Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
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Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2016 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 18

My heart broke for Brian and what he must have felt when he saw the state of his loft and Justin gone.  It was great to read how sweet Michael was to Justin. More...I want more!  :)



Author's Response:

Good!  That's what I wanted you to feel.  :)  And I'm glad you enjoyed Michael's gift, I always viewed him as a giving person and I wanted that to come across here.  And don't worry, more there will be!  thank you!

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2016 05:57 PM · On: Chapter 18

Thanks for the chapter.  With Rikert in the same hospital as Justin, no wonder Justin had that nightmare.  It sure made sense. 

   It is good, real good that Brian is back.  In a way, so is Justin though not quite but getting there.  Things are looking good.  As of now that is. 

   Those flowers.  I sure wish QAF would have done that.  Nice touch, that was more important to us QAF fans than may have been obvious to this story.

  It is a good story, told well. Thanks again.

DavidR

 



Author's Response:

Yeah, you're right.  Even though Justin is getting better, he can't help but be on edge with Rikert nearby.

As for the flowers, I agree.  I feel like if Brian had just taken that plunge in the show so much could have been avoided...But oh well.  It didn't work out that way.  Mostly I wanted to showcase the difference in where they were compared to the show.  Brian's a little different, and Justin's a little different - and maybe they're both a little better off for it.  ;)

Thank you so much for all your reviews!  I love them all.

Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Anonymous) · Date: July 12, 2016 12:35 AM · On: Chapter 18

Great update... love the scene with Justin and Michael. I always felt that they would have brotherly relationship. Brian must have been frantic walking into the loft and seeing the mess. I felt myself getting choked up at their reunion at the hospital. Happy to see Justin's continue his improvement.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm always so relieved when I get positive feedback about Michael because I know he isn't really popular on this site, but I really do like him haha.  I always thought the same, especially towards the end of the series - Michael was so supportive of Justin and it was clear they were friends within their own rights, not just because of Brian.  I'm so glad you enjoyed the reunion scene, I wanted it to be emotional but it's hard to tell if it come across that way when I write it.  Thank you so much!!  :)

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2016 08:38 PM · On: Chapter 18

wonderful



Author's Response:

Awww yay!  Thank you!

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2016 08:31 PM · On: Chapter 18

Aww, Love this chapter, as always. i'm glad to see that Michael is being the friend Justin needs right now and of course, the scene with Brian is perfect! so many emotions, I really love it :) Also, it's great that Justin is slowly going back to his old self. And Brian brought him flowers! Yeah!!! LOL. I'm not the biggest fan of romantic Brian usually, but it fits perfectly here, so thank you!! Eager for your next update, as always :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I really like Michael and I want to make sure I give him a good spot in every one of my stories.  (Mostly to try and negate a lot of the anti-michael out there haha).  And to be honest, I'm not a huge fan of a romantic Brian myself - I find it too OOC.  BUT...I couldn't resist.  And that is probably the peak of his 'sweetness' in this fic.  He'll be more like himself for the rest of the fic.  I'm glad it wasn't too much though!  Thank you for everything!  :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2016 01:16 PM · On: Chapter 18

What a beautiful chapter.  Not the nightmare part, that was scary, but the part with the champagne and flowers.  Brian showed that he cared.  And Mikey with the coloring book, so sweet.



Author's Response:

Aww thank you!  Yeah Justin's beginning to see that he has support all around him, and that Brian really cares.  things are on the up and up!  :)

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