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Reviewer: Cheryl (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2016 10:55 PM · On: Chapter 2

Funny story idea.  But you need to straighten out the second sentence in the final paragrah of Chapter 2 because otherwise it really doesn't make much sense.

Cheryl



Author's Response:

thanks cheryl i'm on it.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2016 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 2

Wow that was brilliant, I cannot wait for more 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2016 06:45 PM · On: I Got An Idea

Brillliant start and and insight to what Debbie may have went through at that time 

Reviewer: purnoil8 (Anonymous) · Date: July 28, 2016 07:05 PM · On: Chapter 2

Funny idea for a story.  But didn't Michael know about Danny Devore at this point?



Author's Response:

yea that'a the thing michael of course knows who his father is but michael doesn't know because of the memory gaps.   he came to claim a family he has no claim too but lies u know, or is this an AU story?   You have to wait for the next chapter to find out.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2016 02:50 PM · On: Chapter 2

Nice background on Mike Sr.

When you wrote Justin and Brian were trying to work on this month’s issue of Rage, did you mean Justin and Mikey?   and did you mean two when you wrote They knew they were pretty much to of the people in town that loved him the most?  I can relate to Brian laughing hysterically.

 

Reviewer: Jerri (Anonymous) · Date: July 24, 2016 04:07 AM · On: I Got An Idea

Wait until Debbie finds out about the mixup! This is going to be to funny! She really will have some explaining to do!



Author's Response:

exactly.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2016 03:10 AM · On: I Got An Idea

Oy Vay.  So Mikey is really half black!  NOT.  That is soooo funny.



Author's Response:

lol exactly

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