Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Handle With Care
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2019 01:00 PM · On: Chapter 3

good one

 

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2016 09:23 AM · On: Chapter 3

I just caught up with this sequel. So much going on. I've never actually watched NCIS so I only know the characters from your previous story. It's great that the old family home is filled with children, love and laughter. It's also great 'evil' got what 'evil' deserved - for all 3 of them. Enjoyable read.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the great comment. A house is not a home without laughter.  NCIS is one of my favorite shows.  I love writing crime stories.

Jane

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2016 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 2

One other thing, wasn't Gibbs a Marine?



Author's Response:

Thank you YumYum for pointing that out.  I fixed it to say marines.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2016 02:17 PM · On: Chapter 2

Wow!  What a lot going on.  First Gibbs and Tony adopt a baby girl, then Mel and Lindsay have a fatal accident leaving Brian and Justin with Gus.  We learn that Lindsay and Mel were having problems and Mel had a daughter.  Those journals of Lindsay's should make for interesting reading.  So that's two girls and a boy added to the family, wait three girls if you count Molly.  You have everything wrapped up neatly and I can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

I'll post the next chapter tomorrow night.  There are more surprises in the next one.  This chapter had a lot going on.  Thanks for the lovely review.

Jane

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2016 03:53 AM · On: Chapter 1

What a wonderful new story.  I'm glad to see you were able to rescue Molly in this first chapter.  Tony and Gibbs parents!  Who would have thought.  I look forward to reading the next chapters.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the lovely comment.  I wanted Gibbs and Tony as parents.  I think you will like the next chapters.  There are a few surprises. I also wanted the kidnapping to take place in the first chapter. I hate to have crime take up a whole story.

Jane

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2016 11:35 PM · On: Chapter 1

Hi, Jane! Great to see you posting a new story!  Just an FYI, I noticed we didn't have an NCIS category, so I created one and added it to your story.  If you want me to add some characters from there, also, please let me know, and I will be happy to add those as well to our database.  Thanks for posting this one here!  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Thanks Kim for doing this.  I wanted this story to be more QAF but it didn't turn out that way.

Jane

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