Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2016 09:40 AM · On: Chapter 3

aww so cute.



Author's Response:

yeah, Brian and Justin deserve a break from drama from time to time

Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: August 12, 2016 09:51 PM · On: Chapter 3

Boy when Brian wants something/someone he'll go to just about any length to get it/him. Lucky Justin.



Author's Response:

I know right? Anybody else would just say sorry. OF course, Brian isn't anybody.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 12, 2016 03:11 PM · On: Chapter 3

I loved Brian's note to Justin.



Author's Response:

Thanks, I tried to keep in tone with his sarcastic sense of humor.

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2016 09:29 PM · On: Chapter 3

Hi, Bea! Just finished my story, and have a little time to play catch up (finally!). This is very interesting so far. Love the first chapter where they had their little tryst without really knowing who each other was, and the 'take charge' Justin.

Have to agree that Brian really went way overboard on his treatment of Justin in the second chapter at Kinnetik. Wow, that was really nasty of him!  I'm glad  he realized he had been wrong, but I think Justin let him off the hook just a little too easily.  I would have made him work for it just a bit harder.

But I do like the more confident Justin in this story, and I have a suspicion he can more than hold his own, while teaching "Mr. Cocky" a think or two along the way. :)  I will be enjoying reading more of this story. Thank you for posting this on here, and for being a writer on MW!  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Wow, Kim, thank you so much. I've just finished reading your story too (nothing new, I read ALL of your stories and love them all ! With a very special place in my heart for "I remember", I get goose bumps every time I read the chapter where Brian finds Justin and they finally meet, it's so beautiful). And I also want to thank you for your cover of the Toronto Convention on LJ and on Twitter, it was great fun reading and seing the photos.

I hope you like the rest of the story. And it's great fun to write here!

Bea

 

Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2016 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 3

Good for Justin that he's sticking to his guns! Brian has enough guys kissing his ass and begging for his attention. He needs someone to sluff him off like Justin did. At like brian's was thinking, neither of them (yet) have anything to loses. Justin is only here for a year (yea right....) and they can just enjoy each other's company for that amount of time and then part ways, no worries. (pffffft like that's gonna happen)

I do believe Michael's chat with Brian was enlightening...to Brian anyway. He realized that he doesn't want to stay stuck in that rut. It would just mean either staying stuck like that or really, taking too many steps backwards. Is he finally going to let go of his mantras? Will Michael have a reaction when he realizes that Brian is considering someone in his life? I feel bad for Michael re: Ben. Sad that Michael's concerns are financial. that he can't seem to get by on his own.

Love the fact that Brian is making such an effort!! Such lengths he's going to! Brilliant!!!!!!! and he was rewarded!! Love it.

 

Cheers,

Elaine



Author's Response:

I love your confidence that Justin will stay in Pittsburgh! And yes even involuntarily, (and he would kick himself if he knew), Michael helped Brian realize that he can't stay a club boy, he's 36 now, time to grow up. It's sad for Michael, but in my country bookstores keep closing, there are so many other ways to buy books and comics, so I assumed it was probably the same in America and therefore times must be hard for Michael.

Thanks for your review

 

Reviewer: basili3 (Anonymous) · Date: August 11, 2016 03:24 PM · On: Chapter 3

Ben cheats on Michael.  Then he stops paying part on a house it was his idea to buy.  What a creep Ben is.



Author's Response:

Yes, cheatin on Michael is creepy. But Ben's still paying for the house presently, however since it's doubtful he'll come back, the house will have to go. Even if he buys Michael's share, it won't be much money.

Reviewer: Daphne (Anonymous) · Date: August 11, 2016 02:50 PM · On: Chapter 3

Really enjoying this. 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you, hope you like what follows

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2016 01:31 PM · On: Chapter 3

Aw what a great chapter I loved the ending so I hope Justin makes him work to get back into his good graces or underpants lol

Author's Response:

Thank you so much. And yes, Justin's not that easy!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2016 02:42 AM · On: Chapter 3

Now this is so realistic.  Ben finding a younger man.  Mel and Lindsay split.  It warmed my heart to find out that Mikey pays for JR.  Better still, Brian found a way to get back in Justin's good graces.



Author's Response:

Ok you read too fast, I was just answering your precedent review! I'm happy to know that you find it realistic. Sadly, in my experience, not many couples stay together more than 10 years

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2016 02:41 AM · On: Chapter 3

I've just had a chance to catch up with some of my reading. I like that they are both older when they meet - it gives Justin a maturity and confidence he wouldn't have had at 17 (although he did have plenty at 17). I like that he told Brian off and in a way to get Brian thinking. And Brian being Brian has started his plans to get Justin back....LOL Looking forward to what's next....

Author's Response:

Thanks ! Yes, Justin was only lacking experience when he met Brian, but he certainly was confident; I think in a way it helped their relation because Brian was just as inexperienced concerning relationships so they learned together, But an elder Justin (and we'll learn more about his history soon) would have reacted very differently. Of course, Brian is older too here and has matured (about time!)

Reviewer: feet526@comcast.net (Anonymous) · Date: August 11, 2016 02:29 AM · On: Chapter 3

Loving your updates ...and the story.  Hoping you can continue!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I will finish your story but won't have a computer for a few days so not immediately

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2016 02:10 AM · On: Chapter 3

I just started it, and I'm loving it so far! I especially love Justin here, but also Brian. Your characterization is really great. Looking forward to your next installment :)



Author's Response:

Merci! Merci! Merci! Your review means a lot to me!

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