Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Holiday Happenings
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2017 10:35 PM · On: Chapter 25

I started reading this a week ago, but never get the chance to finish the chapter.  Laying under the covers myself, thinking about your story. I had to scroll way back to find it. But I'm happy ... What a lovely chapter. Thanks.

 

* hugs and goodnight * 

Marian



Author's Response:

Hi Marian, so happy to know you enjoyed the last chapter.  I am working on the next installment but RL is keeping me very busy right now.  Hugs back to you!!  Bill

Reviewer: purpledee (Anonymous) · Date: February 15, 2017 06:32 AM · On: Chapter 25

Really like this whole story and love your writing style.  ( enjoyed sickness & health too!)  Hope next update isn't too far away.  Very new to the whole QAF US fandom ( Less than 1 year) But well into it!

Usually only read completed stories, as have found myself starting to read & got disapointed when found WIP's or months between updates.  So as I like your stuff, thought a review might help!!

Keep up the good work, 

Deb (in UK ) 

Ok know it's mean, but please make Saint joan come a cropper some time soon & Mikey & Lindsay too!



Author's Response:

Hi Deb, really happy to kmow you are enjoying my long saga.  I apologize for my delayed update but RL has occupied me a lot lately.  I have a bad cold, started a new job and sold my house so I am busy packing and arranging things for the move!  I'm sure you don't really care but want you to know I am committed to the story and working on the next chapter as much as I can.  Lots of ideas so the saga will continue.  I am feeling kind of soft hearted about Linds but Saint Joan & Mikey don't have a lot of good stuff coming their way.  Thank you so muck for your review!!!!!!!!!!!  I LOVE to hear from the readers and welcome suggestions, even if I don't always comply with the suggestions.  Hope you continue to enjoy the story and look forward to hearing from you again in the future!!  Bill

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 05, 2017 04:03 AM · On: Chapter 25

Sweet Baboo, your being naughty, I would never desert you, you stories bring me so much pleasure.I was reading the''Whisper are as loud as a Shout'' I noticed you were also reading and reviewing, I kind of got hung up reading about mikey being a dumb ass and of course Linz lost of reality. It took me forever to read and respond, your chapters move so quickly and it's easy to keep up with new added characters like Joe, I really enjoy how Gus told his daddies to give him less presents at Christmas and to help Joe as he didn't have a home or much to eat or anyone to care about him. Gus has so much insight and so sweet. I thought Joe's thank you note to Gus showed. what kind of person Joe really is. As much as I liked MissMerlot's story all the foreign language slowed the story down I'm used to you being really articulate and paceing your story along .Your Sally is going nowhere.



Author's Response:

Darling Sally, I was just concerned when I didn't hear from you as soon as you usually review.  I have been kind of busy and haven't been able to keep up with reading Miss Merlot's story.  I do look forward to your comments and appreciate all your support for this long saga of mine.   Gus is a sweet little boy.  I think he gets his care for other people from his Daddy,  Thanks as always my Darling Sally for you kind review!!!! 

I remain your sweet Baboo.

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2017 01:39 AM · On: Chapter 25

Thanks for this heartwarming addition to your story! I'm celebrating my birthday with a combo of beta-ing, writing, and reading - and this hit the spot for reading. I'm still grinning at the magical powers of Justin's stomach. :D

Good to see the Petersons get their just desserts - small wonder that Lindsay had to struggle to overcome such an upbringing. 

I sense good things ahead for Joe, with some help from Debbie, Gus, Brian, and Justin. What a gutsy kid! He deserves to have his life take a turn for the better. <3



Author's Response:

HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU, HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Glad I could contribute to your enjoyment of the day and hope for many more happy birthdays for you.  It is really neat that Justin's stomach has the ability to restore electricity.  Jennifer did her best to make the Petersons uncomforable and seems to have been sucessful.  I think Joe's story will have a happy ending.  Thanks for the review!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 03, 2017 10:57 AM · On: Chapter 25

Hi my Sweet Baboo, chapter was wonderful. I would have loved to have seen Brian doing snow angels,it's like the trains for the first time, because of Justin and Gus he gets to be a little boy , things we didn't get a chance to do when he was little. I'm glad Gus can talk with his papa about a bully and how his parents told him that Gus's cousins were going to an orphanage. I can see how upset  and worried Gus would be.As for the Petersons are as delusonal as mikey and Linz. Can't wait for the twins! Your Loving Sally



Author's Response:

Darling Sally, so happy to hear from you.  I was a little worried you had abandoned the story when I didn't see your review.  Happy to know you have not deserted me.  I think you are correct, Brian enjoys being a little boy with Gus.  Most of the time it is more adult activities he enjoys with Justin.  Gus feels secure enjoy with his Daddy & Papa to share any concerns he has which is a great thing.  The Petersons are loathsome and should try very hard to avoid running into Jennifer in the future.  Glad you are still enjoying this saga.  Always happy to heard from you!!!!  your sweet Baboo

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2017 03:12 AM · On: Chapter 25

This was a really entertaining chapter.  I was chuckling over Justin and his "boyscout" instructions.  How cute that Gus feels so safe with his two Dads.  Loved the way Justin took charge during the power outage.  He and Brian make a great team and are doing such a great job raising the boys.



Author's Response:

Happy to know you enjoyed the latest chapter.  Kind of ironic that Justin couldn't be involved with the boy scouts in real life.  Gus can always depend on his Dads to be there when he needs them.  I agree that B&J make a great team.  Thanks for taking time to review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: January 27, 2017 02:47 AM · On: Chapter 25

so glad to see an update on this story.  I imagine you've had a few outages in your time; the description of preparedness are quite good.  Loved that everyone slept togheter on the main floor.



Author's Response:

Glade you are still wnjoying this saga.  It is wind storm here in the Pacific Northwest that causes our power outages.  The worst was 4 days long, the fun was over by the third day.  Thanks for the review, I love to get them!!!  Bill

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: January 26, 2017 02:36 AM · On: Chapter 25

This was excellent! I loved reading about the preparations for the snow storm and all that happened related to the storm. Justin's preparations were in keeping with his PSA persona. Glad to see that Jennifer was in top form in her take down of Nancy and Ron. And, the apple didn't fall far from the tree. Molly dispatched Ron quite handily. I'm very interested to see what happens with Joe and I'm glad that he decided to trust Debbie and that Brian has the investigation going. It was nice of Joe to write a note to Gus. Enjoyed Gus all through this story. He is adorable. And, of course, all the B&J moments. Thanks and looking forward to the next update.



Author's Response:

You are correct Justin, AKA Mr PSA, had everything organized for the loss of electricity.  It turned out to be a fun adventure for everyone instead of a problem.  Jennifer takes no prisoners when she she is dealing with people who cause problems.  I love her!!!  Molly is learning from the best.  Joe seems like a nice kid who has had some bad luck.  Debbie is going to be looking out for his best interests.  Glad you are enjoying this saga.  Thank you so much for the review, I LOVE reviews!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: Tiffany (Anonymous) · Date: January 26, 2017 12:50 AM · On: Chapter 25

Another wonderful glimpse into the lives of our favorite family. I love the addition of Joe. Looking forward to getting to know more about his past.

Great chapter! Keep them coming - I could read this story all day long :)



Author's Response:

Hi Tiffany, thanks for taking time to leave a review.  I love to hear from the readers!!!  Joe doesn't realize yet how lucky he is to have Debbie looking out for him.  I am really happy to know you are enjoying the story, hope you continue to enjoy it.  Bill

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2017 11:14 PM · On: Chapter 25

It was nice that Gus felt he could ask his dads anything.  And they always answered honestly.  It looks like Jen's talk with Maria and Earl are going to cost the Petersons.  It was nice of Joe to write a thank you to Gus.  Better is his trusting Deb.  Hopefully Brian's detective will be able to help Joe.  Lights out turned into fun for the Kinney Clan.  Great chapter.



Author's Response:

Hello my friend, I never really feel like an update is complete until I read your comments.  You have been such a great support for this story from the beginning and I appreciate it.  Gus loves his Daddy & Papa and feels safe in confiding in them.  Joe picked a good person to trust, Debbie will look out for him. Always happy to know you are still enjoying this saga.  Thanks, as always, for your review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2017 06:57 PM · On: Chapter 25

Checks the calendar....yup, it's Wednesday. what a hump day treat! YAY!!

Another feel good chapter. It's like a balm to the soul. I loved how gus felt so comfortable talking to his dads. His questions about what happened with Claire were totally plausible, just sad that it came out the way it did. He has such trust in B&J that he's content with the explanation and won't bring it up again, especially knowing it could possibly upset his cousins. 

HAe I said often enough that I love Jenn in this. hehe. she always has the boy's back. That little confrontation at the restaurant was actually pretty funny. Could totally see it in my mind's eye. Ron and Nancy never seem to do themselves any favours do they. Now they up teh creek without a paddle as far as selling their house is concerned. *insert evil chuckle* Add to that their more than likely limited circle of friends may just be getting even smaller.

And Joe. considering all he's gone through, he seems to be a fine young boy. Hopefully between the help that Deb and Brian will provide, never mind the others, I think we may just find Joe becoming a welcome addition to another strong family. Brian and Justin definitely have their hands full, but I wonder if they'll be taking on another? Maybe even Deb perhaps? Whoever it may be, I'm sure he'll find himself safe and secure in the near future and that his past, while it may need to be dealt with, won't come back to hurt him.

Lovely family time during the blackout. Made a possibly scary situation for Gus, a fun and cozy time for them all. thank goodness for Justin's preparedness.

As always, a joy to read. All the finite details just add to it. I kind of felt like beingsnuggled up with a comfy blanket as I read this. Sadly I'm sitting at my desk at the office, but I can at least pretend right?

Thank you for this!!

Cheers,

Elaine



Author's Response:

I am very impressed to get a non Monday review!!!  You always have such nice things to say about the story, your reviews are like a balm to my soul.  It is great that Gus has so much faith in his fathers and he doesn't internalize his problems.  I do really love my Jennifer so I'm glad that you do also.  She might have been unhappy to see the Petersons but they were much more unhappy to see her!!  Anything unpleasant that happen to Ron & Nancy is a good thing.  RE: Joe, you might just be doing a little mind reading.  I thought the blackout turned into a fun time.  They kind of are fun, as long as tey don't last too long.  Once a windstorm knocked out my electric for four days and I can assure you the fun faded by the second day!!!!!!!  Thank you for being such a faithful reviewer!!  Reviews are what keeps me writing this saga.  Bill

Reviewer: julia005 (Anonymous) · Date: January 25, 2017 02:11 PM · On: Chapter 25

Heartwarming chapter, this felt so good! Even without electricity, the family stick together and they have their backs. And Tino has stepped forward - I feel so sorry for his desperation. He just needs a surrogate family!

While January 20th was a nightmare-came-true-day, this might be a chapter  a lot of Americans need: Unity, solidarity, fairness and love. Sorry for relating to political issues, we germans are all just devastated.

It´s nice to connect with decent people across the ocean! Thank you so much
!!!!!



Author's Response:

Hello Julia, so nice to hear from you; it has been a while.  If the current election results made you post these comments, at least something good came out of it.  We don't want to be too political here but I will just say I live on the west coast and this is NOT a pro Trump area.  I feel your devastation.  Hopefully there are enough decent people in Congress to keep too much bad from happening.  Glad you enjoyed this chapter and I feel things will be OK with this country and the world.  Bill

Reviewer: shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: January 25, 2017 10:14 AM · On: Chapter 25

Yeah finally a new chapter. Did I tell you I reread the earlier story and this one while waiting for more.  I like that Gus feels safe enough to tell his fathers what is happening at school because he knows they will help him understand why people say what they do. Allowing Gus just enough information to move past what was said without scaring him. I like that Joe finally confided in Deb I hope that brings him something good like a safe place to live. You know this my favorite kind of chapter just Brian and Justin living their lives even with the snow storm and the power outage the normal every day stuff of being a family. I can't wait until the babies are added to the mix it will make it even more exciting. By the way why don't Brian and Justin have a generator I think they may need one especially with babies coming. 



Author's Response:

I have to get better about updating, sorry to make you wait so long.  I am always very impressed, and extremely flattered, to hear that anyone rereads this long saga.  Gus knows his fathers will always look out for him.  It is good that he tells them what is bothering him and doesn't keep it inside and fret about things.  I think things just might work out for Joe.  I did think of you when I was writing the last part of this chapter and think you would enjoy B&J and the boys just hanging out together.  I thought about them having a generator but I thought a fireplace adventure was more fun.  Thanks for the review, I always appreciate your support!!  Bill

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