Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Monkey Business
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2021 06:03 AM · On: Chapter 1

did read it again.  Love a Lindsey bashing

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2018 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 1

Loved it.  Lindsey deseved all that and more

Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2018 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 1

This was fantastic! Love the photo at the end.

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2018 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 1

Great ending to the trilogy!!   Here's hoping Michael and Lindsey learned from their mistakes.   Though with Michael having permanent amnesia and Lindsey not really remembering much of her ordeal anyway, heres hoping something or other may have sinked in.   But either way, Brian and Justin still really want nothing more to do with either one of them, and don't trust them, and really who could blame them.   

Reviewer: Gingabread (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2017 05:47 AM · On: Chapter 1

This was great.

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: September 11, 2016 12:40 AM · On: Chapter 1

I loved this story! If I LMAO over mikey's story you can image my delight with Linz's, she is a attention whore, a spoiled child who thinks anything she wants she should be given. Personally I don't think her type ever changes, its all about her! As for Craig he could use a wake up call, maybe in jail he loses the ability to speak and has no choice but to listen as he becomes someones bitch, or I'd love for Debbie to be invisable and hear how her meddleing upsets peoples life, how they pity her for trying to help but ends up hurting everyonea feelings even her ''grandchildren'' who dread the loud voice and being smothered, and that she hurts their parents by bullying. Your stories are great please write more. 

Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2016 06:03 AM · On: Chapter 1

Sorry the ending semed rather rushed. Otherwise , another great animal story. Here Kitty Kitty remains my favorite though.

Author's Response:

I didn't feel rushed writing it. It seemed in line with how I ended the other stories. I wanted the journey to be the centerpiece not the recovery. The lessons were the most important thing apart from the humor. I also have a fondness for KItty since it started all this.

Reviewer: kellydeer (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2016 03:49 AM · On: Chapter 1

I totally spewed Mt. Dew thru my nose while reading this (that shit really has a sting when exiting thru the nasal passages, but damn!) So freaking funny!!!

"The spell bound clerk promptly fainted when the fashionable thing grabbed a sample swag bag and left a fresh turd on the glass counter display case as a thank you tip for services rendered. Lindsay was pleased that at least someone in this mall could spot quality clientele."

Author's Response:

I tried so hari am so glad you liked it. Humor is my greatest motivator to write these stories. 

Reviewer: BlueButterfly (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2016 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 1

Funny, but more gross than the other installments. Parts of it made me uncomfortable. 

I'm glad Linds and Mikey got a decent ending and living their own lives and leving our boys alone though. 

Author's Response:

I will take getting any emotional response to a story I write as a win as long as it isn't boredom. I was at the zoo when a monkey threw shit on my friend I was grossed out too. The picture I ordered of my kid from his school that showed up with him holding a real life monkey on his lap looking like it was touching itself while sucking it's finger freaked me the hell out too. Especially since I ordered a Tweety bird background with no live animals even mentioned in the brochure. So yeah life is disturbingly uncomfortable in my world lol

Reviewer: cookiebun (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2016 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 1

Fantastic closure to this series of stories.

I'm a big fan of anti-Mikey and anti-Lindsay... and I liked that they did find some sort of redeption at the end.  permanent amnesia is perfect for Mikey who would have never out grown his obsession on his own.


Author's Response:

I am not sure I could write a nice Lindsay or Micheal fic. I wanted to give them redemption but also tried to stay canon to my series characters. Mike was my way of not killing off Micheal but giving deb her son back. Even if she did raise a creep.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2016 12:00 PM · On: Chapter 1

Funny story I loved it because I am a Lindsay and Mikey hater lol

Reviewer: Blossomlegs (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2016 05:40 AM · On: Chapter 1

Fantastic!!!    Fabulous verse and very,very enjoyable read.  Love Mikey the dog andLinz the monkey.


Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2016 05:12 AM · On: Chapter 1

I so totally loooove this series......LOL Karma can be such a bitch. At least Lindsay learnt her lesson and hopefully Mike will be a much better person than Mikey. Perhaps with this new start Debbie will be a better mother and allow Mike to be an adult instead of tied to her aprons strings. It's lovely to see Brian and Justin happy ending.

Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed the series. Thank you for taking time out of your life to love something I took time out of mine to create. Always a great reviewer.

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2016 03:51 AM · On: Chapter 1

well done! Only one thing ! Lol wished they had stayed animals for the better of mankind lol :)

Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2016 01:22 AM · On: Chapter 1

Happy to see another installment to this hilarious series. I found myself cracking up often. Would love to say I felt sorry for Linds...but let's face it. I didn't. Instead I think I felt much joy!! :)

Craig was scacry, but teh family was awesome!! 

Intersting bringing Micheal back into it. Nice way to start over.

YAY! Our boys are married.

Funny as hell for the most part...sad that the boy died, and kinda freaked out over other parts! All in all a fun fic!



Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2016 12:13 AM · On: Chapter 1

Love, love, love this.  You did a wonderful job!

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2016 11:58 PM · On: Chapter 1

funny story.  I enjoyed it.

Reviewer: brandi1111 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2016 10:49 PM · On: Chapter 1

I just played around with the marmoset picture not to be taken seriuosly

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