Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Holiday Happenings
Reviewer: Blossomlegs (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2016 06:37 AM · On: Chapter 7

Mikey is still a B-----d, always complaining about how much of Brian's money Justin spends.  Don't think even if Mikey was shown a bank balance of Justin's he still would insist that Brian gave it to Justin.  So love how Brian stood up for himself and Justin,but as usual it flew right over Mikey's head.  Blake was right onto Mikey's verbal assult regarding Ted,supporting him and stating how ethical an effecient he is with his job, also letting Mikey know that they are friends as well as Ted being an employee of Brian's. Like some other readers I don't understand Ben's attraction to Mikey,especially with Mikey being so selfish and rude.

The boys can't seem to get a break, now Joanie. Can't see her going back and living alone.  Going to be some hard times when it comes towhere she will go.

I'm with Brian on Justin's decision in letting Linz help him with the mural. Know he has good intentions but I don't trust Linz.  Even with her therapy, I have a feeling she would still stab you in the back and especially now that she and the rest of the family knows about the Twins. Hate to say I expect the worst from her,plus Mikey.

Fantastic update, plus the whole fic.  Thanks for sharing!

JoAnn



Author's Response:

Hi JoAnn, always great to hear from you.  Mikey operates in a different universe than the rest of us.  Reality has little meaning to him.  I think Brian's words may have made a little chink in Mikey's self delusion armour.  I think Ben enjoys having someon dependent on him and knows Brian has no romantic interest in Michael.  The options of where Jona can go are very limited.  Justin likes to look for the good in people and Brian is always suspicious.  Might be a good idea to be a little suspicious of Lindsay's motives but maybe it will work out well for everyone????   Glad to know you enjoyed this chapter.  Thanks for the review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: julia005 (Anonymous) · Date: April 14, 2016 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 7

Mickey did his best to ruin everything, but he failed. I think, it´s Ben who is hurting most. Why are they still a couple? And what will Hunter think? Poor guys, poor family...! Can´t anybody stop this shit with M.? I hope Blake´s and Brian´s word will reahc his heart.

B&J have so much love! Not too much harmony - thank Joanie. Will they take her in in the end? Will she be the nice grandma like Viola, as the boys deserve so much? Hahahah - just a crazy thought, that will never happen. It seems there are always some bumps in the road. Enjoyed this chapter, not Lindsays "ideas"...thank you and go on!

 

 



Author's Response:

Hello my friend, always nice to see comments from you.  Mikey still thinks that Justin is taking advantage of Brian.  I think Ben is happy enough with Mikey as long as they have minimal interaction with Bran and Justin.  I don't really see Joan as a nice grandma, she just have the personality to it.  It will be difficult to find anyone to take care of Joan she is so hard to get along with.  Happy to know you enjoyed this chapter.  Thanks for reviewing, I enjoy getting those!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2016 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 7

The Joan situation is scary.  I'm so glad to that Brian told Michael off.  I don't trust Lindsay's motive in wanting to help Justin.



Author's Response:

Let's be honest, everything about Joan is scary.  Hope it penetrated into Mikey world.  Justin thinks the best, we will have to wait and see how that painting together works out.  Thanks for the review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2016 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 7

Keep up the good work with this wonderful story.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the nice comments and for reviewing!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: April 14, 2016 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 7

My Sweet Baboo, this chapter was terrific! As sure as death and taxes mikey was once again an ass. The way he talked to Ted, it was apalling that anyone even speaks to that clown. I thought that Kevin was so cute when telling his mom and dad about the babies, how they would be his cousins  and the uncles said he could help. The Kinneys and the Taylors have shown such love and care and Kevin justs blooms when they are together. I guess I'm a cynic, I think Lindz is only being nice to Justin to please Brian so he will take her side on some hidden agenda. As for Joan I feel bad for her she pushes everyone away, at the same time I hurt for Brian--he tries but she won't give an inch, I guess there is always hope. More chapters please. Love, your Sally       



Author's Response:

Darling Sally, Always happy to hear from you!  We can always count on Mikey although a review on another site was extremely unhappy with my take on Mikey.  I enjoy the Kevin character a lot, he is all about love!!!!!  Kevin is used to needing help so I think it is a big thrill fro him to have an opportunity to help.  I think we are all wondering about Lindsay and what her plans are.  Justin is being Justin and looking on the sunny side of the street.  More on Joan in the next chapter.  I think  your mother is always yur mother even if you wish that was not true!!!  Thanks for all your comments and support!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Sweet B

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2016 05:51 AM · On: Chapter 7

Poor boys - they seem go from one disaster to another - it's keeps life interesting. Michael is such a weasel - I'm glad Brian put him in his place and so eloquently too....LOL. I'm with Brian - I don't trust Lindsay - after everything she's done she'll need to prove she can be trusted but at the moment I keep thinking Justin will be hurt again. Ted really is a very good friend. It's a good thing that a break in Joan's habits caused the church to check on her - this could have ended so differently. I wonder how much trouble she's causing at the hospital - too much yelling could result in a doctor with a large needle of sedative and a physc evaluation - which might be a good thing. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response:

But no disaster can defeat the B&J team.  They will even be able to overcome the Mother of all disasters (clever play on words??).  Brian gave Mikey food for thought, let's hope Mikey can digest it.  Justin wants to give Lindsay the benefit of the doubt, we'll have to wait and see how that works out.  I think we can be sure Joan is charming the ER staff in her own unique style, hope they have the hypos loaded and ready! Always good to read your comments!!!!  Thanks,  Bill

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: April 14, 2016 05:35 AM · On: Chapter 7

great update-   Poor Brian-   he dislikes his mother but is the only one who can help-  Of course, his mother hates him so it should be interesting



Author's Response:

I think the Brian & Joan saga could be very interesting.  You are correct there is no one else to deal with Joan.  Thanks for the review!!!!!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: April 14, 2016 03:57 AM · On: Chapter 7

Had to figure Mikey would act like a baby since the actual babies are not there yet. I agree with Brian something bad will come from Lindsay helping with the murals.  Time to put Joan in the nursing home because there is no where else for her to go and there is no chance of her going anywhere near Brian and Justin's house.    Wow I think you are going to hit the goal I begged for thanks in advance of the third chapter in April.



Author's Response:

Hope you are feeling OK, this is your shortest review ever! Justin is ready to give Lindsay a second chance, time will tell if she deserves it! Maybe Joan could rob a liqour store so she could wind up in prison with Claire. They could take care of each other. Somehow I don't think Joan will be willingly to a nursing home. Arrest may be the only alternative???? Even though it is short thanks for the review you know I love to get them!!!!!!!! Bill

Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: April 14, 2016 03:36 AM · On: Chapter 7

Thanksgiving and the news of the twins was wonderful news for everyone. Being congratulated hugged and kissed is it any wonder Brian took off before it could start again with all the good-byes. Michael Michael Michael. Not only is he going to lose Brian's friendship, but probably Ted's too and if not careful maybe his husband. I'm with Brian, Lindsay helping on the murals is definitely asking for trouble. Have a feeling Brian and Justin are going to be having a house guest for a short while. And Christmas is right around the corner. Think there will be a change in Joan's thinking once she sees how Brian lives his life with Justin?



Author's Response:

It was good Thanksgiving and I agree Brian took as much as he could and needed time away from hugs and emotions.  Mikey is Mikey.  I think LIndsay and Justin paiting murals could prove to be very interesting.  Hmmmmmmmmmmmm  Joan staying with B&J now there is a surpirse plot twist!!!!!!   That could be really interesting.  Gald you enjoyed the latest chapter.  Thanks for taking time to review!!!!!!!!!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: April 14, 2016 02:18 AM · On: Chapter 7

It's good to read about a couple that support each other.

Babies! I am glad to see the future of this story being laid out ahead of us. I want to keep reading about this family for a long time!

Author's Response:

It took them a while to get there but they do seem to have that support each other thing down now. I think twins will yield a lot of story lines. As long as the readers keep reviewing I'll keep writing. Thanks for letting me know you are still enjoying the story!!!! Bill

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2016 12:58 AM · On: Chapter 7

Michael, Michael, Michael... It sounds like Thanksgiving was a success, and everyone is thrilled about the twins, well almost everyone...

Maybe with Joan being in the tub for days, it might be a good time for her to check into rehab...

Great Update!

Hugs ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

Mikey is never changing.  It is nice to have things in life that we can count on!  I'm not sure that Joan is incapacitated enough for them to force her into rehab.  Nothing wrong with her legs, she can still run and kick.  Glad you enjoyed the update. 

Hugs back,  Bill

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2016 11:25 PM · On: Chapter 7

Michael sure is trying to alienate everyone in his life.

Love Brian explaining things to him like he is mentally challenged. 

Don't know if Lindsay is coming around or what.

Love Brian and Justin's relationship.

Maybe he can put Joan in a home (not theirs)

Still loving this story.

Lorie



Author's Response:

I believe that Brian thinks Mikey is mentally challenged, he has known him for a long time!  We will have to wait and see how Lindsay behaves.  Maybe electricity was the right answer for her.  All I will say about Joanie is around and around she goes and where she lands nobody knows...yet???  Thanks for letting me know you are still loving the story, never get tired of hearing that!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: Tasha (Anonymous) · Date: April 13, 2016 10:44 PM · On: Chapter 7

I love of your stories there are too many angst fics out there between the boys I want to thank you for that anywho . This chapter was awesome I love how Blake put Michael in his place and Lindsey lol what is she up too I got a bad feeling about this 



Author's Response:

This is a low angst story, glad you enjoy that.  The problem is Michael keeps excaping from his plave when people put him there.  I agree Lindsay needs careful watching!!  Thanks for taking time to review, I appreciate it!!!!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2016 09:35 PM · On: Chapter 7

Oh boy, oh boy, oh boy.  Another chapter!!!  Dancing for joy.  Love how Blake talked to Michael.  Then Mikey turns around and tells Ben but changes it.  I really do not see how much longer Ben can take dealing with Mikey and his misconceptions.  Love how Brian but Mikey in his place.  Even Melanie wasn't please with her daughter's father.  Gotta love Kevin, he's such a cutie.  Poor Brian having to deal with his mother, his naked mother.  Shudder.  At least Justin will be there to give him some support.  Great job!!!



Author's Response:

I had to post a chapter, you sre shaming me with your fast updates!!! Mikey is the character we all love to hate and we can depend on him to always do something that we dislike. I do love Kevin, he is just all good feelings. I've know a few Downs people and I think for the most part they have a lots of love to give.  The thoughts of a naked Joan may give me nightmares. I used to deliver meals on wheels and once I used the key to walk into a house and there was the older woman getting a sponge bath from a nurse right on the bed in the living room. The nurse started yelling for me to get out and I had my eyes closed holding out the food to her. I couldn't get out of there fast enough!!!  Talk about SHUDDER!!  Luckily the recipient either did not recognize me on subsequent deliveries or chose not to recognize me.

Thanks, my friend for all your support.  I hope anyone who reads this and hasn't read your story, reads and reviews it today!!!  It is a great story with such a fascinating & unique story line.  Bill 

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: April 13, 2016 09:28 PM · On: Chapter 7

I would complain about Michael but I doubt it'll do any good with the way you write him except to raise my blood pressure. Ben is going to stay with him. Brian talks but he doesn't do anything. I don't blame Mikey for continuing to be nasty and smug. He knows he can get away with it with no consequences because they show him he can. It a few of the other characters I've lost respect for when it comes to Michael.



Author's Response:

Wel I'm glad you didn't complain???  I think when someone has been your friend for a long time you let them get away with a lot of BS.  Brian has a lot of good memories of the past when Mikey was a really good friend to him.  Cutting off Mikey means cutting off Debbie and neither Brian or Justin want to lose Debbie.  His "friends" are frustrated and so are you, I do get that.  I just don't think there is an easy solution.  And Mikey serves a purpose in the story, he annoys us all.  Hope you enjoyed the non-Mikey parts of the story.  I do appreaciate your comments and I'll think about where the Mikey storyline goes, I promise!!!   Bill

Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2016 08:38 PM · On: Chapter 7

Thank you for the update. Was chomping at the bit, anxiously awaiting M & L's reaction to the twins.

Micheal was as expected. He really is insufferable. Will there come a point where Ben just throws up his hands in dispair and frustration and walks away...permanantly? It really must rub him the way Micheal is forever going on and on about B&J. Constantly making such nasty and ignorant comments. Ted, Blake and Mel certainly had their say, Didn't do much mind you. :) Brian may have more of an impact, but who knows. Micheal seems to think that any threat from Brian is just hooey anyway. that Brian will always forgive him...will always need him. He just can't seem to figure it out.

I'm wondering about Lindsey. What do you have up your sleeve for us...Has being away really done her any good or is she such a good manipulator that she's fooled everyone? Curiouser and curiouser. :) Brian certainly doesn't seem to trust her, but justin's willing enough. Hopefully he doesn't go in with blinders on. Gotta be on your toes with Lindsey!

I'd love to say "poor Joan", but the words just can't seem to come out without a very sarcastic and mean tone to it. :) 

Oh....just thought of something. She's going to need help....Brian will just hire someone right?? I mean....she's not going to stay at Britin is she?? (My eyes are HUGE and nervous right now!!) :) 

So thrilled to see this update. I was checking my email and got the notification. So I hurredly went to read it Screw work for a bit....it can wait. 

Cheers!

Elaine

 



Author's Response:

Hi Elaine, Wow you read and reviewed quickly.  Always happy to know you enjoyed the latest update.  I like to think of Mkkey as consistent, we always know what we are going to get with him.  I think Mikey doesn't like that Ted no longer has a crush on him.  Must be a little ego brusing to have two men have blonds in their lives and no romantic interest in Mikey.  I think the Justin/Lindsay interaction will be interesting.  Brian will hire someone but Joan is difficult to deal with.  May not be easy to get someone to stay with her..... wonder what will happen then????????  Stay tuned.  Thanks for the review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2016 01:20 PM · On: Chapter 6

Hi, Bill! So slow in having time to read some stories, but finally had the chance to read your latest chapter.  I'm always impressed by the details you place in your story, and I could almost see the big dinner and the arrangements for it in my head.  Good job on that!  I'm glad the announcement is out in the open, but it's obvious that neither Lindsay nor Michael are happy with this arrangement, so it will be interesting to see how that develops.  As usual, Michael was a jerk at the diner, so it wasn't totally unexpected.  I had to laugh a little when Justin told his mom that they had 'purchased eggs.'  Made me think about them running to Kroger's and picking out a dozen - ha!  But so glad this is out in the open now. 

Also liked how the two men handled the situation with Gus and how they tried to defuse any jealous feelings he might have toward the babies, and how they included him in the plans. I think that was a wise move on their part.  As usual, a great job on this! Thanks. ~Kim



Author's Response:

Kim, always happy to see comments from you.  We can always depend on Mikey !!  On the eggs topic I hard biled eggs the other day and when I used some of them two of the eggs had double yokes, made me think of the twins.  I think Gus may need some additonal reassurance in the future.  Thanks as always for all your amazing support!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: April 05, 2016 08:19 PM · On: Chapter 6

Hi my dear sweet Baboo. A beautiful chapter, even Brian didn't mind all the people. although I bet his mind was racing  and telling him to escape, everyone pitched in and it was a fairly sane Thanksgiving. Thanks to Brian, Justin, and Jen her four love grandsons were told the babies replaced no one that they had plenty of love  to go around. For the life of me I don't understand how much Linds and mikey have screwed up own lives they still want to dictate how Brian should live his and if they don't approve of the twins just hush, they have been awful parents to their kids, anyone could do better. mikey was telling Brian how Thanksgiving should be and who shouldn't be invited, it's not his house , and he has no say in the matter.Wonder how Linds felt when Gus chose to eat with Kevin and papa instead of his crazy mother, and why didn't Brian tell her about the babies first rather than the boys and his mother-in-law?  Love you, Sally



Author's Response:

Darling Sally, Happy that you enjoyed this chapter. Don't forget Brian added to the guest list so he can't have minded all the people too much. I think Gus will need some additonal reassurance in the future. I think Mikey & Linds are convinced that Justin has screwed up Brian's life and they need to "rescue" him.  Thanks for the comments I always enjoy hearing from you. Love, your sweet B

Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2016 12:00 AM · On: Chapter 6

Why both places??? :) I like the notifications I get from FF, but I prefer to read and review on MW. 



Author's Response:

That makes sense.  I like it better here as well!  Bill

Reviewer: Elly (Anonymous) · Date: April 04, 2016 06:29 PM · On: Chapter 6

Great chapter! I love Grandmother Jen words " I know I have told all of you that some families are linked by blood but we are joined together by love. I think the love bond is even stronger than a blood bond. ".



Author's Response:

Thanks Elly.  I love Grandmom Jen too, she always knows the right thing to say.  Love to hear from the readers so thanks for the review!!!!!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2016 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 6

42?! I get stressed when I have 10! Sounds like it would've been such fun though. Would've loved to attend something like that. :) Justin and everyone sure had to down to a science! Impressive! (that in turn means that obviously YOU had it well thought out as well! ;)  )

Micheal is really getting more and more worrisome. His expectations for everyone to cover him financially...Such a sense of entitlement for some reason. I guess since nobody ever really has said "No" to him, like his mom, has allowed him to continue this jeuvenile behaviour.

While Gus's reaction was expected, I hope he doesn't ever get the feelilng of being left behind. Mainly, that neither Lindsey, Mel nore Micheal start feeding into any insecurities, or if they try, they get sropped immediately!

Jen's reaction as well as the boy's was wonderful! They are all going to be so supportive! 

Micheal adn Lindsey's reaction are as expected. Not even a little surprised. I am looking forward to what they have to say though. I so enjoy having people putting them in their place! LOL.

Great chapter! thank's so much! 

Cheers,

Elaine



Author's Response:

Hi Elaine, you are really a devoted reader - following the story on two different web sites.  I'm curious, are you afraid of missing something?  I want to put your mind at ease, the updates always happen at the same time.  Growing up we always had a lot of company, once my parents had a pary where 300 people were invited.  My personal best is 28 for dinner.  Of course if we all had an Alice 42 for dinner wouldn't be a problem.  Nice that Justin used technology to keep track of food preparation and was prepared for the unexpected lasagna.

Mikey is consistent.  Lindsay used to call Brian "Peter" for Peter Pan but Mikey is really the boy who never grew up.  I think all children that have gotten used to the undivided attention of their fathers would be apprehensive about a new sibling or two!  Gus will discover what his Papa told him that there wil be plenty of love to go around is true.  I think once they arrive Gus will think the babies are pretty interesting.  As long as he is the one & only Sonny Boy I think Gus will be happy. 

Jennifer is beyond thrilled but still wants to be sure the existing grandkids know she still loves them.  Glad to know you are still enjoying the story.  Thank you for being so loyal about reviews!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2016 05:07 AM · On: Chapter 6

I was wondering how Lindz and Mikey were going to handle the news... Sourpusses as always...

I'm loving this fic!

Hugs ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

Happy to know you are enjoying the story.  Not too many surprises from Mikey & Lindz reactions.  Thanks for the review!!!  Hugs back to you,  Bill

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: April 04, 2016 03:53 AM · On: Chapter 6

Oh-  I see trouble on the way in teh form of Lindsay and Michael.   Great update- I think 42 people for a family dinner would be a lot of people.  wow- you'd need folks to help with the cooking



Author's Response:

Luckily most of the trouble Mikey & Linds make is for themselves.  We had lots of big parties at our house when I was growing up.  My mother and aunts did all the cooking.  I think you get used to big crowds and having enough food, it can be fun.  Glad you enjoyed this chapter.  Thanks for the review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2016 01:30 PM · On: Chapter 6

I just love this series and look forward to each and every update - which never disappoint:-)



Author's Response:

Thank you for the nice comments.  I am glad you are enjoying the story!!!!  I hope I continue to entertain you!!!  Bill

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2016 11:26 AM · On: Chapter 6

I do so enjoy this story and I wanted to be at this Thanksgiving dinner

Author's Response:

I am really happy to know you are still enjoying the story!!!  The Thanksgiving does seem like it was a lot of fun.  Thanks for reviewing!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2016 06:08 AM · On: Chapter 6

Congratulations to our boys! But I smell trouble. Michael and Lindsay don't seem too happy about the twin's pending arrival.

Author's Response:

You are the 100th review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!    HOORAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Actually we would have hit 100 much sooner if we didn't have that pesky database issue.  Still happy to have hit the milestone and thaks for making that happen.  Let's be honest when are Mikey & Lindsay ever really happy????  Not too often!!  Glad you are still enjoying the story!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2016 05:34 AM · On: Chapter 6

What an amazing Thanksgiving. We Aussies don't have those but our Christmas lunch is often along similar lines when families are large and everyone bringing their specialities. Justin's schedule is brilliant (I have to admit I have one for my Christmas baking which I have saved on my computer and use each year just making small changes - definitely makes the season easier to handle and a lot less stressful.) It's great that Brian and Justin told the boys and Jen before the rest about the babies. Gus and Kevin are so cute - “Announcement! Announcement! Everyone has to be quiet now!” - I'm still grinning. Everyone has a 'thorn in their side' that they have to deal with and Michael is definitely the thorn - gees - I so want to do a 'Debbie' and slap him. I don't trust Lindsay - nothing good is going to come from her.

Author's Response:

I'm glad to know that you don't just throw a shrimp on the barbie for special occasions.  LOL!  Thanksgiving here is mainly about celebrating good people and good thing in our lives but the food is am important part of the celebration.  Some how Turkey has become the main food to have at Thanksgiving but as you say everyone has a special dish to bring to the dinners.  I'm pretty sure Jennifer would have hurt Justin if he left her find out about thr twins with everyone else.  It's important to make Gus feel a part of the big news and to keep reassuring him that B&J will always love him.  The problem with slapping Mikey is that it doesn't seem to do any good but it sure must be satisfying to do!!  Thanks for letting me know that you enjoyed this chapter.  I appreciate all your reviews!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Thanks,  Bill

Reviewer: Blossomlegs (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2016 02:57 AM · On: Chapter 6

Love the "Twin announcement"! Mikey and Linz can just dig themselves a bigger hole and crawl into them and cover themselves up.  What a Fantastic Thanksgiving you painted for the "whole family."  Love how everyone cooked, baked and helped out, plus Brian survived it all.

Fantastic update, thanks for sharing

Always looking forward,

JoAnn



Author's Response:

Hi JoAnn, I think that annoucement made Thanksgiving even more memoarable for the attendees.  When you are feeding 42 people you better have a lot of help.  Amazingly Michael & Lindsay didn't really do anything to help with dinner.  Happy uou enjoyed this update.  I was happy to see your comments!!!  Thanks,  Bill

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: April 03, 2016 01:48 AM · On: Chapter 6

How nice to check and see another chapter. I am so happy that Brian had a good day.

I hope everyone else's happiness will protect Brian and Justin from whatever harm Lindsey and Michael try to cause.

But that was a cliffie, and now we will all fret until your next update!

Author's Response:

Glad you liked this chapter.  I don't think anyone cna detract from B&J's delight over the impending arrival of twins.  I'll try not to make you wait too long for the next chapter.  Always happy to know you are still rading and enjoying.  Thanks!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2016 11:23 PM · On: Chapter 6

Wow! That was a lot of food. Michael is still an ass. The news about the babies is great.

Author's Response:

There was a lot of people to eat all that food.  Sevreal attendees were teenagers and they all have hollow legs and than there is Justin with his high metabolism.  Mikey is one constant in life.  I think almost everyone will be excited about the twins.  Thanks for all your support, love to get reviews!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2016 10:57 PM · On: Chapter 6

Loving this story. Brian worries about how many people, but invites more. Michael will always be an ass. Justin is great at orginization. Looking forward to Michael and Lindsay's comments on the new arrivals.

Lorie



Author's Response:

Brian knew it would make Justin & Gus happy if the O'Briens came for Thanksgiving dinner.  He just didn't want to be responsible for anything to do with dinner or the preparations.  I think we can guess that Mikey & Linds wil not be thrilled.  Mikey becae he is Mikey and Linds because it might mean Gus inherits less money.  Thanks for the review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2016 09:24 PM · On: Chapter 6

I could have called that one.  Lindsay and Michael are so annoying.  Love grandmom Jen.  Thanksgiving at Britin was a resounding success!



Author's Response:

We don't need to be psychic to know how Mikey will react.  He is consistent.  I think just about everyone enjoyed their Thanksgiving.  Thanks for the review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: julia005 (Anonymous) · Date: April 02, 2016 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 6

What a chapter! I don´t know thanksgiving very well and was surprised by the kind of food they. I knew turkey and mashed potatoes, but there were things I didn´t even know by name. Seems the Americans are cooking food once a year - and the other days they go to diners!

That was a house full and Brian was in his best behaviour. The great announcement took me by surprise - so much fun! Lovely moments!

 

I enjoyed this evening read after hard work-days so much - thank you!



Author's Response:

Thanksgiving is mainly a day to be grateful for the the nice people and good things in our lives.  However food comes in a close second in importance!!  Every family has some special dish that they must prepare for Thanksgiving dinner.  Italian cooks like Debbie would include pasta but most other people would not.  I agree that no dinner is as important in USA as Thanksgiving dinner!  Glad this chapter helped you relax after a hard day at work.  Thanks for taking time to review, always happy to hear from you.   Bill

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2016 07:38 PM · On: Chapter 6

Wow.  What a big Thanksgiving and Brian handled it very well I thought. All the food sounded delicious.   It was nice that Brian and Justin gave the news to John, Peter and Gus first, and sweet of them to include Kevin.  I can imagine Lindsay being shocked, but why on earth is Michael annoyed.  If anyone has a right to be annoyed it's Brian and Justin having to deal with his attitude and his not wanting to share Thankgiving with everyone else.  I wonder if Melanie would have gone along with his plans to stay home and not go to Brian and Justin's home.  As always a thoughly interesting and enjoyable chapter.



Author's Response:

Hello my firend and faithful reviewer. I never consider a chapter finished until I read your comments!!!!! I think Brian complains so he doesn't have to het involved in the nitty gritty. He couldn't be too unhappy with anything that Justin & Gus get so much pleasure from. Relly does Mikey need a reason to be annoyed???? I don't think so. I think a very determined JR would have made her Mama take her to Uncle Bri & Uncle Jus's house. JR knew that would be the fun place to be. Glad to know you are still reading and enjoying the story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thanks for the review!!! Bill

Reviewer: shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: April 02, 2016 07:30 PM · On: Chapter 6

Thanksgiving way too much Michael you know I Had to say it. I am now starving and its hours until dinner that's just mean.  I love how Brian adds more people but really wants nothing to do with how many are coming or how the food will appear.  I see issues coming with Lindz home I don't know what but they will not be good I almost feel for Mel I think Gus may end up feeling the brunt of it. 

Ok babies so glad they did it the way they did with John, Peter Gus and loved Kevin coming along.  So glad Jen handled that the way she did. 

Michael and Lindsay are going to be thrown out of Brian and Justin's house forever and I can't wait for it to happen.

And one comment that got lost in the MW crash I had changed my mind on the twins where I originally wanted 2 girls I wanted  1 boy and 1 girl I thought it would be more interesting for Brian that way 

Nowthat I think about it after Gus's comment about the new babies being called Sonny Boy maybe 2 girls would be better grrrrr 

ok next chapter Christmas prep or Brian fixing the 2 who need to stay out of this story 

Any chance I can talk you into 3 chapter in April and yes this counts as one remember I am open to bribing you....




Author's Response:

Mikey is a part of B&J's life.  As JR's father there is knid of no avoiding him.  We all have crosses to bear in life.  Lindsay is atarting out with just short visits at home to see how she copes with real life.  I think Jennifer kind of always knows the right thing to say and do.  We are all going to wait a little while to see what sex the babies are.  I have to tell you my decision was made really without any reader unput.  The babies have been in the planning stage for a long time.  Just never had the right time to introduce the idea in the first story.  Sonny Boy will have to learn the lesson that lots of older siblings do, parenst still love you even when new younger siblings arrive.  I will try my best to give you three chapters in April.  Always happy to read your comments.  Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2016 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 6

Wow. I'm reading some of people's comments and I'm like Chill out!!! Wth!!!It's just a story, write it the way you want to Lol.
And on that note, looking forward to the next chapter! Love the Thanksgiving dinner! And glad no NEGATIVE people ( Joan! Lol) didn't spoil it! haha

ps Sometimes you CAN and HAVE to love people from afar cause their toxic to you or just plain stuck on stupid but you can still love them! ie Family Members and Friends. ( cuz everything does not always work out fine ) (DUH!!!)
* sorry had to vent about some of those comments** lol sorry had to say it hehe.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the nice comments.  To be honest I do write the story the way I want.  I love to hear from the readers and they often give me a good idea for the story.  I 100% agree that sometimes you love people but you don't like how they act.  I always think that Brian and Michael are more like brothers than friends.  They leaned on each other when they were younger and have lots of history but one of them has become an adult and the other not so much!!  Hope you continue to enjoy the story and thanks for the review i LOVE reviews!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   Nill

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: March 29, 2016 10:55 PM · On: Chapter 5

sweet baboo, I forgot something! When David and Sara (another spoiled little bitch) were talking to Justin and Sidney they referred to Sidney's late wife as Naomi, in chapter 9 in your first story she was referred to as Norma. Can't wait for the Thanksgiving story, who will attend,who has a chip on their should, and what will mikey say about the boys paying Deb's house off, and questions about bidding on junk on the internet? I wish Joan would attend or see the children in the park Peter, John and their friend Patrick playing soccer against Brian,Gus and Kevin, Brian smiling  and laughing and having a wonderful time being a father, uncle, and a special uncle to the boy's friends. No big deal about the name, just to let you know I noticed. Love ya, Sally 



Author's Response:

darlinf Sally, you are correct - her her name should be Norma. I must admit I am not the most organized of authors. My notes are on various pieces of paper in no particular order. Some things are written multiple times and others things not at all. Sometimes I have to go back and look in past chapters to fins something. My excuse is that I never, in my wildest dreams, thought this story would continue for so long. I am glad you are able to keep me on the staright and narrow. I think I get points for sticking with a "N" name!!  Having Joan attend a family event, John's Birthday dinner, was not a success. I actually thought about her coming to Thanksgiving but decided against it. Maybe there will be a Christmas visit???  I'll have to see what inspiration hits me. I also have only a vague plan for the story.   Most chapters have something happen that I didn't plan at all when I started to write the chapter.  Thans again for keeping me honest!!!!  Hugs, sweet B 

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: March 29, 2016 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 5

 Hello my darling, sweet B. : I very much enjoyed your chapter 5. This story like your first started on a high note and continued to raise the bar with each new chapter. I can't wait for the Thanksgiving story, who will attend how they get along, I hope it works well for everyone. Maybe Viola comes and brings Joan, Brian loves Jen but I bet deep down he needs his mother's love even if he doesn't admit it. Hope Debbie lets everyone know about her home was paid off by her boys, hope it makes mikey feel very small. Love, your Sally    



Author's Response:

My wonder Sally, always a treat to hear from you!!  I am happy that you are still enjoying thislong saga.  You are too kind with your comments!!!!  I will only say that there will be a LOT of people at Thanksgiving dinner and there is the possibility of a big annoucement.  I'm not 100% sure that Joan is capable of love for someone else???  I have never known Debbie to be close mouthed about anything so I'm sure she will spread the news.  Mikey may feel happy that his mother will have more money to give him without having to pay a mortgage payment.  Thanks for the review!!!!  your sweet Baboo

Reviewer: chadmom63 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2016 03:33 AM · On: Chapter 5

Michael is a lying sack of shit. 

nice chapter!



Author's Response:

I can't disagree about Mikey.  Glad you are enjoying the story.  Thanks for letting me know!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: March 29, 2016 01:58 AM · On: Chapter 5

Another great chapter. Go Justin...I'm glad he didn't mince words with Sara. Now if only someone could help Debbie understand that Michael is a grown man. Really the idea that Ben and he together cannot afford to take care of JR for two days a week is past belief. Debbie will work herself to death just because she can't see the real Michael. It is shameful the way he treats his mother. I'm sure when he hears that Debbie no longer has to worry about the mortgage that he will look upon it as an opportunity to get even more money out of her. What a leech. Glad to see Peter get some pampering. Enjoyed all the B&J interaction, as always. Such a pleasure to see how happy they are together. Hope Brian survives the Thanksgiving dinner.

Author's Response:

Great to know that you enjoyed the latest chapter.  Justin had tried being nice with Sara and that didn't seem to work.  This approach seemed to be much more effective.  In Debbie's eyes Mikey can really do no wrong.  Once Mieky knows Debbie doesn't have to pay a mortgage that could be a problem.  I think Peter enjoyed his day of pampering from Alice and Grandmom Jen, it was well deserved.  Brian willingly signed up for th TDay dinner we'll see how he handles the reality of it all.  I'm sure you know I LOVE to get reviews so thank you very much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2016 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 5

I should remember for future reference not to read this before I go to sleep. I actually had dreams about it, about a different ending to this chapter. I had to re-red it in the morning just to make sure my dream wasn't real. BTW...Deb had better be ok! (hint about my dream. woke up paniced!)

I can't believe what a complete boob Micheal is. Buying stuff online and having mommy supplementing his income. Pathetic! well, now that B&J know about it all, I'm glad they will be paying off the mortgage. I really hope that Deb stops deluding herself about Micheal. It's heartbreaking to see her working this hard and Micheal having no qualms about her doing it dispite her health. 

Thrilled that Brian "came up" with the idea of having Thanksgiving at Britin. could prove to be an interesting evening! Just think...Mama bear (Jen) and Alice in protective mode...I can just see them coming down on the likes of Micheal at the dinner. alice's familiy won't know what hit them. LOL!!!

Another FABULOUS update!!! shame about the data loss on your previous chapter. You know I reviewed it already, but I'll try again when I have a few more minutes to spare. 

And that little twerp being expelled...fantastic! HA! 

Will await the next update with bated breath!! 

really hope that Deb takes that week off properly and gets her health back to where it should. Now I'm really worried. (again...the nightmare I had)

cheers!!!

Elaine

 



Author's Response:

Hi Elaine, just keep repeating to yourself, low angst story, low angst story, and you'll be fine.  Debbie's high blood pressure is a "canon thing" she passed out at the diner in the series but she lasted until the end of the show.  Not sure what it will take to hae Debbie to stop deluding herslef about Mikey.  There is a lot of love & guilt that cloud her vision of her son.  Alice's family did get a taste of the B&J world at the 4th of July party.  I'm sure there are lots of discussions around the family dinner tables after spending time the the Taylor-Kinney home.  It is great that Bob was able to restore the database but I am in deep mourning over the loss of reviews, so very sad.  But life goes on and you and my other loyal readers help me forget the pain.  LOL

Glad that you enjoyed this chapter and hope you sleep remians undisturbed.  Thanks for all your support!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   Bill 

Reviewer: Admin (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2016 08:53 PM · On: Chapter 5

Another great chapter, Bill. Loved the conversation between Jennifer and her son, and the twist with Debbie.  Not surprised she would be working extra hours to help support her son, even though his habit is as close to gambling as you can get. I can see the same type of adrenalin at work here.  And that Sara is a piece of work!  Glad that she was put in her place.

Oh, and is that quote from "Network?"  You had me thinking about that from the start - ha!

Looking forward as always to your next chapter. Thank you. ~Kim



Author's Response:

Hi Kim, I say the "Admin" and thought I was in trouble for something!!!  Happy to know you enjoyed this chapter.  Jennifer and Justin don't get a lot of opportunities but just one on one time.  Jennifer is a great believer in tea & conversation.  Debbie is always blind to any pf Mikey's faults.  Is is kind of sad for both of them.  You are correct that quote from "Network", you get trivia points for knowing that answer!!!  I appreciate all your support!!  Thanks,  Bill

Reviewer: julia005 (Anonymous) · Date: March 27, 2016 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 5

(Sorry I didn´t review lately, #RL kept me busy & exhausted)

Again, very nice chapter, new twists. Poor Debbie! I think she needs some eye-opening. So sad Michael blamed JR for his expenses.

Thanksgiving will be an interesting get-together.....Brian and Michael will meet...argh!

We will see! I am enjoying everything !



Author's Response:

Happy to hear from you.  Debbie is always so blind to any of Mikey's faults.  He remains an immature selfish man.  I agree that Thanksgiving will be interesting.  Glad you are still enjoying the story.  Thanks for the review!!!  Bill

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2016 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 5

Surprise, surprise.  What a wonderful holiday treat.  Happy Easter.  Now on to the story.  Kids!  What can you do with them.  First we have Sara Bloom wanting to award rich kids, then we have Michael who is conning Debbie into giving him money she doesn't have.  The good thing is that Joe was expelled.

With Sara, her father could discontinue funding the grandkids education.  For Michael, perhaps with the Thanksgiving meal being at Brian and Justin's, someone could bring up just how much he's been paying for J.R.   Somehow I don't think Ben has a clue that Mikey is getting extra money out of Deb, or that the comic book store isn't doing well. 

Future chapters should be filled with wonderful details!



Author's Response:

Happy Easter back to you!!!! Sara and Michael seem to want more no matter how much they get. I think you are correct about Ben not knowing about Debbie supplying Michael wth money.  He no doubt keeps his "collection" at his store.  Always great to hear form you.  Thanks for the review!!!!!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: March 27, 2016 03:25 PM · On: Chapter 5

Sorry the MW fix lost my last review. So where and when will Brian yell at Michael before or after Thanksgiving Dinner.  I know what Debbie's Christmas present is and would not be surprised if a few other appliances got replaced at the same time.  I almost think losing Harkins might gain Kinnetic accounts from all the people who have been waiting for the bullies to lose.  As to the babies and when people find out much as I want Jennifer and Alice to know I kind of hope Justin and Brian sit down first with John Peter and Gus and tell them what is going on by the way I now want a Boy and a girl instead of 2 girls just not 2 boys I think the drama will be in learning to deal with a girl and she will be a lot easier child than JR could ever be. As to Sara I think she may finally be getting it but I doubt it will stick maybe with both her father and brother making her stop she might but I see her trying again at least one more time to waste the foundations money. A new chapter is always a nice surprise was thinking April Fools day so early was a surprise. Can't wait to read about Thanksgiving hope it doesn't take to long hint hint hint hint yeah yeah I am mentally beating you with a sledgehammer to get me more :)



Author's Response:

U know I hate to lose reviews!!!  First I have to say you are back in my mind again which is just a little creepy!  I don't think losing Harkins will cause anyone to leave Kinnetik and his competitor will no doubt become a customer since Brian said the account executibe should offer that business a great deal.  Gus, Jennifer as well as John & Peter will definitely be told about the babies before a general announcement.  Gus will need some reassurance that Daddy & Papa will still love him just as much after the babies arrive.  When even her family was telling her she was wrong may finnaly get through to Sara.  I think her husband is the instigator there.  I was able to discern your vague message about wishing for a new chapter.  Thanks, as always for your support.  Your comments are always fun to read,  Bill 

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2016 06:26 AM · On: Chapter 5

    I took exception to Justin’s reason for not giving the two plaques to


what may have been very deserving students.  That they went to an


elitist school and most likely their parents were rich had nothing to do


with their getting the award. Not that there aren’t better placed to


spend the limited money the charity had, but Justin’s the reasons given


were wrong.  As least that is the way I saw it and my objection is


much stronger, but …. I am moving on.  I do believe that had Brian


been there, he would have corrected Justin.




  I can’t wait until they tell Jen about the twins.  She is going to be, well


I don’t have the words to describe how happy she will be.  As a


reader, I am happy for her.




  Michael is a collector.  Collectors are not poor, they are often worth


a lot of money. but don’t have cash.  I believe Michael has severe


problems..  A collector without money may as well be gambler.  Just


paying Debbie’s mortgage is not enough.  Some sort of intervention is


necessary.


 


  Thanks for the Story and the Chapter.


DavidR




Author's Response:

Don't forget that Justin offered Sara an alternative, profressionally printed certificates and gift certificates for the gallery gift shop. Justin just didn't think the charity should pay for those plaques. Her father and brother did agree with Justin. I am glad you were able to put that behind you!! You are right I think Jennifer will go crazy!!! I think the twins may be a Thanksgiving day announcement but they will have to tell Jen & Gus first.  Debbie is so blind to all Mikey's faults. I like your analogy about collectors without money. Thanks for all your support I always enjoy your comments!!!!!!! Bill

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: March 27, 2016 06:11 AM · On: Chapter 5

Still loving this story and the updates are great.  Thank you for continuing to write in this universe.   I really liked how eveyone came together to help Debbie-  now if only Debbie would realize that Michael is lying - we would all be in a happier place



Author's Response:

I am happy to know you are still enjoying the story after all this time!  Debbie has a hard time seeing anything wrong with Mikey even though everyone else sees his behavior very clearly.  Thanks for always reviewing!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2016 06:00 AM · On: Chapter 5

I have so many harmful things I'd like to do to Michael going through my head right now. He really is a manipulative shit - poor Deb - but she really needs to wake up to what he's doing. Like Sara's behaviour - the bottom line - their behaviour won't change until they get 'cut off'- if then..... I wonder if Ben realizes how much Deb is giving Michael? Looking forward to what's next.

Author's Response:

I agree that Debbie needs to wake up about Mikey but until she does there isn't much anyone else can do.  I bet Ben doesn't know about Debbie's contributions because they go to buy toys on the internet for Mikey.  Thanks for always being so faithful about posting reviews, I appreciate, love, love, love to read reviews!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: starfire64 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2016 05:58 AM · On: Chapter 5

Oh boy, Sara started out being a little, you-know-what but after Sidney’s dressing down I’m glad she changed her tune.

That was really nice of B/J to offer to pay off Deb’s mortgage like that, now if they could only do something about Michael, LOL.

Mmmm, lemon bars, banana pudding and Lasagna…you’re making me hungry, haha. Looking forward to the next chapter :  ) *Hugs* Janet



Author's Response:

Hi Janet, I think Sara learned a lesson.  Justin was not going to let her push him around again.  B&J are grateful for all Debbie's help in the past.  I think Debbie is too protective of Mikey for anyone to do something about him.  I wish I had someone to make me banana pudding!!!  Thanks for the review, I appreciate your support.  Hope you and Mom have a great Easter!!!  Bill

Reviewer: starfire64 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2016 05:31 AM · On: Chapter 4

Just reviewing this chapter again :  ) Joanie lives in her own little world when it comes to Clare and the boys are going to have their hands full with twins, it should be interesting once they are born. Great chapter, Bill, I liked it just as much the second time as I did the first. I see you also have a new chapter up so I’m off to read and review it :  ) *Hugs* Janet   



Author's Response:

Thanks for the repeat. I hate to lose my review because I love them so much!!! Hugs back to you, Bill

Reviewer: Blossomlegs (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2016 05:28 AM · On: Chapter 5

Fantastic update!  Love Justin taking control and setting Sara straight.

Too bad Debbie just won't open her eyes and see the real Mikey.  Glad Brian and Justin are there for her. Looks like Mikey isn't going to help Mel and Linz out with their new house either.

Brian better find his hiding place before Thanksgiving.

Fabulous as always!  Thanks for sharing!

JoAnn



Author's Response:

Hi JoAnn, glad to know you are still emjoying the story. I think the instances of bullying made Justin decidee not to take any more crap from Sara. Debbie really kind of help Mikey to not grow up and accept adult reponsibilities.  Brian and Justin are grateful for what she has done for them in the past.  Doesn't look like Mikey is going to provide much help for the new house.  I'm sure Brian has some hiding places in mind.  Thanks for the nice comments!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2016 04:51 AM · On: Chapter 5

Aww.  Brian is a real softie.  Michael is an overgrown fool that takes advantage of his mother.  Unfortunately I know someone very much like him in real life.  

Can't wait to read about Thanksgiving at the mansion.

Oh and I'm soooo glad that Justin told off that spoiled brat, Sara.



Author's Response:

Brian has a hard time saying no to his Sunshine ans he knows Debbie isn't up to hosting Thanksgivng this year.  He has a good heart but prefers not to be too obvious about it.  Debbie plays right along with Mikey, they need some family counseling.  I think Thanksgiving will be a very interesting day at the Taylor-Kinney home.  Sara sure was outnumbered at that meeting, hope she learned her lesson.  Thanks for reviewing, I LOVE to get them!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: March 27, 2016 04:42 AM · On: Chapter 5

Such a good chapter, lots of action and lots of love. I like it that Jennifer and Alice know B&J well enough to know something is going on. And how well Brian is handling Thanksgiving.

Author's Response:

Happy you enjoyed this chapter, thanks for letting me know.  Wait until Aline & Jennifer find out what B&J are not telling them.  I think that might be a Thanksgiving announcement.  I think Brian is trying to be a good sport about Thanksgiving but his stress level will probably be pretty high.  Thanks for the review!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2016 03:59 AM · On: Chapter 5

Brian and Justin are such wonderful men. 

Michael is a sneaky, selfish, money-grubbing POS.

Glad Joe got expelled.

Brian and Justin are so perfect for each other.

Great chapter.

 

Lorie



Author's Response:

Mikey is a product of his upbringing.  Debbie is a nice person but she has made Mikey helpless because she is always there to take care of his problems.  Joe need to go, guess he is surprises Daddy couldn't fix it for him.  At least he is learning early that his parents can't slve all his problems.  Glad you enjoyed this chapter.  Thanks for taking time to review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2016 12:47 AM · On: Chapter 4

Still loving this story. I don't remember what was in my lost review, but I'm thrilled that it's twins. Great chapter.

Lorie



Author's Response:

Thanks for reposting your review.  Not sure what happened, kind a a drag when we lose info but life goes on.  Bill

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2016 12:33 AM · On: Chapter 4

Joanie's a trip and a half, thinking that because she says John and Peter need to see their mother that that's going to happen.  Good thing that Brian told her off.

Justin was excited especially when they found out there were two babies!!!  Wonder what names they'll come up with.

Then there was Peter's confrontation with Joe.  I couldn't get over them trying to suspend Peter when he was not in any way at fault.  Then the never of Joe's parents trying to intimadate Brian and Justin.  Not going to happen.  Frank's going to find out he need Kinnetik more than Kinnetik need him.

Love Alice with the frying pan.  Shame she didn't get to use it.



Author's Response:

My friend, you know how I LOVE to get reviews.  Thanks for reposting your review.  As a reward I just posted chapter 5!!!  You're the best.  Thanks,  Bill

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: March 12, 2016 11:24 PM · On: Chapter 3

We should all have an Alice. Have to love Jennifer. That must have been a new experience for Melanie hearing all those home truths. I hadn't considered the fact that Melanie had been led around by the nose by Lindsay. But, seeing it laid out like that, yes. I hope Melanie is able to get the house. She should have listened to Jennifer and made the offer right away. Also, glad that Jennifer spoke up about Michael's lack of support for his own kid. Am enjoying this story just as much as the first one. So glad you decided to give us the sequel. Thanks.



Author's Response:

It would be wonderful to have an Alice.  She and Jennifer are allies when it comes to taking care of the boys.  I agree, I don't a lot of people tell Mel just how things are.  I think Jennifer gave her a lot of food for thought.  Mel should appreciate hearing from another strong woman.  I am really happy you are enjoying the contining story!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: March 12, 2016 10:55 PM · On: Chapter 2

What a great chapter. I so agree with all that was said about bullying. And, so often it is true that they learn it from the parents. How dare Anthony try to sucker punch Brian! Glad J. was watching. Anyway, I enjoyed very much reading about the Halloween outing and about John and Peter's activities. I laughed out loud over the Grim Reaper...brought back memories of similar incidences from when I was a kid. My mother was the biggest prankster in the world. No one was safe when she was around. On to the next chapter. Thanks.

Author's Response:

Glad you are still enjoying the story. Bullies are BAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! My mother would sometimes hide in the closet when I came home from sschool and when I went to hang up my coat she would scream. I fell for it every time!!! Thanks for the review. I LOVE to get them!!!!!!!! Bill

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: March 12, 2016 10:30 PM · On: Chapter 1

Just caught up with this sequel and am loving it! I see I have two more chapters to catch up. Looking forward to the trick or treating. I always enjoy the Gus and Kevin interaction and, of course, Brian as vampire should prove interesting. Exciting news about the new baby. I see Michael is as responsible as ever...he can't afford any support?? Off to read more. Thanks.

Author's Response:

Glad you emjoyed the start of the sequel, hope the next two chapters don't disappoint you. Mel told Mikey she didn't expect any support from him before JR was even born. He is not a person who adapts to change! Thanks for letting me know you are enjoying the continuation of the story. Bill

Reviewer: chadmom63 (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2016 02:03 AM · On: Chapter 3

I love how Jennifer put Mel in her place. Go Jennifer!

 

nice chapter. 



Author's Response:

Jennifer doesn't let anyone take advantage of her boys.  Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed this chapter.  I love to hear from the readers!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: Oliviatheolive (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2016 12:21 AM · On: Chapter 1

I'm so glad that I took the time to read this- I've been playing around with the idea of starting this but I thought that I would need to read the first story but for the most part I could follow everything prefectly- although there were more than one character I was a little lost on. I love Justin's and Brian's weekly date thing- too cute and romantic. Brian scheming to score with Justin when they went out to gaze at the stars was adorable. I'm happy to see that Mel and Brian left on good terms and there's going to be a new baby. Yay! 

Olivia

 



Author's Response:

Hi Olivia, I am glad you are enjoying Holiday Happenings.  I think you would enjoy the first story but I know it is quite a committment to read 100 chapters!!!  I am not sure I would have committed to writing 100 chaoters at the start of the story.  If you have any questions from the previous story that you MUST know the answer to, just post a review with your questions and I'll answer them.  Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed the story, I love to hear from the readers!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: March 10, 2016 07:34 PM · On: Chapter 3

sweet B,  I'm ready for Thanksgiving, Chistmas, and New Years stories. The one I'm so ready for is the mini sunshine or maybe two. I wonder if Joan gets the help she needs. I hope Brian and Justin tell moron mikey that he is dead to them, no disrespect for Justin and the boys (Peter and John) will be tolerated, to concern himself with Ben and their foster son and with Jenny R.,and no tolerance of finding him at his home--he will press charges for trespassing. Love you Sally



Author's Response:

Hi Sally, glad you left a second review with the correct salutation.  I was quite disappointed that there was no "sweet B" at the start of your first review.  We have some news in the next chpater on mini Sunshine.  I have been out of twon for a few days so the update is taking a little longer than it should.  I believe that Mikey is like a brother to Brian and there are too many memories for Brian to cut him off completely.  Always happy to hear from you!!!!  Later, Sweet B 

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: March 10, 2016 07:37 AM · On: Chapter 3

Enjoyed this chapter, can't understand why Melanie didn't want to use Jen in the first place.Jen wouldn't sell them a piece of junk, she would do her best for Jenny R. and Gus. Mel should know Brian and Justin only want to help her and the children. Mel seems to appreciate all the help and even saw Brian was a good father, I guess she felt she had no control over her life, funny when Brian had to give up some control to Justin is when he knew how much he loved Justin they shared, compromized ,loved each other and John and Peter and truly became a family. your Sally



Author's Response:

I think Mel is trying to hold onto some comtrol of her life.  Tough to controlthings when someone else is paying the bills.  I think Mel does appreciate B&J's help but she is a proud woman so it is hard for her to admit how she contrinuted to screwing up her life.  Glad you enjoyed this chapter.  Bill 

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2016 01:24 AM · On: Chapter 3

I always enjoy your updates and re-immersing myself in Justin and Brian's life (and their extended family) in this series. I just reread this chapter because I didn't have a chance to leave feedback previously.

I really enjoy Jennifer's no-nonsense, common-sense approach with various family members. Good to see her straighten out Melanie, who needed to have interference vs. assistance defined. Sheesh. Why is it that Michael and Ben can't provide some monetary assistance? I know they don't have as much money as Brian and Justin but, even so, I don't get it. I know Red Cape Comics doesn't show much (if any) profit, but Ben must bring in a good salary as a professor at Carnegie Mellon (and maybe some revenue from his books).

I'm looking forward to the next installment.



Author's Response:

Happy to know you are still enjoying the story.  Jennifer will always stand up for her boys and point out when others don't treat them right or give them proper credit.  I think she may turn her attention to Mikey & Ben and there may be more help coming from them.  Thanks for taking time to review!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: Blossomlegs (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2016 08:25 AM · On: Chapter 3

Brilliant update.  Love how you portray Jen, she doesn't take any sh-- from anyone, who wants to put down Brian and or Justin. 

Justin did well in explaining to Gus about bulling.  Peter was great with his approach in helping Gus learning to count and add.

Eager to see if Mel will ask Ben to put up the shelves and help with the new house.

Anxious to hear more of the coming new baby, especially the "family" thoughts.

Thanks for sharing, looking forward to next update.

JoAnn



Author's Response:

Hu JoAnn, Happy to know you are still enjoying the story, thanks for letting me know!!! I suspect Jennifer will mentin the closet organizers to Debbie who will pass it along to Ben. There will be some baby update in the next chapter. I don't think there will be any annoucment for a little while. Brian & Justin will enjoy their secret!!! Thanks for the review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bill

Reviewer: Blossomlegs (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2016 04:03 AM · On: Chapter 1

Brilliant.  Love Jennifer in her protecting mother mode to her "boys". She doesn't let anyone get away bad mouthing or hurting them.Mel needs to let go of being jealous of Brian and Justin and all that they do for her, Liz, Gus and Jenny because basically she would have zero, Mikey surly wouldn't help them. It looks like Mikey doesn't even talk to Ben about Mel and Linz needing help, all he does is complain about Justin. Love how Gus learns to count and add using the candy, nis cousins are very clever.

Looking forward to the new baby and how he or she is goig to effect Linz nd Mikey.

Fantastic update, always looking forward to next.

Thanks for sharing!

JoAnn 



Author's Response:

Hi JoAnn, glad you enjoyed the latest chapter.  Jennifer does look out for all her boys.  She is one person we know will be thrilled by the baby news.  I think Mel just has a difficult time acceting that she needs so much help.  I think she lnows how much she owes B&J she just hates not being able to stand on her own and having to ackowledge that she screwed up.  Gus is happy to do anything that gets the attention of those big boy cousins.  Luckily those cousins are happy to spend time with Gus.  So you don't belive that Linds & Mikey will be thrilled about the new baby???  Hmmmmm  that's interesting.  Thanks for the review, you know I love them!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: starfire64 (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2016 03:03 AM · On: Chapter 3

Hi Bill  :  ) I apologize for the late review, LOL, love Mickey Mouse pancakes, especially with whipped cream and chocolate chips for the eyes, Ha- channeling my inner child here. The candy addition game was a cool idea  :  ) I like the fact that Jen isn’t pulling any punches here, she’s a strong woman. Great chapter, looking forward to the next :  ) *Hugs* Janet



Author's Response:

Hi Janet,  never too late for a review!!  Really pancakes of any size are wonderful.  Jennifer will always look out for boys and anyone not treating them right is in serious trouble.  Hope you continue to enjoy the story!!!  Hugs back to you,  Bill

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2016 07:29 AM · On: Chapter 3

There is something seriously wrong with Melanie.  Her dislike,


resentment, jealousy, whatever …., is way beyond anything I can


understand.  I just don’t get it.  Both Brian and Justin have done so


much for Lindsey and Melanie, and treated JR with care and affection.


So as they say, just what bug is up Melanie ass?  She doesn’t have to


be their best friend, but if not for Gus, they can just get lost. 


DavidR



Author's Response:

I think her personality makes it very diffiuclt for Melanie to accept help, especially from Brian.  She is in a difficult position and not handling well at all.  Mother Taylor told her some hard truths and hopefully got her thinking about hoer poor attitude.  You are correct if not for Gus their would not be the huge cash flow to Lindsay and Melanie.  Always happy to hear your perspective, thanks for the review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2016 01:12 PM · On: Chapter 3

Hi, Bill! Another great chapter.;)  I love the little details you put into your stories. Loved Jennifer in full protective mode, and how strong you are depicting her in this 'verse.  I always loved her character on the show, and how she grew during that time as Justin's mother.  Loved the reference she made to 'my sons.'   Great.  And Gus is so cute in this 'verse, too! 

Melanie - ugh.  Jennifer certainly put her in her place; good for her.  I kind of feel sorry for Justin and Brian here as far as the situation with Melanie & Lindsay goes.  If not for how much they love Gus, I think they would tell both women to take a hike! How much support are they expected to provide? At some point, they need to make it clear they won't be their money tree forever. Hopefully at some point that will happen.  I respect Brian and Justin, though, for always being there for their son, whereas Michael and Ben have been woefully deficient in that area. At least Ben sounds like he's trying to provide for the kids in some manner.

As always, a very enjoyable read, Bill!  Looking forward to future updates.  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Hi Kim, always thrilled to hear that you are enjoying my story, I have loved so many of yours.  I liked Jenifer in the show as well, once she ditched Craig!  You are correct if it wasn't for Gus B&J would have stopped the money train long ago.  Iy always annoyed me that Mel was so "independent" but never objected to Lindsay shaking down Brian for money.  At least now they have the written custody agreement so Gus can't be used for blackmail.  Hopefully if they buy this house the money flow can at least slow down.  Mikey likes the fun of being a parent but doesn't really want any responsibility for his daughter. 

Thanks for taking time to review this chapter. I know you have a busy life so I appreciate abd you know how much writers love to hear from the readers!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: March 03, 2016 08:16 AM · On: Chapter 3

I like Jennifer in her Mama Bear mode!

Have a good night!

Author's Response:

Me too!!!!  She is formidable.  Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed this chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2016 06:01 AM · On: Chapter 3

Score one for Mother Taylor lol! I absolutely love how Jennifer didn't take any guff from Mel and rightly put her in her place. Keep up the good work ;)

Author's Response:

Mother Taylor always looks out for her boys and she felt Mel was not treating them fairly.  Glad you enjoyed the latest chapter.  Thanks for the review!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2016 03:30 AM · On: Chapter 3

Great chapter. Gus is such a sweet and caring kid. 

It was good to see Jen put Mel in her place about the house 

and about letting Brian and Justin pay for everything but not 

wanting Ben to do anything to help.

Love that you continued this story.

Lorie



Author's Response:

Gus is a sweetheart, I always think maybe that would have been Brian if he had love and acceotance as a child.  Jennifer is always ready to defend her boys and I'm pretty sure she finds Mikey annoying.  I am glad you are enjoying reading the continuing saga.  I am enjoying writing it and love to hear from the readers.  Thanks for the review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2016 07:00 PM · On: Chapter 3

It would serve Mel right if, Brian and Justin purchased the house and rented it to her, instead of buying it for her. Maybe she needs to stand on her own two feet before she takes on and debt...

Later ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

Hi Kathleen, I thought about that idea. Wouldn't that just serve Melanie right!  Not sure I can be that mean to her but it is food for thought.  Thanks for taking time to review!!!!  Later,  Bill

Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2016 06:32 PM · On: Chapter 3

I think I missed a review on teh last chapter. sorry. :( works has been a bit crazy busy.

I really enjoyed this chapter. The whole candy/math thing with Gus and Peter was sweet. Talk about making math fun! Kid of wish someone had done that with me when I was a kid. Not other way to explain that circle than "family". It's wonderful. The yare family personified. They represent how families should be and should strive for. yes there are hiccups at times, but these guys all seem to bring it all together well. Alice and Charlie give them the necessary kick in the ass when needed, and the boys consede to their experience. 

I like how you are touching on teh bullying aspect. hopefully Margaret will be able to show Tony's parents the correct path, adn then in turm Tony. That way not having another Chris on their hands.

And Jennifer. I know I know...we all extoll out love of your Jennifer. She's really just fucking fabulous though!!!!!!!!! for one thing, you used one of my favorite sayings. Get off the cross as someone needs the wood. I had to chuckle when I read that. I never hear that expression. I love using it and it's effective. :) Jennifer is certainly able to put Mel in her place and doesit honestly. It's true that she tends to talk about her sense of strength and control, but seldom really takes action on it. Again, it's the sense of entitlements she seems to have, yet she'll fight you on that perspective, denying it whole heartedly.

Fanatstic chapter!! thansk for this. I really didn't get the sense that it was overdue or anything. Honestly, I'm waitingon updates on other fics that take faaaaaaaaaaaaaaar longer. It's always a happy moment for me when I see that you've added a new chapter.

Cheers,

Elaine



Author's Response:

Hi Elaine, always so great to read your comments and not just beacuse you are always so nice about the story. I have to say even as a kid I'm not sure i could have been conviced math was fun. Luckily Gus is a nicer boy than I was and he loves those "big boy" cousins. Alice & Charlie are an intergral part of the Taylor-Kinney household. They will really need them even more when a new baby arrives. Bullying is bad and I think it starts at home so that is where it needs to be stopped. I would be so sad if someone did not love Jennifer. It is hard to bullshit Mother Taylor she just does not allow it. Melanie found herself facing off with a really strong woman who is always looking out for her boys. Glad you enjoyed the last two chapters and thanks for being patient. It is always a happy moment for ME when I see you review and I mean that!!!!! Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bill

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2016 04:39 PM · On: Chapter 3

Love, love, love Jen in this chapter.  She laid it all on the line.  Especially the part about asking Ben to help with the closets.  Great idea.  Also Peter helping Gus count his candy.  Then you threw in fresh baked bread.  Now I'm hungry.



Author's Response:

Hello my fathful reviewer!!!! Always happy to see your comments and know you are still enjoying this saga. Jennifer always looks out for her boys and anyone who doesn't treat them right better take cover. The Lucce father & son are lucky Grandmom Jen wasn't taking Gus & Kevin trick or treating Anthny might have gotten the "Ron treatment" from her. I think if I lived with Alice I would wind up one of those people that has to be rescued by tearing down a wall of their hosue to get them out. Thanks as always for your support!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bill

Reviewer: BlueButterfly (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2016 02:26 PM · On: Chapter 3

Mel dear, you are not in control of your life. If you want total control, finance your own damn life. Jennifer is right. Talk is cheap. Be a strong woman instead of just givig lip service and think people will accept it. Nobody is fooled. You can't have it both ways by making B/J pay for every damn thing and have them keep their mouth shut too. And let JR's dads do something. Geeze. JR is going to grow up expecting her uncles paying for everything too while she can just sit on her lazy butt like her parents. Poor girl.



Author's Response:

I think Jennifer gave Melanie lots of food for thought.  Mel was always kind of willing to take Brian's money but never appreciate it.  Brian was smart tp get a custody agreement for Gus in writing.  Lndsay may have been the one gambling but while Mel was sitting at home she shoudl have been paying more attention to what was going on.  Mother Taylor becomes Mother Tigress if she thinks anyone is taking advantage of her boys.  Maybe JR will be smart enough to realize how hard her uncles work instead of spending their days in a comic book store.  Glad you enjoyed this chapter!!  Thanks for the review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: March 02, 2016 11:41 AM · On: Chapter 3

Mel ran into Jennifer on the warpath willing to help Mel but protecting Brian, Justin and Gus above all. I think they should make Michael and Ben paint the walls not just install closet organizers. Then they at least contribute something. I like how Peter thought of a learning game for Gus that made it so Gus did not even realize he was learning. Peter could become an amazing Teacher if he continues this way. I like how John is becoming this normal teen age boy and the father and protector of his younger brother it's so good for him. My only complaint is this chapter had too much Mel and Jennifer and not enough Justin and Brian but I guess beggars can't be choosers and I am happy there was a new chapter. Hope to see more soon because you know I check 3 or 4 times a day.




Author's Response:

I don't really like to think about any wall that Mikey would paint.  I never think of him as handy around the house.  Peter is a smart guy and it is always useful to use that "big boy charm" to get kids to buy into your ideas.  Gus probably enjoys his testosterone weekends after time with his Mama and baby sister.  I think John's hormones are starting to kick into high gear.  I agree about a lot of Jen & Mel (not "too much" just a lot) that is why Brian came home from the office early for a little afternoon delight. I was going to end when Ted left Brian's office but thought B&J needed more time together.  The good part of lots of charaters is there are lots of story options, the bad part is trying to give everyone some time in the story.  Always look forward to your comments and I will try and post the next chapter sooner, I always have good intentions but sometimes time gets away from me.  Thanks for not holding a grudge and still posting a review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2016 11:04 AM · On: Chapter 3

Stupid Mel sometimes the family have to work hard to get her to understand its family! Loved Mother Taylor giving Mel the big girl pants sermon

Author's Response:

It can be hard to accet help but if you need help you should accept ot graciously.  Mother Taylor never hesitates to speak her mind.  Mel was smsrt enough to not argue with her!!  Thanks for the review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: julia005 (Anonymous) · Date: March 02, 2016 10:05 AM · On: Chapter 3

thanks for this update - haven´t read it yet (busy, busy, busy, busy)but I so love your phrase "no excuse" for posting not earlier!!!!

That´s great! An artist like you doesn´t need excuses, regrets (ring a bell?).

I like the sequel, I can´t live without our boys anymore!

Thank you!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Hello my friend, hope you get a chance to read this chapter soon and that you enjoy it.  Always nice to hear from you.  Thanks, Bill

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2016 12:58 AM · On: Chapter 2

Hi, Bill! As usual, I'm playing catchup here.;)  Readers are ecstatic you're continuing this fascinating journey with John, Peter, Alice, and so many other original characters, in addition to the ones we know and love.  The only fly in the ointment is Lindsay. Talk about unstable! It will be interesting to see where you take her character ultimately.

Loved the playfulness and sexiness in this chapter! Things are moving along for another little one.  I think they made the right decision in a surrogate; Justin always has had good instincts.;)

As usual, I'll be looking forward to more. Thanks again for agreeing to post on here; we are very lucky to have you as a writer. ~Kim



Author's Response:

Hi Kim, always happy to know you read an enjoyed my story!!!!!!!!!!!  I love Midnight Whispers and really enjoy all the feedbaclk from the readers.  Thanks you so much for all your support!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2016 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 2

Was over the moon happy to see Brian involved with the Halloween. I really don't think he was as unenthusiastic as he wanted to portray himself as. :)  Jenn is teh best Grandmom ever. So sweet with the little gift bags and $ for all the boys. 

The Grimm Reaper thing was funny! So something I would (and have done) to my own kid and her friends. 

I really liked how the bullying issue with Tony was handled. While, I really disllike using the word "hate" I get what point you're getting across. Dfinitely a necessary and appropriate word here. I hope Kevin doesn't have to put up with much more from Tony, but I also hope that (even in teh background) that Tony's parents see the dangers in bullying and to no coddle their son, nor be blind to his behavior.

Sounds like they all had a marvelous time.

Wonderful chapter! Thanks for such a speedy update! 

Elaine



Author's Response:

Hi Elaine, I think getting to wear a black & red cape made Halloween an OK occasion for Brian. He knew he would make a HOT vampire. Jennifer takes her Grandmother duties very seriously. I think pre teen boys trying to act grown up made the perfect victims of the Grim Reaper. Brian tried his best to show Tnoy and his father that it is no fun to gave someone make fun of you. Happy to know you enjoyed this chapter.  Hope you continue to enjoy this story.  Thanks for being so faithful about posting reviews, I appreciate it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: February 22, 2016 01:01 AM · On: Chapter 2

I tried to comment when this chapter first came out, and could not get past security.

I like Justin's plan for the kids.

It was too bad they had to be reminded of Chris, but I liked how Brian handled the two bullies.

Author's Response:

Happy to hear from you.  Glad that you enjoyed the latest chapter.  Sorry about that security thing but there doesn't appear to be a way to fix it,BUMMER!!!  Brian tried his best to make the Snotnoses see the error of their ways but I don't think the message got through.  Thanks for perservereing and posting a review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!    Bill

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2016 07:05 PM · On: Chapter 2

Loved the ending!



Author's Response:

I think that was Brian's favorite part as well!!!  Bill

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2016 06:22 PM · On: Chapter 2

I don't have enough words to tell you how much I love this chapter! Keep up the excellent work.

Author's Response:

WOW!  Thanks, glad to  know you enjoyed.  Thanks for the great review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2016 05:36 PM · On: Chapter 2

Great chapter as always. I love this family. Mr. Kinney was a little bit of a bully himself, He needed to stand up for the children , but calling a kid snotnose is bullying. We know better and so does Brian.

Author's Response:

Glad you liked the chapter. I think the "Snotnose" was deliberate. It showed Tony that even calling people names is hurtful. If you don't like someone calling you Snotnose maybe you realize other people don't like to be called mean names. Might not work but there was a purpose to Brian doing that. I will now climb down off my soapbox and thank you for the review. I love to hear from my reader and appreciate all your support for my stories. Thanks!!!!!!! Bill

Reviewer: Elly (Anonymous) · Date: February 20, 2016 03:16 PM · On: Chapter 2

Thanks for the great Halloween story, I see it all for me, Kevin&Gus and Brian&Justin as vampires.

Chapeau for Brian how he handles the bullying and then Roxanne she pulled herself together, I love her, I cry a tear for her.

And the sexy surprise ending for Brian, super!!!



Author's Response:

Happy that you enjoyed the latest chapter.  Everyone seemed to enjoy their Hallorween except for the Snotnose Family.  I think Roxanne is very happy that ahe had Grandmom Je, Brian, Justin and expecially Gus as part of her family now.  They have made her life better.  Justin in a leather jockstrap and a vampire care probably made Brian forget all about trick or treating.  Thanks for taking time to review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: Blossomlegs (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2016 04:07 AM · On: Chapter 2

Brilliant update! Loved how all the kinney/Taylor household all had plans for halloween.

Fabulous how Jen and Tucker showed up for pics.  Nice going of Brian in handling both the son and father bullies.

Looking forward to the new little Taylor/Kinney addition.

Thanks for sharing, this verse is Brilliant!

fan always,

JoAnn

 



Author's Response:

Hi JoAnn, thanks for the super nice comments.  I am happy that enjoyed the latest chapter.  Lots of different plans for Jallowenn and everyone seemd to have a good time even with Snotnose Jr & Sr trying to wreck trick or treating.  We have a way to go before mini Sunshine makes an appearence.  Thanks for all your support, I appreciate all the reviews!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: ww (Anonymous) · Date: February 19, 2016 11:31 PM · On: Chapter 2

So glad to see a sequel to one of my favorite stories!!

 



Author's Response:

Happy to know you are enjoying the story.  Thanks for taking time to revirew!!!!!  I love to hear from the readers!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2016 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 1

Lol it isn't me obviously MW thinks my reviews are so awesome they need to keep repeating them. I personally think your stories are worth a second hurrah!

Author's Response:

Thanks.  Always a pleasure to hear from you!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2016 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 2

Loved it! I knew those capes would come in handy...

Hugs ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

I think Justin had that in mind from the beginning. Thanks for the revew!!! Hugs back, Bill

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2016 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 2

Great chapter! LOL, Justin sure knows how to manipulate Brian via their children (present and future). :D

Really liked the way Brian (and Justin) dealt with the bullying father and son. Prejudice is too often passed from one generation to the next. Justin and Brian caused Roxanne to rethink whether ignoring Tony was the best course of action.

Fun, sexy ending to the chapter too. Hooray for "vampire" sex! ;)



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed this chapter.  Justin knows Brian's weaknesses for sure.  I think education can help stop that pattern of prejudice, hope so!  Hard to know what the best way to handle bullies is but I'm not a fan of ignoring them.  I like the idea of an XXX rated Justin vampire, I bet Brian LOVED that idea.  Thanks for the review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 19, 2016 06:26 PM · On: Chapter 2

Hey my sweet Babboo, loved this chapter, I certainly can "see" Gus and Kevin as mini vampires bet Justin and Brian were sexy as hell. It was bad enough that Tony was a bully but it appears it's in his DNA. Snotnose senior seems to have taught his son early in life how to be a bully and how to pick a victim who can't fight back. I really like Justin telling Brian that when Gus can no longer get his father to do things that little sunshine will be able to bat his blue eyes at daddy and Brian will do whatever the child is asking. You said I must read a great deal and I do, I retired 2 months shy of age 62, after 47 years of office work at UK med center you get burned out.At age 40 I went to live with my widow mother and she died in July 2015 at the age of 90 she was only sick maybe six weeks. So needless to say I have alot of time on my hands. I've read qaf fiction fore years and have taken up coloring into the new and wonderful adult coloring books I've found it work wonders for stress and blood pressure, but reading was always my first love and when it's great story it's hard to put down.Your chapters have given me great pleasure. thank you, always  your Sally   

 



Author's Response:

You were lucky to have Mom with you as long as you did.  My parents both died in their 60's.  I think SN Jr learned by example from SS Sr.  Bullies are very good at picking victims that they know won't or can't fight back.  Bullies are loathsome human beings!  Justin knows how battin his blue eyes often gets the best of Brian so he knows a little mini Sunshine will have Brian wrapped around their finger.  If you like coloring you should get some paints and try your hand at creating your own scenes and become a Justina - great artist.  I read a lot myself and always have.  Really happy that you enjoy my stories; I enjoy wiritng them and really, really enjoy hearing from readers!!!!!  My dear Sally, thanks for all your support!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Sweet B 

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2016 11:29 AM · On: Chapter 2

Bullying is a totally hot topic for Brian and Justin and they have reasons. Hopefully Tony will have learnt a lesson tonight and he thinks on to what bullying and 'teasing' does

Author's Response:

Would be great if Tony learned a lesson but he certainly is not getting much good examples at home.  Mommy & Daddy Lucce are delusional and twisted.  Thanks for the review, I look forward to the rerun review.  Bill

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2016 07:15 AM · On: Chapter 2

Now that's a halloween story.  I'm glad that Brian took a stand on bullying.  Brian dressed as a Vampire had to be HOT!



Author's Response:

Happy you enjoyed Chapter 2.  We all know how seriously Brian & Justin take bullying!  How about Justin bedroom vampire costume, that was pretty hot too.  Always happy to see your review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2016 07:03 AM · On: Chapter 2

Ahh yes, Justin is diabolical in his plans....LOL Poor, poor Brian - I bet secretly he loves it. Laughed out loud at the grim reaper - Justin isn't the only one with a 'diabolical' plan...LOL. Tony and his father - not good. There isn't really any good way of dealing with bullies. Walking away, obviously can be quite dangerous, standing up to them makes them retreat, only to think of doing something worse. Yep - I agree with the boys - really do hate bullies. Nice finish with Justin surprise for Brian....

Author's Response:

I think you are correct Brian probably loves that Justin knows his weakness & love for Gus and surely a min sunshine will have the same power over his Daddy.  I think the boys will remember Josh's Halloween party for a long time.  Maybe some even had to go change their underwear after the grim reaper episode.  Probaby most of us have either experienced bullying or seen bullying so it is something we can all understand & abhor!  Glad to know you enjoyed the latest chapter.  As always, thank you so much for all your reviews!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: February 19, 2016 06:24 AM · On: Chapter 2

Enjoying this.

Author's Response:

Thanks for letting me know!!!  Hope you continue to enjoy the story!!!  Bill

Reviewer: shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: February 19, 2016 05:31 AM · On: Chapter 2

Halloween my favorite holiday since it comes so close to my birthday and my first birthday party everyone got a little pumpkin full of treats. I love how Justin played Brian and pretty much told him him he will continue to do it for years to come I still see a little blond haired baby boy and girl but the whole idea of twins still makes me think Brian will just call Justin  an over achiever.  The bullying thing I see coming back somewhere in this story though my concern is it will be because either Kevin or Patrick were hurt by him. I can almost see one of the next holidays in a hospital while someone is recovering. Not mind reading it's just bullying never ends well around Justin and Brian. I hope the next chapter comes as quick as it felt like this one did, I was not even a little bit expecting to see this yet. Nice to find before bed time



Author's Response:

Mr friend, fast review!!  I have a friend whose birthday is Halloween.  Justin know how to play Brian without even breaking a sweat.  I wouldn't spend too much time worrying about Tony.  I think his parents may have an awakening about his issues.  Glad that my update schedule met with your approval.  Thank, as always, for your support!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: starfire64 (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2016 05:30 AM · On: Chapter 2

Hey Bill  :  ) OMG, I wish I could see that grim reaper costume, I can just picture that in my head, the lights suddenly going off and then when they come back on, there’s the reaper standing there, what a hoot  ;  ) brings to mind the time one of my cousin’s did the headless horseman thing….complete with a black horse, at a Halloween party years ago. I also like how Brian handled the bully situation, especially Anthony, you meet them halfway and it throws them off balance, they don’t know how to deal with that.  Great chapter, Bill, looking forward to the next :  ) *Hugs* Janet



Author's Response:

Hi Janet, glad you enjoyed this Halloween chapter.  I can just see the room of pre teen boys being terrified but afterwards denyng it.  Brian will never let bullyng go unanswered we all know that.  Thanks for the fast review!!!  Hugs back to you,  Bill

Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2016 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 1

Hi Bill:

Sorry for the delayed review. I've been out of town on business. I was so excited to see the second "book" in the series! Naturally, it starts off briliantly! I am so excited to see what this part of the series brings about for all these characters.

I can't wait to see what happens with the baby! will there be twins?? either way, even 1 little baby sunshine wil be thrilling. I get the feeling that as much as Lindsey may improve, this news may not go over well at all. 

the 2 boys are wonderful! I love how Peter is looking out for Gus. Glad brian was able to communicate that to Mel. 

I really wish that people would stop looking to Brian and Justin as ATM machines. I get that Mel says she doesn't like being beholden to them financially, but in all honesty, I'm wondering if a bit if her thinks that they should. she says all teh right things...but is she really regretful of constantly having her hands out. As much as Micheal claims he doesn't have the $$, we all know he does. justin set him up to have it. If she really doesn't want to have to keep going back to Brian, she needs to sit down with Micheal and Ben. They NEED to contribute more. It's not Brian and justins total responsibility to cover Mel, Lindsey adn the kids for everything. She doesn't need to buy right away. Rent some place until they are a bit more financially stable adn can get a mortgage. 

(I really ten to rant in my reviews at times don't I? lol)

Never the less...fantastic start to this new book. thrilled that you're continuing it!!! Definitely looking forward to the next chapter.

Cheers,

Elaine

p.s.  If I'm not making sense...I'm incredibly jet lagged, so in my head, I make sense. On paper....who teh hell knows. ;) I just didn't want to put of the review.



Author's Response:

I am happy to read reviews whenever they come so no problem with a delayed post. I think you may be correct that not everyone will be thrilled with a baby sunshine. I think Jennifer will be thrilled enough to offset any bad feelings from anyone else. Mel does seem to have a lot of financial demands but B&J will always make sure Gus is well taken care of. They are too nice not to treat JR well even if her own father doesn't feel any financial obligations. Ranting is good, just shows you are really in to the story which I appreciate!!!!!  Thanks for fighting off jet lag enough to leave a review, always good to hear from you!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2016 02:20 PM · On: Chapter 1

Hello my sweet B. I'm so happy to see the new story about the Kinney family, sorry I'm late in reviewing and reading. I totally re read sickness and health etc. broken angel, prego stud and daddy stud,  Tricky adventures,and Christmas presents and the offer still stands. Now about this chapter:I liked that Peter was helping Gus and others with math and the both boys doing well in school. One of the funny moments was Brian ran in to Ed Dennison and his charming way let be known that both boys were doing great and John made friends and there was never reason to consider him as a problem. I like Mel she tries to work with Brian, I feel when Mel and Lindsay look for a house, Lindsay will want one bigger than Brian bought Justin.I feel Ben should step in an tell mikey no more toys that it is only fair they help with JR,he wasn't very willing to buy his child nice furniture for her doll house because it wasn't going benifit him. Lindsay is still a bitch and mikey is still a moron. Can't wait for you next chapter.      your Sally



Author's Response:

Hi Sally, never too late for a review.  You have been busy reading.  I am always impressed by someone re-reading S&H, GT&B - that is a big time committment.  I LOVE those Tricky stoires, they are the reason I wrote my own story.  So anyone who enjoys my story should thank Predec2!  Porr Ed he will need to try and avoid Brian until Peter graduates!  I don't think B&J are going to finance a mansion for Mel & Linds, I am thinking just a nice three bedroom home.  I don't think Jennifer will let them get too carries away.  Mel always said she didn't expest support from Mikey and he is NOT someone who adapts to change.  Ben might make him realize his reponsibilities but that is not a sure thing.  You are correct about Linds & Mikey!!!  Always a thrill to hear from you.  Thanks for the review,  your sweet Baboo

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2016 10:42 PM · On: Chapter 1

Hi,


 


It really is great to be able to continue to follow the family.  There were some major happenings in this chapter.


 


Eden is pregnant with Justin child.Wow! That is big news.  I wonder if it is possible for two little Sunshines. 


 


Lindsey is improving.  To me the brings up the issue as to how much Melanie can handle.  I sure can understand the difficulties, but maybe Gus was right.  He needs to live with his Daddies.  Even with the new baby, I think B & J can raise him and give him the attention a kid needs.  Then again, if there are two little Sunshines, then what?


 


Finally, if as stated, in order to buy a home for Lindsey and Mel., Brian and Justin would have to use their Credit Line, then I see a real problem.  I thought they had enough money, more than enough to afford anything they want.  I guess not.  But my problem is that Michael and Ben are not contributing anything.  That is bad, and wrong.  Time to have a meeting and have them start


to contribute.  I bet they can, it is just Michael being selfish.  How many times have we heard him say, “Brian can afford it.”  That is not the issue.  The issue is that JR is his daughter, and time he started to support her.


 


Thanks again for the sequel, and for this chapter.


 


DavidR



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed this chapter. I think Mel really love Lindsay and that is why she out up with her for all these years. I think we will find out how many babies my be coming when Eden has the first sonogram.  B&J are rich, they have plenty of assets but they also have a lot of expenses, 4 private school tuitions, Molly's college tuition, Alice & Charlie's salaries and a lot of their money is invested.  The Bllom building renovations cost KT properties a lot of money. They still have their charitable foundation to fund. It take a lot of groceries to feed Justin and the nephews.  They had to buy donor eggs, pay a clinic to have the fertilized eggs implanted and Eden's medical expenses.  Now to pay a couple hundred thousand dollars for a house may be too much for their cash flow but they are not heading for any serious financial trouble.  A lot of their money is invested as the issue is just immediate liquid cash.

Mikey is selfish but I don't see Brian ever confronting him about paying money. Melanie always told Michale she didn't expect any support from him and we know Mikey does NOT deal well with change.    Hope you continue to enjoy the story.  I always look forward to your comments, they make me think and I enjoy your perspective on the story!!  Thanks,  Bill

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2016 02:34 PM · On: Chapter 1

Oh no! I promised myself I would not see if this sequel had been posted, after all I had just finished "In Sickness and Health, Good Times and Bad" and it was 2.00am - but sadly I just couldn't resist. As I anticipated this first chapter was excellent and now I am eagerly, almost anxiously anticpating the next. 2.30am and have work at 7.00am but you have me hooked. So good:-D



Author's Response:

Sorry to rob you of a good night's sleep.  Hope you were able to function at work.  Really happy to know you enjoyed the stories so much.  Hope you continue to enjoy the story.  Thanks for the review, I love getting them!!!  Bill

Reviewer: Tiffany (Anonymous) · Date: February 15, 2016 03:32 AM · On: Chapter 1

I'm late to the reviewing game, but man was I excited to see that the sequel has officially begun! And you did not disappoint. So many story lines and I'm excited for each of them to continue evolving, especially the Baby Sunshine Project. I'll be (im)patiently waiting for chapter 2 :)

-Tiff



Author's Response:

Never too late for a review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Glad to know you are excited about the new story.  I think Baby Sunshine is the favorite story line of a lot of readers.  Always love to heard from the readers!!!  Thanks,  Bill

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2016 01:48 AM · On: Chapter 1

another great start to a fine story.  Excellent-  first chapter-  loved it-  wish Mel wouldn't rely on bank og Brian



Author's Response:

Happy to know you liked the first chapter.  Sadly the B of B is the only one willing to extend credit to Mel.  Happy to hear from you, thanks for reviewing!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2016 06:11 AM · On: Chapter 1

So exciting to read the first chapter of this sequel. I know the boys are preparing for Halloween, but it makes perfect Valentine's Day reading for me. :)

Wonderful news that Justin will be a father! I'm speculating whether he (and Brian) might end up with twins.

Justin and Gus make ideal accomplices to persuade Brian into things that he just can't refuse his son. And I'm sure Justin's payment for that coercion makes Brian's acquiescence quite palatable. ;)

Brian is absolutely correct: He and Justin "are lucky to have each other".



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed the first chapter.  Twins might be a lot for them to cope with but time will tell.  Justin views Gus as his secret weapon to get Brian to agree to do things he object to on principal.  Thanks for taking tiem to review,I still LOVE to get them.  Bill

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2016 05:27 AM · On: Chapter 1

Squeals! The saga continues this makes me so happy… Now I can't wait until Brian tries on his vampire costume, and later when Justin strips it off him...

Hugs ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

Glad you are happy to see the sequel.  I think those caoes will have other usese beside Trick or Treating.  Hugs back to you,  Bill

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2016 03:16 AM · On: Chapter 1

Oooo....I'm so excited to see this started!

Author's Response:

I hope you enjoy the story as it progresses.  I'm excited, as always, to get a review from you!!!  Bill

Reviewer: chadmom63 (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2016 01:38 AM · On: Chapter 1

Nice start to the sequel!



Author's Response:

Thanks!!!  Hope you enjoy the story as it progresses.  Happy to hear from you, I love to hear from the readers!!  Bill

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2016 12:50 AM · On: Chapter 1

Unbelievable!  Now the munchers want Brian and Justin to buy them a house? Talk about moochers!



Author's Response:

Moocher munchers, that is a great description, I LOVE it!!!!  Hope you enjoy the rest of the story.  Bill

Reviewer: Elly (Anonymous) · Date: February 13, 2016 03:27 PM · On: Chapter 1

Omg I'm so glad you're back, welcome!

I enjoyed the first great chapter!

Psssssssssssss Eden is pregnant, they implanted two Fertilized eggs, is there a chance of two little Sunshines?

Looking forward to the Halloween party. Happy weekend, Elly.

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Glad to be back, really happy you liked the first chapter!!  We are going to have to wait for the sonogram to see how many babies are on the way.  Thanks for the review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: February 13, 2016 09:04 AM · On: Chapter 1

Welcome back! I'm glad I checked!

Great introduction to where most people are. I guess I never thought about the number of eggs you purchased before.

Thank you for posting so fast, I had gone back and reread the whole story, and was ready for more!

Author's Response:

Nice to know you enjoyed the beginning of this story.  I think you buy eggs based on quantity but I am NOT a surrogate expert!  I am always impressd when readers say they reread all 100 chapters of S&H, GT&B,  I have never done that myself.  I do sometimes go back and read back chapters to refresh my memory.  I also like to see which chapters have been read the most and reread them but never the whole story!  Happy to see your review, thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2016 06:15 AM · On: Chapter 1

Great to see a sequel. I wrote, deleted, re-wrote and deleted again my feelings on Lindsay. Getting medical help or not her basic character is that she will keep using people any way she wants to get what she wants. I wanted to slap Mel or give her a wake up call - or perhaps both. Her attitude to Brian totally sucked - hmmmmm Lindsay getting 'better', Mel's attitude changing - I wonder if Lindsay has something to do with that. At least Mel recognized that she needs to be more fair where she places the blame with the kids. I like Mel in this story - she's a little more willing to see more to Brian than she is usually portrayed - I'd hate to see her fall victim to Lindsay's demands (harsh words but I feel a little protective of Mel in this world - hence the need to give her a wake up call)

I hate the way everyone goes to Brian for money - sure he has it but he worked hard for it and it certainly isn't fair to put on hold what the boys want to do in their life to pay the way of other adults who should be looking after themselves (OMG I'm on a rant today - RL issues - I've got a few Lindsay and Michael types to deal with - but then, don't we all) Michael really needs to be held accountable for a reasonable amount of support. He's really not much of a father - only doing the 'fun' things and not the responsible things shows how immature he is. Mel is a lawyer - sue for proper support.......

It would be wonderful (poor Brian) if they ended up with twins - fingers crossed.... Love that Alice looks out for the family, especially making sure Justin doesn't do to much. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed chapter 1, at least I think you enjoyed it??  I don't expect Lindsay to suddenly be a womderful person, the abuse doesn't mean we need to forget everything she has done.  I think Mel really loves her and is willing to put up Lindsay's issues.  I always thought the main problem between Mel & Brian was Lindsay playing them against each other.  I don't think Mel will ever tale Mikey to court for support because he might try to have more of a say in JR's unbringing.  She has enough trouble having to pay attention to Brian.  So you think twin minature Sunshines would be a agood idea, hmmmmmmmmmmmm.  Alice looks out for the boys, they would be lost without her manging their household.  Always look forward to your reviews!!!  Thanks,  Bill

Reviewer: Blossomlegs (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2016 05:46 AM · On: Chapter 1

Happy dance!!!!!!  Smiling, so great to read a new beginning fic in the same verse.   Mel and Linz still depending on Brian and Justin to take care of them.  So happy to see Brian stand up to Mel and not giving her a choice of realator. Can possible see some trouble coming with Linz coming home. Someone needs to talk to Mikey and Ben regarding taking some responsibility money wise tohelp Mel with Jenny .

So excited about the new baby on the way.  Can imagine the reaction from the so called extended family.

Anxious to see if Gus and Justin get Brian to dress up for Halloween.

Thanks for sharing, always looking forward to update.

Happy Valentines,     JoAnn



Author's Response:

Hi JoAnn, very happy to know you enjoyed the first chapter of the new story. It's lucky for Mel & Linds that Brian & Justin love Gus so much. Brian is not someone who let's people get the best of him. I think most of ther family will be happy about the baby and I suspect Jennifer will be thrilled. Do you think Brian will be able to resist the combined efforts of his Sunshine & Sonny Boy? Thank you for being so loyal about reviewing,you know how much I love to hear from the readers!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! My favorite thing about Valetine's Day is those little candy hearts from Brach. I am addicted to them, glad they are only available a short time.  Bill

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2016 05:16 AM · On: Chapter 1

Great start to the sequel. 

Happy about Justin's baby. Wonder if Lindsay will get pissed off about this.

It sucks that Brian and Justin get used as free money for whatever anyone wants or needs.

Wonder if they are going to expect to buy a house the size of Britin, after all Brian bought one that size for Justin.

It's great that they have each other and are so much in love.



Author's Response:

Thanks.  I don't think Lindsay will be overjoyed by the new baby. B&J sure don't get the credit they deserve for all the financial help they provide.  I'm sure Jennifer will find a resonably priced house for Mel & Linds.  They are lucky they found each other as Jennifer has said they are true soulmates.  Happy to know you enjoyed the first chapter.  Thanks for the review!!!!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous) · Date: February 13, 2016 04:20 AM · On: Chapter 1

Yay! You're continuing the story! I'm hoping this one is at least as long as the last one.



Author's Response:

Glad you like the new story.  I don't think that I can make 100 chapters out of a holiday season - even one from Halloween through New Years.  Don't worry though, there will be another sequel after this one.  Thanks for the review!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2016 03:59 AM · On: Chapter 1

Looks like thing are looking up for the new little Sunshine.  I wonder, though, what it is that Lindsay isn't remembering.  I mean is it that Justin and Brian are married?  That could be trouble.  It's good that Gus had Peter to talk to and that Peter made sure Brian and Gus knows what's going on.  I do wonder if Ben has any inkling about Mel needing money for JR?  I think he would find a way to help with the expense.  Glad to see this continueing!!!!



Author's Response:

My faithful friend, always look forward to reading your review!!! I think Lindsay may not remember some of the rotten things she has done.  Gus has bonded with his cousins and Peter is a very smart young man.  I bet Mikey doesn't tell Ben much about Mel's money issues, he prefers to give Brian a hard time about not supplying more money.  Happy to know you enjoyed the first chapter.  I still have lots of ideas for storylines.  Thanks for the review, you know I really appreciate all your support!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2016 03:17 AM · On: Chapter 1

Lol got to love the interwebs!

Author's Response:

I love anything that means more reviews!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: February 13, 2016 01:55 AM · On: Chapter 1

I missed you 

my withdrawal required electric shock therapy same as Lindsay. 

I can't wait for the sonogram telling them they are having twins because really 2 little sunshines Brian would be in heaven...

i like that Gus talks to Peter and tells him what is going on and even more that Peter tells Brian and Justin so they can help. 

Do we get to read about the trick or treating and the parties I hope so. 

Trying to figure out where Thanksgiving will be and who will be invited. 

I hope the wait for the next chapter doesn't require electric shock therapy. 

That is a huge giant hint for more soon I am kind of hoping you used the break to write a bunch of chapters in advance so you can put them out every few days.




Author's Response:

Nice to know I was missed. You are in my mind again!  Gus loves his cousins and Peter is happy to help him with his homework via cell phone.  You will hear about the trick or treating.  Thanksgiving is a little way off, I think we'll have some things of interest happen between Halloween and Thanksgiving.  Last year Alice & Charlie used the house for their family's Thanksgiving.  It would have been a great idea to have some chapters in reserve and be ready to post them on a schedule, sadly that isn't happening.  I will try and post the next chapter as quickly as possible.  Always good to hear from you my friend.  Bill 

Reviewer: chandrika (Anonymous) · Date: February 12, 2016 11:19 PM · On: Chapter 1

yes yes yes

Happy Dance

YAHOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!

Waiting for the next chapter...

Thank you



Author's Response:

So I am guessing you enjoyed this chapter.  Happy to know you liked it.  Thanks for taking time to post a review!!!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2016 11:17 PM · On: Chapter 1

I am so glad you are continuing this story. I just love this Brian and Justin.

Author's Response:

I love them too!  I think it will be fun to see them celebrate some holiday and get ready for baby Sunshine.  Thanks for the review!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2016 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 1

Oh what a wonderful chapter. Thank goodness the boys have Alice to take up the household slack for our very busy family. I love how she mothers everyone in her own way and a way that Brian and Justin do not even realize it is being done. Omg Mel way to go to ask for money and then slap the money bank down! Why did she want her own agent? Was it just because she wanted control or another reason ?? Anyway as usual Brian will do anything for Gus and Justin and he will take a financial risk for them and the nephews

Author's Response:

Happy you liked the first chapter.  Alice really keeps everything under control.  I think Mel likes to be in control and HATES that Brian is in control.  She really should know better than to try and argue with him.  Thanks for the review, new story but i still love to get reviews!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: femmegirl49 (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2016 10:11 PM · On: Chapter 1

Well this chapter did not dissapoint!!  I love Brian and Justin as a team together taking on the world and handling everything together.  I also enjoyed the "alone" time they had!!  Great story and I am looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

I was a little nervous that you wouldn't enjoy the chapter when you reviewed before you even read it.  I really love double reviews!!!!!!!  Glad that you enjoyed the first chapter, hope you like the rest of the story.  Bill

Reviewer: femmegirl49 (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2016 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 1

I haven't even started this yet but just want to say that I am SO excited this is here!!  I finished the first one and felt a pang of sadness, like a friend had died.  Thanks so very much for sharing your work.



Author's Response:

I hope you enjoyed the first chapter, more to come.  Thanks for letting me know you enjoy my stories!  Bill

Reviewer: starfire64 (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2016 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 1

Hi Bill   :  ) I thought JR's instance that Michael NOT wear a costume was pretty cute, no  distractions from the bunny ;  ) This is going to be good :  )  *Hugs* Janet



Author's Response:

Hi Janet, thanks for being the first to rebiew the new story.  Hope you continue to enjoy it.  Hugs back to you,  Bill

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