Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Smokescreen
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: April 07, 2017 09:51 PM · On: Chapter 4

At least Brian is letting Justin be there-  that is a good thing

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: April 07, 2017 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 3

I'm enjoying the story-  lots of angst-  right up my alley-  Justin and Brian are together and have to deal with issues-that is real life- so bring it on

Reviewer: Chibs (Anonymous) · Date: April 06, 2017 12:40 AM · On: Chapter 4

I almost hate to read this story. So far, I love it but, by the time a new chapter is posted I've forgotten where the last chapter ended. 

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2017 12:20 PM · On: Chapter 4

Anne, Sally - this story is amazing.  And what a powerful chapter!  This one is poignant, sad, bittersweet, but, oh, so engrossing.  And I can see Brian reacting just this way.  I almost cried when Gus drew a picture for his father, knowing that Brian (at least for now) will not really be able to even see it.  I do hope you write a scene with him and Gus, b/c I think his child right now would be the greatest salve to his broken spirit that he could have, despite his words.

This story continues to be one of my favorites!  I will be looking forward to each update, and I will savor the journey along the way. Thank you for posting this on here.  ~Kim

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2017 05:38 AM · On: Chapter 4

This story is amazoing.   YOu are getting me excited about writing again.  I have a similar story here but i'm going to delete it because this, OMG this is breaking me in ways i've never known i could be broken.   I mean this in the upmost best way because it's just amazing.   I'm broken but i will say thank you for one thing, i thought that the little boy was going to say i drew him a picture and then i realized he couldn't see it anymore NOW THAT would have broken me so thanks for that thanks for not pulling the last string of sanity i had left.   This story is amazing and you make us wait so long for the next part and then when i get it i forgive you for the way because it's just so fucking powerful that i just have to sit back and cry a few minutes before writing a comment.   i hope you don't mind this lengthy one because it's what you deserve for the awesomeness of this story.

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2017 05:10 AM · On: Chapter 3

I love Jen.   Can there be more Jen?   I need more Jen

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2017 04:15 PM · On: Chapter 3

Brian seems to be reverting to his pushing over the Kinney cliff.  Of all the people that might sit with Brian, Jenn was the best choice.  Her choice of book are a tad depressing.  Once suggestion.  Audio books.  Hopefully things get better.

Reviewer: Pam (Anonymous) · Date: January 26, 2017 09:38 AM · On: Chapter 3

So far this story is incredible.

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2017 12:10 AM · On: Chapter 3

Hi, Ladies! I'm always so thrilled to see an update to this, one of my favorite WIPs. :)  Jennifer didn't exactly thrill Brian with her choice of literature, did she? Ha!

I loved the ending with the two of them, and how Jennifer was able to comfort him.  I figured that was who Justin would select. Thank God it wasn't Debbie!  I think she would have just wound him up, and stressed him out even more. 

I really like comfort fics, and I am enjoying this twist of Justin being the 'protector' this time.  I hope another update will come soon. Thank you for continuing this.  ~Kim

Reviewer: joann (Anonymous) · Date: January 25, 2017 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 3

I am so enjoying this story, but it takes so long to update, that I have to revisit the story befor I can read the new update.  I am reading other stories and it's hard to keep track.                          Please keep up the great work, and thanks for this update.

Reviewer: Frances (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2017 04:44 PM · On: Chapter 2

Glad you're both back!  Can't wait for the next chapter.  I'm in love with the story already.  And it's so like Brian to tell a doctor that the diagnosis is full of shit.  lol.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2017 02:13 PM · On: Chapter 2

Brian is going to be blind?  The two of you write being ill very well.  So what is happening with Michael?  How will Brian handle not being able to see?  More soon.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2017 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wow.  Everything is going like the series, then Brian gets hurt.  A change that makes a lot of difference.  Can't wait to see what you do next.

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2017 04:31 AM · On: Chapter 2

this was so awesome.   i need more like now i did a blind brian story but nothing like this.  it's awesome

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2017 04:19 AM · On: Chapter 1

That fucking crushed me, but in a good way.   I need more, i do sort of wished that he would have said i love you but hey what can you do.

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2016 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 2

Hi, Sally and Anne - I was thrilled to see an update to what is currently one of my favorite stories.  You had me hooked from the first chapter, and I was anxiously waiting for an update, and this did not disappoint.

This is an intriguing idea - taking someone like Brian who treasures his image so highly - and giving him (for want of a better term) a defect that may affect his attractiveness, at least in his eyes (pardon the pun).

And I loved how Justin was so nurturing to him during the all-too-brief cancer arc on the show, so I am looking forward to seeing more of that in this story, as well as finding out how Brian's condition manifests itself.  I'm sure that not only will he face physical issues, but also issues with his pride coming up, along with a batch of stubbornness, no doubt. 

So glad to have seen an update to this!  Looking forward to the rest of this story.  Thank you for posting it. ~Kim

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: December 31, 2016 02:14 PM · On: Chapter 2


Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2016 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 2

Oh no...I'm tearing up for both of the guys. Thank you for this long-awaited update. You have made my day. 

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2016 01:48 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wow! I can tell you plan to put us through the ringer with this story. How in the world is Brian going to deal with a traumatic situation like this one? Let the angst begin...

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2016 05:34 AM · On: Chapter 2

My heart is already breaking for Brian.  How will he adjust to blindness when so much of his personal and professional life revolves around Imagery?   That's it, I'm hooked! 

Reviewer: dzmom (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2016 11:58 PM · On: Chapter 1

So freaking awesome. Can't wait for more

Reviewer: Tinkerbear29 (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2016 01:37 AM · On: Chapter 1

Can't wait for more of this story.

Reviewer: Titenano (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2016 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 1

Great start. Only one chapter and it's already heartbreaking. :(

Can"t wait to read more.

Reviewer: chadmom63 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2016 03:45 AM · On: Chapter 1

Great start! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response:

Thanks, we're glad you enjoyed it. More coming soon. Stay tuned!! 

Annie & Sally


Reviewer: addicted-to-romione-bedward (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2016 12:28 PM · On: Chapter 1

Oh! I'm hooked. I can't even imagine how Brian will deal with this.

Is Michael going to be okay...eventually...like canon? Because it might kill Brian to hear bad news.

Author's Response:

Will Michael be okay? You'll just have to wait and see ;)

It's not going to be easy for Brian, that's for sure. But we can't wait for you to come on this journey with him.

Thanks for reviewing.

Annie & Sally


Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2016 01:14 AM · On: Chapter 1

I'm going to love this one :)

Author's Response:

We certainly hope so :)

Thank you for your lovely review.

Annie & Sally

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2016 12:03 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wow you are going to put the boys through the emotional wringer!

Author's Response:

Maybe we will, maybe we won't... you will just have to wait and see ;)

Thank you for your review.

Annie & Sally

Reviewer: Louan706 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2016 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 1

Wow that's starting things off with a bang. Sorry :) okay few things one you made me break my cardinal rule no WIP but the setup sounded really good, two for a first collab well done, and three and most importantly update as often as possible because that was bloody brilliant. I think that's everything, did I mention update often? Oh so I did. Cheers :D 

Author's Response:

Awww, thank you for such a nice review, and for breaking your rule and reading a WIP. We hope to get another chapter up really soon, so hopefully you won't have too long to wait.

Annie & Sally

Reviewer: Manado (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2016 05:32 AM · On: Chapter 1

Im so sad for poor brian but im happy that this story has brian and justin from the start because to be honest i stopped reading intersect hence it's to hard for me to be happy for briannand justin being with other men. It was just too much for me though you are undeniably an excellent author.

Hopefully this story would be continously updated like intersect bcs i love the idea and fell in love with your writing style already.

Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Anonymous) · Date: April 01, 2016 04:37 AM · On: Chapter 1

OK, ineresting take on a very familiar scene. Anxious to see where you take this.

Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the time out to review. Hopefully you won't have too long to wait before the next update. 

Annie & Sally

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2016 04:14 AM · On: Chapter 1

nicely done - although I think I have acquired Brian's panic attack - this one is guaranteed to bring all my emotions to the surface - and of course Justin's too!

not to mention that Brian doesn't do well with appearing weak or imperfect

very interesting new take on the Babylon explosion - ancious to see what's in store


Author's Response:

Thank you for taking the time to leave us a review, we really appreciate it. 

Poor Brian is definitely going to have a lot on his plate in this story, and we hope you stick around to see how things turn out for the boys.

More coming soon.

Annie & Sally

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2016 04:10 AM · On: Chapter 1

I could feel the horror and desperation in your writing. Poor Todd. But it shows how devastating explosions can be (I still have difficulty understanding how one human could do something like this to another human - such hatred - and it happens everyday) Obviously the disability you spoke of in the summary is Brian's eyesight. My heart goes out to him and the journey ahead of him. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review tiger062, we really appreciate it and what you said about feeling the horror and desperation in our writing. That's what we were going for. It's a horrible world we live in, where people can be so cruel to another human being.

We can't wait for you to read the next chapter, we hopefully won't keep you waiting too much longer.

Thanks again.

Annie & Sally

Reviewer: feet526@comcast.net (Anonymous) · Date: April 01, 2016 03:54 AM · On: Chapter 1

WOW... you weren't kidding about the angst!!!  PLEASE rush with next chapter~~~

Great story, but a killer.xoxoxo






















Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. Hopefully we won't keep you waiting too much longer for the next part :)

Annie & Sally

Reviewer: Gloria (Anonymous) · Date: April 01, 2016 01:34 AM · On: Chapter 1

Holy shit! Oh my God! The adrenaline in my body went up real quick!

So intense ladies, well done!

More more more! 

Author's Response:

Aw, we hope we didn't cause you too much anxiety reading this :D

Thank you for the lovely review, it's greatly appreciated. Hopefully we won't keep you waiting too much longer for an update.

Annie & Sally

Reviewer: Astrid (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2016 10:08 PM · On: Chapter 1

This looks very promising, I'm hooked already. I love angst like this and hurt/comfort fics, so I will be definitely reading. Great to see a new story coming from you.

Reviewer: BritianLover88 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2016 07:46 PM · On: Chapter 1

Amazing and intense first chapter, excited for the next chapter :) 

Reviewer: samcdee (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2016 06:14 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wow. This is intense. Keep those chapters coming.

Reviewer: Elly (Anonymous) · Date: March 31, 2016 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 1

Omg what an exciting start of a new story, poor Brian and I'm curious how it goes with Michael. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2016 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 1

Brian wasn't there for the bombing, yet he's the one who ends up hurt.  Nicely done switch.  Looking forward to seeing where you take this.

Reviewer: orhida43 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2016 04:27 PM · On: Chapter 1

It was horrible, Brian is injured eye. I hope that the wounds heal and he will be fine and will Justin be on his side.    

Reviewer: Dian Kilborn (Anonymous) · Date: March 31, 2016 04:15 PM · On: Chapter 1

OMG!  What a development.  Brian hurt...and we just don't know yet about Michael. A story about one of the worst nights in the lives of all the people we know and love.

Could this night get any worse?

I will just have to wait to see.

Reviewer: WhiteSnowFox (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2016 02:50 PM · On: Chapter 1

Oh wow! Poor Brian, just trying to rescue the people he loves. I can tell this is going to be an emotional one. I can't wait for more! 

Reviewer: sweetc (Anonymous) · Date: March 31, 2016 01:39 PM · On: Chapter 1

New story i'm so glad you create so much :) I'm not gonna read this because i sense a lot of angst and i can't stand it....but i believe it will be a masterpiece ^_^ i will be glad to read less angst story though...don't take that personally just i'm so anxious right now and you write so damn well that seem so real and no no no. Good luck with your new story!!!!

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2016 12:34 PM · On: Chapter 1

Very unique twist on Ep 510. I liked the way you described the scene so well, and I enjoy reading hurt/comfort fics.  Will be looking forward to reading some more. Thank you.

Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: March 31, 2016 12:33 PM · On: Chapter 1

Interesting start. Will Brian's blindness be temporary? They're going to get through this together.
I like the plot twist.

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2016 10:47 AM · On: Chapter 1

I just knew I shouldn't read this before bed and now I am stuck lying here imagining all sorts of bad things, and the worse thing is I think they might be justified:-(  Talk about a dramatic start!  Sorry to say I will be very impatiently waiting for the next chapter- well done:-)

Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2016 07:42 AM · On: Chapter 1

Congrats for starting a new story!

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2016 07:26 AM · On: Chapter 1

I am totally hooked on this already.

Reviewer: Michelle Kinney (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2016 07:16 AM · On: Chapter 1

I'm crying already my poor Brian. Hope Michael isn't going to be a**hole. I'm glad to be able to read a story about the bomb episode. I can't wait to read Brian and Justin journey. I hope Gus will be able to help Justin with his daddy. I'm wondering how everyone else is going to take Brian being hurt? Oh  Annie-Eliza I was wondering if we were going to be getting an up on your story Feed and exstract soon. I miss that story.

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: March 31, 2016 05:52 AM · On: Chapter 1

Oh, my! Looks like another tear jerker . . . Love how productive you guys are, though! Keep on writing, ladies! TAG

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