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QAF Fanfiction - Brian and Justin - SSL Encrypted - Mobile
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Reviewer: InvisibleLover (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2016 08:00 AM · On: Chapter 1

I loved this, keep up the great work and happy writing but i would have loved Jennifer and Brian to talk i mean him having cancer must have been tough on him and than he kicked Justin out it would have been nice to see if Jennifer giving Brian advice but either way i really loved this!

Reviewer: cookiebun (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2016 12:55 PM · On: Chapter 1

I wish there was more to this story... I would have loved to see Brian come to and actually talk to Jennifer about this all.  Have another "mother"



Author's Response:

i've really been thinking about adding to this.   i think i want to add another chapter.

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2016 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 1

Great story.  Jennifer couldn't help the mother in her coming out.  She helped Bria and lied to justin so he wouldn't worry.  Bill

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: August 08, 2016 09:18 PM · On: Chapter 1

oh-  thought Jennifer would tell Justin

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2016 11:34 AM · On: Chapter 1

Wow that was incredible very powerful and captured what the treatment is like to a tee. I love that Jennifer stuck with him and would love to see more with the two of them together talking. Brilliant work. 

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