Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Holiday Happenings
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: January 07, 2017 04:13 AM · On: Chapter 24

So happy to see this new chapter! As always, I loved all the details you include. It was nice to see Nina and Viola's Christmas with Ted and Blake. Ted is such a good father--his realization that Nina was a little overwhelmed shows that. The contrast between Mark's family and the Kinney-Taylor household reminded me that happy homes don't always just happen. A lot of it has to do with attitude and commitment. Loved seeing one of my very favorite characters again--Kevin!--and Brian's tender moment with him. Gus was pretty adorable, too, what with his excitement and enthusiasm for the new train room. I'm sure everyone thought Michael looked pathetic trailing around after Brian. How does Ben stand it? Had to chuckle to hear that Jennifer is at the top of Joan's hate list. Interesting to hear, too, that Claire has a talent for embroidery. Of course, no surprise that her parents were so dismissive of that talent. I am looking forward to the next installment. Thanks for this one!



Author's Response:

Sorry to make you wait so long for this chapter.  Glad that you enjoyed it.  I thnk Ted, Blake, Nina & Viola make a nice little family group.  Teddy Man takes his job of looking after Nina VERY seriously.  There are lots of screwed up families out there, many of them thinking they are doing OK.  I think Mark's parents think their family is fine, at least there are no homosexuals.  We can always count on Mikey!!   I love Kevin also and am so pleased that so many readers enjoy Gus & Kevin interacting.  Jennifer worked pretty hard to get to the top of Joan's list and I believe she is proud to be there,  Thanks for taking time to review!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: Acadian Proud (Anonymous) · Date: January 06, 2017 04:04 AM · On: Chapter 24

Michael does not want to grow up.  He needs "DEEP" therapy... Somethink needs to happen to make Michael get agree to therapy...



Author's Response:

I thik Debbie doesn't want him to grow up.  I don't hold out a lot of hope for him to change but who knows???  Thanks for the review, I love to hear from the readers!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: January 06, 2017 02:22 AM · On: Chapter 24

Great descriptions of the party and holiday.  I felt like I was there.  So, now you are going to write the Disney trip-  right?



Author's Response:

We have to get through new years, Joe's story and someone new suddely appearing but Disney trip is coming for sure!!!!  Thanks for the review.  Bill

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2017 04:42 PM · On: Chapter 24

So glad you posted!  I really missed this story.  Love reading about Brian and Justin and how they've become the central figures of the "family."  



Author's Response:

Sorry for the long delay between updates.  It is my New Year's resolution to do better.  Really glad to know you enjoyed this chapter.  Thanks for the review!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: chadmom63 (Anonymous) · Date: January 05, 2017 02:07 AM · On: Chapter 24

Great chapter!  Definitely worth the wate!



Author's Response:

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it even if I made you wait too long.  Thanks for the review!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2017 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 24

This is the perfect end of the holiday season...an update to Holiday Happenings.  I hope the season brought you much joy and love. I also hope that the coming year does the same. All the best to you in 2017!! 

The party kind of reminded me of those that I grew up with. Sounds a bit ponpous I know, but between my parents and my Godmother, (we alternated every year) it was all pretty similar, except without the driver service. Now that would've been a brilliant idea back then. :)

Showing the true Christmas spirit here with the idea for Claire to embroider and make some $$. Would be nice if this is the initial olive branch and that in time, some of the major woulds could begin to heal. Not sure they ever will completely, but even a bit would be nice. I hope she's sincere in her motives and understands the need for time. That was a really touching part. Even Brian was slightly open.

Despite the incredible generosity of everyone and the abundant haul everyone brought in, it's obvious that none of the kids come across as spoiled. They are all incredibly grateful and appreciative. While they were thrilled with all their gifts, it seemed they were just as thrilled, if not more so by the sense of family and togetherness that was abundant throughout.

Lovely catch up with Ted, Blake et al. Nina's reaction to Christmas was so sweet and genuine. I could imagine that it would be quite overwhelming. So happy that she and viola have this opportunity now.

Michael is still an ass. I mean really...suck it up buttercup. Glad nobody succumbed to his little tantrums. And why wouldn't he take the available transit? Was he hoping for an overnight invite or something? Just silly. He's just a petulant little boy really. shame that he seems to feel there's a need to compete for JR's or even Brian's affections. Following him around like a little puppy. Like I said, he's just a silly boy.

What a wonderful chapter and so well worth the wait!! I felt heart warmed and smiled reading it all.

thank you for this! I have to admit, I've been waiting for the notice I received of the update, but I figured that it would be after the holidays. It's a lovely gift from you to all of us. A thrill to receive.

Cheers and once again, all the best to you in the New Year. I hope 2017 brings you all that you hope for.

Elaine

 



Author's Response:

I had to double check with my new Echo to make sure of the day of the week.  It really is Wednesday!  Hope you had a wonderful 2017!!  My parents also had some large parties over the years but none invovled caterers.  My mother and her sisters usually made the food.  Hopefully Claire will take Jennifer's offer to help her make some money and do something worthwhile.  Claire finally seems to be taking some responsibility for her actions which is more than we can say for good old Joanie.  I envision John & Peter occasionally pinching themselves to be sure their aren't dreaming.  They have had huge positive changes in their life.

I love Ted & Blake and their delight with Nina.  Viola knew what she was doing to pick them to take care of her granddaughter.  They take care of her as well.  Mikey is very dependable, he is always an idiot.  I'm sure he can't understand why JR and Brian love Justin.  All Mikey sees is a twink who took his best friend and is trying to steal his daughter's affection.

I apologize for the long wait and am thrilled you think it was worth the wait.  I hope we all have a great year, it will be an interesting one with some of the changes in the USA.  Thanks, as always, for your support.  You know I love to read reviews!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2017 05:43 PM · On: Chapter 24

Here is hoping I get to be your 400th reviewer.  Merry Christmas and may we learn more about this wonderful family in the New Year.



Author's Response:

HOORAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  You are indeed number 400.  You know how I love hitting milestones so I am glad we are sharing number 400.  We have to keep meeting like this.  Thanks for being you!!!!  BIll

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2017 02:01 PM · On: Chapter 24

Wow, what a wonderful Christmas.  Looks like Claire might just have come upon a carreer that will make her feel worthwhile.  Everything went well, except for Michael who kept following Brian around.  You write some of the best and rewarding chapters.



Author's Response:

Hope you had a wonderful Christmas as well!!  I guess it is about time that something positive happened to Claire.  Hopefully she accepts the opportuntiy Jennifer is offering her.  My friend, you wrote some of the best and rewarding reviews and I appreciate you a lot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Thanks,  Bill

Reviewer: shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: January 04, 2017 10:41 AM · On: Chapter 24

My dog Miki follows me around the way Michael followed Brian but he is a dog. Wow Claire has a skill I never would have guessed. The fact her mother discouraged it not surprised at all. Sounds like everyone made out well for Xmas. Why does JR's love for Justin amuse me and oh boy will she be jealous of those babies, I don't see Gus having an issue he knows he is loved. Molly's boyfriends family is weird and why do I have this odd concern niggling me about the boyfriends brother. I missed this enough I reread the first part. I can't wait for the next part with the babies. I also hope we don't have to wait a month for another chapter. I can't wait for the Disney trip.



Author's Response:

Must have something to do with the name.  Claire has made a bunch of bad decisions in life but her parents set her up for failure.  Sadly she never overcame her grim start in life.  Was a good Chrstmas for lots of folks.  I think you may be correct about JR and the new babies, she s unhappy enough competeing with Gus for Brian & Justin's attention.  Molly boyfrend's family is very wierd.  I have more concerns about Mark than his brother.  I plan on more regular updates, a New Year's resolution.  Thanks for your support and best wishes for 2017!!  Bill

Reviewer: mcm (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2017 07:55 AM · On: Chapter 24

YAY! Thanks for Update:)

Happy New Year



Author's Response:

Glad you are happy to see this long delayed update, thanks fro hanging in there!!  Happy New Year to you.  Thanks for taking time to review!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: Erbear4474 (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2017 06:06 AM · On: Chapter 1

Yay! A new chapter, thank you, thank you, thank you!!

 



Author's Response:

Sorry it took so long, glad you enjoyed it!!  Thanks for the review,  Bill

Reviewer: Lanie (Anonymous) · Date: December 24, 2016 10:03 PM · On: Chapter 23

I love this story!  Will it be finished?



Author's Response:

It will be finished, sorry it took so long to post this update and to answer your review!  Bill

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: November 25, 2016 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 15

i love this fanfic, but its starting to get a bit  annoying with Justin and Brian spending so much money on other people.  Maybe its because I've witnessed it in my own life, but ive always found that when people are too generous it fucks with their relationships with others.  Maybe im just nit picking, but I still love this



Author's Response:

They have been spending a lot of money but my excuse is that it is Christmas and a time to be extravagant.  Most of what they spent was on the kids.  I appreciate the feedback and I think you are correct in too much genorosity can damage relationships.  I will keep that in mind but it is fun to think about having enough money to pretty much do whatever you want.  Thanks for taking time to review and I will keep your comments in mind!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: November 23, 2016 07:34 AM · On: Chapter 23

 Sweet Baboo! I forgot about Craig, the gifts that he sent were well chosen but is there a hiden agenda. The boys were surprised but I'm worried about Justin getting his hopes up only to played again. I hope their holiday party with the family coming to Britin goes well surely mikey can keep his mouth shut for a few hours.



Author's Response:

A double review!!!  Thanks Sally!!  Brian is going to be very cautious about Craig and do his best to make sure Justin is not hurt.  Justin has good memories of Craig but all Brian's interactions with Craig were bad.  I think if Craig hurts Justin Brian and Jennifer may band together to kill or hurt him badly.  I wouldn't count on Mikey being either silent or sensible!!  Thanks Darling Sally for all your support.  I am thankful for you!!!!  your sweet Baboo

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: November 23, 2016 07:02 AM · On: Chapter 23

 My Sweet Baboo, It's turkey time in two days. For once when I say turkey I don't mean mikey! Hope you and yours have a beautiful Thanksgiving. I was surprised Joan would tell someone in her church about Brian being gay. No one in these days really care, the  people have so many problems. We just went thru an awful election. police being killed for no good reaso, it seems everyone is looking for someone or something to hate That is so sad. Joan is trying to understand how people take gay lifestyle for granted. I'm glad John and Peter enjoyed their Christmas. I knew Brian and Justin made sure the entire family had a nice Christmas--as usual mikey feels sighted, he's never happy for anyone he was jealous JR caused she's going to Disney World--of course he had to act like a two year old. Great update to wonderful story, Love, your Sally 



Author's Response:

Hello my Darling Sally, always happy to hear from you.  We certainly don't want a day when we celebrate MIkey!!!  I imiagin most people in the nrighborhood know that Brian is gay.  There were also news reporst about the attempted kidnapping of Justin so Joan might not talk about it but lots of other folks do!  This has been a tough year with some much division and violence.  I agree that some people just want to hate and to be offended by other people.  I knew a wman who had a gay daughter that she completely cut out of her life because she was gay so sadly there are people like Joan out there.  Hopefully there are less than there used to be!  Mikey never thinks he needs to work for anything, he wants things given to him.  John & Peter never had a Christmas like this one before.  Hope you have a great Thanksgiving.  I have no blood releatives here so I will be with my adopted family.  Made my homemade applesauce and some candied sweet potatoes as my part of the feast!  your sweet Baboo

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2016 04:08 AM · On: Chapter 23

That was an interesting way to start a chapter.  Thelma

summarized Brian and Justin’s kindness very well.  Too bad, Joan

doesn’t see that.  She can’t see past B&J’s lifestyle to see what

wonderful people they are.

    I was happy to see Justin hug Tucker and say nice things to him. 

Tucker has been a real good guy, and a nice addition to the

family.  Looks like Justin finally realizes that.  I was happy to read

about it.

   I simply don’t know where Craig fits in.  To me he doesn’t and I

would rather he just go away.  I understand that Justin

remembers some of the good in Craig.  But Brian (and me) don’t.

  I would have liked to see something about Claire. 

  In this Chapter, I am glad JR was not there.  This is Gus’s family. 

And oh yes, the train set will give Brian and Gus much wonderful

Daddy and Sonny Boy time.

  That was a terrific chapter.  Lots and lots of good holiday spirit.

DavidR



Author's Response:

Joan is determined to never accept Brian's lifestyle.  It doesn't matter what anyone says to her.  When she is alone there is no one to disappoint her.  I think Justin knows that Tucker is good for his mother but he has a hard time accepting it.  You are correct about Brian he wants nothing to do with Craig and is concerned about Craig hurting Justin again.  We'll have to wait and see who is correct, you & Brian or Justin.  I actually meant to have something about Claire in the last chapter and forgot - bad author!  We'll hear about her in the next chapter.  I think you are right about the trains!!!  Thanks for the review, you know I always look forward to your comments.!!!  Bill

Reviewer: Blossomlegs (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2016 02:48 PM · On: Chapter 23

Fantastic update . Looks like everyone had a great and happy Christmas,

Thanks for sharing.

JoAnn



Author's Response:

Hi JoAnn, happy to know you enjoyed this chapter.  Thanks for the review!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2016 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 23

Haooy Monday my friend! Sorry to hear your friend has been unwell. Hopefully she's well on her way to recovery now.

As for joan...she really is her own worst enemy. I doubt she'll evr gt her head on straight about Brian and his family no matter who says what to her. She's too set in her ways. Shame really, but she brought it all upon herself.

What a beautiful Christmas at Britin! the gifts we lovely for all of them, but the atmosphere, the togetherness was magical! Peter and John most assuredly had their best Christmas ever. I know they've never experienced anything like that before. 

Criag's gifts were a surprise. Is he making legitimate overtures towards our boys? I'm so distrusting of him that I'm always looking for any kind of deviousness, but I'm not seeing anything accept a real attempt. Perhaps there's hope yet. Thankfully he's not as stuck in his ways as Joan.

Had to chuckle over Jenny and her attitude. Justin's interaction with her and his little jab at Mel was well placed. quite funny really.

Gus's heart is amazing for such a little boy. So giving and such generosity. Thinking of Joe like he did. Making sure that B&J could take back some of his gifts the way he did. He could definitely teach a few lessons to some of the adults around them.

will be interested to see how the next days dinner goes with all the family at Britin.

A really really lovely and heartwarming chapter. 

Cheers,

Elaine



Author's Response:

Monday, Monday so good to me

Monday morning it was all I hoped it would be

Hello my Monday friend, thanks for the good thoughts, my sick friend is doing much better.  I believe Joan prefers to be alone, no one else measures up to her standards.  Brian is going to be very hard to convince that Craig is sincere.  Justin was correct when he said he has god memories of Craig and Brian has nothing but bad memeories of Craig.  Justin is pretty open about his diapproval of Mel's parenting.  Happy to know you enjoyed this chapter.  I always look forward to reading your comments, thanks for never disappointing me!!!!  Cheers back to you.  Bill

PS not sure if you are a fan of the Mamas & the Papas

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: November 21, 2016 03:32 AM · On: Chapter 23

Another great chapter.  Wish Joan would listen to her friend about the wonderful son she has, but she is too narrow minded.  Thanks for sharing a glimpse into their holiday.



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed the latest update.  I'm not sure Joan really has any "friends"??  She is stubborn & prejudiced & unhappy and seems to be resolved to stay that way.  At least everyone at the Taylor-Kinney home had a great holiday.  Always good to hear from you!!!   Bill

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2016 03:13 AM · On: Chapter 23

What a wonderful Christmas!  Even Craig got into the spirit.  Unfortunately, Joan continued with her annoying attitude.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!!!  Happy to know you are still enjoying the story.  I don't think anyone missed Joan and she was happy with her own company.  Bill

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: November 20, 2016 10:06 PM · On: Chapter 23

Sorry to hear about your friend and I hope things get better soon. Loved this chapter and enjoyed reading all about everyone's gifts, the holiday meals, etc. Given recent events, this is a nice place to retreat. Will Brian give in on Craig for Justin's sake? Maybe forgive, but not forget? When someone is as monumentally wrong as Craig was, it takes a really generous soul to give another chance. Some people refuse to change. Joan is a good illustration. She needs to read that part of the Bible that says "Judge not..." Her homophobia and refusal to see beyond it is what prevents her from becoming part of the family. Then again, maybe she likes being alone. Perhaps, JR will find out that her sass will come back to haunt her. Perhaps she will be left out of certain fun events. What a mouth. Maybe she will learn that no one wants to be around that. Isn't behavior like that learned because it is rewarded? I would make certain that it is not rewarded. I'll be interested to hear about Joe's Christmas and what else is going on with him. Thanks so much for continuing this story. It is great.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the kind thoughts.  My friend is on the way to recovery but it will take a while.  It is nice to escaoe from RL for a while.  I hope the story trumped any upsetting news you moght have been reading about.  A lot of suspence about the future.  I think Brian is going to be very cautious about Craig.  He will never forget but if it makes Justin happy to have Craig back in his life Brian will support him.  Joan is unchanging but hopefully the history of unhappiness will end with her.  Brian has found his happiness and not the nephews are having the life they deserve.  Poor JR she will have a hard time if she doesn't get some understanding and good parenting.  The nly thing for sure is that Uncle Bri & Uncle Jus will NOT put up with any nonesense from her.  I think JR was lucky Mel came into the room.  She may have gotten quite a talking to from Uncle Jus  and if Uncle Bri heard her disrepecting his Sunshine she would be really sorry!  We will hear more about Joe and his life.  I am so glad to know you are enjoying my saga.  I love to hear from the readers so thank you very much for the review!!  The readers and thier comments are what keep me writing the story!!!  Bill

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2016 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 23

Ugh, Joan is her own worst enemy. I'm so glad Brian and Justin have plenty of loving family members to offset that narrow-minded woman.

Love how both Justin and Brian surprised each other with their gifts. Those two men may have to find a time when they can 'christen' Justin's new SUV, lol.

I'm with Brian about trusting Craig; it's difficult to believe he's sincere.

So fun the way Brian and Gus play with the train set. One is never too old for that kind of fun. 😊

Bill, I hope your friend is doing much better. Friends and family always come first! No question that I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter - but only when RL permits.

Karynn

 



Author's Response:

I think Joan feels that she is her own best friend.  No one else is up to her standards.  B&J know how to please each other and I agree that SUV will need to be "christened".  I think Brian is going to be watching to be sure Craig has no opportunity to hurt Justin again.  Between Brian & Jennifer Craig should be very afraid if he is trying to scam them.  My friend is doing much better but still has a way to go before she is able to come home.  Thanks for the good thoughts!!!  Bill

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2016 05:35 PM · On: Chapter 22

It's such a pleasure to watch Gus grow up in this story. d84;a039; Brian and Justin working together to ensure Gus has a happy childhood makes it especially poignant.

I forgot mention in my review of the last chapter how heartwarming it is that Gus wants to help Joe. The latest lost boy will have to concede to Debbie soon. There's no escaping, Joe, so just be thankful. 😊

ROTFL over Gus taking after Justin with being a chatterbox. Brian had really better watch out if Gus starts spouting PSAs. 😉

Ugh, Melanie and Lindsay's parenting skills are definitely lacking. I hope Mel actually thinks about what Justin told her.

Watch out Disney World! LOL

Thanks for yet another delightful chapter.

Karynn



Author's Response:

Gus is a happy little guy and enjoys the male bonding at B&J's house.  I agree Joe has no chance against Debbie.  She will know his sotry soon.  If the new babies take after their father Brian may have to buy earplugs.  I think Mel has a little trouble not letting her resentment of Brian effect her feelings for Gus.  Justin will be watching what happens there for sure.  Thanks for the multiple reviews!!!!  Love to read them!!  Bill

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2016 04:56 PM · On: Chapter 21

What a tremendous feel-good chapter! <3

I love how Debbie, Justin, and Brian work together to rescue another 'lost boy'. Joe may be starting to realize that the diner is a safe place and that his options aren't as limited as he thought.

LMAO! over Justin calling Brian cute and Brian's reaction. At least he didn't queen out - kept his best interests in mind. LOL And Brian and John's lack of enthusiasm over watching the Nutcracker every ear - hilarious. :D

I'm hoping to catch up on your story today. RL has been pretty rotten, but stories like this help me cope. :)

Karynn



Author's Response:

Looks like you are doing some catch up on your reading.  Joe is lucky to have fallen in with so many big hearted people.  Gus was the catalyst that got the ball rolling.  Joe is fortunate that some of those big hearted people also have big wallets!  Brian Kinney really doesn't want anyone to think of him as CUTE.  He will setrle for nothing less than HOT.  I understand rough RL, hope you can escape for a while!!!  Thanks for the review!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2016 06:57 AM · On: Chapter 23

What an amazing Christmas I felt like I was there as a family member great chapter

Author's Response:

What a great compliment to read that you felt like you were a part of the story.  Thank you so much for that!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2016 06:15 AM · On: Chapter 23

I just found this story again and read everything over again.  It took three days, lol.  I'm glad you are still updating it, at whatever pace you want.  I can't wait to meet the babies and learn if they will be little blonde and blue eyed angels.  

Are you actually going to write Brian in Disney World?  I don't think I have EVER read that before!  No matter how 'domesticated' he has become, a pack of over excited kids in an over packed theme park is bound to test his ability to keep his calm and pg 13 vocab under control.  LOL. A LOT of time outs and quite one on one time will be needed with only his Sunshine to keep him balanced.  

I've never explored the park from a rich person's perspective and unlimited access to all amenities.  I wonder if you can have provate guides to take the kids around the park?

Anyway, I'm just glad you are still writing and look forward to where your muse takes us.  :)



Author's Response:

I am always amazed and flattered when a reader tells me they have re-read the entire saga.  I am so fortunate to have such loyal readers & reviewers, that is what keeps the story going.  Several people have asked for a Brian in Disney Story.  That was not my plan but I think it might be fun to have a quick story about that trip.  Brian will be torn between wanting to avoid everything Disney and wanting to see Gus experience the Magic Kingdom for the first time.  Thank you for your very kind comments and fort aking time to post a review.  I do love hearing from the readers!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2016 08:35 PM · On: Chapter 23

Glad to see a new chapter. Love it, thanks.

* hugs *



Author's Response:

Happy to know your enjoyed it!!  Thanks for reviewing.  Hugs back to you!!  Bill

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2016 04:15 PM · On: Chapter 23

Hi, Bill! First of all, I hope your friend is doing better now.  That is the most important priority by far, and I for one will wait patiently until which time you are able to update. :) 

Now for this chapter. Some observations.  I almost pity Joan; no, I guess I do, although she has brought a lot of what she has wrought upon herself.  She will die, I believe, a lonely and bitter woman. The holidays should hopefully be a time of forgiveness and understanding, which are two words that will probably never escape her lips.  Thank God Brian has emerged from his childhood a scarred man, but one who has triumphed and overcome his parents' treatment of him.  He has become a loving partner and father, and someone to admire.

A little surprised by Craig's gesture, but hopefully it is sincere, and perhaps one day even he will change, unlike Joan.  BTW, I always wrack my brain to think of whether or not Justin called his father "Craig" later in the show, but I can't for the life of me remember. Did he?

JR is becoming more and more not only like her mother, but her father as well, sadly.  I hope she can learn from Gus as a role model, and change her ways, or I fear what she will be as a teenager!  Maybe one day you will write about them as older kids. (hint, hint).

As always, I love the detail in your chapters.  From the preparations for Christmas dinner, to the surprise gift for Justin, to the love clearly shown between the family members. 

Thanks again for a wonderful chapter! Always enjoy reading your updates.  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Hi Kim, my friend is in rehab and is doing better.  Thanks for asking.  I think Joan would be unhappy to think anyone pities her.  No one meets her standards of behavior so she is happy to have no one around.  Brian has been able to overcome a lot from his early life.  His life is different from anything he expected but I believe he is blissfully happy.

I think Craig realizes all he has lost because of his homophobia.  He really lost his entire family because of his attitude.  Now they are all happy together and he is alone.  Justin may be ready to give him another chance but Brian will be much more suspicious of Craig's motives.  I can't remember for sure but I think Justin called him Craig in the show.  I thought about watching some chapter "On Demand" but actually I don't remember Justin talking about his father much at all, after he left home.  Even Jennifer played a pretty minor role in the show.  She has a much bigger role in my story.

JR has an unfortunate gene pool to draw from.  I like to think Gus is like Brian would have been if he had loving parents.  I think JR is kind of lucky Mama showed up.  I think Uncle Jus was getting ready to really let JR have it for her behavior.  Instead he let Mel know that he still wasn't a fan of her parenting.

Thanks for the nice comments.  I learned a lot from reading so many stories from my favorite author.  I think you can guess who that is.  Always enjoy reading reviews so thanks for being so loyal about poting them!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2016 02:57 PM · On: Chapter 23

I'm afraid I cannot find it in my heart to pity Joan.  She is so narrowminded and selfish that in spite of being invited some place for Christmas she would prefer to be along.  Meanwhile her only son and his family are enjoying the Holiday season.  John and Peter are so well behaved that when being banished to their rooms, they do not complain or try to find out what's in their gifts.  In fact they prepare Christmas Breakfast.  They have a wonderful meal which features a Christmas coffee cake made by Molly!  Then for the surprises.  Justin gets a new SUV with plenty of room for the new babies.  There are lots of presents to go around.  Jennifer is going to need a lockbox for her new jewelry.  Craig even sent gifts and I must admit to being surprised by his attitude.  Unlike Joan he's welling to change.  Then there is lunch with Gus.  Having Jennifer and her crew over means that John and Peter are not left out.  Gus could, by all rights, be a spoilt little boy and isn't.  JR is behaving like a spoilt princess with telling Justin he can't tell her what to do.  Wonder who she got that from?  Everyone is spending the day with people that care about them.  And a good time was had by all, except for Joan who wouldn't know a good time if it bit her.  Everyone getting together at Britin on the 26th ought to make for another fabulous chapter.  Thank you and Merry Christmas!!!



Author's Response:

Hellp my friend, I don't think Joan wants anyone to pity her.  She prefers her own company to anyone else's.  I think Justin knows that the threat of Grandmom Jen's displeasure keeps everyone in the house on their best behavior.  Brian and the boys don't want Grandmom Jen angry with them.  I am sure Brian would deny that but I think it is true.  The Taylor-Kinney household has had an outstanding Christmas so far.  I imagine Jennifer is delighted to spend time with all her boys & Molly.  I believe Craig is realizing what he gave up and hoping maybe he can be a part of Justin's life.  He doesn't even know he could be a grandfather soon.  Brian is NOT going to welcome Craig too easily.  He will want to pretect his Sunshine from any more heartache.  With her parents genes floating around inside her we can expect JR to be whiney & determined.  So far she has not disappointed.  Hope you have a great Thanksgiving, I suspect we will have some more review conversation before Christmas.  Thanks for the review, you know I do really love to get them!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: Sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: November 19, 2016 02:57 PM · On: Chapter 23

Thelma shouldn't feel bad for Joan. It's the life she chooses to live.
Christmas at the Kinney's is full of surprises. The car, the train room, the gifts or olive branch from Craig, and Briangracefully accepting Jen's mothering ways without a fuss.
Great chapter.
Hope your friend is doing well.

Author's Response:

You are correct, Joan best skill is pushing people away.  They did have a very Merry Christmas.  I think Brian would die rather than admit it but he enjoys Jen mothering him.  He knows she genuinely cares for him.  My friend had flesh eating bacteria but they got it quickly and she is doing better.  Glad you enjoyed the chapter.  Thanks for the review!!  Bill

Reviewer: shf1210 (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2016 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 23

Finally presents. I like that Jennifer cried over the jewelry even though I knew she would. I loved Justin's present in the garage and how Brian got him to go see it.i would have liked more thoughts from John and Peter the on their gifts because this probably the first time someone bought them presents that were obviously for them like the kindle for Peter and the Cooking School for John. Jenny acting like a brat to Justin did not surprise me, the fact that she got a punishment was only because there were outside witnesses. I get the feeling she is not usually punished Gus is. I loved how much Gus loved his presents and the fact that he was willing to give some up because his Daddy's helped someone. Those trains are going to be where Justin find Brian and Gus for months to come. Craig's presents not sure how he could afford them but at least they were not generic he put some thought in them. Last and maybe least Joan she can't even be nice to someone driving her to church no wonder no one is with her for the Holidays. I was hoping for 3 chapters again this month I understand why there isn't so can there be at least 3 if not 4 in December while you wrap this one up in preparation for the next story with the babies. Happy Thanksgiving.



Author's Response:

I think most grandmothers abd mothers feel obliged to cry over special gifts.  Jenifer will make quite a sensation in the real estate office when she wears her new jewels for the first time.  Christmas isn't over yet so we may hear more from the nephews.  I just realized I didn't reveal Claire'a gifts to them, bad author!!!  My mistake will beacome Justin's in the next chapter.  With her gene pool JR is going to need a firm hand.  Gus is a happy little guy.  He was probably pretty sure his Daddies wouldn't tkae back any gifts but it was nice he offered.  You are probably correct that a lot of time is going to be spent in the train room.  Craig's business is doing better, due to the consultant Sunshine associates insisted on made some recommendations.  His expeneses ate down also since he moved out his condo with the big monthly fee.  I believe he is realizing what he is missing out on. I don't Joan really knows how to be nice, she hasn't experience a lot of niceness in her life.

Mr friend I hope you have a great Thanksgiving.  I am thankful to have such a faithful reviewer!!  Bill

Reviewer: Sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: November 16, 2016 05:09 AM · On: Chapter 22

Has this been abandoned?

Author's Response:

No it has not been abandoned.  Sorry for the delay but I have a seriously ill friend in the hospital and that has taken precedence right now.  I hope to update soon.  Bill

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: November 07, 2016 12:53 AM · On: Chapter 22

Very good! Love that Debbie did blankets for the babies.

Author's Response:

Happy you enjoyed this chapter.  Debbie really does love B&J.  Thanks for revewiing!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2016 01:56 AM · On: Chapter 22

   Thanks for the chapter.  It was interesting in that it had just

about everything.

   First, Debbie should put that bat away.  Given her physical

condition she is not one to win a fight.  Plus just suppose Rico or

pal pulled out a gun, Justin did something stupid and got shot.  In

short Debbie needs to control her temper before someone gets

hurt.

   I found the conversation between Melanie and Justin kind of

disturbing.  There it was, Mel’s jealousy of Brian and Justin and

their wealth.  I had thought we were finished with that.   Alice is

not used as a baby sitter for Gus, and Gus should not be used as a

baby sitter for JR.  I think Justin missed the moment and should

have been stronger that how much money Brian and Justin have

is non of her business and that she was way out of line.  His reply

was muddled.  We heard the same lines said by a few of the

characters.  I had it with that.

   We are still seeing Michael become more and more irrelevant. 

No one seems to care.  I have to wonder, as another ready wrote,

how much more Ben will take before he gets rid of him. 

   Thanks again for the chapter. I enjoyed the chapter.

   DavidR

 

 



Author's Response:

Hello my friend, Debbie goes with her gut reaction and doesn't always think things through.  I think Nico is mostly a bully looking for confused kids that he can take advabtage of.  I hope Mel got some food for thought.  Brian and Justin just wanted to be sure she understood they were questioning her parenting choices.  Mikey needs to start lookng at the big picture and not just how thing affect him.  He should have been delighted his daughter got a trip to Disney but instead his first thought is that he doesn't get to go to Disney also.  He needs to find a job and not worry about taking trips or he is going to be minus one husband & home.  Happy to know you enjoyed the chapter.  I always appreciate your reviews because you always make me think about what I have written and look at things from a different angle!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2016 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 22

Really enjoyed this chapter, Bill! Michael continues to be a whiny, immature, ungrateful man. I'm beginning to think that at partly due to his behavior, JR is going to wind up being a brat. Michael needs.to grow up. Wondering what the boys got from their mom.

 

Ben's likely to get fed up with his husband's lack of gratitude,  and I wouldn't blame him.

 

Looking forward to your next chapter.  Thanks!  ~Kim

 



Author's Response:

Thanks Kim, always nice to hear from you and know you are still enjoying this saga.  Mikey being jealous of his daughter's Christmas gift is majorly immature!  Mikey better get a job soon or Ben will be giving him the boot.  You know how great it is to get reviews for a story so thanks much for this review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2016 12:44 PM · On: Chapter 22

Even at Christmas Mikey can't see the positive side of things, and how thoughtful Brian and Justin are. He just sees that he didn't get what he wanted, and he what feels he's entitled too... Great update! Hugs ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

We can always depend on Mikey to be a butthead and think only about himself.  Gald you enjoyed this chapter!!!  Thanks for reviewing.  Hugs bacl to you!!  Bill

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2016 02:24 AM · On: Chapter 22

I am so far behind in my reading but I always look forward to an update from you. I love it when Justin takes Michael down - Michael should realize by now that Justin is way smarter than he is and he should just shut up - although it's always fun when he's put in his place. Looking forward to more background on Joe. Brian is right about leaving a 7 year old in charge. I would have told Gus off for hitting but I would also have told JR off for touching - definitely favouritism going on and you can't do that with kids. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response:

So good to hear from you.  Happy to know you are still enjoying the story.  Mikey isn't very good at looking at things sensibly. We will learn more about Joe soon.  You are correct both Gus & JR needed to be corrected for their behavior and it is not a good idea to leave Gus in charge of JR.  Mel has a lot on her plate but she needs to ask for help.  Thanks for the review, you know I love to get them!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: Chadmom (Anonymous) · Date: November 03, 2016 12:58 AM · On: Chapter 22

really live this story, but leaving a comment is torture! I can't get the security code to work!



Author's Response:

The good news is that it will be easier to post reviews after our web site upgrade.  You could always join Midnight Whispers now and eliminate that pesky security code.  All you need is a user name like "Chadmom" and and an email address.  No other mebers can see your email, just the site admins.  I have a yahoo email and you can even create addtional emails names so you don't have to use your regular email if you don't want to.  MW never discloses your email to anyone.  Thank you so much for taking the time & trouble to post a review.  Happy to know you love the story.  Bill 

 

Reviewer: jms1979 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2016 11:55 PM · On: Chapter 22

I really enjoy your writing and story.



Author's Response:

I really enjoy getting reviews so thank you very much for posting one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Happy to know you enjoy my story.  Thanks again!!!  Bill

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: November 01, 2016 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 22

    My Sweet Baboo, Really nice update. I'm interested what the PI finds out about Nico, wonder if they find info on Joe? As usual mikey isn't satisfied with his present from  Brian and Justin, that guy is never happy about anything, he problemly doesn't know what cashmire is since he still looks like he dresses like Big Q customer! Couldn't belive that Mel was punishing Gus and on Christmas Eve--Miss JR needs to listen to what Gus says or face her mothers ire not Gus. then to threaten the child that he could be stopped from being with Brian on Christmas real classie Mel. People should stop underestatmenting --Justin where Gus and Brian are concerned the man is pure fire when their treated unfairly. Loye you, your Sally  



Author's Response:

Hello my darling Sally, I think the PI is going to just warn Nico to stay away from Joe and Debbie.  I suspect Joe may share some of his life story with Debbie.  Mikey is rarely satisfied and always feels like a victim.  Not happy his daughter gets a trip to Disney but upset he doesn't get the same trip.  Brian could have saved himself some money and bought Mikey's sweater at the Big Q except I don't think Brian would ever buy anything at the Big Q.  JR's mommys need to learn not to push her off onto her 7 year old brother.  You are correct Justin will never let anyone hurt Gus or Brian.  Mel would be a fool to cross him!  Always so happy to see your comments!!!!  Thanks for the review!!!!!!  your sweet Baboo

Reviewer: Tiffany (Anonymous) · Date: November 01, 2016 02:06 AM · On: Chapter 22

Oh how I love seeing my favorite story has been updated :) 

Great chapter, like always. Gus with his daddies is just too cute to handle. Keep the updates coming!

 



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed the update and happy to read the "favorite story".  Gus is cute but smart - his nothers mght be annoyed but he was assured of a warm welcome from his fathers.  I will keep updating as long as readers keep reviewing!!!  Love reviews so thanks for your's!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: October 31, 2016 11:29 PM · On: Chapter 22

Another chapter- so wonderful.  I really like how Justin put Melanie in her place regarding the Gus situation.  Now we'll have to see if the information sticks.  I hope you plan on writiting about the Disney vacation- that should be an interesting tale all by itself.



Author's Response:

Happy to know you enjoyed the latest update.  Justin will never ler anyone hurt Brian or Gus if he can help it.  Melanie better understand she better not cross him.  You are the not the only one interested in gearing about the Dusney trip so I guess that will have to happen.  It was not my original paln to cover that trip.  Thanks for the review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2016 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 22

"Monday, Monday, so good to me

Monday mornin', it was all I hoped it would be"...Mammas & Pappas

that was my moring to day! thank you! 

So Nico is still around huh and with a bit of muscle to help. Well, Hopfully between jstin Deb and now Brian and the PI, that shit will get dealt with, without anyone getting hurt. Still a bit concerned for Deb with that situation. I think Joe is wisening up adn realizes that Nico is bad news and better yet, he actually has options. Some of them have really teken him under their wing and will look out for him. He'll catch on to that soon enough I think. Hopefully he's not it any danger from Nico either. He's fond of Gus (who wouldn't be) and I think he'll be a key figure in getting Jo to uderstand the family dynamics. :)

Michael is certainly infuencing Jenny's behavior. Mind you Mel isn't doing any better either. Between those 2, Jenny has the chance to turn in to a heinous little thing especially as a teen. At least she truly understand her limits with Justin and Brian. those 2 will be her saving grace from turning into a spoled little brat!

you know...Mel at one point seemed to undertand that gus shouldn't be left in charge of Jenny. That back then, she ws depending on him too much to look after her for short periods of time. Lindsey I don't think is quite up to standing strong yet. I think in all honesty, a bit of Prozak migh do Mel some good. ;) 

Strange that gus would smack JR's hand. that's a typical parent move to do that. He learned that from somewhere....And the fact that Mel is threatening to keep Gus from the boys on Christmas day...I want to throttle her. I really thought she was coming around. That she was grateful to Justin and Brian for all they had done, but she really seems to be reverting back and Lindsey seemed to be unaware of the threat Mel posed to Gus. Justin and Brian won't put up with Mel screwing with them when it comes to Gus. The fact that she seems to think she could "intimidate" Justin was laughable!! She's just so resentful and for no good reason.

All in all a nice christmas Eve dispite Mel and Michael's typical selfish behaviour. The trip to Disney World is going to be epic!! So much fun for them all! 

Looking forward to the Christmas chapter!! 

thanks!

Cheers,

 



Author's Response:

Hello my Monday Friend, so are you channeling Mama Cass or Michelle Phillips?  One the much better singer and the other much better looking.  I think Debbie is safe from Nico.  I view him as kind fo a bully.  He backed down from Justin even before the bat lady showed up.  Debbie with a baseball bat is taken from the show, a controversial episode.  Joe is slowly coming around but is still cautious.  I think JR already realizes not to pin her star to her Daddy.  She backed down when Unlce Jus exlained the way things were going to be!  I think Melanie has a lot on her plate but it is not fair to push too much onto Gus's plate he is a little boy.  I figured Gus had seem or experienced the hand slap over the years. I'm sure Mel did not have the best Christmas Eve ever but hopefully she will think about what Brian & Justin told her.  No way are B&J not picking up Gus and taking him to their house.  Thanks Elaine for being such a loyal reviewer, you know I love to get them and they keep me writing the story!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2016 03:45 AM · On: Chapter 22

So much happening in this chapter.  I worry that Nico might try to get back at Debbie.  Hopefully Joe takes the talking she gave him to heart.  It's hard to understand Michael's and Meanie, I mean Melanie's attitudes.  As Ben reminded Michael they don't pay child support, while Justin and Brian pay for JR's school tuition.  Melanie seems determined to favor her daughter over Gus.  If Gus goes to live full time with Brian and Justin, they could stop contributing to JR, not that they would.  You write the best chapters.



Author's Response:

Hello my friend, you are a faster reader and reviewer for this chapter.  Always glad to know you are still enjoying the story.  I think you are correct about Meanie playing favorites.  She got some good parenting advice and she better consider it.  Mikey is never happy not to be included in freebies.  Thanks for the "best chapters" I appreciate it!!  Thanks also for being such a great supporter of the story.  I appreciate all your reviews!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2016 03:38 AM · On: Chapter 20

I so enjoy these glimpses into the daily life of the Taylor Kinney family. d84;a039;

What a relief for the everyone, including Joan, that she's now able to take care of herself. She chooses not to grow and be loved, so I guess she's satisfied to be alone and lonely. It seems doubtful that Peter's Christmas wish for her will come true.

Karynn



Author's Response:

Joan was happy to go home and everyone was happy to see her go.  Everyone in Joan's life disappoints her so I think that is why she likes to be alone.  Glad you are enjoying cathcing up.  I am enjoying your reviews!!  Bill

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2016 03:07 AM · On: Chapter 19

What a heartwarming chapter! Gus is such a loving little boy - just the way I think Brian would have been if he'd had loving parents. Brian has such a big heart, even if he doesn't like to be thanked for all his kindnesses toward others. 

Can't wait to see Ted with the crown and cape. LOL

With the holidays approaching, this is the perfect time to catch up on this story - so glad I have a few more chapters to read. Thank you for continuing this delightful saga!

Karynn



Author's Response:

I agree with you; I think if Brian had some love early in life she would be just like Gus.  Ted will be wearing that any time Nina requests it I'm sure.  When I started this story it was no where near the holiday but I have kind of caught up a little with RL.  Glad you are still enjoying the saga!  Thanks for taking time to review!!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: October 31, 2016 03:03 AM · On: Chapter 22

3 chapters in a month what are the odds I can get you to keep to that schedule. I don't bake but I make a great lasagna or Mac and cheese, I like the idea of bribery....  Mel and Michael both looking for trouble and Brian and Justin are all to happy to serve it up. My parents knew better than to let me watch my sisters we fought constantly, I think I was 14 or 15 before I watched them alone and even them they bribed us to behave with money.  I hope at some point you write about the Disney trip and I can't wait to see what else Brian and Justin got John and Peter. I am also curious what Claire sent. Yes I caught the blue and pink blankets even though you have never mentioned the babies sexes in the story. I know I checked back meaning I reread about a dozen chapters. I still think the presents I most want to know about is Brian and Justin give to each other.. I can't wait for their Christmas more soon please.



Author's Response:

3 chapters for your birthday month!!!  Hope you had a happy birthday.  I had a friend over for lunch on Friday and made mac & cheese.  My m&c is VERY popular among my friends.  I try not to make it too often beacuse it has too many calories.  Mel got a double dose of parenting advice and hopefully she will pay attention to it.  My brothers were too much older than me for us to fight too much.  My oldest brother was in charge when my parents weren't home.  I remember telling him once, when he tried to tell me what to do, that he wasn't the little Daddy now because Mom was at home.  I think I might have been a little spoiled???  After a couple more chapters here I plan to start my next story whch begins when the babies are born.  I think maybe I will do a one shot about the Disney Trip before the next longer story.  I actually thought I had revealed the babies's sexes but now everyone knows!  Chrsitmas presents will be revealed in the next chapter.  Thanks for the review, my review numbers are down so I really appreciate my faithful reviewers like you.  Bill

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2016 02:19 AM · On: Chapter 21

   That was another very interesting chapter.  To me it was about who is missing rather than what happened.  Jen’s new/old tradition of taking the family to see the Nutcracker, where was JR?  These people in a way belong to Gus and there was no need to share that day.  This was his day.  Was there a happier child than Gus?  Nope.  I have said it before and notice there really wasn’t any room for Craig.  The tradition happily continues without him. 

    One more missing person though, and there are more.  Where is Michael?  Who cares?  Debbie, and Brian though Debbie, need to reach to out to  him. He is becoming irrelevant.  Similar to Craig, where does Michael fit except being Debbie’s son?  Sadly, he is not missed.

    Thanks for the Chapter, lots of love and joy, and holiday spirit.

DavidR



Author's Response:

Glad to see your review, I was worried about you.  You are always so loyal about commenting.  JR really doesn't have much relationship with Jennifer.  Her mommys and Mother Taylor are not on the best of terms.  For sure no ne is missing Craig but I think maybe Craig is missing them.  Michale will rear his head soon.  He will be at the Christmas Eve gathering at Debbie & Carl's house.  Glad to know you enjoyed this chpater and I alway enjoy hearing from you!!!  Thanks!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: October 19, 2016 04:49 AM · On: Chapter 21

OOPS! My Sweet Baboo: Talking about the ballet I totally forgot about Nico, the little shit, how dare he threaten Debbie! She is quiet meddlesom within the family, she does  a lot of good. With PFLAG, feeding some who can't order anything but coffee , and mostly just listening to people who have no one to care. Hopefully Joe knows bad news when he sees it. Back to Brian for a minute, Deb calls him an asshole, Em has called him a queen, some lowlife have called him a faggot, mikey calls him selfish and cheap, an even uncaring and he doesn't say a word he just acts proud, but let Justin called cute or Jen call him sweetheart he blushes and doesn't like it when he called these names, go figure?  Your Loving Sally



Author's Response:

Darling Sally, the only thing better than one review is a double review, YAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  I think Nico is an ant that will get tread on soon, no one has anyone to worry about from him .  Debbie always looks out for the underdog.  I don't believe Brian ever wants anyone to think he is cute but you are correct Brian has an issue with praise.  I think it is because he never got any praise when he was younger.  Thanks for the double review!!!!!!!!  your sweet Baboo

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: October 19, 2016 04:16 AM · On: Chapter 21

You did good my Sweet Baboo! I was amazed Brian went to the ballet with the others. I was happy Justin told the boys about the ballet and then repeated the story at bedtime for Gus so everyone would understand the story. Of course Brian made fun at home but quickly changed his behavior. He was happy Gus enjoyed himself and Brian treated everyone to a wonderful meal and made the outing so special. If Gus could get his daddy to wear the awful t-shirt on the fourth of July he certainly could get him to go to the ballet. It was wonderful for Jen I think she missed this for a number of years. It wouldn't surprise me if next year for her other grandson Kevin might want to go with Gus, after all daddy would have to stay with the babies but no doubt papa would be with them. I know Brian is stressed out about Joan, but Justin knows how to reach him. Good story. Love ya.Sally.  



Author's Response:

My Darling Sally, always so happy to see your review.  Brian has warned others not to get on Mother Taylor's bad side so he certainly isn't going to take a chance on doing that himself.  If there is a chnace of making his Sunshine and Mother Tyalor angry he is not going there!!  You are correct Gus can make his Daddy do things that no one else can.  Brian & Justin made it a nice night for everyone with dinner at a great restaurant.  Jennifer was thrilled to restart this traditional with her recently expanded family.  The babies will change a lot of things, Christmas included.  Justin is always there for Brian.  Thanks as always for the review!!!!  your sweet Baboo

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2016 10:07 AM · On: Chapter 21

Always happy to get a new update and glimpse into the boys lives. I've never seen the Nutcracker except as a cartoon the kids used to watch - might just look into that.....

Author's Response:

Happy to know you enjoyed the latest chapter.  I must confess that I am not really a huge fan of the NutCracker but I thought it was a very Jennifer thing to do.  I like the music.  Thanks for taking time to review!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: October 18, 2016 01:06 AM · On: Chapter 21

NIco and Deb-  great interaction-  hope Nico stays away.   Always love the scenes between Justin and Brian.  thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

I think Debbie can handle Nico.  Glad you enjoyed the interaction, I tried to capture Debbie's style.  Glad you enjoyed the B&J interaction as well!  Thanks for the review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: October 17, 2016 11:40 PM · On: Chapter 21

It is great to see another chapter of this story--one of my favorites! How dare Nico threaten Debbie!! What a sleazy creep. He had better reconsider, as there would be hell to pay from all kinds of folks, including B&J. Debbie gave Joe good counsel...I hope he will think it over and then allow Debbie to help him. I'll be interested to see how that relationship develops and what involvement Joe may end up having with the Kinney-Taylor household. Poor Brian had to go to the doghouse because of his thoughtless comment about the ballet. He's just lucky that Jennifer wasn't the one to hear it. Justin was benevolent in the end and let Brian out pretty quickly. Loved all the parts with Gus and the cousins. And, of course, all the affectionate B&J moments. Will be looking forward to whatever you have in store for us next. Thank you!

Author's Response:

Thanks for letting me know my story is one of your favortites.  You should consider joining Midnight Whispers and then you could officially make it a favorite.  There are no emails or other annoying things for the members.  I agree that Nico is sleazy creep!!  I think you are correct that Nico will be sorry that he threatened Debbie.  We will learn more about Joe.  Brian is lucky that Mother Taylor didn't hear his commenst she might not have left him off as easily as Justin did.  I think Justin telling Brian he was "cute" was probably punishment enough.  Gus does love spending time with those big boy cousins.  I believe B&J will always find time for "affectionate moments".  Thanks for taking time to review as you probably know I do love to get reviews!!!!!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: Tiffany (Anonymous) · Date: October 17, 2016 10:46 PM · On: Chapter 21

I was just in the middle of re-reading HH when I was delightfully surprised with a new chapter. Obviously, I had to put the older chapters on hold so I could see what our favorite family was up to. And to no one's surprise, it was a wonderful chapter. And now, back to my re-reading endeavors.

Great work, as per usual :)

-Tiffany



Author's Response:

Sorry to interupt your re-reading but happy to know you thought the newest chapter made the interuption worthwhile.  Thanks for taking time to review since I LOVE hearing from the readers!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2016 07:09 PM · On: Chapter 21

Happy Monday!!

The family is one that many dream about having. Justin having Gus make the wrapping paper is just such a Justin thing to do. Him comforting Brian in the wake of Joan. Justin puts it into perspective for him. Joan is alone. Brian is surrounded by friends and family who love and support him. Such strength between those 2. They nurture each other and are able to watch each other grow in different ways. Eve nif it means putting each other in their place. hehe. justin sure did with Brian re: the ballet. So good to see! I think it's nice for Jen to restart the tradition. She has an entire new family and a new generation to influence. Even if Ballet is theri thing, it's more a matter of being together. for her to bring something from her old life that she enjoyed, into her new life. While Brian adn Joh may not be as enthusiastic, they'll learn to appreciate what Jenn is doing I'm sure.

Good on Deb for stepping up to Nico. He's definitely someone that worries me. wonder if he bit off more than he can chew when he threatened Deb. I hope Joe took what Deb said to heart and stays away!! I really hope Nico stays away. I don't like teh idea of him doing anything to Deb. Or to Joe. 

Lovely lovely chapter! You know what a fan I am of this! I have to say, I was so excited to get this and every update. 

Have a good week!! 

Cheers,

Elaine

 



Author's Response:

Hi Elaine,  I wanted to get this chapter posted so it was there for you to read on Monday!!!  Gus loves doing art projects with his Papa so custom wrapping paper is a prefect activity.  You are right Justin was busy comforting Brian, putting him in his place and annoying him a little by saying he is "cute".  I don't think cute is anything Brian ever aspired to be.  Everyone may not like the ballet but they do all love Grandmom Jen so if she wants to go to the ballet I think they will go without too much struggle.

I think Debbie van handle Nico on her own but something tells me she won't have to.  I think Nico will get the mesage to not mess with Debbie.  Thanks for all the nice comments.  You know what a fan I am of reviews so thanks for always being so faithful about posting one.  We have a perfect relationship where we are both happy!!!!  Cheers back to you!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: Gloria (Anonymous) · Date: October 17, 2016 03:52 PM · On: Chapter 18

Awwwwww all this happiness & Christmas love is the best!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2016 03:02 PM · On: Chapter 21

It's nice to know that having kids in the house doesn't curtail Justin and Brian's activities.  Gus is truly loved and I wonder how Christmas is celebrated at him mom's.  Love the Nutcracker Sweet in this chapter along with Grandma Jen and John and Peter.  Britin is the house of LOVE.

 



Author's Response:

Slways happy to see your review.  Well they didn't get busy in the study since they had to think about dinner.  Pre kids there would have been sex followed by Thai takeout.  Gus does love spending time with Daddy, Papa and big boy cousins.  Throw in an afternoon with Granmom Jen and Gus is a happy, happy boy.  Thanks for all your support!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: October 17, 2016 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 21

Justin had a lot to do this chapter telling Brian a shitty mother is not his fault. Making sure All the boys know the Nutcracker story so they understand what they are seeing in the ballet. And reminding Brian that he loves him because he is cute. I loved that line.not sure I like Deb advertising Brian and Justin's wealth I think Nico would have more Veda on with just the reminder of what happen to Tino. You know I love chapters that are mostly the boys so this was great. Looks like maybe I could get 3 chapters in my birthday month. Thanks for that....



Author's Response:

Hellp my friend, Happy Birthday Month!!!!  Justin was busy reassurng Brian in this chapter.  Although I don't think Brian felt reassured by being decribed as cute!  I don't think Deb was giving away any secrets about Brian & Justin's net worth.  I think it is pretty common knowledge on Liberty Avenue.  Glad you enjoyed this chapter, wouldn't want to disappoint you during your birthday month.  Thanks for the review!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: October 05, 2016 03:27 PM · On: Chapter 20

Sweet Baboo, There must be something really wrong with me, as hateful as she is I still feel for Joan. Craig will be alone for Christmas as he was for Thanksgiving his careing is too little to late. After hearing the story Joan told Peter I felt there was a little regret that she followed in her mother's footsteps.Gus will be with his mothers on Christmas Eve, I was hoping since the boys were raised Catholic and I'm sure Joan has missed daily mass, that Brian and Justin would take the boys and their grandmother to midnight mass, it seems like Brian would do this for the boys and the midnight mass is so beautiful I think even Brians offer her this service as a gift to the boys but deep down he still cares for her in his way. Christmas is a time for renewal. I realize he'll probaby never forgive her but she feels the lost of her daughter and her grandsons even Brian knows a little jester on his part would help her being so alone. Like I said my head is most likely missing some gray matter.Your crazy Sally 



Author's Response:

my darling, deluded Sally, I wouldn't hold out a lot of hope for midnight Mass this Christmas Eve, maybe in the future.  You need to revealuate your sad feelings for Joan.  She has had a bunch of opportunities to start to become part of her son's life and rebuffs each opportunity.  She has had a sad life but seems to want that sadness and lonliness to continue.  Sorry we disagree on the topic of Joan.  Other than your sympathy for Joan I am always happy to read your comments.  Thanks for being such a faithful reviewer.  your sweet Baboo

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: October 05, 2016 02:00 PM · On: Chapter 19

 My Sweet Baboo, I'm really sorry to respond to the last two updates so late. I have been reading a wonderful story that beckons me everytime. The writing is tops and the story draws you in, it is written by a talented man you may have heard of (tongue in cheek and a Brian like smirk)PABoi. I was reading again and on chapter 80 when I decided to continue, then I start over with HOLIDAY HAPPENINGS from the beginning to refresh my memory. In chapter 19 Gus was such a cutie, his concern for others is so like his daddy and papa. While mikey is so selfish when it comes to JR, his mother and Carl and Ben. His concern for Ben is unbelelivable he figures wait long enough and Ben will forget about the rules he's trying to make mikey grow up, he does nothing for anyone and is critical of people who do. I'm interested in the new guy Joe. Deb should take him in, and pack up everything in mikey's room--the Capt. Astro bedspread the wall paper should go--she needs to paint get a new bed and rid the room of all child like mikey presents, make sure mikey know to get his stuff picked up and he no longer has a room there, he is married and needs to be with Ben it's Joe's room now. He needs a place to live, he needs regular meals, and a job, but mainly he needs someone who cares. Your loving Sally



Author's Response:

My darling Sally, always happy to hear from you whenever you post reviews!!!  You have been busy reading!!!!  One of these days maybe I will re-read all 100 chapters of the "wonderful story".  Mikey is unchnaging and unthinking, I think it is nice that there are some thing that we can always count on.  I don't think Ben is going to forget about Mikey getting a job and starting to pay back the money he used for back rent.  I'm pretty sure we will hear more about Joe in future chapters.  Thanks for the review!!!!!!  your sweet Baboo

Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2016 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 20

YO!! It's MONDAY!!!!!!!! :) Guess who?? ;)

I find it facinating how you are able to go from one extreme to another in your characterizations. I mean, you have the great family dynamics between B&J along with Gus, Jennifer, Alice, Charlie, John and Peter, (and friends) then you have the opposite end of the spectrum with Joan, Ron, Nancy, etc. You do justice to all the characters beautifully, whether it be in a positive or a negative way. You make us want to totally embrace the good, yet equally want to kick the asses of the others.

It kind of felt like watching a Christmas movie in this chapter. A mix between a hallmark family smooshie movie and Scrooge. LOL. Gus's heart...oh, mine just swells at this young boy. He's truly a product of Brian and Justin. who says biology has to be the biggest part. Nope. Peter and John are also examples of this. Seeing the difference between when they first arrived to now is amazing. (mind you, their negativity didn't last very long) both of they standing up to Joan they way they did, showing affection towards her, yet still telling her how ungrateful she is. Peter was right, she's so blind to them being gay, that she can't see anything else. Like the adage, can't see the forest for the trees. Peter almost made me weep with his wish for Joan. Glad she's gone finally. While there might not be much interaction with her, she's like a cloud overhead. A constant reminder of negativity. It always boggles me when I come across people like that. The right wing "christians" who take teh bible vertbatim. I know....I've said this before, but really....how can people call them selves Christian, when it's so blatantly obvious that they don't live a Christian life? That they seem to prefer the rigidity of the the Old testament over the love anacceptance in the New, yet it's out of god sense of love and acceptance that we even HAVE a New Testament. *sigh*...people astound me sometimes.

Nice touch at the end, where the boys come in and hug Brian. Seeing Joan's negativity forst hand on a daily basis, definitely makes them appreciate Brian and Justin so much more. Not for what they can give the boys in a material way, but the love and support they receive. 

Lovely chapter once again. 

Cheers,

Elaine

 



Author's Response:

Hello my Monday Buddy. always so happy to see your review!!  Your comments are always so kind and so good fro my ego, thank you for that!!!!!!  I love Gus in this story and I agree he is a product of his Daddies who are always there to support him and reassure him.  I sometimes think I should have made John & Peter more troublesome at the begiining of their stay but I think they realized life was SO MUCH BETTER with the uncles after a year living with drug addicts that they fell in line quickly.  Joan is a cold hearted bitch, no way around that fact.  To Joan Brian & Justin are gay so they are bad people no matter what they do.  Peter made a nice wish for his grandmother but I don't think that wish is coming true anytime soon.  I am so with you regardng the old testament "christians".  The world would be so much better if people didn't judge each other.  There is an old song "What the world needs now is love"  and boy that is truer now more than ever!!!!!!! 

I'm not sure Brian thought those hugs were "nice"  In some ways I think he is more comfortable with Joan's indifference.  Elaine, my friend, thanks you for all your support for this saga.  I really appreciate all your reviews!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2016 05:14 AM · On: Chapter 20

    It was a fun and happy chapter until we got to Joan.  I had no

idea which way things would go with her.  But you know, as Peter

said, her going home to be alone is probably what she wanted. 

Well she got her wish.  It is sad, and just before Christmas.  A

small piece of me hoped that with the holidays, and having Peter

and John around, she would become more accepting of Brian and

Justin.  Oh well!

   A word of warning.  In his own way, Michael’s situation is becoming similar to Joan.  He has said enough awful things that

who except for Debbie cares about him.  That is sad.

   How about a good word for Claire?  Let me throw a little guilt

and maybe since it is Christmas, how about a visit by her sons or

maybe some gifts?  Just a suggestion. 

   Anyway, thanks for the chapter I enjoyed it.

  Oh yes, Brian and the tinsel was very funny.  I had to mention

that.

DavidR

 



Author's Response:

I don't thnk Joan is sad.  I think she prefers to be alone with her bible and lament how the world is a bad place.  No one quite meets her standards so she avoids everyone.  I think Ben still has some feelings for Michael but he really needs to get a job and contribute to their household.  I believe Debbie may try and help the job hunt, anything to keep him out of her happy home with Carl.  Wonder who she will ask about giving Mikey a job???????  You are correct Claire should get some Christmas gifts from her sons, that is only right.  No visit until she owns up to her responsibility for what John & Peter went through in that last year they lived with her.  She has never apologized to them or to Brian & Justin for the kidnapping attempt.  Happy to know you enjoyed this chapter.  Borderline OCD Brian is the perfect person to place that tinsel one strand at a time.  Always look forward to your comments, you always give me food for thought.  Thanks for the review, everyone know how much I love to get reviews!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: October 03, 2016 02:19 AM · On: Chapter 20

Godd to know that John and Peter recognize how ungrateful and angry Joan is.  Glad that they see how good Brian and Justin are.



Author's Response:

I think John & Peter have a long history with Joan and have no illusions about her character,  Especially in the young hope springs eternal.  So far there seems to be no hope for Joan.  John & Peter are wellaware of how good their life is with the uncles.  Happy to know you are still enjoying the story.  Thanks for the review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2016 03:11 PM · On: Chapter 20

Sorry this is a little late.  I spent a week at Disney and while I had a chance to read this there I couldn't remember my password to leave a comment.  It was so nice for Gus to come home and see all the decorations.  I enjoyed the hiking vs walking talk and it looks as though hiking won.  Charlie is so smart to come up with a plastic sheet under Gus chair when he had his favorite meal of spaggetti and meatballs.  The decorating of the tree was another great time had by all.  Gus is also so sweet to worry about Joe. Justin and Gus going shopping made a perfect time for John and Peter to say goodbye to Joan.  She had a lot of nerve saying that Brian was self-rightous as that is a perfect description of herself.  John let her have it though and though Peter was nicer about it he admitted that he agreed with John.  So Alice and Cassie ended up taking Joanie home.  As Alice so eliquently but it "Goodbye and good riddance.  Loving this and looking forward to yet another chapter.



Author's Response:

Hope you had fun at Disney. Never too late for a review!!!  I don't think Brian actually cares about walk vs hike, he just doesn't like his Sonny Boy taking Tucker's side of the discussion.  When my niece and nephew were young we always put a plastic table cloth under their chairs if we ate in the dining room.  Makes a meal much less stresful.  Joan sees things her way and she thinks she is always correct when most of the time she is on the wrong side of things.  She will be happy alone in her hosue with no one to argue with her point of view.  My friend, thanks as always fr your review.  I never feel a chapter is complete until I read your comments!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2016 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 20

yay. Joan the evil witch is gone. I hope she does not ruin their Christmas.

Author's Response:

I think Joan is as happy to be away from them as they are for her to be gone.  I don't see any Christmas contact.  Thanks for the review!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2016 12:42 PM · On: Chapter 20

I can just see a neurotic Brian hanging each piece of tinsel uniformly spaced on the tree. I think Justin's excitement has Brian letting go of his childhood disappointments about Christmas. Later Hon ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

Brian does have that touch of OCD, a perfect tinsel hanger.  I think Justin and Gus are both reponsible for Brian's cautious enjoyment of Christmas.  Thanks for the review.  Hugs,  Bill

Reviewer: shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: October 01, 2016 08:02 AM · On: Chapter 20

My favorite kind of chapter the 5 boys getting ready for the Holidays. Brian got his holiday wish Joan is gone. Love how Jennifer handled Ron. I think all 3 of those boys are going to have a great Holiday and I can't wait until there are 5 kids in that house. Sorry for the short review but I am happy to see another chapter and I cant wait for more Especially since I am very curious what Brian got for Justin.



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed the first October update.  Joan has returned to her single blessedness.  Lots of extravagent gifts will be exchanged.  Thanks for the review!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 27, 2016 11:41 PM · On: Chapter 19

I don't mind the wait when we get such a long and wonderful chapter. I love all the little details that you give us. It is a hallmark of your writing. I really think it is what makes me feel like I could just read this story all day. It is comforting. Highlights for me in this chapter: of course, all the affectionate B&J moments, Brian's listing of all the good things that had happened during the year, the oatmeal, brown sugar, and raisins and Alice supplying Brian with a spoon, Brian shopping for princess stuff, Brian's evil thoughts of Ted and Blake in their royal garments, the story of Joe and how Gus wanted to help, I'm hoping we learn more of Joe's backstory and what happens next with him. I hate to think of him on his own at such a young age. And, the fact that someone physically hurt him. Good for Debbie regarding her determination to get Michael to grow up. Hope she stays the course. As always, thanks for this chapter of your terrific story.



Author's Response:

Thanks for being so understandng about the long wait and for your very kind comments.  Happy to know you enjoyed this chapter. I do enjoy the little details so I am glad you do also.  Between Debbie and Gus I think we will learn more about Joe.  Debbie is going to try her best to let Michael fight his own battles but I don't think she can just go cold turkey.  I think there may be some back sliding.  Thank you very much for taking the time to leave a review.  I LOVE to hear from the readers!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2016 05:46 PM · On: Chapter 19

Great chapter as all ways. I just love Gus .He is a great kid , and it is because of his dads.

Author's Response:

Glad to know you enjoyed this chapter.  Thanks for letting me know!  Gus is a cutie who wants everyone to be as happy as he is.  Thanks for the review!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: julia005 (Anonymous) · Date: September 27, 2016 07:21 AM · On: Chapter 19

What a fine chapter - so heartwarming. I hope Joe will find good ways to help himself, get a decent job...and a surrogate family. We will see!

The pre-christmas time throws so much hapiness around, even though the presents B&J are buying are some kind of....very american, and Deb´s decor ;))) Can´t wait to know about the presents John and Peter will get.

I hope you are well. My RL keeps me hyper busy. Thanks for every new chapter, I appreciate it.



Author's Response:

Julia, how nice to hear from you.  I'm happy to kmow you are still reading and enjoying the story.  I think we will hear more about Joe in the future.  "American" Christmas gifts is very interesting, I would be interested to know what other gifts would be.  I am going to have to do some internet research on Christmas gifts around the world.  That is something I never gave much thought to but am now interested in the differences.  B&J gifts are going to be very extravagent for many people.  I am doing great, thanks for taking some time to post a review!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2016 08:23 AM · On: Chapter 19

Gus is so sweet - the boys have taught him well. I'm interested in reading more about Joe - sounds like he's going to be important to the family. Good to see that Debbie's going to let Michael take responsibility for his own mistakes - about time..... Looking forward to more.

Author's Response:

Gus is a sweet boy.  He is fortunate to have so much love in his life.  I think there will be more about Joe in upcoming chapters.  I don't think Debbie will be able to cut all the apron strings but she is trying.  Thanks for the review and for not telling me what a rat I am for making you wait so long for this update!!  Bill

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: September 25, 2016 03:47 AM · On: Chapter 19

I really like the way you had Gus take charge of giving Joe a good meal and a warm, safe place to live.  Love the the whole family from Deb to Brian and Justin are so generous.  Great job. do we see a new character in the story?



Author's Response:

Gllad you like a "caring Gus".  Deb has always looked out for the underdog and I thnk she has he sights on Joe so we may be seeing a new character.  Happy you enjoyed this chapter.  Thanks for the review!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2016 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 19

Hi, Bill! Another delightful chapter. I LOVED the part with Gus and Joe, and how he showed such compassion for him. That was so sweet and touching, and perfectly fit in with the Christmas spirit. 

I wonder if we will hear from Joe again?  As for Michael, ugh. He really needs to get his priorities straight, and get his act together. Not sure if that will happen or not, though.

As always, looking forward to your next part!  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Hi Kim, glad to know you enjoyed the latest chapter.  Sorry it was such a long wait.  That Gus has his priorities in order for sure.  Lucky for him there won't be any reduction in gifts.  B&J are going to be quite extravagent in their holiday gift giving.  I think Debbie has her eye on Joe so I'm pretty sure we will hear more about him.  Just what this story needs another character!  Mikey may be forced to grow up some there is no one left to rescue him from himself.  Thanks for all your support.  Hope you are doing okay.  Thanks for the review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2016 03:23 PM · On: Chapter 19

Wonderful story it is my favorite story I can not wait to read more of this story



Author's Response:

Thanks for letting me know my story is your favorite, that is really cool!!!  Love to hear from the readers so thanks for posting a review!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2016 02:56 PM · On: Chapter 19

Hi,

   That was a real nice chapter.  There is no doubt about the

kindness and generosity of Brian and Justin.  As evidence, it was

the suggestion that for some in their emply, no Christmas bonus

was necessary as B&J have done enough during the year which

was more than enough.  For B&J, as the expression goes, it is

Christmas every day.  That is such a nice thing to say about them. 

I laugh each time someone tries to say something nice to Brian,

such as a thank you, he runs for the hills, or rather his emails.

   Joe?  Well I don’t know if that is a one-time mention in this story

or will we see him again.  He is now connected with Debbie. 

Things are looking up for him, but he will have to do his part.

   Michael?  That is a tough one.  It appears that Debbie and

maybe others will work with Michael and see if they can change

him.  Well – it may be too late.  Like the last chapter when Jen

told Craig, that basically there is no longer room for him, and he is

not missed, that same can soon be said about Michael.  If Craig

and Michael were to be written out of this story, would anyone

notice.  That is one sad comment.  

   Thanks for the chapter, it was beautifully done.

DavidR   

 



Author's Response:

Hi David, I was just worrying earlier to day that you may have given up on me after waiting so long for an update.  I was really happy to see your review!!  Both Brian and Justin are very interested in taking care of the people they love.  They have a charitable foundation to help people who need it.  Brian like to think that people don't know was a caring person he is so he avoids any mention of it whenever he can.  I have a feeling we will see more of Joe.  He is in Debbie's radar and it will be difficult for him to avoid her concern.  Mikey is MIkey, he is going to have to do some growing up, he has no choice.  I don't think Debbie will completely stop looking out for her baby boy but she knows she has to limit her help for Michael's sake.  I appreciate all your support!!!  Thanks for being such a faithful reviewer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2016 01:50 AM · On: Chapter 19

Oh that was amazing.  Gus really is a sweet kid.  Justin and Brian are pretty special themselves.  They all know the true meaning of Christmas.  



Author's Response:

Thanks for the nice comments.  I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter.  Thanks for taking the time to review.  Love REVIEWS!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2016 12:15 AM · On: Chapter 19

That was so sweet of Gus to suggest they take care of Joe. I wonder what Joe's decision will be when his three weeks are up, maybe the Taylor-Kinney household might be expanding before the twins arrive... Great chapter!

Hugs ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

I think Joe may join a household but I'm not sure it will be the Taylor-Kinney home.  Glad you enjoyed this chapter!!  Hugs back to you.  Bill

Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2016 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 19

Hello friend!! Oh I've been waiting so patiently for an update. HOpoe RL is treating you OK. It does tend to get in the way now and again.

Oh Deb. It's so hard as a parent to when to let go adn let your kid make mistakes. You want to protect hem, but by over doing it you end up with, well...Michael. LOL. she's finally realizing her part in it. I can't really blame her, as it's every parent's first instinct, especially as a single parent. You don't realizr the implications until it's too late. REally gald she sees it now though and will do her best to make him grow up and become the man he should've become years ago. (I'm not holding my breath mind you. ;) ) she has Carl by her side for support. He'll gently and lovingly keep her on teh right path. He also won't put up with Michael's crap. 

I wish we could see pictures of Ted, blake and Nina in full costume! That would be a site! I have the feeling Brian will appreciate and enjoy that visual more than anyone else. Heck...He already is! I can fully imagine him snickering at the thought. Of course ted and Blake will dress up and play along with Nina. JR is going to absolutely love it too! 

You always know when a child has been raised right, and Alice made sure that Brian knoew that it was his and Justin's influence on gus that had him have such a loving and giving heart. My goodness...tears were welling reading that part. It was perfectly done. I'm coming away from this with a light heart adn a big assed smile now. thank you!!

While Michael is always a disappointment to some degree....he's sinking further adn further to a level of utter disbelief. His ability to make excuses for things, for his behavior etc is astonishing. He fought for JR, yet now...hasn't a care about it. It's all about himself, not even seeing his own part in his downfall. You know when you pull the pug in teh bath, and you see that swirl going down the drain. almost like a tiny water spout. That's how I see his life at the moment. that's the visual I often get with regards to him. I guess time will only tell if he ever gets his shit together. Stop feeling sorry for himself. Like Isaid, I'm not holding my breath, but for every one;s sake, includinghis own, I can only hope.  (Just not too soon as his troubles are always fun to read about, What can I say...I'm bitchy with regards to him. lol)

AS always it's such a gift to receive an update to this absolutely incredible story.

Many many thanks for sharing your gift and talent with is. 

cheers,

Elaine



Author's Response:

Hi Elaine, Sorry for the long wait for this chapter.  RL is good just had friends visiting me and did some visiting myself, all good stuff but took time from writing.  Debbie felt she always had to protect Michael but sadly that kept him from ever standing on his own.  Sadly now she is seeing the error of her ways.  Poor Linds & Mel have done nothing to impress Alice or Jennifer, they are both firmly on the side of Brian and Justin and always will be.  Mikey just deends on others to give JR a soeca Christmas and lucky for her Uncle Bri & Uncle Jus are there to make sure Santa doesn't disappoint her.  Mikey doing down the drain has a certain poetic ring to it.  I think he may pull himsefl together enough to get a job.  But where will that job be, that is the question????  I'm not seeing smooth sailing on the job front for Mikey.

I am happy to know that you still find this long saga interesting!!  I am always happy to read your reviews, thank you for never disappointing me!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: Glo (Anonymous) · Date: September 23, 2016 05:41 PM · On: Chapter 19

Love Gus! He is the true meaning of Christmas! 

I hope Michael can get his head out of his ass...jeez



Author's Response:

Gus is the spirit of Christman Present!!!!   Not so sure about Michael performing that task sucessfully!  Thanks for the review I love to hear from the readers!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2016 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 19

Happy I am to see a new chapter.  Sadly Deb is finally seeing what all her over protectiveness has caused.  Michael expects to be rescued from whatever trouble he gets himself into.  Brian on the other hand is a happy camper.  In spite of the troubles during the past year, he's contented with his lot.  That being Justin.  Justin has a bit day planned.  Talking Alice into accepting her bonus, stopping to get stocking stuffers for the younger set, getting JR and Nina's gifts.  Wish I could have a picture of the two girls in their finery and their dolls.  Brian picking up the rest of items for the little girls and finding a few things for Ted and Blake.  Too funny.  Everyone gets a bonus!  Then we come to Michael who isn't actively looking for a job and doesn't think HE needs to get JR more gifts.  Selfish much?  So much trouble to schedule time with Gus.  At least Deb is having her usual Christmas get together.   Last day of school and Brian and Justin along with John and Peter pick Gus up before going to the diner, which is decorated for Christmas much to Gus' delight.  I'm not surprised that they come upon a young boy in need of help, or that Gus is insistent that the boy not go hungry.  Great chapter every way you look at it.



Author's Response:

Hello my friend, I like the Yodaest start to your review.  When Deb looks at how she is treated by her other "boys" she can't help but see Michae;'s flaws.  Brian knows how much happier he is now than he was pre-Justin.  Justin got a lot done in a single day.  JR & Nina will go crazy over their princess dolls and matching dresses.  I think Nina will be happy to see King Teddy Man and Prince Daddy in their crowns & capes.  Brian learned from Justin that you get the kids on your side and you can get indulgent parents to do almost anything.  Michael depends on other people to take up the slack for him.  Luckily JR had people in her life looking out for her.  I am thinking Deb will not be able to resist helping Michael find a job.  Melanie knows she is playing in the major leagues when Jennifer comes up to bat.  Grandmom Jen hit a home room with the Christmas scheduling.  Debbie is ging to be proud showing off her new kitchen to everyone on Christmas Eve.  I think we may here more from Joe in future chapters.  Thanks, as always, for all your kind comments!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2016 11:33 AM · On: Chapter 19

Oh that was awesome chapter and I am glad Debbie is at last getting some insight into Michaels selfish thinking process

Author's Response:

Happy to know you enjoyed this much delayed chapter.  I think Debbie can't help noticing how well she is treated by other people while her son thinks only of himself.  Thanks for the review!!!!!!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: September 23, 2016 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 19

I am not sure why we are always amazed when we hear someone has raised an amazing child. President Obama spoke about a letter he received from a 6 year old who spoke about taking in the little Syrian boy who was all over the news after a bomb went off near his home and he was injured he wanted to share his toys and teach him to ride his bike. I know Brian would say this is all Justin's doing but Gus sees that his Daddy doesn't fight it so he knows it's both of them. I can't wait to see what everyone gets for the holiday maybe most of all what Brian gets Justin. I do love this chapter was just the most important 5 with only a little Deb and Alice thrown in those are always my favorite chapters can't wait till it's 7 with the babies.  Just FYI I minded the long delay but here comes my October beg fest since it's my birthday month and while I would love to demand 4 new chapters I will happily settle for 3, 2 if they are extra long. Thanks for continuing to write this I still love it.



Author's Response:

I think children view the world in a simple way - things are good or bad, people are happy or sad.  As we get older we start analyzing, some of that is good but some clouds our view of the world.  I belive Gus sees all the good things that his Daddy does and also his Daddy is always there for Gus.  Glad you enjoyed this mostly family chapter.  Every once in a while I do feel the other characters need their turn but I do want the sotry to be centered around Brian & Justin.  September is my borthday month so I appreciate you not giving me too hard a time about the delay between updates.  I will try my best to comply with your October "requests".  Thanks for continuing to provide so much support for this long saga!!!!!!  I do LOVE to get reviews and you never disappoint me.  Bill

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2016 07:01 AM · On: Chapter 18

Finally made some time for a little reading and immediately opened your last update, which has been languishing on my virtual bookshelf for the last three weeks.

Can't say I feel much sympathy for either Joan or Craig. If they're a bit lonely with the holidays approaching, I feel like it serves them right since they both deliberately alienated themselves from their family.

I just love the way Justin helps Brian feel good about himself. Joan doesn't stand a chance against Justin, thankfully. The open and honest communication between Justin and Brian is such a pleasure to read. d84;a039;

I'm already looking forward to the next update! Thanks for continuing this terrific saga.

Karynn, aka eureka1



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed the last update, just posted a new chapter.  I agree Joan & Craig are reponsible for their empty lives.  Jennifer let Criag have ti with both barrels letting him know how full her life was an that no one was missing him.  Joan is delusional to think Brian would ever side with her against Justin.  Thanks Karynn for the review!!!  You know I love to hear from the readers.  Bill

Reviewer: Jacket1 (Anonymous) · Date: September 09, 2016 01:42 AM · On: Chapter 1

Do you ever think that Gus is a little boy with normal curiosity.  He sees Peter or John enter or leave the pool house and wonder what that is about.  He waits till he is alone, knocks on the door, and Joan comes face to face with her seven year old child. He is let's face it, her blood grandchild.  He wants to know who this women is and she just may look at this as a do over to be kind to the child she neglected.  Gus  is sweet kind and innocent.  He would be thrilled to have a new grandmother. {if she was nice to him}

Love Love Love these two stories.  You are wonderful.

I cannot admit how many times I have reread these stories.

Thank you

 



Author's Response:

I don't think Brian wants Gus anywhere near Joan.  John & Peter have done a good job of taking Joan her food when Gus is not around on the weekend. Not sure Joan would be nice to Gus. Thanks for you nice comments!!!!! I am happy to know you have enjoyed my stories so much. I love to hear from the readers. Sorry there hasn't been an update in a while RL has been keeping me busy but things should quiet down next week and I concentrate on posting an update. Thanks so much for taking time to post a review to let me know you enjoy this saga!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bill

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2016 07:51 PM · On: Chapter 18

I think this is one of my favorite chapters in the sequel so far, Bill!  A little smut, mixed in with a feisty, fiery Justin, protecting his family.  I love those elements in this chapter!

Thank you for posting on here. Updates to this story are always a treat to me, and eagerly anticipated by all of our readers, I'm sure.  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Hi Kim, Happy to know you enjoyed this chapter,  Justin has had about as much of Joan as he can stand.  He gave her some food for thought about her behavior and what the cnosequences could be.  A little smut is always a good thing.  Thanks for taking tiem to  review!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2016 12:47 PM · On: Chapter 18

Thanks for the update. Yum, Christmas cookies, damn it not even fall yet... Hugs ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

My story timing is really off with real life.  Around Christams time it will probably be summer in the story.  I gues that is why it is called fiction.  Happy to know you are still reading and enjoying.  Hugs back,  Bill

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: August 26, 2016 09:01 PM · On: Chapter 18

My Sweet Baboo, I think my mind wanders! I forgot to mention mikey (gag). Deb has worked hard all her life, even with aids Uncle Vic worked hard so I don't understand mikey being such a lazy little turd! I think he belives Ben will forget about him getting a job-he says he has no skills and that is certainly the truth, but how much skill does it take to bus a table, work at a convience store. or simply ''do you want fries with that''. I loved Justin watching Brian playing with the train like a tiny boy so enthralled with train and all the sit up, knowing it was something he probably wanted all his childhood. The way you describe it we could just see his joy. Love you Sally



Author's Response:

Darling Sally, double review are an added thrill so I am happy for your wandering mind!!!  I think Deb has helped Mikey avoid growing up, she always tries to solve his problems.  I am thinking she might try anf help him find a job.  I wonder who she might ask to give Mikey a job???  Justin loves to see Brian forget about being strong and just have fun.  You are probably correct and a train platform is something Brian always wanted for himself.  Always happy to hear from you!!!!!  Love from your sweet Baboo.

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: August 26, 2016 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 18

Hi my sweet Baboo, I'm really thrown by Joan,sometimes I feel bad about her life she raised her children the way she was brought up. No love -no attention, I guess that's all she knew that would be bad enough but married an abusive drunk who didn't care about anyone, it was all about him, Then the next minute I want to take her Bible and hit her in the head, to get her attention. I loved Jen telling Craig about her Thanksgiving and all family and friends having a wonderful time, when Craig thought it was just queers (stupid man) I think Alice's grandchildren calling Brian uncle and all the kids calling Jen -grandmom Jen makes her day and telling Craig about Kevin and going to his school I was surprised Craig admiited to Jen the plan his advisor delivered to him is working and moving he can walk to work, joined a gym changeing his spending habits really was working for him at work and in his life.I was surprise he actually called Brian instead of Kinney. Joan and Craig are so sad I feel bad for them they have no one, not a relative or even a friend maybe the twins can help them to be come better people and share in the new blessings, your loving Sally.  



Author's Response:

My darling Sally, always happy to see your review and know you are still reading and enjoying the story.  Joan has had a very unhappy life and she seems determined to try and make the people arounf her have unhappy lives.  I think Justin's "plans" for her may help her realize she needs to change her attitude.  We'll have to wait and see if she got the message.  Craig is lonely and startung to understad what a mistake he made with Justin.  Happy you picked up on Craig calling Brian by name insread of Kinney.  He wasn't completely comfortable doing that.  Jennifer really enjoyed letting Craig know how full her life is and how much she enjoys all the people Justin & Brian have introduced into the "family".

Craig and Joan are in some ways their own worst enemines.  Thanks for always being such a faithful reviewer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  your sweet Baboo

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2016 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 18

    Terrific chapter, so much to comment on.

    It is true, Craig has been left out.  More specifically, he is not needed and not wanted.  Biologically, he is Justin’s father, and soon to be a Grandfather.  Who needs him?  If he were to disappear, no one would care or think about him, except I guess on Father’s Day.

    That was a terrific conversation between Joan and Justin.  I am still ‘smarting’ how dismissive she was about Justin in the previous chapter, referring to Justin as “his boy”.  I remember it well and haven’t forgiven her.  I believe that wasn’t the first time. I do not think that Justin would put her in a substandard Nursing Home.  But she will have to change her attitude or at least her tone when it comes to him.  Justin now has power to affect her life.  He really always did, but now she has been made fully aware of it. 

   That brings me to Michael.  It appears that no one is able to influence him.  He just lost what I thought was his dream, the comic book store.  Well it wasn’t much of a dream, it was too much work.  JR?  Well it seems he is doing less and less for her.  So with nothing to lose, why would he change?

   At this point we can throw Craig and Michael overboard, and there is no loss. 

   Thanks again for the story, looks like Christmas is going to be terrific.  So many good and kind people.

The train set?  Looks like the two boys (Gus and Brian) are going to have a great time.

   DavidR

 

  



Author's Response:

Happy to know you enjoyed this chapter and always gald to read your comments!!  Jennifer was careful not to tell Craig about the twins.  She enjoyed letting him know how happy and fullfilled her life is without him.  She let him have the info right between the eyes and making sure he understood how much was due to Justin & Brian.  I don't think Justin would really do that either but I'm pretty sure Joan is so sure he wouldn't carry through on that plan.  Even Brian isn't 100% sure Justin wouldn't do it.  Mikey is Mikey, he prefers to avoid adult reposnibilities as often as possible.  Deb has kind of fed into that tenancy and made it worse.  I think she may "help" Mikey find a job.  Can you guess who she might ask to give Mikey a job??????  Hint:  It won't be Carig Taylor.

I have thought a lot about Christmas presents and have pretty much decided that the gifts will be extravagant.  I agree that Gus & Brian are really, really going to enjoy that train platform.  Thanks for the review, you know I LOVE to get them!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: BritinForever (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2016 11:05 AM · On: Chapter 18

Wow!  Lots of confrontation in this chapter.  I'm glad that Brian backed up Justin with Joan.  She is completely delisiounal if she thinks Brian would ever pick her over Justin.

 

Go Jen!!!!  Mama is protecting her cubs.  In my mind, there isn't any redemption for Craig.

 

Thanks for the update!!



Author's Response:

I think most of the time Joan is living in her own reality.  Anyone who thinks they can divide Brian & Justin is delusional.  Anyone who hurts Mother Taylor's boys should be away she will hunt you down and hurt you.  Happy to know you enjoyed this chapter.  Thanks for the review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: August 26, 2016 02:04 AM · On: Chapter 18

Loved Justin's talk with Joan and Brian letting him know he would support his decision.  Why did Craig show up?  I wonder if Justin and Brian will even open the presents.  Please continue writing this wonderful universe even after the holiday season



Author's Response:

I don't think Joanloved that talk but it sure got her attention.  I think Craig is realizing what a mistake he made in rejecting his son.  This story has a couple more chapters to go.  The saga will continue with "To Have and To Hold".  That story will begin with the arrival of the twins.  I appreciate you nice comments about my story and thanks for the review!!!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 26, 2016 12:54 AM · On: Chapter 18

As well he should...reap what you sow, Craig. You are lucky that B&J helped you get your life back. So Joan did put her Good Book aside and thought about what Peter said. Is it possible that she is thinking about changing her attitude? Don't cross Justin when it comes to Brian. I think Justin just might make good on his warning. Nice that Brian is getting to experience fun with trains. Who wouldn't want to join in the holiday celebrations when listening to Jennifer describe all the happenings? Wonder what action Joan will take next? Kind of afraid that she may be working on a way to retaliate against Justin. Thanks for this and can't wait for the next chapter. Hope you are still feeling well.

Author's Response:

I am feeling great, thanks!!!  Jennifer really let Craig know how full her life is and how she has so many people to love and who love her.  If those presents are not nice Craig better watch his back!!!  I suspect Joan got the message that actions have consequences.  She may try and improve her attitude before she winds up with Nurse Ratchit taking care of her.  I don't think Joan has a chnace against the team of B&J.  Thanks for the review!!!!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: Linda (Anonymous) · Date: August 25, 2016 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 1

Love both your stories. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2016 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 18

So much going on.  I hope Joanie tries to leave and they let her.  Then court proceedings can begin and Joanie will learn consequences.  The kids, and Brian, are going to enjoy that train set.  Craig may or may not be coming around, but I've got to admit he realizes that the changes he's had to make were for the best.  Another more than excellent chapter!!!



Author's Response:

Hello my faithful friend and reviewer!!!!!!  I really appreciate all your support.  I am sure every author whose story you read is grateful for your consistent reviews!!!!  I think Justin gave Joan a good dose of FoF (Fear of Fags) and she may reconsider her horrible attitude.  I think the train set will be very popular.  Justin will need a crowbar to get Brian and Gus out of that room.  We are going to have to wait and see what happen with Craig.  Jennifer is going to be keeping her eye on him.  Craig steps out of line and the wrath of Mother Taylor will smote him!  You know how much I love reviews so, as always, thanks for the review!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: rulisteningbj (Anonymous) · Date: August 25, 2016 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 18

I am glad Craig feels left out.  Good job Jen filling him in on how wonderful it is to be in the boys lives.  I love Justin's conversation with Joan.  Then when Brian went to out back him up it was perfect.  Great update.  Looking forward to Christmas.

Dee Dee



Author's Response:

Jen stuck that "my life is wonderful" knife in and twisted it around.  I thnk that was quite a wake up call tp Joan to realize her actions could have consequences.  Not sure why she thought Brian would defend her when she never defended him.  Glad you enjoyed the latest chapter.  Thanks for the review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2016 03:55 PM · On: Chapter 18

HI! Oh how I've been waiting for this. 

well....seems like Joan's attempt at a softer side was tyically brief. It reminds me of young Brian actually. whe he would show a softer side of himself to Justin, then make up for it later and be an asshole x5.  Justin was.............BRILLIANT! I loved every word, every nuance. (Actually, there were no nuances...he just laid out straight to her) No threats, just was blunt and to the point. told her they was it was going to be. He was right in that she needs to read the New testament rather than sticking to the old. Has always been a sore point with me. Can't stand it when people used old testament scripture to prove their point, when New Testament give it a complete swtich up. But they don't like that. It's amazing that they call themselves Christians at all. I grew up in teh anglican church...very involved and I never remember eharing words of hate. We have friends of the family who's kids were gay. Neve were they ostrasized. I mean there were old buttys of course, no getting away from them anywhere you go, but the leadership of our church was totally accepting. I guess when I see church's doing the opposite my blood boils.

anyway.....sorry, I digress.  the one thing I love about this entire story, is the conversation and iteractions between teh characters. It's like you're watching them live. They all engage each other...we see them having normal; conversations, even on little things. so realistic I van visualize it all the time. Great ixaple is the cookie scene. just the little part about Brian taking the cookies up to Justin and John thumping his forehead in realization. It's that kind of attention to details that make this so brilliant and you you such an extraordinary writer.

Now.....what the hell is up with Craig? Is he going to do the softening I though Joan was going to do? what's made him realize what all he's lost? O love that Jennifer is not fogiving here. He really doesn't deserve it at this point. He's got alot to do if he truly wants forgivness from anyone. I always taught my daughter that it's easy to say sorry. But if you truly are sorry, than you change the behaviour otherwise the apoligy is pointless. Craig's ot even at the apology stage yet. He's got a long road ahead of him. He seems kind of grateful for what Brian and Justim forced him to do re" the loan. It's like they forcd him to grow up or something.

Man..I just go on and on all the time on these reviews don't I. talk talk talk....

Ok. this is me signing off. I was so happy to end my day last night with this. Thak you!!!!!

Cheers,

Elaine



Author's Response:

So exciting when you review on a non Monday!!!!!  I think Joan got a whole new appreciation of Justin.  Her life style of staying removed from other people has made her very vulnerable.  I agreee about the "Christians" who never quote Christ in all their hateful rants.  I find that extremely annoying!!!  Christ's message was love and acceptance and I don't understand why people filled with hate and prejudice even want to be identified as "Christian".  I can do you one better from Anglican - I am a product of 12 years of Catholic education.  You can never completely get over the guilt that those years instill in you!

I digressed right along with you!!!  Your comments are so kind that I am blushing sitting here at my computer, not sure ideserve such praise.  Your review will keep me smiling all day.  I am happy you enjoy the story so much.  I can hardly believe how long I have been writing this saga and it the loyal reviewers like you that keep it going.

I think Craig realized what he has lost by his behavior and by not loving and accepting his son.  Jennifer let him know how full and happy her life is.  Hard to say whether Justin will ever forgive Craig and accept him back in his life.  We know where Brian will stand on that subject.  I think Craig is surprised that the things he tried to fight B&J on actually turned out to be big benefts to him.  Maybe he wants to be friendly so they can give him some more good advice.

Always look forward to reading your comments!!!!  Thanks for all your reviews!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

 

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2016 03:27 PM · On: Chapter 18

I just love a pissed off Justin. He is a little scary. Great chapter.

Author's Response:

I think witnessing a pissed off Justin helps keep Brian in line.  Thanks for the review, happy to know you are still enjoying this saga!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: Lorma (Anonymous) · Date: August 25, 2016 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 18

Both Jen and Justin have a way with words and can be as to tough as nails! Don't mess with their loved ones.  Great analgogy about the sour milk.  Fits Joan to the t.



Author's Response:

It is a mistake to make Jennifer or Justin angry and they will always do the utmost to defend & protect their loved ones.  I have to say I liked the sour milk analogy myself, I thought it fit Joan perfectly.  Glad you liked it as well.  Thanks for being so faithful about reviewing, as you know I LOVE to read reviews!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!     Bill

Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: August 25, 2016 12:47 PM · On: Chapter 18

Bravo for Justin but I think Brian's involvement by adding his two cents was over kill.
Christmas is going to be happy for almost everyone. Craig screwed himself over with no one to blame but himself.
I don't think Gus is going to get much sleep once he sees the train set up. Neither will Brian. Ha!

Author's Response:

I think Brian just wanted Joan to know that he and Justin are a team and that he would always support his partner.  I think Carig is starting to realize just what a huge mistake he made not supporting and loving his son.  Jennifer let him know how happy she was and how Brian and Justin are surrounded by loving friends and family.  Justin may have to put a lock on the train room door to keep father and son out.  Always happy to hear from you.  Thanks for reviewing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2016 10:35 AM · On: Chapter 18

About time Joan got a good telling off - Justin is not someone to mess with...... I remember seeing a huge train display at Myer's at Christmas years ago - it was wonderful. I can just see the train room in my mind looking very much like that - it's unfortunate they don't do anything like that at Christmas anymore - at least not at any of the stores in Western Australia - it's all iPads, iPhones and iPods and tacky, tacky decorations - at least Gus will have old fashioned fun with his dad and of course all the others. And why do I feel Craig is up to something - for his sake he better be sincere - Justin learnt at Jennifer's knee so I can just see her making Craig regret any wrong move. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response:

I think Joan probably has a new appreciation/fear of Justin.  Growing up we had a train platform at Christmas and so did most people I knew.  Ours was a two teir platform and we had lights in some houses.  My uncle's platform had a trolley car and real street lights so that was kind of nostalgic to write about.  I think in the past we used our imaginations more.  B&J do have the tacky decoration covered this year.  I agree that if Craig is not sincere he better watch his back because Mother Tigress Jennifer will stalk him and make him sorry.  Thanks for all the review I appreciate your support for the story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: August 25, 2016 09:11 AM · On: Chapter 18

Love love love Justin defending Brian to Joan makes me almost want to see her mess up so Justin can find her a bad nursing home. Pretty sure those trains are for Brian Gus getting to play with them is just a bonus. I am very curious what John and Peter's gifts will be. Ugg Craig why now he is on par with Joan can we find a vault and lock them away together. I can't wait till you write about the actual holiday their gifts have me guessing. thanks for a new chapter



Author's Response:

Justin has had his fill of Joan treating Brian badly.  I guess he was tired of waiting for Alice and Jennifer to take her outside and right her up so he had to step in.  Isn't that the point of having kids?  Buying fun stuff for them that you can play with.  So you are not thinking Craig is sincere.  Would kind of be fun to see what Jennifer does is he sent mea gifts.  I am not sure about gifts yet.  Uncertain to be how over the top John & Peter's gifts should be.  Guess it will depend on my mood when I wrte that chapter.  Always glad to read your review!!!!!  Thanks for all your support!!!  Bill

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: August 15, 2016 06:35 AM · On: Chapter 17

Sweet Baboo, I have a question, of course I'm all for a wonderful Christmas for ALL at Britin, but you haven't mentioned Craig recently. Of course I'm not sure what the slug is up to.If he is after Brian's and Justin's money, trying to get his way on the loan, somehow I don't think he's really trying to make nice with them. His ego is crushed his wife and daughter do find without his financial help Justin and Brian are both successful, and he's been replaced by a younger man in Tucker. He has failed at just about every thing he has tried in his life. Just wondered if we will find out about him or if we've seen the last of him. I enjoy how Brian and Justin can push his buttons for a change. Just been thinking about it. Your Sally



Author's Response:

Darling Sally, I have been thinking about good old Craig. He is really a loser at life. Maybe he had been hanging out with Ron Peterson? Since you have expressd an interest in Craig, he will appear soon in the story. How could I refuse a request from you. Maybe Jennifer will realize what a mistake she made getting rid of Craig and throw Tucker out?? Maybe Brian will realize Craig is really who he always wanted and Justin is just a substitute?? Maybe Craig will start to frequent the Liberty Diner and sweep Debbie off her feet with his charm, she could call him Sunshine Senior??  I guess we will have to wait and see what new adventures await Craig Taylor.  Always enjoy hearing from you.  your Sweet Baboo

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2016 04:08 AM · On: Chapter 17

Thank you for another wonderful chapter! Love the interaction between Justin and Brian about the Chrismas decorations. 😄 Brian doesn't stand a chance. LOL

I'm curious about whether Joan will take a good hard look at where she's ended up, how she got there, and turn over a new leaf. It seems like that could possibly happen. I like the way Peter listens to her story of growing up but, at the same time, sees Joan clearly. He's spot on in his advice to her.

I enjoy every additon to this saga. Now, if I could just manufacture more time to read!



Author's Response:

Bran doesn't stand a chnace now and just imagine how much worse it will be when two little sunshines are running around the house.  Hard to say waht Joan will do.  She had NO ONE else in her life.  This injury should be kind of a wake up call for her but the Kinneys are stubborn people.  Thank you for the nice comments.  I'm glad you are still enjoying this saga and I really appreciate the review!!!!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2016 11:29 PM · On: Chapter 17

    Thanks for the Chapter.  I does seem to me that John and Peter are far less critical of Joan than their own mother, Claire.  I do remember one explanation was that Claire has refused to take any responsibility for her awful actions.  But has Joan?  Nope!  In fact, she used the very same excuse for Claire’s actions as Claire has.  What about Joan turning to drinking?  In the very beginning of the Joan’s discussion with Peter, she once again referred to Justin as ‘his boy.’  Could she be any more insulting.  I don’t think so.  Could she be any more dismissive of Justin?  No!

   How about Peter and John give their mother a little more consideration.  We learned a lot about Joan’s life.  Was Claire’s any better?   One problem I see is that everyone is better off without Claire.  It is sort of addition by subtraction.  As a reader we can see that Joan gives the story a little spice.  I don’t see how Claire, except for may a few visits and phone calls by her boy, fits this story.  Sadly, we don’t need her, and except for Joan, it seems no one cares.  It is sad.

   As always, thanks for the chapter and the story.

DavidR

  



Author's Response:

I think that John & Peter have less expectations of Joan since she is their grandmother.  They depended more on their mother to take care of them and she let them down.  I thin Brian was often easier on Claire since he had less expectations of her as a sister.  He feel more bitter about Joan becaue again she was a mother who did not protect or really take care of her children.  I think John & Peter still have hope that their mother will own up to her mistreatment of them and not try to excuse her behavior. 

I think you liked this chapter and hope I am correct,  I was just wondering today why I didn't hear from you so thanks for the review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2016 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 17

Interesting story of Joan, that explains her behaviour a bit, wish she could change.

Love this update ... haha love every update.

* hugs *



Author's Response:

Not sure Joan is capable of change.  I think Justin may encourage some change in the next chapter.  Happy to know you enjoy all the updates!!!!  Thanks for the review!  Bill

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2016 01:23 AM · On: Chapter 17

Hi, Bill! As usual, I'm late to the party - ha!  And as usual, I enjoyed this chapter immensely.  Loved the banter between B and J, and how Justin can always talk Brian into things he would normally never do.  Very interesting back story with Joan; I think I both sympathized with her, but was also disgusted with her at the same time.  And I loved how the boys stuck up for their uncles.

You have really created a wonderful family unit here, despite the witch living in the guest house - ha!  As always, I will be eagerly awaiting your next update.  You could have another 100-chapter story on your hands here - ha!  Thank you once more for posting your story and sharing your talent on here.  We are very grateful.  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Hi Kim, never too late for reviews!!  As we both know authors are delighted to get reviews whenevr they appear.  Justin & Gus are the two people Brian has the hardest time sayin no to.  When the twin Sunshines arrive Brian is going to be seriously outnumbered.   Happy to know you enjoyed this chapter.  Even knowing she had a hard life it is difficult to like Joanie.  Just a few more chapters left in thsi story before I start "To Have and To Hold" which will deal with the arrival of the twins.  I love Midnight Whispers, happy to be posting here and enjoy hearing from the readers this is a great community!!!  Thanks for all YOUR support Kim!!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2016 08:56 PM · On: Chapter 17

The back story of Joan's was very well thought out and insightful. I have never liked her, but by understanding her past at least her behavior makes more sense. Thanks. But now more B&J please.

Author's Response:

I din'tthink anyone really likes Joan, not even herself.  I know this chapter was long on Joan and short on B&J - I'll do better in the next chapter.  Thanks for being review #300!!!!  I love reviews!!!   Bill

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2016 01:55 AM · On: Chapter 17

That was so interesting to find out about Joan's past.  It's understandable why she is so screwed up.



Author's Response:

The really sad part is she screwed up others.  Maybe Peter's food for thought will help her be a better person.  Happu you enjoyed this chapter.  Thanks for the review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: August 10, 2016 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 17

Ok so I understand Joan and I still don't like her. Now Brian makes more sense he takes after his Uncle but the rough edges have been smoothed by Justin. I think John and Peter will have plenty of Brian and Justin time that anything Claire might have ruined will be nurtured out. I am a firm believer that nature or biology are only about 25% of who you become the rest is nurture. I see proof everyday I have been babysitting a little girl since she was adopted at 9 months so her only nature are her height eye and hair color everything else is from everyone who raised her not just her adoptive parents. Have to admit finding this chapter shocked me in a HAPPY way. I now can't wait for Gus to see his trains and I wonder what John and Peter will get. More suprises this month like today would be wonderful.



Author's Response:

Joan is not likable but she is a product of her enviornment.  Raise by a cold ditant mother she become a cold distant mother.  I agree nuture is important.  I think John & Peter got out in time.  I do think there is a little more to nature than you do but the bad part of nature can certainly be nutured out.  Happy to know I can still surprise you.  Thanks for being such a loyal reviewer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: August 10, 2016 05:17 AM · On: Chapter 17

Sweet Baboo, this update was wonderful. It makes me understand Joan has had a sad life, she can't express love because she never experenced it, not in her childhood nor in her marriage. I fill so sad for Joan and Brian have wanted love all their life, but never was able to reach out for it. Justin reached out to Brian with unconditional love with that plus Gus and John and Peter and even Jen ,Molly and Kevin and Ted and Em, he knows how lucky he is that a very mature 17 year old stalker is responsible for a happiness he thought he didn't deserve. You did good my Sweet B. Your devoted Sally.,



Author's Response:

My darling Sally, Joan and her family have not experienced much love.  Luckily it looks like the legacy of misery is coming to an end.  As you pointed out Brian, Gus, John and Peter are having happy lives with lots of love.  Maybe Joan will realize how wrong she has been and get to experience a little love herself.  I think Peter might have made a little crack in her hard heart.  I am always happy to hear from you and am glad to know you enjoyed this chapter.  Thanks for the revuew, you know I love to get them!!!!!!!  your sweet Baboo

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: August 09, 2016 07:53 PM · On: Chapter 17

Excellent chapter.  I love the family history you provided.   I really like that both John and Peter are able to see where some of the problems have developed.



Author's Response:

Thanks!!  I like to think the history Joan told explains a lot of the issues in the Kinney Family.  Glad you enjoyed this chapter, thanks for the review!!!  Bill

Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2016 04:26 PM · On: Chapter 17

So...you decided about Joanie huh? Not sure if she's going to warm up or not, but it's a step. My first thought was Is she going to pull a Prian. Warm up, open up and then turn around and be even worse. I guess it could go either way. At least both Peter and John are seeing things in a slightly different light yet neither of them are making excuses for her. That is top notch! A small part of me feels a bit bad for her. always has, simply because you KNOW she went through hell herself. Everything she seems to have resented about her own mother, she has become herself. Does she see it? I don't really think seh does. Most people in those situations make excuses for their own behaviour while in the same breath, point fingers at others doing the same thing. Bravo btw for having Peter be the one to begin this. To have him make the expalnations and ask the questions. It's a bit like the saying "Out of the mouths of Babes" Perhaps Peter can go where no one has gone before. (my Trekkie reference hehe) At least she's thinking about all that was said. John...so much more like Brian in his honesty. LOL. Susinct and to the point without pulling any punches. I must say though...I completely agree with him. I guess we'll just have to see what happens with all these revelations on all parts.

Justin always loving and protective, is there for both kids, making sure that Joanie didn't do any damage. and of course he's the same way with Brian. I was almost expecting Brian to fly off the handle about the kids talking to Joan. He seemd more interested than anythng else. Perhaps he is even warming up to her. Either way, IF it were to happen...it's going to take time and a lot of it. There's no way he'll turn around and trust Joan anytime soon. She's done too much harm to both him and to Claire.

Once again I'm blathering off at the mouth. This was a wonderful update. Open and more honestly from Joan was interesting. I'm defeintely looking forward to seeing what happens after this. will she have second thoughts or will there be repercussions? could go so many ways.

thanks you for this wonderful chapter!!

Cheers,

Elaine



Author's Response:

Hello Elaine, I tried to get this ready to post on Sunday so it would be ready for you on Monday but didn't get it done in time.  Hard to day what Joanie will do now.  Out of character for her to share so much info with Peter.   John only heard the last part of Joan's story so naturally he interperted it differently from Peter.  You are correct neither felt the story excused all the damage Joanie inflcited on her children.  Peter thougth he grandmohter wa like his mother trying to pretend nothing was actually her fault.  I think Joan is starting to see that perhaps her past plays a big part in her behavior.  I think Peter may have beeen exploring strange new worlds in Joan's mind. (Tekkie reference).

Justin just wants to be sure Joan doesnt hurt any of his loved ones.  Of course he as being a little clueless himself, not realizing how much Peter cares for him.  I think hearing about his family history, even second hand, was interesting to Brian.  Might help him understad his parents' treatment of him has roots in the past and was largely out of his control.

Guess we will have to wait and see what happens next???  Thanks for your comments I always enjy hearing from you and get food for thought from your reviews!!!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2016 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 17

Christmas is looking good.  That was very informative about Joanie's life.  It's good to know that Peter is understanding but not caught up into thinking  it makes things that happened alright.  John on the other hand said it just right.  While I can understand how things were back then, it doesn't make it right.  Wonderful chapter as always!



Author's Response:

Hello my friend, I agree that Peter has the right attitude to Joan;s story.  It explained many things but didn't excuse any behaviors.  Joan & Jack were certainly a toxic combination.  Really some bad Karma that brought those two together.  I really do look forward to your reviews and appreciate all your support for my story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: August 09, 2016 02:05 PM · On: Chapter 17

Think it's time Brian talked with his mother. John's wrong about her motive for telling Peter about her life. It wasn't so he'd feel sorry for her, she's just incredibly lonely. Maybe he should invite her to the open house. It would be up to her whether she accrpts Brian's olive branch. I like how Brian and Justin set aside time for them.



Author's Response:

Hmmmmm have you found some link into my mind?  I think John came in for just the last part of Joan's story and thought she was just trying to excuse her actions.  I think Peter was correct when he thought Joan had never told anyone about the past before him.  Maybe she was feeling lonely, maybe it was the correct mix of vodka and pain pills.  Maybe she just thought it was time to tell someone.  I think it is good for B&J to set aside alone time and I think it is good for John & Peter to see it is important to not neglect your important relationships.  Thanks for taking tiem to review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2016 01:47 PM · On: Chapter 17

I got all caught up yesterday, and I awoke to a new chapter! Squeals!!!

It was interesting to get the back story on Joan and Jack, now if she could just open her heart to her family...

I loved the part about Brian setting up a train room for the boy's. I hope you don't think I'm copying your idea, but I had planned on Brian doing a similar thing for Gus in my Kisses series... Let me know if that's a problem...

Love this update!

Hugs ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

I was close to posting the new chapter so when I say you catch up reviews I smiled thinking another update was coming soon.  Evem if I thought you were copying I would only be flattered!!!  There are only so many ideas out there so it is inevitable we come up with similar ones.  I'm sure I am not the first author to write about model trains.  Pretty sure I read about Brian & Gus playing with model trains in other stories.  There was a point where Kim & I had very similar things happening in our stories which amused us both.  Thanks for all your reviews, love hearng from you.  Hugs back,  Bill

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2016 10:24 AM · On: Chapter 17

What an amazing chapter so much explained about Joanie and Jack and how the boys show Brian and Justin how much they love them

Author's Response:

Thanks for the nice review.  There was lots of Joan but I thought it would be interesting to explore the past of the Kinney Family and how that impacts the present.  Thanks for reviewing.  Bill

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2016 07:08 AM · On: Chapter 17

Very interesting insight to Joan. I do know from my own parents that in those days there weren't a lot of options for women and children in abusive situations. I know that I wouldn't never stayed under those circumstances despite my available options but my mother did. The boys and Alice are quite right - bad things do happen and it's how we deal with them that makes us into the people we become. We need to make better choices. Happily Justin came along and helped Brian further break away from lessons taught as a child to become the good family man he is....even if he isn't quite sure how that happened.....LOL



Author's Response:

If you live in the US you were up late last night reading.  Glad you enjoyed this chapter.  It is amazing how our early years really can affect us for the rest of our lives.  I think there were & are a lot of people who stayed & stay in loveless marriages even abusive ones.  People used to say there were staying together for the children but lots of times it would have been better for the children to end the marriage.  That would seem to be the case with Jack & Joan.  In this story even Jennifer admitted she stayed with Craig mainly to keep the family unit together.  It was only when Craig rejected Justin that she left the marriage.  Human realtionships are all so different and so fascinating to look at.  Thanks for the review, I am always happy to see the first review for each chapter.  I still think each time I post an update maybe everyone will hate this one.  Bill

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2016 01:55 AM · On: Chapter 16

I think Justin inherited Debbie love of Christmas decorations. Leave it to Michael to bring everyone down with his gloomy attitude, and underlining jealousy...

Hugs ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

I might have but I think he likes to drive Brian a little crazy with Cristmas decorations.  We can always count on Mikey to always look at the negative.  Thanks Kathleen for all the reviews.  Happy to know you are still enjoying this saga.  Hugs back to you,  Bill

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2016 01:32 AM · On: Chapter 15

Brian eating hotdogs, Justin really has changed him... I'm glad Carl and Deb had their own get-away, and what a great surprise for Deb when she returns...

Hugs ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

Hi Kathleen, no telling what Brian will do to make his Sunshine happy!  Carl is really good for Debbie.  Thanks for reviewing!!!!  Hugs back,  Bill

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2016 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 13

So happy they're back in each others arms, and off to a New York get-away...

I seem to have fallen behind on my reading. I'm off to read the next chapter's to get caught up! Hugs ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

I will always have them back iin each others arms.  Glad to know you are still reading and enjoying the story.  Thanks for the review.  Hugs back to you.  Bill

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 05, 2016 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 16

I think it is wonderful that Justin is so into the Christmas decorations and traditions. John and Peter are right...it is entertaining to observe B/J's little squabbles and outdoing each other. Have to love Brian's method of decorating--hiring a company. Glad that crabby old Joan stayed out of the house and didn't get near Gus. I do hope that remains true. Agree with Justin--she is vile. Yes, she's had a tough life, but she's also had opportunities to become part of the family, but she's rejected each one. Typical Michael--he is like a dreary day. Good for Debbie letting him have it and sending him home. Again--how does Ben bear living with him? Hope we see Kevin again soon...he is so cute and Gus and Kevin together are irresistible. So sad that Brian had no grandparents to spoil him. Thanks for this...looking forward to the next one!

Author's Response:

Brian believes it is always better to hire someone than to do the work himself.  Justin has always loved Christmas but Brian has resisted.  Justin is an expert of using Gus to get Brian to do things he would rather not do.  Imagine when there are two little Sunshines running around the house - Brian will have no chance against them.  It appears you are on the "Joan go home" team.  We will hear more from Joan in the next chapter.  Always glad to hear that someone enjoyed the latest chapter, thanks for letting me know!!    BIll

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2016 10:24 AM · On: Chapter 16

Wow wow wow wow, to infinity wow. I have read from1-16 and I loved every bit of it. I love how the boys are not taking the uncles for granted and I love Kevin he is so wonderful and I love how Gus is with him. Oooooh babies I'm excited to see how that will do and the story that will come from them . I hope Josn lightens up, I actually feel for her and she needs to let her family in and let herself realise what she is missing out on. Maybe she might come over for Christmas dinner or something. 

 

Hoe many chapter will this be, I hope it's as long as the first amazing story. I'm so excited to see more of this and cannot wait for more.

 

you are doing a seriously amazing job, one of my favourite stories of all time. 😘🌹💕💞



Author's Response:

Wow, wow, wow what a great review!  I'm really not sure I deserve it.  I love Kevin and I am happy so many readers love him too.  He seesm to be one of the favorite original characters in this story.  Lots of Joan's story in the next chapter.  Thsi story will wrap up in a few more chapters around 20 chapters total.  Thw story of the twins will start in the next story "To Have an To Hold".  Thanks for all the kind wrods and I'm happy to know you are enjoying the story.  Thanks for the review, love to hear from the readers.  I appreciate all the support for my story!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2016 06:26 AM · On: Chapter 16

This was the perfect chapter to read before I drift off to sleep. . .well, as long as I don't dream about stores selling Christmas decorations in July. LOL

Brian and Justin's 'contest' about Christmas had me in stitches. Love the way Justin takes the tacky decorations and makes them fit his artistic sensibilities.

Had to smile when I read that Debbie and Carl had seen Cabaret in New York. Perfect!

Good for Debbie! She didn't let her whiny son destroy her happiness over her new stove and remodeled kitchen.

Many thanks for continuing this heartwarming story about the Taylor Kinney family.

Karynn



Author's Response:

Not 100% sure I am happy that my writing puts you to sleep, I'll have to think about that??  Brian has no chnace of winning that contest.  I thought that would be the best show for Debbie and Carl to see.  Poor Mikey has managed to alienate the person who was always in his side.  Happy to know you are still enjoying this saga after all this time.  Thanks for the reviews you know I love to get them!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2016 06:07 AM · On: Chapter 15

Since I'm behind on my reading again, I get to read two chapters of your wonderful story. That puts a smile on my face!

I really like the conversation between Roxanne and Jennifer. It's so evocative of the way a mother would feel when someone else suddenly seems more special to her son. I had to smile at what Jennifer said about Justin in regard to Brian. So very true! LOL

I laughed at the way Brian and Justin took care of the Nosy Parker in the Liberty Air lounge.

On to the next chapter!

Karynn



Author's Response:

I think it is always a little shock to parenst when someone else appears to take first place with their child.  Easy for grandparenst to do that since they are rarely around for the less happy attractive aspects of parenthood.  People who listen to other people's conversation have to be ready for anything.  Gald you enjoyed this chapter.  Thanks for the review!!!  Bill

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2016 12:05 AM · On: Chapter 16

Hi,

   This is the problem I have with Debbie.  Just this once, couldn’t she just say thank you to Brian.  Couldn’t once say something good to him, and just shut up.  I know, I know that is not who she is, not the way she is portrayed. 

          “Thanks for all you do for me. You know I love you even

           if you can act like an asshole a lot of the time.”

What can I say.  I don’t like it, not at all.

   As far as Michael goes.  They still excuse him.  After all he just said in this chapter, and yes they did shout him down and tell him he was so very wrong.  That is not enough for me.  Instead of just threatening to throw him out, they should have thrown him out.  What good would that do?  I guess absolutely nothing.  He is too far gone.

   Sorry to complain so much, but just one more.  It is time to pack Joan up and send her home.  But since you mentioned Joan and Gus, I guess Gus will find out who she is.  What then?  It will be interesting.

   Thanks again,

   DavidR



Author's Response:

I think Debie is trying to change and she is paying attention to Carl when he points out things that she does.  I don't think Brian wants her to change too much.  Debbie and Brian have developed their relationship over the years but I agree it could use a tune-up.  I think Debbie telling Michael to leave was a big deal.  Maybe that will be a little eye opener for him but we can't count on too much chnage from him.  I think some changes are coming for Joanie but I honestly haven't decided what they should be.  The reviewers are kind of divided on her fate.  I can see you are firmly on the send the bitch home and forget her side the equation.  I always appreciate your comments, you give me lots of fodd for thought and I like that.  Thanks for all your reviews!!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2016 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 16

Did you miss me yesterday? LOL. Twas a holiday here, so I wasn't on a computer so here I am on a Tuesday instead. 

Great update and thoroughly enjoyable. I just love all the family intereactions you portray in this story. Iknow, I know...It's all been said before, but it remains true every chapter. It's heartwarming and give hope. 

I keep wondering if at some point in time Joan will come around. I know she wasn't involved in this chapter, but each time she's mentioned, I always wonder....I always hope for her sake, if not for the sake of the rest of teh family, especially the boys, that she will slowly see what's right in front of her face. That love surpasses judgement and hate.

Not surprised by Micheal's attitude. I was surprised that he gave up so wuickly though. lol. I'm sure there is more to come from our favorite little whiner.

I'm looking forward to Christmas withe the Kinney and their extended family. the love adn warmth surrounding this ever growing family, with a few touches of angst thrown in there for good measure.

Deb's reaction was wonderful!! She so deserved this treat! 

I must say I enjoyed Carl's hug for Brian. He's really a great addition and a great partner for Deb.

thanks for once again letting me fall into this world you've created. I always smile reading your updates.

Hugs!!

Cheers,

Elaine



Author's Response:

Hello Elaine, I was deteremined to post the latest chapter on Sunday.  First it was another cahpter for July and that would make shf happy and I thought it will be waiting for you to read on Monday.  When there was no review from you yesterday it did surprise me.  Happy to see your comments today!!!!!!  Your commenst are always so positive and detailed which make they fun for me to read.  I get the impression that most reviewers want to see Joan's cold heart start to melt a little.  I have to thimk about that happening.  Still haven't made up my mind about Joan.

I think Mikey as so surprised to hear harsh words come from Debbie that he wanted to get out as soon as possible.  He didn't want Carl to join in anti-Mikey talk so he departed.  You always pick up on the small things like Brian getting higged by Carl I appreciate that.  Glad to hear from you even if it is a day late.  Thanks for all your support!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: August 02, 2016 02:00 AM · On: Chapter 16

Hi Sweet Baboo, I loved this update. Debbie got her kitchen make over and a new stove she certainly needed it and deserved it, the way she always loves cooking so much. Was really glad she told the moron to go home he was trying to ruin her day. Wonder if the tree in the garage will find its way to the pool house? I think Brian will cut a deal with Joan--If she'll keep her mouth shut for a few hours, he will let eat with family and her grandsons, but no preaching and treating one rude. I can't see letting his aged mother be by herself for the holiday especially with Claire in prison, I think a blond twink will insist it's the right thing to do and I think Peter and John will have a better Christmas, and if mikey doesn't like it he can go McDonalds! GREAT UPDATE, Love your Sally



Author's Response:

Darling Sally, always so happy to hear from you.  I agree a new kitchen for Debbie is well deserved.  So many meals for the gang were prepared in that kitchen.  She did not let Michael rain on her parade and Carl gave his approval from his recliner.  I think that tree will be put in the faily room and they will decorate it on Saturday with the nephews & Gus.  Justin knows if he gets Gus involved Brian won't be able to resiste being involved.  You make a compleeling case for Joan to stay for Christmas.  I haven't made up my mind about Joan's Christmas yet.  I am ahppy to know you wnjoyed the latest chapter.  Thanks for always leaving comments I always look forward to reading them!!!!!!!!!!!!  Your sweet Baboo

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