Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2019 03:34 AM · On: Chapter 6
good one
Reviewer: Deb Tanner (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2016 06:24 AM · On: Chapter 6
This was a lot of fun! You did a good job with my little plot bunny! Would be fun if you wrote a few more fics in this AU! Hint, hint! :)
Deb
Author's Response: It was fun writing this one. I'm already in the works for a sequel. It's taking a lot of reasearch to do the next one. When I write a story, I put a lot of research into them. I like to have facts to back up my stories. Thank you for the plot bunny. Might do another of yours in the future. You have the greatest ideas. *I bow to the plot bunny master*
Jane
Reviewer: Deb Tanner (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2016 05:40 AM · On: Chapter 5
Such fun... Stockwell getting arrested... Brian putting the handcuffs on him... good times had by all! Well, except Stockwell and his boys! ;)
Deb
Author's Response: Thanks again. I figured since Stockwell screwed up Brian's life, turnaround was fair play.
Jane
Reviewer: Deb Tanner (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2016 05:20 AM · On: Chapter 4
Awesome! They solved their cases and now Gibbs and Tony will be moving to Pittsburgh! Can't wait to see what else happens!
Deb
Author's Response: I wanted to do something for Gibbs being he solved his first case. It will be interesting.
Jane
Reviewer: Deb Tanner (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2016 04:57 AM · On: Chapter 3
Another wonderful chapter! And way to go, Justin!
Deb
Author's Response: I figured that this blond kid wasn't dumb. So I gave him some smarts for his job. Thanks for the lovely words.
Jane
Reviewer: Deb Tanner (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2016 03:46 AM · On: Chapter 2
Ahhh... this is getting even more interesting. Two cases! Loving this!
Deb
Author's Response: Thanks Deb for the challenge. I love your challenges. I thought Gibbs had to solve his first one and to teach B/J how to close a cold case.
Jane
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2016 10:22 AM · On: Chapter 6
I really enjoyed this story and I do look forward to more in this arc if the plot bunny allows
Author's Response: Thanks bk for the lovely comment. I loved writing this one. Working on a new story as we speak. Will be a while before posting.
Jane
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2016 12:59 AM · On: Chapter 6
Love this. It could be the start of something big, especially if you figure a way to get McGee, Abby and Ducky there.
Author's Response: Thank you YumYum for the great comment. I might in the future think about getting the three of them to Pittsburgh. Just started a new story in the series. Will be a while before I post.
Jane
Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2016 10:15 AM · On: Chapter 5
Good to see Stockwell and the other officers go down. Hubby is a cop so 'dirty cops' is close to 'home'. I've never actually seen NCIS but you've got me curious. So what's next for our boys?
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing Tiger. I also hate when cops get their hands dirty. I will be posting the last chapter this Saturday. I am going to run this as a series. I have the next story all figured out.
Jane
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2016 12:03 AM · On: Chapter 5
Darn, with the arrest of Stockwell the drama's over. Unless you have something else up you sleeve. Great chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks YumYum. I do have other drama. I just finished my last chapter and will post it Saturday. I have decided to do a series on this storyline. So when I'm finished it will be good.
Jane.
Reviewer: mamaduck (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2016 08:04 AM · On: Chapter 4
Youu know, I keep hearing each character's voices while reading. You have all the characters down pat.
Patiencely waiting for the next chapter.
Sandy
Author's Response: Sandy: Thanks for the encouraging words. This means a lot. I have read so much of NCIS that I wanted to see if I could write a story on them. I like it when you can hear their words. Will be posting next chapter in a few hours. Happy reading.
Jane
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2016 07:23 AM · On: Chapter 4
Very nicely done. I could actually hear Fornell as I read your words. You have NCIS down pat.
Author's Response: Thanks for the lovely comment. I have read many stories of NCIS and I tried my best to see if I could write them in character. The next chapter will be posted in a few hours.
Jane
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2016 04:38 PM · On: Chapter 3
I remember the episodes you refer to. Gotta say you have a way with mysteries. Love the idea of them being private investigators. I think it would actually work. The house outside of Pittsburgh sounds fabulous and just what they need.
Author's Response: Thanks, YumYum for the wonderful words. I thought of them as PI's and it did fit them well. As for mysteries, I have watched and still watch crime shows. I might put them in another story these four. Still thinking about it. The house made me think of Britin with a little more western theme. glad you are liking the story so far.
Jane
Reviewer: brandi1111 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2016 05:11 AM · On: Chapter 2
In chapter 1 letter writer claims Hobbs and riechert guy are fathe/son to explain dna. In chapter 2 Hobbs and riechert are in a love affair both sleeping with Kemp explain dna. I am confused?
Author's Response: No you are not confused, Brandi. It will be explained in a later chapter. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story though.
Jane
Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: April 11, 2016 03:56 AM · On: Chapter 2
Interesting story. Thank you for telling us it's done, I am having issues about starting chapter stories that are not done.
Author's Response: I know what you mean CFC. I hate reading stories until they are done. I always let my readers know when I have a story done. I'm glad you find this one interesting.
Jane
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2016 05:29 PM · On: Chapter 2
Boy, are you hitting this out of the ball park. Gibb/Dinozzo have been slashed from the beginning. So it fits right in. Love the nicknames being a nod to their universities. Carnege Mellon and The Buckeyes. I've notice some writers use Jet for Jethro, but this is the first time that I get why. lol. When you think about it Brian and Tony do have a lot in common. It was also interesting to note that Stockwell was still head of the police after losing the election. Now I have a question. The letter that Justin received said Hobbs was Reickart's son? Of course, being lovers makes more sense.
Love how you manage to tie everything together.
Author's Response: Thanks YumYum. When I started this story back in December, I knew it was going to take some time to get things in order. So I wrote each section separately to make things all work together. I agree why Brian and Tony have things in common. They could have been brothers the way they react. One of my chapters will explain the question. Thanks for reviewing.
Jane
Reviewer: mamaduck (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2016 03:49 PM · On: Chapter 1
Great start! Can't wait for the rest of the story.
Sandy
Author's Response: Thanks, Sandy. I love writing crime stories since I wrote Murder in Pittsburgh. I hope I have another chapter posted tomorrow night, late.
Jane
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2016 01:30 PM · On: Chapter 1
Very interesting start I look forward to the next chapter
Author's Response: Thank you for the wonderful review. I love writing crime stories and this was a challenge by Deb Tanner. I had fun writing this one. Sometimes there was a lot of research that went into some of the scenes.
Jane.
Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2016 09:24 AM · On: Chapter 1
Interesting twist. The two of them plus Cynthia could conquer the world....LOL - well perhaps not but they'll give it a good go.... The loft with new locks - about time - wonder who will the most upset - Michael or Lindsay - probably Michael - at least he'll be the loudest...
Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words. I hope they do conquer the world. We'll have to see who is upset the most. Have a few more twists. Thanks again.
Jane
Reviewer: Deb Tanner (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2016 08:32 AM · On: Chapter 1
So glad you took up my little plot bunny! Very clever to cross it with NCIS, another show I love! I never thought of doing it as a crossover. So I must repeat... Very Clever! Can't wait to see what happens once they get to DC!
Deb
Author's Response: I hope I did justice to this story. I also love NCIS. I figured if Brian was going to need help than who would be the best but NCIS. I have never written NCIS before so this was a challenge for be also. I love responses like this. Hope you enjoy another chapter this weekend.
Jane
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2016 07:10 AM · On: Chapter 1
Very interesting! I love NCIS and looked forward to seeing where you take this. I've written NCIS and never once thought to cross it with QAF. Cool idea.
Author's Response: Thanks for the wonderful words, YumYum. This means a lot coming from my first review. This was a plot bunny from Deb Tanner. I love writing her plot bunnies when something of hers strikes my fancy. I may post sooner than 3 days.
Jane
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