Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Rear Window
Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2016 04:24 AM · On: Chapter 13

Hi,

    Wonderful chapter, thanks.

    I am somewhat confused about Brian telling Justin about

Hunter.  At the beginning of the chapter, Brian felt that it was

better that he not tell Justin that he found Hunter.  Finding

Hunter is a big deal, very important and certainly helps confirm

that what Justin saw was real.  Then later as Brian was packing for

Chicago, he casually mentions to Justin about finding Hunter. 

Justin’s reaction was minimum.  I don’t get it.

    Far more important is that email Justin sent.  Both Stockwell

and Rikert as policemen have spent their lives figuring out things

like how to find people.  It wouldn’t take much for them to go

back to the apartment and figure out which window(s) that

someone saw them kill the kid.  Of course, behind the loft door,

Justin would be safe.  Right?  Nope.  What was that part in which

Justin would open the loft door to leave money for the delivery

guy and to bring in the food the left for him?  In short, sending

that email was bad, very very bad, very dangerous. 

   Just so you know, this is quickly becoming one of my current

favorite stories on MW.  I sure hope you are enjoying writing this

fic. as much asI am reading it.

    DavidR



Author's Response:

Thank you for letting me know!

And that's a really good thing to point out.  I didn't get into it very much so I'm sorry about that.  Basically, Brian was initially hesitant because he was afraid it would push Justin over the edge and that he'd lose him.  But when he came back and realized Justin was doing much better, he decided to tell him because he didn't want to keep it from him, and Justin deserved to know that nothing else could be done since he was the one who witnessed the murder in the first place.

As for Justin, his reaction was a minimum because he didn't want to worry Brian right as he was about to leave.  However, it was also him finding out about Hunter being found that spurred him to send the e-mail.  He didn't want to accept that nothing else could be done.  So he did react to it, just not by getting upset - he's just trying to get justice.

And you're definitely on the right track about the email.  Sure, they have a big metal door...But it might not keep him as safe as he would like.  It was a spur of the moment decision that may cost Justin more than he thought.

And wow!  I'm so honored!  Thank you.  I hope that as we keep going that you continue to enjoy it.  :)

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2016 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 13

This is so good!! I'm so happy that Justin decided that Brian was his reason to fight. I adore the connection and emotions you managed to create between them. And the suspense...

I can't wait for more!! Please come back! lol



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you like it!  It's always great to hear that, especially from you!  :)  The connection the two shared is something I always admired in the show - no matter what happened or who hurt who they were still there for each other.  That's love.  Thanks for all your support!! 

Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Anonymous) · Date: June 09, 2016 08:51 PM · On: Chapter 13

I didn't realize just how much I missed this story!

Quite a turn-around for Justin... I hope his newfound resolve is real and lasting.



Author's Response:

Awwww, yay!  Thank you so much!

A lot is going to be happening to Justin, and his resolve is very new...It might be hard for him to tough it out - or he might have found enough of his old self not to worry about.  We'll just have to see.  Thanks!  :)

Reviewer: xJustSayingx (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2016 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 13

I was so scared for Justin, I'm glad he thought about all the good times he had with Brian and changed his attitude in such a positive way.

I really love this story, looking forward to the next chapter! :)



Author's Response:

It was very difficult to write, so I'm glad that it was scary to read.  Good thing Justin loves Brian so much, right?  ;)

Thanks for letting me know you're enjoying it! 

Reviewer: Sunsuso65 (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2016 04:55 AM · On: Chapter 13

Great story.

I hope Justin don't have a lot of problems with this message. 

Rikert and Stockwell are very dangerous, They're going very angry with this message .

kiss and hugs 😘



Author's Response:

Thanks!

And you're right, they're not going to be happy at all...and they were cops and are pretty good at figuring those things out.  Let's hope they don't track Justin down.  ;)

I hope you continue to enjoy it!  :)

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2016 12:26 AM · On: Chapter 13

Still enjoying your story! great to see Justin trying to get himself back together.



Author's Response:

Oh that's always good to hear!  Thanks for letting me know!  :)

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2016 12:25 AM · On: Chapter 13

Hi, Kristine!  You DID post one quickly! I was very happy to see your update.  I'm glad that Justin didn't go through with his initial plan, and is in better spirits.

I worry, though, about Brian being way, and about the email he sent. I imagine cops might have a way of tracking his whereabouts, even with a fake email address.

Now I need some more to find out what happens!  Really enjoyingt this story, Kristine. I will be looking forward to the next part.  Thank you for posting your story on here. :)  ~Kim



Author's Response:

I told you I would lol.  It was hard to write Justin in such a bad place, but now it's over and he can start moving in the right direction.  And you're right about the cops - they do have ways of figurig those things out.  TOo bad Justin didn't think of that before he sent it.  ;)

 

As always I love your feedback!  Thanks!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2016 12:21 AM · On: Chapter 13

It's good to see another chapter by you.  It had to be hard to write with Justin almost killing himself.  He's slowly returning, but sending that email could bring trouble.



Author's Response:

It was so hard!  I am firmly against self harm and I don't think that the Justin in the show would ever do that, but in here his head was just in a bad place.  Luckily that's all over!  :)  Unfortunately, his sudden burst of confidence might be worse for him in the long run.  Thank you!  :)

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