Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 07, 2016 05:36 PM · On: Chapter 20
Hey just checking in! I'm so sad that the story os coming to a close but I can't wait to read the final chapter! Are you planning on updating soon? I'm sure it will be just as incredible as all the others!
Author's Response: Awww thanks! It's up and ready to read!
Author's Response: Awww thanks! It's up and ready to read!
Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2016 02:37 AM · On: Chapter 20
Thanks for the chapter.
I have been waiting to find out why Stockwell was killed. I still don’t know. So many things happened and it looks like so many things contributed to Rikert killing him. I didn’t accept Rikert’s assertion about the love relationship. I do come away with that Rikert was “nuts”, that the hit on head disoriented him, but most of all, that Stockwell intended on releasing Justin. Now knowing what is on the DVD, to be honest, I no longer care. Rikert is in jail forever, Stockwell is dead, that is what is most important.
Justin is on the way back emotionally. He even showed interest in sex by jerking off. And yes, maybe next time when Brian goes out, Justin will go out with him.
Once again, nice chapter. I don’t need to know every detail, I only need to know the results.
DavidR
Author's Response: To be honest, I'm kind of glad you don't have one solid answer for why Rikert killed Stockwell, because there were a lot of reasons he did it. Though the DVD did play a part in that narrative which was why I had it played. If anything it was to show just how unstable he was. But you're right, at the end of the day what matters is that they're out of the picture and the boys are safe. :)
I'm glad you're enjoying Justin's progress - he's come a long way!
One chapter to go and I hope you aren't disappointed.
Thanks for all your reviews, I really do appreciate every single one! :)
Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Anonymous) · Date: July 30, 2016 12:06 AM · On: Chapter 20
Great update! I really like the Carl and Justin together. It's great for Justin to have that father figure in his life. Not sure why he would bring the DVD for Justin and Brian to see... it only seems to have upset both of them. I love that Justin gets satisfaction from wanting to help Brian. It will only help to make him stronger. Hope he lets himself enjoy going out with the guys for a little bit of fun soon!
Author's Response: I thought the same thing about Carl. I didn't originally plan for them to get so close either, but it just sort of happened and I rolled with it. Because Justin DOES need that in his life, he deserves it.
And as for the DVD, it was to provide closure. No it wasn't perfect, but life rarely is, especially in these situations. And though it may have upset them in the moment, understanding your attacker can go a long way in helping to get over what they did to you in the long run - I used my own experience to draw from.
There is only one chapter left to go, but hopefully it'll be filled with enough fun ;) to satisfy you.
Thank you so much! :)
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2016 10:31 AM · On: Chapter 20
Love is chapter, thanks
Author's Response: Oh good! Thank you so much! :)
Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2016 07:22 AM · On: Chapter 20
I have to say it again, I love Brian in here. Their relationship is so beautiful. And I'm so glad Rickert will pay for what he did. And Carl is awesome, too. Wonderful job. Wonderful story. Thank you Kristine :)
Author's Response: Thanks Alois! It's my favorite kind of Brian to write, so I'm glad that you enjoyed it! I didn't originally plan for Carl to become such a big part, but when it happened I just rolled with it. Thanks so much for all your reviews! I always love hearing from you. :)
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2016 10:41 PM · On: Chapter 20
Always so thrilled to see an update to this, Kristine! I enjoyed the interaction between Justin and Carl. I'm glad that Rikert got what he deserved, and that Justin is slowly becoming more used to the idea of becoming intimate with Brian again. I can't wait to read the moment when that happens. :)
I love your version of this movie, Kristine! Thank you for posting this on here. :)
Author's Response: Thanks Kim! One chapter to go and so it'll be in there. ;) This turned into more than I anticipated when I first got the idea to adapt it, but it was pretty fulfilling. I appreciate all the feedback you've given throughout the story a lot! I hope you enjoy the final chapter. :)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2016 12:50 PM · On: Chapter 20
Why did Carl want Justin to watch the interrogation. True we learn Reikarts state of mind, but knowing someone blames you for what he did won't make Justin feel any better.
Author's Response: Hmmm...Well I guess it's just how you look at things. I was attacked before and when I finally confronted my attacker he said he blamed me as well, that I had been flaunting myself (bear in mind, I was eight when it happened. What kind of eight year old could be responsible for that?). So, when I heard what he had to say about it, I realized that he was bat-shit crazy and it made me feel loads better. So that is what I was hoping to accomplish here. Carl wanted him to watch it to give him closure even if it wasn't necessarily going to be idyllic. I hope that makes sense. Thank you though! I guess I never realized that it would have come across another way. It's hard to predict those things, you know? I hope it wasn't too rough, though. :)
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