Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Smokescreen
Reviewer: Frances (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2017 04:44 PM · On: Chapter 2

Glad you're both back!  Can't wait for the next chapter.  I'm in love with the story already.  And it's so like Brian to tell a doctor that the diagnosis is full of shit.  lol.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2017 02:13 PM · On: Chapter 2

Brian is going to be blind?  The two of you write being ill very well.  So what is happening with Michael?  How will Brian handle not being able to see?  More soon.

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2017 04:31 AM · On: Chapter 2

this was so awesome.   i need more like now i did a blind brian story but nothing like this.  it's awesome

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2016 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 2

Hi, Sally and Anne - I was thrilled to see an update to what is currently one of my favorite stories.  You had me hooked from the first chapter, and I was anxiously waiting for an update, and this did not disappoint.

This is an intriguing idea - taking someone like Brian who treasures his image so highly - and giving him (for want of a better term) a defect that may affect his attractiveness, at least in his eyes (pardon the pun).

And I loved how Justin was so nurturing to him during the all-too-brief cancer arc on the show, so I am looking forward to seeing more of that in this story, as well as finding out how Brian's condition manifests itself.  I'm sure that not only will he face physical issues, but also issues with his pride coming up, along with a batch of stubbornness, no doubt. 

So glad to have seen an update to this!  Looking forward to the rest of this story.  Thank you for posting it. ~Kim

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: December 31, 2016 02:14 PM · On: Chapter 2


Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2016 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 2

Oh no...I'm tearing up for both of the guys. Thank you for this long-awaited update. You have made my day. 

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2016 05:34 AM · On: Chapter 2

My heart is already breaking for Brian.  How will he adjust to blindness when so much of his personal and professional life revolves around Imagery?   That's it, I'm hooked! 

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