Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For MAN IN THE MIRROR
Reviewer: Avampiregirl (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2016 01:27 AM · On: Chapter 6 DÉJÀ VU

I love that Daphne!! I love how she tells Justin like it is great chapter!

Author's Response:

Daphne is one of my favorites and I wish she had a bigger role in the show. Justin's BFF never was one to hesitate on voicing her opinion when he needed a reality check. For more Daphne and Justin check out my one-off...The Deal Breaker. I appreciate the review.

Reviewer: Cheryl (Anonymous) · Date: September 13, 2016 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 6 DÉJÀ VU

You might want to check your chapter numbering and chapter titles. 

6 reads as Chapter 7.  This could prove confusing in the future.



Author's Response:

Thanks Cheryl. I tried to edit something and my chapters went wonky on me. Trying to fix it without messing up everything. I appreciate the comment and have a great day.

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2016 11:19 PM · On: Chapter 6 DÉJÀ VU

Brian needs to cave and quick.



Author's Response:

Lorna I agree. It won't be long now before the immovable object succumbs to the irresistible force. I promise! Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Jenny (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2016 06:20 AM · On: Chapter 6 DÉJÀ VU

I hope I didn't make you feel bad. It was not a big deal. Still enjoying your story. Hope you post soon!



Author's Response:

Jenny, you are too precious😉. Thank you for your interest in my story. We're getting close to the end, only a couple chapter left before we get the guys reunited. I hoped you start tuned...

Reviewer: Jenny (Anonymous) · Date: September 11, 2016 10:08 AM · On: Chapter 6 DÉJÀ VU

Brian works for Vanguard Right? Why did he mention Kinnetik, it didn't exist yet.



Author's Response:

Thanks a bunch for checking me Jenny. Sometimes the muse likes to do his or her own thing in these stories. DUHHHHH! I really should have triple-checked before posting. The blunder has been corrected and I appreciate you for calling it to my attention. Have a great day...

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2016 03:09 AM · On: Chapter 6 DÉJÀ VU

Thank goodness for Daphne. She's great at straightening Justin out. Glad to see more on this.

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