Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Rear Window
Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2016 09:10 AM · On: Chapter 5

All right...NOOOOOWW you have my attention! Fantastic cliffy! Kinda glad I came in when I did because this would be REEEAAALLY  hard to wait around for.



Author's Response:

Haha I'm glad!  Hopefully you'll continue to enjoy it.  ;)  Thanks so much for letting me know.

Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Anonymous) · Date: April 11, 2016 04:53 AM · On: Chapter 5

Until he was really alone and nothing was real. He’d decided that was when he would do it. Even if an institute wasn’t so bad, he didn’t want to live alone – truly alone. So, he’d live until Brian decided he’d had enough.

How utterly, incredibly sad. 

I am glad though that Brian still has the ability to make Justin laugh. Nice scene with Brian & Mikey in the comic book store.

Once again, Justin's reliance on routine is telling... Being upset when new people moved in to the apartment across the street, especially when he doesn't feel that those people are "real" to him. But the action is about to pick up over there!

The backstory is also getting extremely disturbing. Intriguing that the second flashback takes place at Tremont. 



Author's Response:

I really wanted to make it clear that Justin's depression is VERY strong.  He isn't just sad, or feeling down.  He's very mentally unstable.  It deviates from the show, of course, but for the sake of the story he is suffering...

That all being said, Justin still loves Brian no matter what, so yes; he can make him laugh.  :)

As for the backstory - we're just getting started on that front.  

Thanks so much!!  :)

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2016 10:58 PM · On: Chapter 5

You evil woman... LOL. How can you leave us here? I want more!!

I loved this chapter. I love how you write Brian and Michael's relationship and how descriptive your writing is. The part when Brian discover the comic book store is so well-done. In Character. I love it. And yes, Ben's here!

I also love Brian and Justin sharing Justin's hobby. I feel like the story is shifting and I can't wait to know what comes next!

Thank you so much :)



Author's Response:

I know.  What can I say?  I love cliffhangers!  ;)

And I'm so glad you approve of Brian and Michael's relationship!  I worry so much about writing Michael in a positive light...It isn't always well received I feel like...But they ARE close friends and I feel like that deserves just as much recognition as Brian's and Justin's relationship.  Michael will also play a role in the story, so of course I have to keep him around.  :)

And yes, there is definitely a shift in the story coming.  We're going to be moving from Justin's condition to the murder and all of the issues that brings with it - and there'll be plenty!

Thanks!!

Reviewer: Patty (Anonymous) · Date: April 10, 2016 12:46 PM · On: Chapter 5

 Nice cliffhanger. Hope the kids isn't killed but if you're following the show then? I liked that Michael seems sincere about Justin's well being and Brian said he's proud of him. I think Brian is taking time off work to dedicate time to help Justin shows how much he cares for him plus the interest he shows in the window which makes Justin feel special. Need another update please hurray. Lol 



Author's Response:

I am following the movie, for the most part, but there will be some delineations from the movie.  So whether or not he's actually dead yet - I won't say.  As for Michael, I don't write anti-Michael stuff.  I think he has flaws, like all the characters, but is generally a good person.  And Brian will continue to try his best to get Justin better - but if it's enough or not remains to be seen.  Update will come soon, promise!  Thanks!

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2016 08:47 AM · On: Chapter 5

*shudders* I hope that whoever it is (Jason Kemp, Hunter, anonymous ) will get help before it's too late.

Btw...those are just guesses...I can wait to find out who it is ;)

Author's Response:

Hahaha well I like hearing guesses!  You'll find out who it is next chapter.  As for whether or not he gets help...We'll see.

Thanks so much!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2016 03:03 AM · On: Chapter 5

Wow.  What an ending.  You have to feel sorry for the victim and I feel like I know him already.  It's nice that Mikey got the comic book store himself without any help.  Now he's gonna have somebody if Ben showing up means anything.



Author's Response:

I really wanted to give him a point of view so you would feel something when it happened.  And yeah, I am actually a fan of Michael, so I like to see him being successful.  As for Ben, he will.  ;)  Thanks!

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