Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2016 12:07 AM · On: Chapter 14
OMG! I wouldn't have imagined for one second that they would find Justin so fast. Oh, I can't wait to know how everything will play out! Still loving this Kristine, the next chapter can't come fast enough for me :)
Author's Response: Surprisingly that was basically how it happened in the movie. One glance out the window to see him look at them and then boom - caught. Thank you so much for letting me know! I love hearing from you and I hope you conitnue to enjoy it through the next few chapters.
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2016 10:51 AM · On: Chapter 14
Hi, Kristine! This one continues to fascinate me as well as scare me, but in a good way! Wow, soooo close, but now Jusin is in great danger. Love the suspense, though! Will be eagerly waiting to see what happens next! Thanks for posting this on here; I am really enjoying it. ~Kim
Author's Response: Hey Kim! Yeah Justin is in a rough spot here, but our Justin is a fighter - and he's beginning to discover that again. He was willing to fight for his life to be with Brian, now he may jut have to fight for it again. As always, I appreciate yout continued support! It means so much. :)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2016 02:49 AM · On: Chapter 14
Oh no! Justin's in big trouble, but at least he called the police and Hovath, even though he was late is on the case.
Author's Response: Big trouble is right! And unfortunately no one may be able to help him...He may just have to get himself out of this mess. Thank you!
Reviewer: xJustSayingx (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2016 06:12 PM · On: Chapter 14
Wow this chapter was so exciting! Poor Justin, I so hoped the police would arrive in time. :(
I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: The next few will be in the same manner, so I'm glad!! And unfortunately, Justin still has a lot of growing to do, which wouldn't happen if Carl had saved him. So he may be on his own for a little bit. But that may be a good thing. ;) Thanks!
Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Anonymous) · Date: June 14, 2016 03:12 AM · On: Chapter 14
Oh, no! Justin! How is going to deal with this? All of his newly found bravery and personal resolve to get well, only to be taken down in the loft. I was having difficulty breathing too, while reading that scene. I don't know how he'll handle this setback, but I'm glad he went down fighting. With Carl now on the case, I have hope it will be resolved soon!
And Brian... I can see the massive guilt trip forming now!
Author's Response: Justin's reaction will be...complex. :) But he HAS come a long way. He might be able to use that to get through what is to come. And I wanted the kidnapping to be emotional (especially because it was in the loft ;) ) so I'm glad that it was difficult for you.
As for Brian...Well, let's just say he won't make an appearance for a while.
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