QAF universe like we want to?
Author's Response: Thanks.
Yeah, I love to play with our boys and bend them to my will ;)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 02:54 AM · On: Tay-Kin Art
I like how you explained the American loathing Canadians have for us Americans. Actually it's only bad with the French Canadians to be honest with you. Good evolution of the girls coming home. What country are you in if I may ask?
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I have never seen or heard it for myself other than on movies and TV shows.
I wanted the girls and the kids home where they belong.
I'm from Denmark :)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 02:44 AM · On: Horses and electronics
I wondered when Craig Taylor would rear his ugly head. You've pretty much run the list of canon characters here. I think you forgot Cody though. hehehehe
Author's Response: LOLL, I know, I haven't put in Dr. Dave either :)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 02:32 AM · On: Meeting Cat and her family.
I like adding Drew back into the picture.
Author's Response: Thank you. I always liked him for Emmett.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 02:15 AM · On: Family
And the cast of characters grows; Cat sounds very interesting. Looking forward where we go to from here.
Author's Response: That it does :)
Thanks.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 01:58 AM · On: Set-backs at work and the honeymoon
Did you research the falls hotel or have you been there? Often in my stories I use places I've been to like England and Scotland, New York, Dallas, etc. That was a fun chapter.
Author's Response: I reserched. I've never actually been to America or Canada. I'd love to go though.
Thanks, I'm glad you thought so.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 01:41 AM · On: The 'devil' returns
I fear that wasn't the last of Chris Hobbs for sure. He gets fired and hits the skids and will blame Justin and Brian. Gotta read what happens next.
Author's Response: Go forth and read :)
Not gonna tell what happens next.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 01:29 AM · On: Claire visits.
I wonder if Joan had some liquid courage before going to Kinnetik for that. Like duh? They are the legal guardians now; Claire is a moron if she can't see it. I wonder if we have heard the end of Saint Joan yet? I almost doubt it.
Author's Response: Doesn't Joan always have liquid courage?
Claire is not the quickest deer in the forest.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 01:14 AM · On: The Party
Michael bashing is one of my favorite passtimes. You magnified his character in a realistic way. If I was Ben I'd dump the little shithead but that's me. Even with HIV he could do better.
Author's Response: Mine too :D
Thank you so much. I'd have never hooked up with him in the first place, but that's just me.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 12:55 AM · On: Meeting the parents
That was a very good chapter. The irony of a small world didn't escape me either; the owner of the art suppy stores and contractor for example.
Author's Response: Thank you. I figure that it's a pretty small town. I know that Pittsburgh is a little bigger, but well... :)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 12:30 AM · On: A sleepover planned
The parental grilll went better than one might expect. Too many parents hear "gay couple" and run for the hills.
Author's Response: I know, I wanted them to have some new friends, someone outside the gang.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 12:14 AM · On: First day at school
John is coming around faster than I expected. I like how they share the parenting of the boys. Justin's a natural.
Author's Response: Yeah, I'm no good at writing conflict. I know in RL it would probably take a lot longer, but I wanted to get on with it.
Justin has a great role model in Jennifer, most of the time.
Thanks.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 12:04 AM · On: Married at last
This boys will be a handful. Peter will bring John around perhaps.
Author's Response: Yeah, but they will.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 12:38 PM · On: The Show
I loved this series and I look forward to reading more of your other stories.
Author's Response: Thanik you, I'm so glad you did.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: May 03, 2009 09:59 AM · On: The Show
Loved the family gathering in Chicago. Hope to hear more Brian and Cat conversations. Loved the nephews, really turning out to be great boys.
Author's Response: Thank you. I might do a sequel at some point, then you'll have more Brian/Cat interaction.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 05:21 AM · On: The Show
nice surprise to see this back. justin becoming nervous and shy because of a show and a compliment. what is the world coming too? nice sweet chapter.
Author's Response: Yeah, I felt it was time to wrap it up. Justin became shy because it was his first show outside Pittsburgh and it was an art professor that gave him the compliment. Thanks.
Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: May 03, 2009 04:53 AM · On: The Show
too bad this story is finished. I really liked both stories. maybe you should plan on writing another sequel with the life of john and peter growing up. :-)) rose
Author's Response: Thanks. So happy you like the story. LIke I told Kat, I might do a sequel at some point if the story idea comes to me.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 04:09 AM · On: The Show
Sorry to see the story end, glad everything turned out well.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it. If the muse takes me there, I'll do a sequel :D
Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: May 02, 2009 03:15 AM · On: Christmas at Britin
hi. will you update this story soon?? I know you are busy with the other stories... but don´t forget this one :-)) rose
Author's Response: Hey, Rose, I've actually started chapter 14. It's slow going, but it's getting there. Thanks, Edom.
Reviewer: Debbie (Anonymous) · Date: March 02, 2009 09:28 PM · On: Married at last
Hi! I love your stories. I am hoping you complete this story, Married at Last and Family Divided. You are truly a gifted writer, so, please keep the stories coming. Have a nice spring!!! Debbie
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much. I intend to complete all my stories, I'm no where near tired of writing QAF. Have a nice spring, yourself. :-D
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2008 11:58 AM · On: Christmas at Britin
Woo hoo! A new chapter! I've missed this story so much!! What a Christmas gift!!
Author's Response: So glad you're happy. Merry christmas.
Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: December 23, 2008 02:25 AM · On: Christmas at Britin
I was so happy to see an update...... great chapter. please don´t let us wait too long for the next installment. :-)) rose
Author's Response: Glad to make you happy :-) I'll try not to let as much time pass between updates.
Reviewer: BRIJUSLuvrr (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2008 02:09 AM · On: Tay-Kin Art
update sssssssssssoon love the story :)
Author's Response: I'll try. My muse has gone on to other stories, but I'll convince her to get back to this one soon ;-)
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2008 10:26 PM · On: Tay-Kin Art
This is so great, everything is going so well. The girls and Gus are moving back, Tay-Kin Art had a great opening. Can't wait for your next chapter, hope you update soon!
Author's Response: I haven't had a single idea for this story for some time. I hope my muse will come up with something soon, because I like the story too.
Reviewer: BRIJUSLuvrr (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2008 08:12 PM · On: Tay-Kin Art
Update sssssssssssssssssoon love the story keep up the good work
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I will try and update soon, I promise.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2008 10:39 PM · On: Tay-Kin Art
that was nice, but can brian and mel get along? they will be close by each other. on a more positive note, gus is coming home.
Author's Response: Mel and Brian have already made peace in this verse. I think they will be fine. Yes, Sonnyboy is coming home, yay.
Reviewer: thess (Anonymous) · Date: May 14, 2008 04:48 PM · On: Tay-Kin Art
i can't wait when will be your next posting???? please update ASAP!!! thanks
Author's Response: You're welcome. I don't know when the next chapter will be ready, but i hope soon.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: May 14, 2008 02:08 PM · On: Tay-Kin Art
yea, they're moving home, and they admitted why. I like the girls honesty and they're actually nice. Great idea for Mel to be the artists' managers. looking fwd to the next chapters....
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Mel has mellowed in my verse and even Lindsay has come to terms with Brian and Justin together and in Pittsburgh (or close). Now that my muse is back from vacation I hope the next chapter won't take as long in comming. ;-)
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Mel has mellowed in my verse and even Lindsay has come to terms with Brian and Justin together and in Pittsburgh (or close). Now that my muse is back from vacation I hope the next chapter won't take as long in comming. ;-)
Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: May 14, 2008 06:37 AM · On: Tay-Kin Art
an update... great chapter. :-)) rose
Author's Response: Thanks a lot. It means a lot to me.
Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: May 14, 2008 06:34 AM · On: Tay-Kin Art
Im so happy to see this updated, great chapter, mel and linds do seem to suit the position
Author's Response: My muse have been on vacation ;-) Thank you so much.
Reviewer: tess (Anonymous) · Date: April 13, 2008 05:25 AM · On: Horses and electronics
how sad for justin to have his father call his husband a pervert and worse, I remember on the show when he had justin arrested and I couldnt believe it that he would do that to him, I am so happy justin has brian to be there for him, I really like cat and her husband, and gus getting a pony was so cute
Author's Response: It is sad for Justin all around that his father is an idiot. but Brian will always be there for him. Gus had to have a pony, he should learn how to ride just like the rest of them. Thank you so much for your review.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2008 02:39 AM · On: Horses and electronics
bravo to all of them for sending that bastard on his way without a sale. that would have been a hefty amount of money for him. boy did he ever make a big mistake.
Author's Response: I really think that Craig (Taylor) is going to find a way to make this Brian's fault. He is almost as delusional as Michael.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2008 10:29 AM · On: Meeting Cat and her family.
nice chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you.
Reviewer: Brittani (Anonymous) · Date: April 05, 2008 04:56 AM · On: Meeting Cat and her family.
I love this chapter, and I'm really loving Cat and her family! Can't wait to see where you are going to go from here... Keep up the great work.
Author's Response: I love Cat and her family too, being from New York I think they have seen a little more of life and therefore is more accepting of peoples differences. I'll try keeping up the good work :-)
Reviewer: sammi (Anonymous) · Date: April 05, 2008 03:15 AM · On: Meeting Cat and her family.
emmett saying 'just for the record, I care who he fucks' about drew made me laugh, great chapter, Im thinking mikey could be a problem though hes already sulking from not being introduced as brians very best friend lol
Author's Response: Emmett would say something like that, I love Emmett. Michael is always a problem in my fics, I think he is a whiney ass.
Reviewer: Cass (Anonymous) · Date: April 03, 2008 02:29 AM · On: Family
I am happy cat seems nice, what a shock brian has a sister, update soon
Author's Response: Yes Cat is nice, she had nice parents. I'll update as soon as possible. Thank you.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2008 06:09 PM · On: Family
oh nice twist. cat i like. twins to get along with the boys and their friends. like justin said a sister who is nice. can't wait for her to meet the family.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I like Cat too, she is going to be fun to develope.
Reviewer: tasha (Anonymous) · Date: March 28, 2008 10:04 AM · On: Set-backs at work and the honeymoon
their honeymoon sounded perfect, I think mikey will be annoyed if he hears jr was calling justin pops lol
Author's Response: I think Michael will have an anurism if he ever hears. I think I might let him :-)
Reviewer: Brittani (Anonymous) · Date: March 28, 2008 04:07 AM · On: Set-backs at work and the honeymoon
What a sweet chapter! Can't wait to see where else you are going to take our boys, keep up the great work... *hugs*
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'll try.
Reviewer: bkfqueer (Anonymous) · Date: March 28, 2008 02:24 AM · On: Married at last
You never fail to amaze me, what a wonderful story and chapter! Michael is never going to undertsand anything, isn't he? I wonder how long someone like Ben would be patient before he leaves?
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I really love getting all thees positive comments.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2008 01:49 AM · On: Set-backs at work and the honeymoon
this such a happy story, especially this chapter, but please use paragraphs. found reading all that without a break made me lose my polace and concentration. thanks.
Author's Response: It eats all my paragraphs when i copy the text in. As soon as i have uploaded i go back in and put in paragraphs. I don't know how else to do it. If you can give me a tip I'll be more than happy to do it another way.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2008 06:11 AM · On: The 'devil' returns
horrible to have to retell and relive that night. glad all wrer understanding.
Author's Response: I know, but I think it might be good for them to finally talk about it. It might be therapeutic.
Reviewer: Cassie (Anonymous) · Date: March 26, 2008 04:02 AM · On: The 'devil' returns
poor justin and brian having to deal with hobbs again, I think afew days away from it all will be good for them
Author's Response: Yeah I think so to. Thank you so much for reading my story.
Reviewer: Catrina (Anonymous) · Date: March 24, 2008 06:21 AM · On: Claire visits.
Brians family is really something else, they treat him like crap and yet he always trys not to be rude to them, I am glad the boys are staying with them
Author's Response: Yeah, they are a piece of work the lot of them, no wonder Brian is so reluctant to love. Good thing Justin is a stuborn shit ;-) Thank you for reading and commenting.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2008 05:56 AM · On: Claire visits.
knew there would be a bit of trouble but i hope that's all there will be. the boys are doing so much better.
Author's Response: I don't know if Claire will get it. I haven't thought that long ahead yet. I'm afraid the story develops as I write it. I have an initial idea before i start a chapter, but the finished product is oten a lot different than I had imagined it would be. I just guess I work that way.
Reviewer: Sandy (Anonymous) · Date: March 23, 2008 09:34 PM · On: The Party
Great Story. I love that Michael is finally getting his due. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Michael has had it comming for a while. Thank you for reading and commenting.
Reviewer: Bec (Anonymous) · Date: March 23, 2008 04:44 AM · On: The Party
everything was going so well until mikey had a tantrum, ben standing up for himself was good and I liked how brian handled the situation, its justins house too and he can throw whoever he wants out of it, and justin wouldnt throw someone out unless they were being an ass anyway
Author's Response: If Michael forces him, Brian will choose Justin all the time. Thank you for reading and commenting.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2008 04:11 AM · On: The Party
michael is an ass and it's about time ben got to the end of hid rope. bravo to both brian and justin for the way they handled him. it could have been worse. keep those chapters coming, i really enjoy this story.
Author's Response: I have always thought that Michael was a little too much on the whiney and possesive side. Brian did it with David but I think he could sence that he would try to controle Michael, he backed all the way off with Ben because he felt that Ben could be the right one for Michael. It's just to bad Michael can't seem to give Brian the same curtesy.
Reviewer: Brittani (Anonymous) · Date: March 22, 2008 08:19 PM · On: Meeting the parents
I really love your story.... Can't wait for the next chapter =)
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Thank you for reading and commenting.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2008 04:25 PM · On: Meeting the parents
you tied all of that together perfectly. great job.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I appriciate my loyal readers :-)
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2008 04:13 PM · On: A sleepover planned
nice chapter. brian kept it subduded. really nice.
Author's Response: Thank you. I try to keep from going to much OOC but he has changed over the 5 years of the show and is a lot more subdued now.
Reviewer: Ally (Anonymous) · Date: March 22, 2008 07:29 AM · On: Meeting the parents
its so great that they are all getting along so well
Author's Response: I was trying to get som straight people in to their lives for the sake of the boys. They need to see that you don't have to choose just because you are gay you can have straight friends.
Reviewer: Ashley (Anonymous) · Date: March 21, 2008 06:11 AM · On: A sleepover planned
I love it! I can't wait to see what happens when the new people get there. I hope they stick around.
Author's Response: I think they will. Thank you for reading and commenting.
Reviewer: Cari (Anonymous) · Date: March 20, 2008 03:37 AM · On: A sleepover planned
brian and justin getting grilled by the parents was great, it will be good for the boys to have their friends over
Author's Response: I can relate to the parents. I would never let my girs stay the night with someone where I didn't know the parents. Thank you for reading and commenting.
Author's Response: more to come promise.
Author's Response: thanks i hope u continue to read it.
Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: March 19, 2008 02:20 AM · On: First day at school
I am glad things are going well and becoming abit less hostile with john lol
Author's Response: We are not out of the woods yet, but we are getting there. Thank you for reading and commenting.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2008 01:03 AM · On: First day at school
great chapter. it's really hard for them to adjust to everything all at once but the men are doing a good job. it will take time, but they'll get there.
Author's Response: Thank you.
Reviewer: Anna (Anonymous) · Date: March 17, 2008 07:08 AM · On: Married at last
Thank you for writing! Looking forward to more of this story:)
Author's Response: Thank you Anna. It seems you are one of my most constant readers. I really appriciate that.
Reviewer: Mandy (Anonymous) · Date: March 17, 2008 02:28 AM · On: Married at last
John scowling is funny, I wonder how long it will be before Brian snaps at him lol but then with the childhood Brian had he will probably be really good with them and Justin will be great too
Author's Response: I think that you are right. Brian is never going to snap at a child, he knows how it makes you feel. Thank you for reading and commenting.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2008 02:09 AM · On: Married at last
i can't tell if the boys ae pleased or not. nothing seems to intrest them but the media room and john is afraid to show what he's feeling. so like his uncle. off to an interesting start though.
Author's Response: I really think that the boys just needed a little stability and routine.. Thank you for reading and commenting.
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