Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Thief of Hearts
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2017 12:54 PM · On: Caught Red Handed

Ohhh...wow...sooooo romantic..funny and marvelous story...i love ur work..thank u.



Author's Response:

And I love the fact that you are enjoying them, and taking the time to leave feedback.  Thank you so much!  ~Kim

Reviewer: MAFITA (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2016 05:02 PM · On: Caught Red Handed

Loved the story! Loved seeing Brian sort of panicky thinking that Justin was the bank robber.... XD I think I left a review in this a few days ago, before the site maintenance, but it must have gotten lost somehow. Anyway, always love your story, as always, my dear Kim! I'm trying to get back on track with my QAF stories, RL has been kicking my butt.... but anyway, I'll be reading you very soon in your other stories! Kisses!



Author's Response:

Thank you, my friend! I am so happy to see you back on the site; I have missed you. :)  I am happy that you enjoyed this one.   I am grateful for your support.  ~Kim

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2016 10:10 PM · On: Caught Red Handed

I'm with Gus. I couldn't get enough of this story. I absolutely enjoyed it!

S:)

Author's Response:

I'm so happy you like it, Sandra! Thank you for telling me, and for reading; I greatly appreciate that. ~Kim

Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2016 10:56 AM · On: Caught Red Handed

Hi, Kim! I was so happy to see a new story from you for the most magical day. I loved the idea of it! Only Brian and Justin can intensely dislike each other and still fall in love :D I laughed so much at how they – well, Brian -  talked to the operator. They are lucky they didn’t spend even longer time in that elevator!

I loved their banter, they are both so frustrating but endearing all the same.

Brian’s moments with Gus are so soft and loving, I enjoyed their interactions. And again, Brian and Justin are amazing, so personable and obviously made for each other.

Thank you for a fantastic story, Kim! I loved it so much!



Author's Response:

Hi, Katrin! I always love hearing your thoughts, my friend.:)  Thank you for all the support, and the feedback.  Yes, I think if they had had to stay in that elevator any longer, Justin might have had to change his mind about what he would or wouldn't do (wink, wink).  So glad you enjoyed it! Thank you again for reading, and for the comments. ~Kim

Reviewer: cookiebun (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2016 04:17 PM · On: Caught Red Handed

I enjoyed this story so much.  Loved that it was a bedtime (edited) story for Gus.

 

and the final line was a perfect Justin question! :) 



Author's Response:

Thanks, Kathy!  I couldn't resist that last line of Justin's - ha!  I'm happy you enjoyed this story. Thanks for reading, and especially for taking the time to comment. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Manado (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2016 03:45 AM · On: Caught Red Handed

I love this! Justin is way too cute to be a bank robber i think lol

Brian is so in character so is Justin that we all know..

I love when a brilliant author like you put efforts to write something AU like this so we can see a bit of his/her fantasy about our two lovely boys. they are so beautifuly, quirky (if that's a right word) together in this story

Thanks for sharing you talent Kim, I really enjoyed it. 



Author's Response:

Hi, Dony!  Thank you for reading, and for your lovely comments; I appreciate that very much.  I'm delighted that you enjoyed this short story, and I hope you continue to enjoy what I write. I have a couple of new story ideas floating around in my head that I will be working on behind the scenes as I try to finish up my two WIPs, which are both close to completion.  I still loving writing about these two characters.:)

Thanks again for the support! It is very motivating to me.  ~Kim

Reviewer: chadmom63 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2016 03:29 AM · On: Caught Red Handed

Very cute!



Author's Response:

Thank you, Tami, for reading, and for the comment. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)  ~Kim

Reviewer: Therese (Anonymous) · Date: February 16, 2016 01:37 AM · On: Caught Red Handed

And thank you for writing this wonderful Valentine story, it was just brilliant.



Author's Response:

Thank you fo reading and especially for commenting, Therese! I'm delighted that you enjoyed it. *Hug* ~Kim

Reviewer: soirsagrey (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2016 08:06 PM · On: Caught Red Handed

Hiya Kim.

The moment I read the summary only one songtitle came to mind: Love in an elevator. Turns out my hunch was true.

Justin the bankrober is really original, Brian was in full character.  I hate sugary over the top sweet stories. Not this one though. Far from sugery this story was romantic, lighthearted and funny. Oh, so funny. Who would have thought peanutbutter could be so sexy....

Thank you for a lovely V-day story. I hope you had a good one.

Love,

XOXO

Soirsa



Author's Response:

Hi, Merium!  Well, love was a little slow here in this elevator - ha! But the attraction was definitely there, and we both knew it was just a matter of time before love followed.;)   I'm so happy that you enjoyed this one. I had a lot of fun writing it, and it was a nice escape from some of the angst I've been writing lately.  I'm working on the update to "Stallion," which should be posted soon. That one has maybe a couple more chapters? Then hopefully I'll be working on a new one behind the scenes as I finish up my last WIP.;)

Thank you for reading this story, and for always be so supportive! That is very motivating to me.  I hope you have a good Valentine's Day, too, my friend.  ~Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2016 07:35 PM · On: Caught Red Handed

What an amazing story.  Where did you get the idea.  Trapped in an elevator was cool, but you went further with having Justin match the robbers description.  The water pistol played in perfectly.  Not to mention the last sentice.  LOL.  I've been savoring this story.



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend! The elevator idea was a plot bunny suggestion over on Live Journal, and I thought I could have fun with that. I have no idea where the red dye and the red paint came into play, but once it did, I had to write this one.;)  And the water pistol and last sentence were both last-minute additions. I could just imagine Brian's horror upon thinking that Justin really DID have a gun, so I couldn't resist that, or Justin wanting to know what happened to the (no-doubt very expensive) chocolates. LOL!

Thank you for reading, and for the comments! I'm so happy you enjoyed it.  ~Kim

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2016 07:11 PM · On: Caught Red Handed

I adore this!! I enjoyed so much the tension building up in the elevator. You have to give it to Brian, he sure knows how to make things interesting ;) Thank you Kim for this little story, it really was a delight to read, as always :):):)

(I will contact you later tonight for the story, I hope you're okay!!!)



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend.  I hope things are going a little better for you. I have been thinking of you and your family.  Thank you for reading this one, and for your lovely comments. Sending a big hug your way. ~Kim

Reviewer: Elly (Anonymous) · Date: February 15, 2016 06:52 PM · On: Caught Red Handed

Thanks Kim, for the lovely Valentine Story.



Author's Response:

Thank you, Elly! I'm happy you liked it.  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2016 06:47 PM · On: Caught Red Handed

"What happened to all the chocolates?" Loved it! That's so Justin! He, he, he...

Later Darling~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

Hi, Kathleen!  That last line was a last-minute revision, but when it occurred to me, I, too, thought that would be a typical thing for Justin to say (right when poor Brian was trying to be romantic in his own, awkward way), and I couldn't resist adding it. Thank you for reading this story, and for your comments, my friend. I really appreciate that.  Four more months!!  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Sunsuso65 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2016 05:48 PM · On: Caught Red Handed

I love this story. It's very funny.

kisses



Author's Response:

Thank you, my friend! I'm happy you liked it.;)  Looking forward to seeing you soon!  Kisses back ~Kim

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2016 03:36 PM · On: Caught Red Handed

Omg...what a lovely and entertaining read...Bravo!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much, Tamara! I'm happy you enjoyed it.  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: February 15, 2016 02:13 PM · On: Caught Red Handed

Loved this one-very clever the connection between the robber and Justin. I was waiting for Love in an elevator by Steven Tyler to be on Muzak. Ha!! Listeners will love this one too. All here good. Hope you are as well. lol

Author's Response:

Hi, Lindc!  Glad to hear that all of you are doing well.  I'm hanging in there.  Only wish I had another 24 hours in the day to get done what I need to do.  I wasn't familiar with that song by Steven Tyler; you weren't the only one to mention it. I'll have to take a listen to that.  I just kept hearing the love song from "Titanic" going round and round on that endless Muzak cycle, and I could just imagine Brian's reaction to that - LOL!

Thanks as always for the support. Tell everyone I send my love and hope they enjoy this one. I'm working on the update to "Stallion." It will be posted soon. Thanks again. ~Kim

Reviewer: Aliada (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2016 02:08 PM · On: Caught Red Handed

Oh, I just loved this story! It was hilarious and intense at the same time. I liked the beginning - it was intriguing and sweet. The idea of Brian and Justin being stuck in the elevator was pretty appealing to me but I didn't think there would be something unusual... and here you managed to really surprise me! It was so funny when Brian was worrying about Justin's 'suspicious' duffel bag! Or when Justin attacked him with this water pistol. Or when Brian suggested that Justin drew a picture of a gun to scare people. I liked every line and just couldn't get enough!

it was an amazing, captivating story. Thank you so much for sharing!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, Aliada! I'm delighted that you enjoyed it.;)  I'm glad I was able to surprise you a little with the plot line.;)  Thank you for reading, and especially for taking the time to comment; that means so much to me.  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2016 12:20 PM · On: Caught Red Handed

Totally romantic and lovely fix. I loved that Brian and Justin are so in canon

Author's Response:

Thank you, Chris!  I'm glad you enjoyed it.;)  I guess one of these days I need to do a 'darker' or more cynical Brian, but I guess I'm just too big of a romantic; mine alwatys seem to curve this way, don't they? I'm glad you thought they were still IC, though.;)

Thanks for the support, and especially for the feedback; I greatly appreciate that.  ~Kim

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2016 06:47 AM · On: Caught Red Handed

Great story.  Loved Gus wanting the amse story all the time.  Bill



Author's Response:

Thank you, Bill. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Looking forward to reading the first part of your new story. The response to your stories continues to amaze me!  Well done. :) *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: starfire64 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2016 06:41 AM · On: Caught Red Handed

Hi Kim :  ) Justin the bank robber, LOL, more importantly though- what DID happen to those chololates? This was cute Kim, I enjoyed reading this.  *Hugs* Janet



Author's Response:

Hi, Janet!  I'm glad you enjoyed reading it.  Someone suggested the prompt, and I had an inspiration with the red dye on the money, and Justin with his red-painted hands, and it went from there.;) Thank you for reading, and for all the support, my friend. It means a lot to me. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: February 15, 2016 06:22 AM · On: Caught Red Handed

That was a great story and I especially loved the pretext of Gus getting a bedtime story but like Justin I want to know where the chocolate went my bet Brian ate them.



Author's Response:

Ha! Well, you know Brian would never tell, even if he did, but I'm sure they had to be high-quality chocolates, coming from him.;) I couldn't resist that last line - it just seemed like something Justin would say.;)  Thank you for reading, and for the feedback; that means a lot to me. ;)  ~Kim

Reviewer: arakiss (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2016 04:56 AM · On: Caught Red Handed

Oh, I enjoyed it indeed, thank you, Kim!
Original, witty, funny - just perfect!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, Arikiss!  It is always very encouraging to hear that someone enjoyed what I wrote. Thank you for reading, and for the feedback; it is greatly appreciated.  ~Kim

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2016 04:23 AM · On: Caught Red Handed

Fantastic!  I really liked this!  It was funny and romantic!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm very happy that you enjoyed it.  I like to write humorous stories at times; it's a nice change occasionally from the angst.;) Thanks for reading, and especially for taking the time to comment; that means a lot to me. ~Kim

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2016 04:22 AM · On: Caught Red Handed

great job, Kim  Happy Valentine's day



Author's Response:

Thank you, Sandy. The same to you. Thanks for reading. I'm thinking of you and your family.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Therese (Anonymous) · Date: February 15, 2016 03:41 AM · On: Caught Red Handed

hello, hope u are well, just in, and had a quick look and saw your story so I shall wait until tomorrow night to read and will spend the day knowing that I have a treat to look forward to, maybe with a nce glass of wine, again thank u so much for your wonderful writing.

 



Author's Response:

Hi, Therese! That is so kind of you to leave a comment, just to let me know that you will be looking forward to reading this. I do hope you enjoy it. It is mainly humor and fluff this time; not much angst.;)  Thanks for the support and encouragement; I could some of that right about now.;)  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2016 03:25 AM · On: Caught Red Handed

Justin a bank robber - I had a good giggle over that.  Great story.  Oh and WHAT did happen to the chocolates?????.....LOL



Author's Response:

Hi, Monica!  I had a slightly different ending originally, but I couldn't resist adding that last line. I could just see Justin asking that, right when Brian is trying to be romantic (at least, as romantic as Brian can be, and still stay IC).  Thank you for reading, and especially for taking the time to comment. That means a lot to me. ~Kim

Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Anonymous) · Date: February 15, 2016 02:55 AM · On: Caught Red Handed

What great fun! 

I loved this line... so Brian-esque

He certainly didn't look like the bank robber type; but maybe after all that money he stole, he could at least afford to go buy some decent clothes.

And the last line... very Justin-esque!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, and for the comments, Trish. I'm glad you enjoyed it.  *Hugs* ~Kim

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