Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Photo Shoot
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: July 06, 2016 05:13 AM · On: Joy

 This has been a wonderful story. Gus wasn't the only Prince Charming, his daddy was truly the adult version. His working with the greatful girls was wonderful, and to the girls the money didn't matter, they adored Brian and him them. The girls with the magic of beautiful dresses and having their hair done and make-up, it is a little girls dream. Thank you so much for a beautiful story.

Author's Response:

You are very welcome, I'm so happy you saw what I was going for, this was a little girls dream and the money didn't matter. That is what I wanted to come across as well. I love you saw Gus and his dad as the princes it's also what I wanted. We will see them all again, I can promise that 🌹🌹🌹

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: July 05, 2016 05:50 PM · On: Excitement

Glad about the designer and makeup people. They were nice to the girls and didn't talk down to them and made no remarks about Emma, sometimes adults are as insensitive as some children. Enjoyed chapter very much

Author's Response:

You are right sometimes adults can be like that, I have a visible disability so I know what it's like. Thanks so much for your kind words they mean everything to me 🌹💕a52;

Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2016 04:35 PM · On: Joy

finally at a computer so I can write. Fair warning, thise doesn't have spell check and I'm 5 days out of practise writing, so be warned. spelling may suck so you may have to translate on some things. lol

Can I just say........I FREAKING LOVE LOVE THIS!!!! Omg. such a soothing balm. I went bak and reread it in it's entirety and fell in love with the girls all over again. 

I love B&J in this as well as the parents, but for me, it was all about the girls. Brian's interaction with them was so heartwarming. Love him even more in this fic! 

Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm could this lead to girls for them in the future?? He's fabulous with them and of course gus. will he realize his paternal instincts? He's such a love in this.

OK...back to the girls. The pic in the banner is practically mirror image of what I imagined. You created them to be such lovely little girls. What a future they have in from of them. Sweet that you added that part about the "grown up
" model also having Down's and being a model. Nice touch.

I am now setting this up to put on my kindle, as this wil be one of my goto feel good pics. I love when a writer can have me actually feel the emotions she writing about and you are so capable of this. You are truly gifted. don't ever get discouraged. 

Thank you thank you thanks you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

cheers adn TONS of hugs!


Author's Response:

I'm crying happy tears reading this review thank you so much, I can't even begin to express how much this means to me. All this is because of you asking to see the photo shoot and I am so happy you did because this would never have happened.


i love the girls and we will see these girls again I can't let them just disappear. Brian really loves them and they love him so much. Gus is just like his dad a big heart and cares deeply for others.  


I hope to to write more soon, I have two stories finished waiting to post, it maybe Sunday or Monday before I do as I'm going away.


thank you again for everything, massive hugs 💕💞😘a52;🌹🌷

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: July 05, 2016 03:00 PM · On: Photo Shoot day

I enjoyed your chapter very much. Brian's love for the little girls was amazing, somehow this wasn't just business, he was very involved and the way the excited little ones gave him alot of pleasure. Thought Gus was adorable telling the bully that he should go home and learn some manners, proved his dislike for the way Emma was treated. Great chapter!

Author's Response:

Thank you so so much, I am so over the moon you enjoyed this so much. You are right it was more than that for Brian he loves those girls. Gus is like his stands up to bullies 🌷

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2016 08:27 AM · On: Joy

Sweet story - it's nice to read about the girl's special day.

Author's Response:

Thank you, I really enjoyed writing this, I love these girls so much 💕🌷

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2016 02:56 AM · On: Joy

Really loved this.  You've brought these girls to life and showed how they make everyone's lives better.

Author's Response:

They are great and I'm sure we will see them again 💕

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2016 02:43 AM · On: Excitement

I love how those two little girl's make grown-ups lives so much better. 

Author's Response:

They really do don't they,  thank you so much 🌺

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2016 01:55 AM · On: Joy

Great ending for this great story.  I knew Gus was going to be Prince Charming.  All the kids were really cute.  Looking forward to more of your stories!!!!  Bill

Author's Response:

Thank you so much, I loved writing all the kids they were fun to write. Gus is just like his dad a real prince 💞

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: July 04, 2016 12:08 AM · On: Photo Shoot day

I am enjoying this life-affirming, positive story. Great to see Gus sticking up for Emma in the park. The girls are so cute--it is nice the way they support each other. I enjoy your Brian & Justin. Such a fun read. Good job! Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, I enjoy writing Gus he is a lovely young boy and I am so happy you are enjoying it xx💕

Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2016 08:34 PM · On: Excitement

Omg!! Completely and totally in love with this!! Beyond my wildest imagination. I can't wait to see what else you do with this.
Sorry I haven't written yet. I've been moving. Just sitting down to relax and a quick reading break.
What an adventure these 2 girls are having. Designer clothes, make up done, stars wanting her design. You attention to detail is incredible.
I'll gush more when I have my computer up and going instead of just my phone.
I actually teared up a bit reading this. It's just so heart warming. So thrilled you are writing this. Thank you!!!!!!!


Author's Response: You are most welcome and if you hadn't mentioned this idea I would never have written so THANK YOU for this. I really hope I did you proud with this I really wanted to 💞😘💕

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2016 05:35 PM · On: Excitement

Another wonderful chapter.  Loved the meeting with Sophia.  The are so nice and it si cute that they are pleased for each other.  Great story!!!!!  Bill

Author's Response:

Thank you ever do much, I loved her as well 🌹

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2016 06:31 PM · On: Photo Shoot day

Love this look at Emma and Kelly.  The pics in the banner are just too cute.  Wonder what Gus is going to get to do?

Author's Response: They are cute Kim did an incredible job. Wait and see if you wont be disappointed

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2016 04:05 PM · On: Photo Shoot day

Great story.  Can't wait to see what Brian has in mind for Gus to "help" with,Prince Charming??  Looking forward to the next chapter.  Bill

Author's Response:

Thank you so much, you just have to wait and see lol, there will be more tomorrow <3

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