Midnight Whispers :: QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction

Reviewer: hamie58 (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2016 01:03 AM · On: Chapter 1

I don't know if it's just me but I can't view the story, when I open the chapter it's blank.

Author's Response:
i will check into it

Reviewer: Skywriter (Anonymous) · Date: May 10, 2016 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 1

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I love Gus stories and this was pretty nice up until the last line. I'm assuming this Adam is a possible relative of Hobbs not his kid. Otherwise I'm not sure how this is going to work as Chris Hobbs was the same age as Justin when Gus was born... Just 17... How likely is it that he would have a kid that is the same age as Gus and using Hobbs last name. Somehow this isn't computing in my brain time wise. Yeah I know guys can get girls pregnant as teens but this is a QAF storyline and the likelihood that Hobbs would have gotten a girl pregnant and actually married her is pretty remote. Hobbs didn't strike me as a morally responsible person. I could see if the kid Adam was a little brother of Hobbs or even a nephew but as his kid it seems odd.

Although the story is marked complete you said you were going to write more so I'll have to wait and see how it plays out...

Author's Response:
thank you for reading

Reviewer: chouchou (Anonymous) · Date: May 08, 2016 12:14 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wow!!

Well, the last sentence is ... to read...

Author's Response:
I'll will do more so please come back

Reviewer: chandrika (Anonymous) · Date: May 08, 2016 11:11 AM · On: Chapter 1

wow - many open questions...

great short story - thank you for sharing

Author's Response:
thank you so much for the love

Reviewer: Dioramanya (Anonymous) · Date: May 08, 2016 10:14 AM · On: Chapter 1

OMG !! You can't stop here !

Author's Response:
lol there will be more so don't worry

Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: May 08, 2016 09:47 AM · On: Chapter 1

Aaand.... need more please at least a few chapters.

Author's Response:
more then just a few were going to age 21

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2016 06:21 AM · On: Chapter 1

Now that was sneaky. Hobbs a father. You certainly write like Gus would think.

Author's Response:
lol thank you

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