Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2018 06:32 PM · On: Chapter 1
LOL
Reviewer: Teinisydan (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2018 07:05 PM · On: Chapter 1
Haha, that should show Brian not to make fun of Sunshine. His pretty blond boy is gone :D. That was funny!
Reviewer: greatyoj (Anonymous) · Date: February 19, 2017 07:33 AM · On: Chapter 1
could we have a part two???
this is funny story.
want to know Brian's facial reaction xoxoox
Author's Response: You will be glad to hear that there already is a second part, it's called Hairy Disaster :)
Reviewer: Fran (Anonymous) · Date: May 29, 2016 06:00 AM · On: Chapter 1
Can we have a sequel, please? I really loved it, very funny and well written. Thank you.
Author's Response: I definitely think about writing a sequel :) Aww, thank you very much! :)
Reviewer: Fran (Anonymous) · Date: May 24, 2016 09:16 AM · On: Chapter 1
Ha! Serves Brian right:)
Author's Response: Absolutely :D
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2016 07:21 AM · On: Chapter 1
Lol brilliant, I can picture his face, brilliant job
Author's Response: Thank you very much! :)
Reviewer: The Lantern keeps shining (Anonymous) · Date: May 22, 2016 10:50 PM · On: Chapter 1
The answer to that little problem just fell into Justin's lap, so to speak. Can't have Brian being too cheeky. That was funny!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the story :D
Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2016 06:56 AM · On: Chapter 1
LOL, I like Justin's creative solution to the problem. What does Brian do next? Sequel, please.
Your photo is perfect. Poor Ted looked awful as a blond. Thank goodness that phase didn't last long.
Your English is excellent. This isn't a big deal, but I'd suggest moving the starting quotation marks (as well as the ending quotation marks) to the top (rather than the bottom) for you next story.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad I'm not the only one who thinks that Ted's blond hair was terrible :D
I will definitely change the quotation marks in my next story :)
Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2016 02:00 AM · On: Chapter 1
Funny stories. Your English seems very good to me.
Author's Response: Thank you very much :)
Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2016 09:48 PM · On: Chapter 1
LOL
You did great for your first story in English! Very well done :) I enjoyed it a lot
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it :)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2016 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 1
OHHHH! That last joke was fuuuunnnny. They have brunette jokes as well you know. Good job.
Author's Response: Thank you :D
Reviewer: cookiebun (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2016 07:33 PM · On: Chapter 1
This was good... but now you need to write the sequel!!! We need to read the outcome of this one! :)
Author's Response: Thank you! :) I will definitely think about writing a sequel - maybe Brian will take Justin to a hairdresser? :D
Reviewer: dchewey (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2016 04:01 PM · On: Chapter 1
lol screamed in pure horor...rofl
Author's Response: Yeah, apparently (and understandably) the loss of Justin's beautiful blonde hair was a big shock for Brian :D
Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2016 02:14 PM · On: Chapter 1
Very cute story! I wrote an easy to read story for people learning English called:
The Orphan
Click that link if you would like to read an easy story in English, and with examples of American English grammar. it's not too long either.
Your English is excellent; however, usually quotation marks go at the top both at the beginning and end of a quote; however, that's not a big deal.
Very happy to see you with us and writing for our enjoyment. We love beginners since our best authors were once newbies too.
Hint: Google search all words you don't know yet. That way your vocabulary will grow very rapidly.
Author's Response: Hey Bob, thank you very much :)
this story is very interesting and I have read the first two chapters so far.
And oh, yes, I didn't notice I used German quotation marks, thank you for mentioning it. I will change that in my other stories.
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2016 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 1
Welcome to Whispers, Sarah! Thank you for publishing your story here. :) I loved the photo you chose of Ted with the blond hair.;) Very appropriate! Cute story! Thank you. :) ~Kim
Author's Response: Hey Kim, you're welcome :) Thanks a lot for your review! Oh yes, I thought the photo would go well with the story. :D
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