Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2016 02:13 AM · On: Chapter 5- The island

It seems Justin's parents are really supportive of their son. Do they know he's gay? And Brian doesn't seem to have a close relationship with his parents at all, especially with Jack.

anyway, I'm still lovong this! I can't wait to see what you've planned next :)



Author's Response:

Justin hasn't come out to his parents yet, but they do suspect that he is gay.

Just as it is in the show, Brian's parents are unloving people.

So thrilled that you like the story!

xoxo

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2016 11:06 AM · On: Chapter 5- The island

Hi,  Cait!  I have been out of town recently, but I wanted you to know that I am really am still enjoying your story very much. It was very telling the reactions of the two families, but I think they were very much in character. I also love the idea of Hunter and Daphne being friends. I will be looking forward to more of this. Thank you for posting this story on here. :) ~Kim



Author's Response:

Hey there, Kim! I hope you enjoyed your time out of town. I thank you for reading my story, and I am glad that you enjoy it.

I did try to keep the families as much in character as possible, however, they may surprise some people later on... ;)

Writing Hunter and Daphne as friends is fun! Thanks!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2016 02:18 AM · On: Chapter 5- The island

Well, the parents seemed to act typical for what you'd expect.  Though I was rather surprised about Joan.  She seemed to really care.  Poor Justin, I guess they should have pulled the dingy closer up on the shore.  Hope there are fruit trees near that lagoon.  At least they'll have fresh water.



Author's Response:

Joan does care about her son's safety, but not quite enough to actually do something about it.

Poor Justin is all tuckered out! Yes, the boys will have to find fruit and what not to survive. Who knows how long they'll be there for!  ;)

Thanks for reading and for letting me know your thoughts

xoxo

Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2016 08:58 PM · On: Chapter 5- The island

Well....it's all gonna start happening for the boys now isn't it. this will definitely be intersting. good thing Brian thought to grab the flare gun, especially since the raft is gone. (yeah...had to see that one coming! lol) Maybe the boys will set up camp at the lagoon or at least close by. 

The parents..sounds about right to be honest. Jack is a drink ass. His mom justifies her inactions by thinking prayer is enough.

Jenn and Craig. well, we're not sure as to Craig's reactions as of yet, but I'm sure he and Jenn will do all they can. noether of them know justin is gay yet right? so no reason to dismiss him at this point.

Micheal is a good guy in this one. As much as I don't necessarily like his character, you've done good by him here. He's not a part of the glut. Mind you, they are all considerably younger here right?

Anyway. I'm sure the rest of this will be an intersting ride! Lots of adventures for B&J on the island. who will be the more level headed? Hard to say. Either one of them fit the bill at any given time.

thanks for this!

cheers,

Elaine



Author's Response:

Dun DUN DUUUUN! The raft is gone, oh my!

Jack couldn't give two craps about Brian and while his mother does care, she doesn't quite care enough to take any real action.

It is safe to say that Justin's parents are very worried for him.

Yes, Brian and the gang are all around 21 years old in this one. For the storyline, I decided that Michael needed to be a good guy.

Both boys have their momnets of freaking out and of staying rational, as demonstrated already! I am thrilled that you are enjoying it :)

Thanks for the support, Elaine

xoxo

Reviewer: steff (Anonymous) · Date: June 20, 2016 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 5- The island

Im not to fond of WIPs because I'm way to impatient ;-) But I'm reading this. It's fun! I check nearly every day if there may be a new chapter :-) I particulary enjoy the Brian-Justin parts of your story. Again: Thank you for sharing!



Author's Response:

I have written up until chapter 11 with this one, but I am posting weekly as I have not yet finished.

I'm glad you decided to give this story a go and that you are enjoying it :)

Thanks for reading and for your review

xoxo

Reviewer: confused_bliss (Anonymous) · Date: June 19, 2016 10:41 PM · On: Chapter 5- The island

Great chapter - again! Really enjoying this. I liked how you moved around to see how everyone is adapting to the news. It will be interesting to see how Brian and Justin work together on the island to survive... and how things progress for them. Anxious to read more. Thanks for updating! :) 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and for your review. Honestly, I was a little disheartened by the small amount of reviews I got on my last chapter, so I am thankful that you always take the time to post one :)

Some very different responses to the disappearance of our boys. They will really have to rely on each other to survive on this deserted Island; they've no other choice ;)

xoxo

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