Reviewer: shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: March 08, 2017 09:56 AM · On: Chapter 26

Wow!!!! A new chapter and it's a really good one. Where to start first I guess at the house with the boys. John and Justin cooking and talking was sweet and allows Justin to find out what is going on with John without really trying to pull it out of him which no teenager likes. John and Peter including Gus both in games and meal setup makes him feel like a big boy.

Lindsay will never learn Justin is not the pushover everyone except Brian knows he isn't. Murals can change or be painted over Justin knows this Lindsay is learning. 

Who is going to take in Joe although boarding school might be fine as long as his Uncle visits and calls and emails. If he is just going to stick him school and walk away then there must be a better solution. 

Ron Townsend I think you might be safer if you hope back on that bus now because the wrath of Brian and Justin will be too much for you to ever handle. Or he and Joan can form a club oh wait that's where your going ooooooooh now I get it. Joan was just biding her time waiting for John and Peter's daddy to show up. Sneaky you have had his hiding for a while and then you took a 2 month break just to spring this on us.

As a bonus for being patient (hiding head. never patient here) can we get another chapter or 2 this month because you know I need to see how fast Ron runs to Joan. 

Author's Response:

Sorry to make you wait so long for an update but happy to know you enjoyed this chapter.  John & Peter are very good to Gus who loves spending time with his "big boy" cousins.  Justin had no problem letting Lindsay know who was in charge of the murals.  He is determined to give Gus & JR what they want.  Joe's Uncle doesn't seem to have a lot of interest in spending time with his nephew.  He wants to do his "duty" but doesn't want to give up his career.  We'll have to see how things work out for Joe.  On the surface it doesn't seem like Joan & Ron have much in common except they both want to "rescue" John & Peter from the preverted clutches of Brian & Justin.  Who knows what those two will get up to.

My "2 month break" involved bad cold, new job, selling my house and moving.  I wasn't on a tropical island sipping fruity cocktails.  Now that RL has settled down I expect to update more frequently.  Thanks for being so loyal about reviewing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2017 10:35 PM · On: Chapter 25

I started reading this a week ago, but never get the chance to finish the chapter.  Laying under the covers myself, thinking about your story. I had to scroll way back to find it. But I'm happy ... What a lovely chapter. Thanks.

 

* hugs and goodnight * 

Marian

Author's Response:

Hi Marian, so happy to know you enjoyed the last chapter.  I am working on the next installment but RL is keeping me very busy right now.  Hugs back to you!!  Bill

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 05, 2017 04:03 AM · On: Chapter 25

Sweet Baboo, your being naughty, I would never desert you, you stories bring me so much pleasure.I was reading the''Whisper are as loud as a Shout'' I noticed you were also reading and reviewing, I kind of got hung up reading about mikey being a dumb ass and of course Linz lost of reality. It took me forever to read and respond, your chapters move so quickly and it's easy to keep up with new added characters like Joe, I really enjoy how Gus told his daddies to give him less presents at Christmas and to help Joe as he didn't have a home or much to eat or anyone to care about him. Gus has so much insight and so sweet. I thought Joe's thank you note to Gus showed. what kind of person Joe really is. As much as I liked MissMerlot's story all the foreign language slowed the story down I'm used to you being really articulate and paceing your story along .Your Sally is going nowhere.

Author's Response:

Darling Sally, I was just concerned when I didn't hear from you as soon as you usually review.  I have been kind of busy and haven't been able to keep up with reading Miss Merlot's story.  I do look forward to your comments and appreciate all your support for this long saga of mine.   Gus is a sweet little boy.  I think he gets his care for other people from his Daddy,  Thanks as always my Darling Sally for you kind review!!!! 

I remain your sweet Baboo.

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 03, 2017 10:57 AM · On: Chapter 25

Hi my Sweet Baboo, chapter was wonderful. I would have loved to have seen Brian doing snow angels,it's like the trains for the first time, because of Justin and Gus he gets to be a little boy , things we didn't get a chance to do when he was little. I'm glad Gus can talk with his papa about a bully and how his parents told him that Gus's cousins were going to an orphanage. I can see how upset  and worried Gus would be.As for the Petersons are as delusonal as mikey and Linz. Can't wait for the twins! Your Loving Sally

Author's Response:

Darling Sally, so happy to hear from you.  I was a little worried you had abandoned the story when I didn't see your review.  Happy to know you have not deserted me.  I think you are correct, Brian enjoys being a little boy with Gus.  Most of the time it is more adult activities he enjoys with Justin.  Gus feels secure enjoy with his Daddy & Papa to share any concerns he has which is a great thing.  The Petersons are loathsome and should try very hard to avoid running into Jennifer in the future.  Glad you are still enjoying this saga.  Always happy to heard from you!!!!  your sweet Baboo

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: January 27, 2017 02:47 AM · On: Chapter 25

so glad to see an update on this story.  I imagine you've had a few outages in your time; the description of preparedness are quite good.  Loved that everyone slept togheter on the main floor.

Author's Response:

Glade you are still wnjoying this saga.  It is wind storm here in the Pacific Northwest that causes our power outages.  The worst was 4 days long, the fun was over by the third day.  Thanks for the review, I love to get them!!!  Bill

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: January 26, 2017 02:36 AM · On: Chapter 25

This was excellent! I loved reading about the preparations for the snow storm and all that happened related to the storm. Justin's preparations were in keeping with his PSA persona. Glad to see that Jennifer was in top form in her take down of Nancy and Ron. And, the apple didn't fall far from the tree. Molly dispatched Ron quite handily. I'm very interested to see what happens with Joe and I'm glad that he decided to trust Debbie and that Brian has the investigation going. It was nice of Joe to write a note to Gus. Enjoyed Gus all through this story. He is adorable. And, of course, all the B&J moments. Thanks and looking forward to the next update.

Author's Response:

You are correct Justin, AKA Mr PSA, had everything organized for the loss of electricity.  It turned out to be a fun adventure for everyone instead of a problem.  Jennifer takes no prisoners when she she is dealing with people who cause problems.  I love her!!!  Molly is learning from the best.  Joe seems like a nice kid who has had some bad luck.  Debbie is going to be looking out for his best interests.  Glad you are enjoying this saga.  Thank you so much for the review, I LOVE reviews!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2017 11:14 PM · On: Chapter 25

It was nice that Gus felt he could ask his dads anything.  And they always answered honestly.  It looks like Jen's talk with Maria and Earl are going to cost the Petersons.  It was nice of Joe to write a thank you to Gus.  Better is his trusting Deb.  Hopefully Brian's detective will be able to help Joe.  Lights out turned into fun for the Kinney Clan.  Great chapter.

Author's Response:

Hello my friend, I never really feel like an update is complete until I read your comments.  You have been such a great support for this story from the beginning and I appreciate it.  Gus loves his Daddy & Papa and feels safe in confiding in them.  Joe picked a good person to trust, Debbie will look out for him. Always happy to know you are still enjoying this saga.  Thanks, as always, for your review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: julia005 (Anonymous) · Date: January 25, 2017 02:11 PM · On: Chapter 25

Heartwarming chapter, this felt so good! Even without electricity, the family stick together and they have their backs. And Tino has stepped forward - I feel so sorry for his desperation. He just needs a surrogate family!

While January 20th was a nightmare-came-true-day, this might be a chapter  a lot of Americans need: Unity, solidarity, fairness and love. Sorry for relating to political issues, we germans are all just devastated.

It´s nice to connect with decent people across the ocean! Thank you so much
!!!!!

Author's Response:

Hello Julia, so nice to hear from you; it has been a while.  If the current election results made you post these comments, at least something good came out of it.  We don't want to be too political here but I will just say I live on the west coast and this is NOT a pro Trump area.  I feel your devastation.  Hopefully there are enough decent people in Congress to keep too much bad from happening.  Glad you enjoyed this chapter and I feel things will be OK with this country and the world.  Bill

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2017 12:53 PM · On: Chapter 24

Hi, Bill!  Playing catch up as usual, but you know I never miss an update to your story!  This was a lovely Christmas, and, as always, I love the details in your story. It really helps me imagine it in my mind's eye. :) 

I was really hungry by the time I got done reading this, too - ha!  Michael's attitude continues to be one of an impetulant child; sometimes I think he's younger than his own daughter!  Sheesh.

As always, I'll be looking forward to your next part, and where you take this. Thanks for the update!  ~Kim

Author's Response:

Hi Kim, thanks for taking time to review.  Glad you enjoyed this chapter.  Mikey can always be counted on to do the wrong thing.  Bill

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: January 10, 2017 10:41 AM · On: Chapter 24

Happy New Year! My Sweet Baboo: I've missed your writing, but know you were busy like all of us. Hope you had a nice Christmas. This chaper was wonderful from the trains to the party I doubt Brian ever had a train and was as giddy as Gus about the wonderful set-up. I was also happy Claire had remembered the boys with a present and a nice letter. Everyone seemed to enjoy themselfs except the "doom and gloom" boy. mikey is jealous of even a child-he needs a few less invites until he can act like a grown up in a company setting. Kevin was adorable and Brian and Justin made everyone feel welcome to their home.Ted and Blake and Viola fit in so well, and Mark finds out how a family works. I don't think Brian even paid that much attention to the dumb ass(mikey) he had the family and friends and co workers in their home and gave his son a wonderful time, now we wait for the babies to appear and of course everyone is excited, except mikey who justs sees less time with Brian and  as always that's Justin's fault. You did good and as always worth waiting for. Your Lucy

Author's Response:

Lucy????  How incestuous of you.  Is this something different for the new Year!  I prefer you as my Darling Sally!!!!  RL has been busy for me, even without the holidays, but I am sorry to make you wait for this chapter.  I agree that I think Brian enjoyed the trains as much as his Sonny Boy.  Gus's delight just added to Brian enjoyment of the trains.  Poor Mikey is stuck in his teens with a Brian crush he can't seem to shake.  The best we can say is we can rely on him to act badly.  Everyone enjoyed the party, especially Gus with his assistant train engineers.  Brian has had plenty of practice at ignoring Mikey's actions.  I remain Sally's sweet Baboo

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2017 08:47 AM · On: Chapter 24

Thanks for the update on everyone's lives! I know you'll always come through with an update when RL permits. :)

It's so very heartwarming to see the strong family ties for the Christmas holiday, both in the immediate Taylor-Kinney family and the extended family (into which I'm pretty much lumping everyone).

I wouldn't mind playing with that train set myself - under Gus' supervision, of course.

That Christmas feast sounds scrumptious. I'd be digesting until the new year!

I guess Michael's good for comic relief, with the way he follows Brian around. Some people never get a clue. LOL

~Karynn

Author's Response:

Hi Karyann, Happy you enjoyed the latest chapter, sorry it took so long to post the update but RL can be a distraction.  I don't think anyone has a chnace to get near the trains unless Gus is at his mothers' house.  I like to think of Mikey as unchanging, someone we can always depend on to do the wrong thing.  Thanks for the review!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: Cesku (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2017 02:17 PM · On: Chapter 24

Hi! Thanks for the update. I really like your stories. I'm always happy when I see an update from you. And I apologize for not writing a review. It just take so long to write in english, and to think about how to write so it looks and sounds sensible. And I now that there is no good explanation not to write back. But I hope you'll continue to write because I really love to read your stories. Just wanted to write and tell you that I read the updates every time, altough I don't write back.
Greeting from Cesku

Author's Response:

Thank you for taking time to leave a review, I love to get them!!!  Not sure what your native language is but feel free to leave reviews in that langauge.  I bet microsoft or goggle can translate it for me.  I am gald to know you are enjoying the story.  I'll keep writing as long as the readers let me know they are reading & enjoying.  Bill

Reviewer: Acadian Proud (Anonymous) · Date: January 06, 2017 04:04 AM · On: Chapter 24

Michael does not want to grow up.  He needs "DEEP" therapy... Somethink needs to happen to make Michael get agree to therapy...

Author's Response:

I thik Debbie doesn't want him to grow up.  I don't hold out a lot of hope for him to change but who knows???  Thanks for the review, I love to hear from the readers!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2017 04:42 PM · On: Chapter 24

So glad you posted!  I really missed this story.  Love reading about Brian and Justin and how they've become the central figures of the "family."  

Author's Response:

Sorry for the long delay between updates.  It is my New Year's resolution to do better.  Really glad to know you enjoyed this chapter.  Thanks for the review!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2017 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 24

This is the perfect end of the holiday season...an update to Holiday Happenings.  I hope the season brought you much joy and love. I also hope that the coming year does the same. All the best to you in 2017!! 

The party kind of reminded me of those that I grew up with. Sounds a bit ponpous I know, but between my parents and my Godmother, (we alternated every year) it was all pretty similar, except without the driver service. Now that would've been a brilliant idea back then. :)

Showing the true Christmas spirit here with the idea for Claire to embroider and make some $$. Would be nice if this is the initial olive branch and that in time, some of the major woulds could begin to heal. Not sure they ever will completely, but even a bit would be nice. I hope she's sincere in her motives and understands the need for time. That was a really touching part. Even Brian was slightly open.

Despite the incredible generosity of everyone and the abundant haul everyone brought in, it's obvious that none of the kids come across as spoiled. They are all incredibly grateful and appreciative. While they were thrilled with all their gifts, it seemed they were just as thrilled, if not more so by the sense of family and togetherness that was abundant throughout.

Lovely catch up with Ted, Blake et al. Nina's reaction to Christmas was so sweet and genuine. I could imagine that it would be quite overwhelming. So happy that she and viola have this opportunity now.

Michael is still an ass. I mean really...suck it up buttercup. Glad nobody succumbed to his little tantrums. And why wouldn't he take the available transit? Was he hoping for an overnight invite or something? Just silly. He's just a petulant little boy really. shame that he seems to feel there's a need to compete for JR's or even Brian's affections. Following him around like a little puppy. Like I said, he's just a silly boy.

What a wonderful chapter and so well worth the wait!! I felt heart warmed and smiled reading it all.

thank you for this! I have to admit, I've been waiting for the notice I received of the update, but I figured that it would be after the holidays. It's a lovely gift from you to all of us. A thrill to receive.

Cheers and once again, all the best to you in the New Year. I hope 2017 brings you all that you hope for.

Elaine

 

Author's Response:

I had to double check with my new Echo to make sure of the day of the week.  It really is Wednesday!  Hope you had a wonderful 2017!!  My parents also had some large parties over the years but none invovled caterers.  My mother and her sisters usually made the food.  Hopefully Claire will take Jennifer's offer to help her make some money and do something worthwhile.  Claire finally seems to be taking some responsibility for her actions which is more than we can say for good old Joanie.  I envision John & Peter occasionally pinching themselves to be sure their aren't dreaming.  They have had huge positive changes in their life.

I love Ted & Blake and their delight with Nina.  Viola knew what she was doing to pick them to take care of her granddaughter.  They take care of her as well.  Mikey is very dependable, he is always an idiot.  I'm sure he can't understand why JR and Brian love Justin.  All Mikey sees is a twink who took his best friend and is trying to steal his daughter's affection.

I apologize for the long wait and am thrilled you think it was worth the wait.  I hope we all have a great year, it will be an interesting one with some of the changes in the USA.  Thanks, as always, for your support.  You know I love to read reviews!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2017 02:01 PM · On: Chapter 24

Wow, what a wonderful Christmas.  Looks like Claire might just have come upon a carreer that will make her feel worthwhile.  Everything went well, except for Michael who kept following Brian around.  You write some of the best and rewarding chapters.

Author's Response:

Hope you had a wonderful Christmas as well!!  I guess it is about time that something positive happened to Claire.  Hopefully she accepts the opportuntiy Jennifer is offering her.  My friend, you wrote some of the best and rewarding reviews and I appreciate you a lot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Thanks,  Bill

Reviewer: mcm (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2017 07:55 AM · On: Chapter 24

YAY! Thanks for Update:)

Happy New Year

Author's Response:

Glad you are happy to see this long delayed update, thanks fro hanging in there!!  Happy New Year to you.  Thanks for taking time to review!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: Lanie (Anonymous) · Date: December 24, 2016 10:03 PM · On: Chapter 23

I love this story!  Will it be finished?

Author's Response:

It will be finished, sorry it took so long to post this update and to answer your review!  Bill

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: November 23, 2016 07:34 AM · On: Chapter 23

 Sweet Baboo! I forgot about Craig, the gifts that he sent were well chosen but is there a hiden agenda. The boys were surprised but I'm worried about Justin getting his hopes up only to played again. I hope their holiday party with the family coming to Britin goes well surely mikey can keep his mouth shut for a few hours.

Author's Response:

A double review!!!  Thanks Sally!!  Brian is going to be very cautious about Craig and do his best to make sure Justin is not hurt.  Justin has good memories of Craig but all Brian's interactions with Craig were bad.  I think if Craig hurts Justin Brian and Jennifer may band together to kill or hurt him badly.  I wouldn't count on Mikey being either silent or sensible!!  Thanks Darling Sally for all your support.  I am thankful for you!!!!  your sweet Baboo

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2016 04:08 AM · On: Chapter 23

That was an interesting way to start a chapter.  Thelma

summarized Brian and Justin’s kindness very well.  Too bad, Joan

doesn’t see that.  She can’t see past B&J’s lifestyle to see what

wonderful people they are.

    I was happy to see Justin hug Tucker and say nice things to him. 

Tucker has been a real good guy, and a nice addition to the

family.  Looks like Justin finally realizes that.  I was happy to read

about it.

   I simply don’t know where Craig fits in.  To me he doesn’t and I

would rather he just go away.  I understand that Justin

remembers some of the good in Craig.  But Brian (and me) don’t.

  I would have liked to see something about Claire. 

  In this Chapter, I am glad JR was not there.  This is Gus’s family. 

And oh yes, the train set will give Brian and Gus much wonderful

Daddy and Sonny Boy time.

  That was a terrific chapter.  Lots and lots of good holiday spirit.

DavidR

Author's Response:

Joan is determined to never accept Brian's lifestyle.  It doesn't matter what anyone says to her.  When she is alone there is no one to disappoint her.  I think Justin knows that Tucker is good for his mother but he has a hard time accepting it.  You are correct about Brian he wants nothing to do with Craig and is concerned about Craig hurting Justin again.  We'll have to wait and see who is correct, you & Brian or Justin.  I actually meant to have something about Claire in the last chapter and forgot - bad author!  We'll hear about her in the next chapter.  I think you are right about the trains!!!  Thanks for the review, you know I always look forward to your comments.!!!  Bill

Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2016 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 23

Haooy Monday my friend! Sorry to hear your friend has been unwell. Hopefully she's well on her way to recovery now.

As for joan...she really is her own worst enemy. I doubt she'll evr gt her head on straight about Brian and his family no matter who says what to her. She's too set in her ways. Shame really, but she brought it all upon herself.

What a beautiful Christmas at Britin! the gifts we lovely for all of them, but the atmosphere, the togetherness was magical! Peter and John most assuredly had their best Christmas ever. I know they've never experienced anything like that before. 

Criag's gifts were a surprise. Is he making legitimate overtures towards our boys? I'm so distrusting of him that I'm always looking for any kind of deviousness, but I'm not seeing anything accept a real attempt. Perhaps there's hope yet. Thankfully he's not as stuck in his ways as Joan.

Had to chuckle over Jenny and her attitude. Justin's interaction with her and his little jab at Mel was well placed. quite funny really.

Gus's heart is amazing for such a little boy. So giving and such generosity. Thinking of Joe like he did. Making sure that B&J could take back some of his gifts the way he did. He could definitely teach a few lessons to some of the adults around them.

will be interested to see how the next days dinner goes with all the family at Britin.

A really really lovely and heartwarming chapter. 

Cheers,

Elaine

Author's Response:

Monday, Monday so good to me

Monday morning it was all I hoped it would be

Hello my Monday friend, thanks for the good thoughts, my sick friend is doing much better.  I believe Joan prefers to be alone, no one else measures up to her standards.  Brian is going to be very hard to convince that Craig is sincere.  Justin was correct when he said he has god memories of Craig and Brian has nothing but bad memeories of Craig.  Justin is pretty open about his diapproval of Mel's parenting.  Happy to know you enjoyed this chapter.  I always look forward to reading your comments, thanks for never disappointing me!!!!  Cheers back to you.  Bill

PS not sure if you are a fan of the Mamas & the Papas

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2016 03:13 AM · On: Chapter 23

What a wonderful Christmas!  Even Craig got into the spirit.  Unfortunately, Joan continued with her annoying attitude.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!!!  Happy to know you are still enjoying the story.  I don't think anyone missed Joan and she was happy with her own company.  Bill

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2016 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 23

Ugh, Joan is her own worst enemy. I'm so glad Brian and Justin have plenty of loving family members to offset that narrow-minded woman.

Love how both Justin and Brian surprised each other with their gifts. Those two men may have to find a time when they can 'christen' Justin's new SUV, lol.

I'm with Brian about trusting Craig; it's difficult to believe he's sincere.

So fun the way Brian and Gus play with the train set. One is never too old for that kind of fun. 😊

Bill, I hope your friend is doing much better. Friends and family always come first! No question that I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter - but only when RL permits.

Karynn

 

Author's Response:

I think Joan feels that she is her own best friend.  No one else is up to her standards.  B&J know how to please each other and I agree that SUV will need to be "christened".  I think Brian is going to be watching to be sure Craig has no opportunity to hurt Justin again.  Between Brian & Jennifer Craig should be very afraid if he is trying to scam them.  My friend is doing much better but still has a way to go before she is able to come home.  Thanks for the good thoughts!!!  Bill

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2016 04:56 PM · On: Chapter 21

What a tremendous feel-good chapter! <3

I love how Debbie, Justin, and Brian work together to rescue another 'lost boy'. Joe may be starting to realize that the diner is a safe place and that his options aren't as limited as he thought.

LMAO! over Justin calling Brian cute and Brian's reaction. At least he didn't queen out - kept his best interests in mind. LOL And Brian and John's lack of enthusiasm over watching the Nutcracker every ear - hilarious. :D

I'm hoping to catch up on your story today. RL has been pretty rotten, but stories like this help me cope. :)

Karynn

Author's Response:

Looks like you are doing some catch up on your reading.  Joe is lucky to have fallen in with so many big hearted people.  Gus was the catalyst that got the ball rolling.  Joe is fortunate that some of those big hearted people also have big wallets!  Brian Kinney really doesn't want anyone to think of him as CUTE.  He will setrle for nothing less than HOT.  I understand rough RL, hope you can escape for a while!!!  Thanks for the review!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2016 06:15 AM · On: Chapter 23

I just found this story again and read everything over again.  It took three days, lol.  I'm glad you are still updating it, at whatever pace you want.  I can't wait to meet the babies and learn if they will be little blonde and blue eyed angels.  

Are you actually going to write Brian in Disney World?  I don't think I have EVER read that before!  No matter how 'domesticated' he has become, a pack of over excited kids in an over packed theme park is bound to test his ability to keep his calm and pg 13 vocab under control.  LOL. A LOT of time outs and quite one on one time will be needed with only his Sunshine to keep him balanced.  

I've never explored the park from a rich person's perspective and unlimited access to all amenities.  I wonder if you can have provate guides to take the kids around the park?

Anyway, I'm just glad you are still writing and look forward to where your muse takes us.  :)

Author's Response:

I am always amazed and flattered when a reader tells me they have re-read the entire saga.  I am so fortunate to have such loyal readers & reviewers, that is what keeps the story going.  Several people have asked for a Brian in Disney Story.  That was not my plan but I think it might be fun to have a quick story about that trip.  Brian will be torn between wanting to avoid everything Disney and wanting to see Gus experience the Magic Kingdom for the first time.  Thank you for your very kind comments and fort aking time to post a review.  I do love hearing from the readers!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2016 04:15 PM · On: Chapter 23

Hi, Bill! First of all, I hope your friend is doing better now.  That is the most important priority by far, and I for one will wait patiently until which time you are able to update. :) 

Now for this chapter. Some observations.  I almost pity Joan; no, I guess I do, although she has brought a lot of what she has wrought upon herself.  She will die, I believe, a lonely and bitter woman. The holidays should hopefully be a time of forgiveness and understanding, which are two words that will probably never escape her lips.  Thank God Brian has emerged from his childhood a scarred man, but one who has triumphed and overcome his parents' treatment of him.  He has become a loving partner and father, and someone to admire.

A little surprised by Craig's gesture, but hopefully it is sincere, and perhaps one day even he will change, unlike Joan.  BTW, I always wrack my brain to think of whether or not Justin called his father "Craig" later in the show, but I can't for the life of me remember. Did he?

JR is becoming more and more not only like her mother, but her father as well, sadly.  I hope she can learn from Gus as a role model, and change her ways, or I fear what she will be as a teenager!  Maybe one day you will write about them as older kids. (hint, hint).

As always, I love the detail in your chapters.  From the preparations for Christmas dinner, to the surprise gift for Justin, to the love clearly shown between the family members. 

Thanks again for a wonderful chapter! Always enjoy reading your updates.  ~Kim

Author's Response:

Hi Kim, my friend is in rehab and is doing better.  Thanks for asking.  I think Joan would be unhappy to think anyone pities her.  No one meets her standards of behavior so she is happy to have no one around.  Brian has been able to overcome a lot from his early life.  His life is different from anything he expected but I believe he is blissfully happy.

I think Craig realizes all he has lost because of his homophobia.  He really lost his entire family because of his attitude.  Now they are all happy together and he is alone.  Justin may be ready to give him another chance but Brian will be much more suspicious of Craig's motives.  I can't remember for sure but I think Justin called him Craig in the show.  I thought about watching some chapter "On Demand" but actually I don't remember Justin talking about his father much at all, after he left home.  Even Jennifer played a pretty minor role in the show.  She has a much bigger role in my story.

JR has an unfortunate gene pool to draw from.  I like to think Gus is like Brian would have been if he had loving parents.  I think JR is kind of lucky Mama showed up.  I think Uncle Jus was getting ready to really let JR have it for her behavior.  Instead he let Mel know that he still wasn't a fan of her parenting.

Thanks for the nice comments.  I learned a lot from reading so many stories from my favorite author.  I think you can guess who that is.  Always enjoy reading reviews so thanks for being so loyal about poting them!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: Sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: November 19, 2016 02:57 PM · On: Chapter 23

Thelma shouldn't feel bad for Joan. It's the life she chooses to live.
Christmas at the Kinney's is full of surprises. The car, the train room, the gifts or olive branch from Craig, and Briangracefully accepting Jen's mothering ways without a fuss.
Great chapter.
Hope your friend is doing well.

Author's Response:

You are correct, Joan best skill is pushing people away.  They did have a very Merry Christmas.  I think Brian would die rather than admit it but he enjoys Jen mothering him.  He knows she genuinely cares for him.  My friend had flesh eating bacteria but they got it quickly and she is doing better.  Glad you enjoyed the chapter.  Thanks for the review!!  Bill

Reviewer: Sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: November 16, 2016 05:09 AM · On: Chapter 22

Has this been abandoned?

Author's Response:

No it has not been abandoned.  Sorry for the delay but I have a seriously ill friend in the hospital and that has taken precedence right now.  I hope to update soon.  Bill

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2016 01:56 AM · On: Chapter 22

   Thanks for the chapter.  It was interesting in that it had just

about everything.

   First, Debbie should put that bat away.  Given her physical

condition she is not one to win a fight.  Plus just suppose Rico or

pal pulled out a gun, Justin did something stupid and got shot.  In

short Debbie needs to control her temper before someone gets

hurt.

   I found the conversation between Melanie and Justin kind of

disturbing.  There it was, Mel’s jealousy of Brian and Justin and

their wealth.  I had thought we were finished with that.   Alice is

not used as a baby sitter for Gus, and Gus should not be used as a

baby sitter for JR.  I think Justin missed the moment and should

have been stronger that how much money Brian and Justin have

is non of her business and that she was way out of line.  His reply

was muddled.  We heard the same lines said by a few of the

characters.  I had it with that.

   We are still seeing Michael become more and more irrelevant. 

No one seems to care.  I have to wonder, as another ready wrote,

how much more Ben will take before he gets rid of him. 

   Thanks again for the chapter. I enjoyed the chapter.

   DavidR

 

 

Author's Response:

Hello my friend, Debbie goes with her gut reaction and doesn't always think things through.  I think Nico is mostly a bully looking for confused kids that he can take advabtage of.  I hope Mel got some food for thought.  Brian and Justin just wanted to be sure she understood they were questioning her parenting choices.  Mikey needs to start lookng at the big picture and not just how thing affect him.  He should have been delighted his daughter got a trip to Disney but instead his first thought is that he doesn't get to go to Disney also.  He needs to find a job and not worry about taking trips or he is going to be minus one husband & home.  Happy to know you enjoyed the chapter.  I always appreciate your reviews because you always make me think about what I have written and look at things from a different angle!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2016 12:44 PM · On: Chapter 22

Even at Christmas Mikey can't see the positive side of things, and how thoughtful Brian and Justin are. He just sees that he didn't get what he wanted, and he what feels he's entitled too... Great update! Hugs ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

We can always depend on Mikey to be a butthead and think only about himself.  Gald you enjoyed this chapter!!!  Thanks for reviewing.  Hugs bacl to you!!  Bill

Reviewer: Chadmom (Anonymous) · Date: November 03, 2016 12:58 AM · On: Chapter 22

really live this story, but leaving a comment is torture! I can't get the security code to work!

Author's Response:

The good news is that it will be easier to post reviews after our web site upgrade.  You could always join Midnight Whispers now and eliminate that pesky security code.  All you need is a user name like "Chadmom" and and an email address.  No other mebers can see your email, just the site admins.  I have a yahoo email and you can even create addtional emails names so you don't have to use your regular email if you don't want to.  MW never discloses your email to anyone.  Thank you so much for taking the time & trouble to post a review.  Happy to know you love the story.  Bill 

 

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: November 01, 2016 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 22

    My Sweet Baboo, Really nice update. I'm interested what the PI finds out about Nico, wonder if they find info on Joe? As usual mikey isn't satisfied with his present from  Brian and Justin, that guy is never happy about anything, he problemly doesn't know what cashmire is since he still looks like he dresses like Big Q customer! Couldn't belive that Mel was punishing Gus and on Christmas Eve--Miss JR needs to listen to what Gus says or face her mothers ire not Gus. then to threaten the child that he could be stopped from being with Brian on Christmas real classie Mel. People should stop underestatmenting --Justin where Gus and Brian are concerned the man is pure fire when their treated unfairly. Loye you, your Sally  

Author's Response:

Hello my darling Sally, I think the PI is going to just warn Nico to stay away from Joe and Debbie.  I suspect Joe may share some of his life story with Debbie.  Mikey is rarely satisfied and always feels like a victim.  Not happy his daughter gets a trip to Disney but upset he doesn't get the same trip.  Brian could have saved himself some money and bought Mikey's sweater at the Big Q except I don't think Brian would ever buy anything at the Big Q.  JR's mommys need to learn not to push her off onto her 7 year old brother.  You are correct Justin will never let anyone hurt Gus or Brian.  Mel would be a fool to cross him!  Always so happy to see your comments!!!!  Thanks for the review!!!!!!  your sweet Baboo

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: October 31, 2016 11:29 PM · On: Chapter 22

Another chapter- so wonderful.  I really like how Justin put Melanie in her place regarding the Gus situation.  Now we'll have to see if the information sticks.  I hope you plan on writiting about the Disney vacation- that should be an interesting tale all by itself.

Author's Response:

Happy to know you enjoyed the latest update.  Justin will never ler anyone hurt Brian or Gus if he can help it.  Melanie better understand she better not cross him.  You are the not the only one interested in gearing about the Dusney trip so I guess that will have to happen.  It was not my original paln to cover that trip.  Thanks for the review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2016 03:45 AM · On: Chapter 22

So much happening in this chapter.  I worry that Nico might try to get back at Debbie.  Hopefully Joe takes the talking she gave him to heart.  It's hard to understand Michael's and Meanie, I mean Melanie's attitudes.  As Ben reminded Michael they don't pay child support, while Justin and Brian pay for JR's school tuition.  Melanie seems determined to favor her daughter over Gus.  If Gus goes to live full time with Brian and Justin, they could stop contributing to JR, not that they would.  You write the best chapters.

Author's Response:

Hello my friend, you are a faster reader and reviewer for this chapter.  Always glad to know you are still enjoying the story.  I think you are correct about Meanie playing favorites.  She got some good parenting advice and she better consider it.  Mikey is never happy not to be included in freebies.  Thanks for the "best chapters" I appreciate it!!  Thanks also for being such a great supporter of the story.  I appreciate all your reviews!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2016 03:07 AM · On: Chapter 19

What a heartwarming chapter! Gus is such a loving little boy - just the way I think Brian would have been if he'd had loving parents. Brian has such a big heart, even if he doesn't like to be thanked for all his kindnesses toward others. 

Can't wait to see Ted with the crown and cape. LOL

With the holidays approaching, this is the perfect time to catch up on this story - so glad I have a few more chapters to read. Thank you for continuing this delightful saga!

Karynn

Author's Response:

I agree with you; I think if Brian had some love early in life she would be just like Gus.  Ted will be wearing that any time Nina requests it I'm sure.  When I started this story it was no where near the holiday but I have kind of caught up a little with RL.  Glad you are still enjoying the saga!  Thanks for taking time to review!!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2016 02:19 AM · On: Chapter 21

   That was another very interesting chapter.  To me it was about who is missing rather than what happened.  Jen’s new/old tradition of taking the family to see the Nutcracker, where was JR?  These people in a way belong to Gus and there was no need to share that day.  This was his day.  Was there a happier child than Gus?  Nope.  I have said it before and notice there really wasn’t any room for Craig.  The tradition happily continues without him. 

    One more missing person though, and there are more.  Where is Michael?  Who cares?  Debbie, and Brian though Debbie, need to reach to out to  him. He is becoming irrelevant.  Similar to Craig, where does Michael fit except being Debbie’s son?  Sadly, he is not missed.

    Thanks for the Chapter, lots of love and joy, and holiday spirit.

DavidR

Author's Response:

Glad to see your review, I was worried about you.  You are always so loyal about commenting.  JR really doesn't have much relationship with Jennifer.  Her mommys and Mother Taylor are not on the best of terms.  For sure no ne is missing Craig but I think maybe Craig is missing them.  Michale will rear his head soon.  He will be at the Christmas Eve gathering at Debbie & Carl's house.  Glad to know you enjoyed this chpater and I alway enjoy hearing from you!!!  Thanks!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: October 19, 2016 04:16 AM · On: Chapter 21

You did good my Sweet Baboo! I was amazed Brian went to the ballet with the others. I was happy Justin told the boys about the ballet and then repeated the story at bedtime for Gus so everyone would understand the story. Of course Brian made fun at home but quickly changed his behavior. He was happy Gus enjoyed himself and Brian treated everyone to a wonderful meal and made the outing so special. If Gus could get his daddy to wear the awful t-shirt on the fourth of July he certainly could get him to go to the ballet. It was wonderful for Jen I think she missed this for a number of years. It wouldn't surprise me if next year for her other grandson Kevin might want to go with Gus, after all daddy would have to stay with the babies but no doubt papa would be with them. I know Brian is stressed out about Joan, but Justin knows how to reach him. Good story. Love ya.Sally.  

Author's Response:

My Darling Sally, always so happy to see your review.  Brian has warned others not to get on Mother Taylor's bad side so he certainly isn't going to take a chance on doing that himself.  If there is a chnace of making his Sunshine and Mother Tyalor angry he is not going there!!  You are correct Gus can make his Daddy do things that no one else can.  Brian & Justin made it a nice night for everyone with dinner at a great restaurant.  Jennifer was thrilled to restart this traditional with her recently expanded family.  The babies will change a lot of things, Christmas included.  Justin is always there for Brian.  Thanks as always for the review!!!!  your sweet Baboo

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: October 18, 2016 01:06 AM · On: Chapter 21

NIco and Deb-  great interaction-  hope Nico stays away.   Always love the scenes between Justin and Brian.  thanks for the update.

Author's Response:

I think Debbie can handle Nico.  Glad you enjoyed the interaction, I tried to capture Debbie's style.  Glad you enjoyed the B&J interaction as well!  Thanks for the review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: Tiffany (Anonymous) · Date: October 17, 2016 10:46 PM · On: Chapter 21

I was just in the middle of re-reading HH when I was delightfully surprised with a new chapter. Obviously, I had to put the older chapters on hold so I could see what our favorite family was up to. And to no one's surprise, it was a wonderful chapter. And now, back to my re-reading endeavors.

Great work, as per usual :)

-Tiffany

Author's Response:

Sorry to interupt your re-reading but happy to know you thought the newest chapter made the interuption worthwhile.  Thanks for taking time to review since I LOVE hearing from the readers!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: Gloria (Anonymous) · Date: October 17, 2016 03:52 PM · On: Chapter 18

Awwwwww all this happiness & Christmas love is the best!

Reviewer: shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: October 17, 2016 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 21

Justin had a lot to do this chapter telling Brian a shitty mother is not his fault. Making sure All the boys know the Nutcracker story so they understand what they are seeing in the ballet. And reminding Brian that he loves him because he is cute. I loved that line.not sure I like Deb advertising Brian and Justin's wealth I think Nico would have more Veda on with just the reminder of what happen to Tino. You know I love chapters that are mostly the boys so this was great. Looks like maybe I could get 3 chapters in my birthday month. Thanks for that....

Author's Response:

Hellp my friend, Happy Birthday Month!!!!  Justin was busy reassurng Brian in this chapter.  Although I don't think Brian felt reassured by being decribed as cute!  I don't think Deb was giving away any secrets about Brian & Justin's net worth.  I think it is pretty common knowledge on Liberty Avenue.  Glad you enjoyed this chapter, wouldn't want to disappoint you during your birthday month.  Thanks for the review!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: October 05, 2016 02:00 PM · On: Chapter 19

 My Sweet Baboo, I'm really sorry to respond to the last two updates so late. I have been reading a wonderful story that beckons me everytime. The writing is tops and the story draws you in, it is written by a talented man you may have heard of (tongue in cheek and a Brian like smirk)PABoi. I was reading again and on chapter 80 when I decided to continue, then I start over with HOLIDAY HAPPENINGS from the beginning to refresh my memory. In chapter 19 Gus was such a cutie, his concern for others is so like his daddy and papa. While mikey is so selfish when it comes to JR, his mother and Carl and Ben. His concern for Ben is unbelelivable he figures wait long enough and Ben will forget about the rules he's trying to make mikey grow up, he does nothing for anyone and is critical of people who do. I'm interested in the new guy Joe. Deb should take him in, and pack up everything in mikey's room--the Capt. Astro bedspread the wall paper should go--she needs to paint get a new bed and rid the room of all child like mikey presents, make sure mikey know to get his stuff picked up and he no longer has a room there, he is married and needs to be with Ben it's Joe's room now. He needs a place to live, he needs regular meals, and a job, but mainly he needs someone who cares. Your loving Sally

Author's Response:

My darling Sally, always happy to hear from you whenever you post reviews!!!  You have been busy reading!!!!  One of these days maybe I will re-read all 100 chapters of the "wonderful story".  Mikey is unchnaging and unthinking, I think it is nice that there are some thing that we can always count on.  I don't think Ben is going to forget about Mikey getting a job and starting to pay back the money he used for back rent.  I'm pretty sure we will hear more about Joe in future chapters.  Thanks for the review!!!!!!  your sweet Baboo

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2016 05:14 AM · On: Chapter 20

    It was a fun and happy chapter until we got to Joan.  I had no

idea which way things would go with her.  But you know, as Peter

said, her going home to be alone is probably what she wanted. 

Well she got her wish.  It is sad, and just before Christmas.  A

small piece of me hoped that with the holidays, and having Peter

and John around, she would become more accepting of Brian and

Justin.  Oh well!

   A word of warning.  In his own way, Michael’s situation is becoming similar to Joan.  He has said enough awful things that

who except for Debbie cares about him.  That is sad.

   How about a good word for Claire?  Let me throw a little guilt

and maybe since it is Christmas, how about a visit by her sons or

maybe some gifts?  Just a suggestion. 

   Anyway, thanks for the chapter I enjoyed it.

  Oh yes, Brian and the tinsel was very funny.  I had to mention

that.

DavidR

 

Author's Response:

I don't thnk Joan is sad.  I think she prefers to be alone with her bible and lament how the world is a bad place.  No one quite meets her standards so she avoids everyone.  I think Ben still has some feelings for Michael but he really needs to get a job and contribute to their household.  I believe Debbie may try and help the job hunt, anything to keep him out of her happy home with Carl.  Wonder who she will ask about giving Mikey a job???????  You are correct Claire should get some Christmas gifts from her sons, that is only right.  No visit until she owns up to her responsibility for what John & Peter went through in that last year they lived with her.  She has never apologized to them or to Brian & Justin for the kidnapping attempt.  Happy to know you enjoyed this chapter.  Borderline OCD Brian is the perfect person to place that tinsel one strand at a time.  Always look forward to your comments, you always give me food for thought.  Thanks for the review, everyone know how much I love to get reviews!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2016 03:11 PM · On: Chapter 20

Sorry this is a little late.  I spent a week at Disney and while I had a chance to read this there I couldn't remember my password to leave a comment.  It was so nice for Gus to come home and see all the decorations.  I enjoyed the hiking vs walking talk and it looks as though hiking won.  Charlie is so smart to come up with a plastic sheet under Gus chair when he had his favorite meal of spaggetti and meatballs.  The decorating of the tree was another great time had by all.  Gus is also so sweet to worry about Joe. Justin and Gus going shopping made a perfect time for John and Peter to say goodbye to Joan.  She had a lot of nerve saying that Brian was self-rightous as that is a perfect description of herself.  John let her have it though and though Peter was nicer about it he admitted that he agreed with John.  So Alice and Cassie ended up taking Joanie home.  As Alice so eliquently but it "Goodbye and good riddance.  Loving this and looking forward to yet another chapter.

Author's Response:

Hope you had fun at Disney. Never too late for a review!!!  I don't think Brian actually cares about walk vs hike, he just doesn't like his Sonny Boy taking Tucker's side of the discussion.  When my niece and nephew were young we always put a plastic table cloth under their chairs if we ate in the dining room.  Makes a meal much less stresful.  Joan sees things her way and she thinks she is always correct when most of the time she is on the wrong side of things.  She will be happy alone in her hosue with no one to argue with her point of view.  My friend, thanks as always fr your review.  I never feel a chapter is complete until I read your comments!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2016 12:42 PM · On: Chapter 20

I can just see a neurotic Brian hanging each piece of tinsel uniformly spaced on the tree. I think Justin's excitement has Brian letting go of his childhood disappointments about Christmas. Later Hon ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

Brian does have that touch of OCD, a perfect tinsel hanger.  I think Justin and Gus are both reponsible for Brian's cautious enjoyment of Christmas.  Thanks for the review.  Hugs,  Bill

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 27, 2016 11:41 PM · On: Chapter 19

I don't mind the wait when we get such a long and wonderful chapter. I love all the little details that you give us. It is a hallmark of your writing. I really think it is what makes me feel like I could just read this story all day. It is comforting. Highlights for me in this chapter: of course, all the affectionate B&J moments, Brian's listing of all the good things that had happened during the year, the oatmeal, brown sugar, and raisins and Alice supplying Brian with a spoon, Brian shopping for princess stuff, Brian's evil thoughts of Ted and Blake in their royal garments, the story of Joe and how Gus wanted to help, I'm hoping we learn more of Joe's backstory and what happens next with him. I hate to think of him on his own at such a young age. And, the fact that someone physically hurt him. Good for Debbie regarding her determination to get Michael to grow up. Hope she stays the course. As always, thanks for this chapter of your terrific story.

Author's Response:

Thanks for being so understandng about the long wait and for your very kind comments.  Happy to know you enjoyed this chapter. I do enjoy the little details so I am glad you do also.  Between Debbie and Gus I think we will learn more about Joe.  Debbie is going to try her best to let Michael fight his own battles but I don't think she can just go cold turkey.  I think there may be some back sliding.  Thank you very much for taking the time to leave a review.  I LOVE to hear from the readers!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: julia005 (Anonymous) · Date: September 27, 2016 07:21 AM · On: Chapter 19

What a fine chapter - so heartwarming. I hope Joe will find good ways to help himself, get a decent job...and a surrogate family. We will see!

The pre-christmas time throws so much hapiness around, even though the presents B&J are buying are some kind of....very american, and Deb´s decor ;))) Can´t wait to know about the presents John and Peter will get.

I hope you are well. My RL keeps me hyper busy. Thanks for every new chapter, I appreciate it.

Author's Response:

Julia, how nice to hear from you.  I'm happy to kmow you are still reading and enjoying the story.  I think we will hear more about Joe in the future.  "American" Christmas gifts is very interesting, I would be interested to know what other gifts would be.  I am going to have to do some internet research on Christmas gifts around the world.  That is something I never gave much thought to but am now interested in the differences.  B&J gifts are going to be very extravagent for many people.  I am doing great, thanks for taking some time to post a review!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: September 25, 2016 03:47 AM · On: Chapter 19

I really like the way you had Gus take charge of giving Joe a good meal and a warm, safe place to live.  Love the the whole family from Deb to Brian and Justin are so generous.  Great job. do we see a new character in the story?

Author's Response:

Gllad you like a "caring Gus".  Deb has always looked out for the underdog and I thnk she has he sights on Joe so we may be seeing a new character.  Happy you enjoyed this chapter.  Thanks for the review!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2016 03:23 PM · On: Chapter 19

Wonderful story it is my favorite story I can not wait to read more of this story

Author's Response:

Thanks for letting me know my story is your favorite, that is really cool!!!  Love to hear from the readers so thanks for posting a review!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2016 01:50 AM · On: Chapter 19

Oh that was amazing.  Gus really is a sweet kid.  Justin and Brian are pretty special themselves.  They all know the true meaning of Christmas.  

Author's Response:

Thanks for the nice comments.  I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter.  Thanks for taking the time to review.  Love REVIEWS!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2016 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 19

Hello friend!! Oh I've been waiting so patiently for an update. HOpoe RL is treating you OK. It does tend to get in the way now and again.

Oh Deb. It's so hard as a parent to when to let go adn let your kid make mistakes. You want to protect hem, but by over doing it you end up with, well...Michael. LOL. she's finally realizing her part in it. I can't really blame her, as it's every parent's first instinct, especially as a single parent. You don't realizr the implications until it's too late. REally gald she sees it now though and will do her best to make him grow up and become the man he should've become years ago. (I'm not holding my breath mind you. ;) ) she has Carl by her side for support. He'll gently and lovingly keep her on teh right path. He also won't put up with Michael's crap. 

I wish we could see pictures of Ted, blake and Nina in full costume! That would be a site! I have the feeling Brian will appreciate and enjoy that visual more than anyone else. Heck...He already is! I can fully imagine him snickering at the thought. Of course ted and Blake will dress up and play along with Nina. JR is going to absolutely love it too! 

You always know when a child has been raised right, and Alice made sure that Brian knoew that it was his and Justin's influence on gus that had him have such a loving and giving heart. My goodness...tears were welling reading that part. It was perfectly done. I'm coming away from this with a light heart adn a big assed smile now. thank you!!

While Michael is always a disappointment to some degree....he's sinking further adn further to a level of utter disbelief. His ability to make excuses for things, for his behavior etc is astonishing. He fought for JR, yet now...hasn't a care about it. It's all about himself, not even seeing his own part in his downfall. You know when you pull the pug in teh bath, and you see that swirl going down the drain. almost like a tiny water spout. That's how I see his life at the moment. that's the visual I often get with regards to him. I guess time will only tell if he ever gets his shit together. Stop feeling sorry for himself. Like Isaid, I'm not holding my breath, but for every one;s sake, includinghis own, I can only hope.  (Just not too soon as his troubles are always fun to read about, What can I say...I'm bitchy with regards to him. lol)

AS always it's such a gift to receive an update to this absolutely incredible story.

Many many thanks for sharing your gift and talent with is. 

cheers,

Elaine

Author's Response:

Hi Elaine, Sorry for the long wait for this chapter.  RL is good just had friends visiting me and did some visiting myself, all good stuff but took time from writing.  Debbie felt she always had to protect Michael but sadly that kept him from ever standing on his own.  Sadly now she is seeing the error of her ways.  Poor Linds & Mel have done nothing to impress Alice or Jennifer, they are both firmly on the side of Brian and Justin and always will be.  Mikey just deends on others to give JR a soeca Christmas and lucky for her Uncle Bri & Uncle Jus are there to make sure Santa doesn't disappoint her.  Mikey doing down the drain has a certain poetic ring to it.  I think he may pull himsefl together enough to get a job.  But where will that job be, that is the question????  I'm not seeing smooth sailing on the job front for Mikey.

I am happy to know that you still find this long saga interesting!!  I am always happy to read your reviews, thank you for never disappointing me!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2016 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 19

Happy I am to see a new chapter.  Sadly Deb is finally seeing what all her over protectiveness has caused.  Michael expects to be rescued from whatever trouble he gets himself into.  Brian on the other hand is a happy camper.  In spite of the troubles during the past year, he's contented with his lot.  That being Justin.  Justin has a bit day planned.  Talking Alice into accepting her bonus, stopping to get stocking stuffers for the younger set, getting JR and Nina's gifts.  Wish I could have a picture of the two girls in their finery and their dolls.  Brian picking up the rest of items for the little girls and finding a few things for Ted and Blake.  Too funny.  Everyone gets a bonus!  Then we come to Michael who isn't actively looking for a job and doesn't think HE needs to get JR more gifts.  Selfish much?  So much trouble to schedule time with Gus.  At least Deb is having her usual Christmas get together.   Last day of school and Brian and Justin along with John and Peter pick Gus up before going to the diner, which is decorated for Christmas much to Gus' delight.  I'm not surprised that they come upon a young boy in need of help, or that Gus is insistent that the boy not go hungry.  Great chapter every way you look at it.

Author's Response:

Hello my friend, I like the Yodaest start to your review.  When Deb looks at how she is treated by her other "boys" she can't help but see Michae;'s flaws.  Brian knows how much happier he is now than he was pre-Justin.  Justin got a lot done in a single day.  JR & Nina will go crazy over their princess dolls and matching dresses.  I think Nina will be happy to see King Teddy Man and Prince Daddy in their crowns & capes.  Brian learned from Justin that you get the kids on your side and you can get indulgent parents to do almost anything.  Michael depends on other people to take up the slack for him.  Luckily JR had people in her life looking out for her.  I am thinking Deb will not be able to resist helping Michael find a job.  Melanie knows she is playing in the major leagues when Jennifer comes up to bat.  Grandmom Jen hit a home room with the Christmas scheduling.  Debbie is ging to be proud showing off her new kitchen to everyone on Christmas Eve.  I think we may here more from Joe in future chapters.  Thanks, as always, for all your kind comments!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: September 23, 2016 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 19

I am not sure why we are always amazed when we hear someone has raised an amazing child. President Obama spoke about a letter he received from a 6 year old who spoke about taking in the little Syrian boy who was all over the news after a bomb went off near his home and he was injured he wanted to share his toys and teach him to ride his bike. I know Brian would say this is all Justin's doing but Gus sees that his Daddy doesn't fight it so he knows it's both of them. I can't wait to see what everyone gets for the holiday maybe most of all what Brian gets Justin. I do love this chapter was just the most important 5 with only a little Deb and Alice thrown in those are always my favorite chapters can't wait till it's 7 with the babies.  Just FYI I minded the long delay but here comes my October beg fest since it's my birthday month and while I would love to demand 4 new chapters I will happily settle for 3, 2 if they are extra long. Thanks for continuing to write this I still love it.

Author's Response:

I think children view the world in a simple way - things are good or bad, people are happy or sad.  As we get older we start analyzing, some of that is good but some clouds our view of the world.  I belive Gus sees all the good things that his Daddy does and also his Daddy is always there for Gus.  Glad you enjoyed this mostly family chapter.  Every once in a while I do feel the other characters need their turn but I do want the sotry to be centered around Brian & Justin.  September is my borthday month so I appreciate you not giving me too hard a time about the delay between updates.  I will try my best to comply with your October "requests".  Thanks for continuing to provide so much support for this long saga!!!!!!  I do LOVE to get reviews and you never disappoint me.  Bill

Reviewer: Jacket1 (Anonymous) · Date: September 09, 2016 01:42 AM · On: Chapter 1

Do you ever think that Gus is a little boy with normal curiosity.  He sees Peter or John enter or leave the pool house and wonder what that is about.  He waits till he is alone, knocks on the door, and Joan comes face to face with her seven year old child. He is let's face it, her blood grandchild.  He wants to know who this women is and she just may look at this as a do over to be kind to the child she neglected.  Gus  is sweet kind and innocent.  He would be thrilled to have a new grandmother. {if she was nice to him}

Love Love Love these two stories.  You are wonderful.

I cannot admit how many times I have reread these stories.

Thank you

 

Author's Response:

I don't think Brian wants Gus anywhere near Joan.  John & Peter have done a good job of taking Joan her food when Gus is not around on the weekend. Not sure Joan would be nice to Gus. Thanks for you nice comments!!!!! I am happy to know you have enjoyed my stories so much. I love to hear from the readers. Sorry there hasn't been an update in a while RL has been keeping me busy but things should quiet down next week and I concentrate on posting an update. Thanks so much for taking time to post a review to let me know you enjoy this saga!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bill

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2016 12:47 PM · On: Chapter 18

Thanks for the update. Yum, Christmas cookies, damn it not even fall yet... Hugs ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

My story timing is really off with real life.  Around Christams time it will probably be summer in the story.  I gues that is why it is called fiction.  Happy to know you are still reading and enjoying.  Hugs back,  Bill

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: August 26, 2016 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 18

Hi my sweet Baboo, I'm really thrown by Joan,sometimes I feel bad about her life she raised her children the way she was brought up. No love -no attention, I guess that's all she knew that would be bad enough but married an abusive drunk who didn't care about anyone, it was all about him, Then the next minute I want to take her Bible and hit her in the head, to get her attention. I loved Jen telling Craig about her Thanksgiving and all family and friends having a wonderful time, when Craig thought it was just queers (stupid man) I think Alice's grandchildren calling Brian uncle and all the kids calling Jen -grandmom Jen makes her day and telling Craig about Kevin and going to his school I was surprised Craig admiited to Jen the plan his advisor delivered to him is working and moving he can walk to work, joined a gym changeing his spending habits really was working for him at work and in his life.I was surprise he actually called Brian instead of Kinney. Joan and Craig are so sad I feel bad for them they have no one, not a relative or even a friend maybe the twins can help them to be come better people and share in the new blessings, your loving Sally.  

Author's Response:

My darling Sally, always happy to see your review and know you are still reading and enjoying the story.  Joan has had a very unhappy life and she seems determined to try and make the people arounf her have unhappy lives.  I think Justin's "plans" for her may help her realize she needs to change her attitude.  We'll have to wait and see if she got the message.  Craig is lonely and startung to understad what a mistake he made with Justin.  Happy you picked up on Craig calling Brian by name insread of Kinney.  He wasn't completely comfortable doing that.  Jennifer really enjoyed letting Craig know how full her life is and how much she enjoys all the people Justin & Brian have introduced into the "family".

Craig and Joan are in some ways their own worst enemines.  Thanks for always being such a faithful reviewer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  your sweet Baboo

Reviewer: BritinForever (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2016 11:05 AM · On: Chapter 18

Wow!  Lots of confrontation in this chapter.  I'm glad that Brian backed up Justin with Joan.  She is completely delisiounal if she thinks Brian would ever pick her over Justin.

 

Go Jen!!!!  Mama is protecting her cubs.  In my mind, there isn't any redemption for Craig.

 

Thanks for the update!!

Author's Response:

I think most of the time Joan is living in her own reality.  Anyone who thinks they can divide Brian & Justin is delusional.  Anyone who hurts Mother Taylor's boys should be away she will hunt you down and hurt you.  Happy to know you enjoyed this chapter.  Thanks for the review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 26, 2016 12:54 AM · On: Chapter 18

As well he should...reap what you sow, Craig. You are lucky that B&J helped you get your life back. So Joan did put her Good Book aside and thought about what Peter said. Is it possible that she is thinking about changing her attitude? Don't cross Justin when it comes to Brian. I think Justin just might make good on his warning. Nice that Brian is getting to experience fun with trains. Who wouldn't want to join in the holiday celebrations when listening to Jennifer describe all the happenings? Wonder what action Joan will take next? Kind of afraid that she may be working on a way to retaliate against Justin. Thanks for this and can't wait for the next chapter. Hope you are still feeling well.

Author's Response:

I am feeling great, thanks!!!  Jennifer really let Craig know how full her life is and how she has so many people to love and who love her.  If those presents are not nice Craig better watch his back!!!  I suspect Joan got the message that actions have consequences.  She may try and improve her attitude before she winds up with Nurse Ratchit taking care of her.  I don't think Joan has a chnace against the team of B&J.  Thanks for the review!!!!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2016 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 18

So much going on.  I hope Joanie tries to leave and they let her.  Then court proceedings can begin and Joanie will learn consequences.  The kids, and Brian, are going to enjoy that train set.  Craig may or may not be coming around, but I've got to admit he realizes that the changes he's had to make were for the best.  Another more than excellent chapter!!!

Author's Response:

Hello my faithful friend and reviewer!!!!!!  I really appreciate all your support.  I am sure every author whose story you read is grateful for your consistent reviews!!!!  I think Justin gave Joan a good dose of FoF (Fear of Fags) and she may reconsider her horrible attitude.  I think the train set will be very popular.  Justin will need a crowbar to get Brian and Gus out of that room.  We are going to have to wait and see what happen with Craig.  Jennifer is going to be keeping her eye on him.  Craig steps out of line and the wrath of Mother Taylor will smote him!  You know how much I love reviews so, as always, thanks for the review!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2016 03:55 PM · On: Chapter 18

HI! Oh how I've been waiting for this. 

well....seems like Joan's attempt at a softer side was tyically brief. It reminds me of young Brian actually. whe he would show a softer side of himself to Justin, then make up for it later and be an asshole x5.  Justin was.............BRILLIANT! I loved every word, every nuance. (Actually, there were no nuances...he just laid out straight to her) No threats, just was blunt and to the point. told her they was it was going to be. He was right in that she needs to read the New testament rather than sticking to the old. Has always been a sore point with me. Can't stand it when people used old testament scripture to prove their point, when New Testament give it a complete swtich up. But they don't like that. It's amazing that they call themselves Christians at all. I grew up in teh anglican church...very involved and I never remember eharing words of hate. We have friends of the family who's kids were gay. Neve were they ostrasized. I mean there were old buttys of course, no getting away from them anywhere you go, but the leadership of our church was totally accepting. I guess when I see church's doing the opposite my blood boils.

anyway.....sorry, I digress.  the one thing I love about this entire story, is the conversation and iteractions between teh characters. It's like you're watching them live. They all engage each other...we see them having normal; conversations, even on little things. so realistic I van visualize it all the time. Great ixaple is the cookie scene. just the little part about Brian taking the cookies up to Justin and John thumping his forehead in realization. It's that kind of attention to details that make this so brilliant and you you such an extraordinary writer.

Now.....what the hell is up with Craig? Is he going to do the softening I though Joan was going to do? what's made him realize what all he's lost? O love that Jennifer is not fogiving here. He really doesn't deserve it at this point. He's got alot to do if he truly wants forgivness from anyone. I always taught my daughter that it's easy to say sorry. But if you truly are sorry, than you change the behaviour otherwise the apoligy is pointless. Craig's ot even at the apology stage yet. He's got a long road ahead of him. He seems kind of grateful for what Brian and Justim forced him to do re" the loan. It's like they forcd him to grow up or something.

Man..I just go on and on all the time on these reviews don't I. talk talk talk....

Ok. this is me signing off. I was so happy to end my day last night with this. Thak you!!!!!

Cheers,

Elaine

Author's Response:

So exciting when you review on a non Monday!!!!!  I think Joan got a whole new appreciation of Justin.  Her life style of staying removed from other people has made her very vulnerable.  I agreee about the "Christians" who never quote Christ in all their hateful rants.  I find that extremely annoying!!!  Christ's message was love and acceptance and I don't understand why people filled with hate and prejudice even want to be identified as "Christian".  I can do you one better from Anglican - I am a product of 12 years of Catholic education.  You can never completely get over the guilt that those years instill in you!

I digressed right along with you!!!  Your comments are so kind that I am blushing sitting here at my computer, not sure ideserve such praise.  Your review will keep me smiling all day.  I am happy you enjoy the story so much.  I can hardly believe how long I have been writing this saga and it the loyal reviewers like you that keep it going.

I think Craig realized what he has lost by his behavior and by not loving and accepting his son.  Jennifer let him know how full and happy her life is.  Hard to say whether Justin will ever forgive Craig and accept him back in his life.  We know where Brian will stand on that subject.  I think Craig is surprised that the things he tried to fight B&J on actually turned out to be big benefts to him.  Maybe he wants to be friendly so they can give him some more good advice.

Always look forward to reading your comments!!!!  Thanks for all your reviews!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

 

Reviewer: Lorma (Anonymous) · Date: August 25, 2016 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 18

Both Jen and Justin have a way with words and can be as to tough as nails! Don't mess with their loved ones.  Great analgogy about the sour milk.  Fits Joan to the t.

Author's Response:

It is a mistake to make Jennifer or Justin angry and they will always do the utmost to defend & protect their loved ones.  I have to say I liked the sour milk analogy myself, I thought it fit Joan perfectly.  Glad you liked it as well.  Thanks for being so faithful about reviewing, as you know I LOVE to read reviews!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!     Bill

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2016 10:35 AM · On: Chapter 18

About time Joan got a good telling off - Justin is not someone to mess with...... I remember seeing a huge train display at Myer's at Christmas years ago - it was wonderful. I can just see the train room in my mind looking very much like that - it's unfortunate they don't do anything like that at Christmas anymore - at least not at any of the stores in Western Australia - it's all iPads, iPhones and iPods and tacky, tacky decorations - at least Gus will have old fashioned fun with his dad and of course all the others. And why do I feel Craig is up to something - for his sake he better be sincere - Justin learnt at Jennifer's knee so I can just see her making Craig regret any wrong move. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response:

I think Joan probably has a new appreciation/fear of Justin.  Growing up we had a train platform at Christmas and so did most people I knew.  Ours was a two teir platform and we had lights in some houses.  My uncle's platform had a trolley car and real street lights so that was kind of nostalgic to write about.  I think in the past we used our imaginations more.  B&J do have the tacky decoration covered this year.  I agree that if Craig is not sincere he better watch his back because Mother Tigress Jennifer will stalk him and make him sorry.  Thanks for all the review I appreciate your support for the story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: August 15, 2016 06:35 AM · On: Chapter 17

Sweet Baboo, I have a question, of course I'm all for a wonderful Christmas for ALL at Britin, but you haven't mentioned Craig recently. Of course I'm not sure what the slug is up to.If he is after Brian's and Justin's money, trying to get his way on the loan, somehow I don't think he's really trying to make nice with them. His ego is crushed his wife and daughter do find without his financial help Justin and Brian are both successful, and he's been replaced by a younger man in Tucker. He has failed at just about every thing he has tried in his life. Just wondered if we will find out about him or if we've seen the last of him. I enjoy how Brian and Justin can push his buttons for a change. Just been thinking about it. Your Sally

Author's Response:

Darling Sally, I have been thinking about good old Craig. He is really a loser at life. Maybe he had been hanging out with Ron Peterson? Since you have expressd an interest in Craig, he will appear soon in the story. How could I refuse a request from you. Maybe Jennifer will realize what a mistake she made getting rid of Craig and throw Tucker out?? Maybe Brian will realize Craig is really who he always wanted and Justin is just a substitute?? Maybe Craig will start to frequent the Liberty Diner and sweep Debbie off her feet with his charm, she could call him Sunshine Senior??  I guess we will have to wait and see what new adventures await Craig Taylor.  Always enjoy hearing from you.  your Sweet Baboo