Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Smokescreen
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: April 07, 2017 09:51 PM · On: Chapter 4

At least Brian is letting Justin be there-  that is a good thing

Reviewer: Chibs (Anonymous) · Date: April 06, 2017 12:40 AM · On: Chapter 4

I almost hate to read this story. So far, I love it but, by the time a new chapter is posted I've forgotten where the last chapter ended. 

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2017 12:20 PM · On: Chapter 4

Anne, Sally - this story is amazing.  And what a powerful chapter!  This one is poignant, sad, bittersweet, but, oh, so engrossing.  And I can see Brian reacting just this way.  I almost cried when Gus drew a picture for his father, knowing that Brian (at least for now) will not really be able to even see it.  I do hope you write a scene with him and Gus, b/c I think his child right now would be the greatest salve to his broken spirit that he could have, despite his words.

This story continues to be one of my favorites!  I will be looking forward to each update, and I will savor the journey along the way. Thank you for posting this on here.  ~Kim

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2017 05:38 AM · On: Chapter 4

This story is amazoing.   YOu are getting me excited about writing again.  I have a similar story here but i'm going to delete it because this, OMG this is breaking me in ways i've never known i could be broken.   I mean this in the upmost best way because it's just amazing.   I'm broken but i will say thank you for one thing, i thought that the little boy was going to say i drew him a picture and then i realized he couldn't see it anymore NOW THAT would have broken me so thanks for that thanks for not pulling the last string of sanity i had left.   This story is amazing and you make us wait so long for the next part and then when i get it i forgive you for the way because it's just so fucking powerful that i just have to sit back and cry a few minutes before writing a comment.   i hope you don't mind this lengthy one because it's what you deserve for the awesomeness of this story.

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