Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2016 03:07 AM · On: Chapter 19
What a heartwarming chapter! Gus is such a loving little boy - just the way I think Brian would have been if he'd had loving parents. Brian has such a big heart, even if he doesn't like to be thanked for all his kindnesses toward others.
Can't wait to see Ted with the crown and cape. LOL
With the holidays approaching, this is the perfect time to catch up on this story - so glad I have a few more chapters to read. Thank you for continuing this delightful saga!
Karynn
Author's Response: I agree with you; I think if Brian had some love early in life she would be just like Gus. Ted will be wearing that any time Nina requests it I'm sure. When I started this story it was no where near the holiday but I have kind of caught up a little with RL. Glad you are still enjoying the saga! Thanks for taking time to review!!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: October 05, 2016 02:00 PM · On: Chapter 19
My Sweet Baboo, I'm really sorry to respond to the last two updates so late. I have been reading a wonderful story that beckons me everytime. The writing is tops and the story draws you in, it is written by a talented man you may have heard of (tongue in cheek and a Brian like smirk)PABoi. I was reading again and on chapter 80 when I decided to continue, then I start over with HOLIDAY HAPPENINGS from the beginning to refresh my memory. In chapter 19 Gus was such a cutie, his concern for others is so like his daddy and papa. While mikey is so selfish when it comes to JR, his mother and Carl and Ben. His concern for Ben is unbelelivable he figures wait long enough and Ben will forget about the rules he's trying to make mikey grow up, he does nothing for anyone and is critical of people who do. I'm interested in the new guy Joe. Deb should take him in, and pack up everything in mikey's room--the Capt. Astro bedspread the wall paper should go--she needs to paint get a new bed and rid the room of all child like mikey presents, make sure mikey know to get his stuff picked up and he no longer has a room there, he is married and needs to be with Ben it's Joe's room now. He needs a place to live, he needs regular meals, and a job, but mainly he needs someone who cares. Your loving Sally
Author's Response: My darling Sally, always happy to hear from you whenever you post reviews!!! You have been busy reading!!!! One of these days maybe I will re-read all 100 chapters of the "wonderful story". Mikey is unchnaging and unthinking, I think it is nice that there are some thing that we can always count on. I don't think Ben is going to forget about Mikey getting a job and starting to pay back the money he used for back rent. I'm pretty sure we will hear more about Joe in future chapters. Thanks for the review!!!!!! your sweet Baboo
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 27, 2016 11:41 PM · On: Chapter 19
I don't mind the wait when we get such a long and wonderful chapter. I love all the little details that you give us. It is a hallmark of your writing. I really think it is what makes me feel like I could just read this story all day. It is comforting. Highlights for me in this chapter: of course, all the affectionate B&J moments, Brian's listing of all the good things that had happened during the year, the oatmeal, brown sugar, and raisins and Alice supplying Brian with a spoon, Brian shopping for princess stuff, Brian's evil thoughts of Ted and Blake in their royal garments, the story of Joe and how Gus wanted to help, I'm hoping we learn more of Joe's backstory and what happens next with him. I hate to think of him on his own at such a young age. And, the fact that someone physically hurt him. Good for Debbie regarding her determination to get Michael to grow up. Hope she stays the course. As always, thanks for this chapter of your terrific story.
Author's Response: Thanks for being so understandng about the long wait and for your very kind comments. Happy to know you enjoyed this chapter. I do enjoy the little details so I am glad you do also. Between Debbie and Gus I think we will learn more about Joe. Debbie is going to try her best to let Michael fight his own battles but I don't think she can just go cold turkey. I think there may be some back sliding. Thank you very much for taking the time to leave a review. I LOVE to hear from the readers!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2016 05:46 PM · On: Chapter 19
Great chapter as all ways. I just love Gus .He is a great kid , and it is because of his dads.
Author's Response: Glad to know you enjoyed this chapter. Thanks for letting me know! Gus is a cutie who wants everyone to be as happy as he is. Thanks for the review!!!!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: julia005 (Anonymous) · Date: September 27, 2016 07:21 AM · On: Chapter 19
What a fine chapter - so heartwarming. I hope Joe will find good ways to help himself, get a decent job...and a surrogate family. We will see!
The pre-christmas time throws so much hapiness around, even though the presents B&J are buying are some kind of....very american, and Deb´s decor ;))) Can´t wait to know about the presents John and Peter will get.
I hope you are well. My RL keeps me hyper busy. Thanks for every new chapter, I appreciate it.
Author's Response: Julia, how nice to hear from you. I'm happy to kmow you are still reading and enjoying the story. I think we will hear more about Joe in the future. "American" Christmas gifts is very interesting, I would be interested to know what other gifts would be. I am going to have to do some internet research on Christmas gifts around the world. That is something I never gave much thought to but am now interested in the differences. B&J gifts are going to be very extravagent for many people. I am doing great, thanks for taking some time to post a review!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2016 08:23 AM · On: Chapter 19
Gus is so sweet - the boys have taught him well. I'm interested in reading more about Joe - sounds like he's going to be important to the family. Good to see that Debbie's going to let Michael take responsibility for his own mistakes - about time..... Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Gus is a sweet boy. He is fortunate to have so much love in his life. I think there will be more about Joe in upcoming chapters. I don't think Debbie will be able to cut all the apron strings but she is trying. Thanks for the review and for not telling me what a rat I am for making you wait so long for this update!! Bill
Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: September 25, 2016 03:47 AM · On: Chapter 19
I really like the way you had Gus take charge of giving Joe a good meal and a warm, safe place to live. Love the the whole family from Deb to Brian and Justin are so generous. Great job. do we see a new character in the story?
Author's Response: Gllad you like a "caring Gus". Deb has always looked out for the underdog and I thnk she has he sights on Joe so we may be seeing a new character. Happy you enjoyed this chapter. Thanks for the review!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2016 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 19
Hi, Bill! Another delightful chapter. I LOVED the part with Gus and Joe, and how he showed such compassion for him. That was so sweet and touching, and perfectly fit in with the Christmas spirit.
I wonder if we will hear from Joe again? As for Michael, ugh. He really needs to get his priorities straight, and get his act together. Not sure if that will happen or not, though.
As always, looking forward to your next part! ~Kim
Author's Response: Hi Kim, glad to know you enjoyed the latest chapter. Sorry it was such a long wait. That Gus has his priorities in order for sure. Lucky for him there won't be any reduction in gifts. B&J are going to be quite extravagent in their holiday gift giving. I think Debbie has her eye on Joe so I'm pretty sure we will hear more about him. Just what this story needs another character! Mikey may be forced to grow up some there is no one left to rescue him from himself. Thanks for all your support. Hope you are doing okay. Thanks for the review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2016 03:23 PM · On: Chapter 19
Wonderful story it is my favorite story I can not wait to read more of this story
Author's Response: Thanks for letting me know my story is your favorite, that is really cool!!! Love to hear from the readers so thanks for posting a review!!!!!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2016 02:56 PM · On: Chapter 19
Hi,
That was a real nice chapter. There is no doubt about the
kindness and generosity of Brian and Justin. As evidence, it was
the suggestion that for some in their emply, no Christmas bonus
was necessary as B&J have done enough during the year which
was more than enough. For B&J, as the expression goes, it is
Christmas every day. That is such a nice thing to say about them.
I laugh each time someone tries to say something nice to Brian,
such as a thank you, he runs for the hills, or rather his emails.
Joe? Well I don’t know if that is a one-time mention in this story
or will we see him again. He is now connected with Debbie.
Things are looking up for him, but he will have to do his part.
Michael? That is a tough one. It appears that Debbie and
maybe others will work with Michael and see if they can change
him. Well – it may be too late. Like the last chapter when Jen
told Craig, that basically there is no longer room for him, and he is
not missed, that same can soon be said about Michael. If Craig
and Michael were to be written out of this story, would anyone
notice. That is one sad comment.
Thanks for the chapter, it was beautifully done.
DavidR
Author's Response: Hi David, I was just worrying earlier to day that you may have given up on me after waiting so long for an update. I was really happy to see your review!! Both Brian and Justin are very interested in taking care of the people they love. They have a charitable foundation to help people who need it. Brian like to think that people don't know was a caring person he is so he avoids any mention of it whenever he can. I have a feeling we will see more of Joe. He is in Debbie's radar and it will be difficult for him to avoid her concern. Mikey is MIkey, he is going to have to do some growing up, he has no choice. I don't think Debbie will completely stop looking out for her baby boy but she knows she has to limit her help for Michael's sake. I appreciate all your support!!! Thanks for being such a faithful reviewer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2016 01:50 AM · On: Chapter 19
Oh that was amazing. Gus really is a sweet kid. Justin and Brian are pretty special themselves. They all know the true meaning of Christmas.
Author's Response: Thanks for the nice comments. I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. Thanks for taking the time to review. Love REVIEWS!!!!!!!!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2016 12:15 AM · On: Chapter 19
That was so sweet of Gus to suggest they take care of Joe. I wonder what Joe's decision will be when his three weeks are up, maybe the Taylor-Kinney household might be expanding before the twins arrive... Great chapter!
Hugs ~ Kathleen
Author's Response: I think Joe may join a household but I'm not sure it will be the Taylor-Kinney home. Glad you enjoyed this chapter!! Hugs back to you. Bill
Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2016 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 19
Hello friend!! Oh I've been waiting so patiently for an update. HOpoe RL is treating you OK. It does tend to get in the way now and again.
Oh Deb. It's so hard as a parent to when to let go adn let your kid make mistakes. You want to protect hem, but by over doing it you end up with, well...Michael. LOL. she's finally realizing her part in it. I can't really blame her, as it's every parent's first instinct, especially as a single parent. You don't realizr the implications until it's too late. REally gald she sees it now though and will do her best to make him grow up and become the man he should've become years ago. (I'm not holding my breath mind you. ;) ) she has Carl by her side for support. He'll gently and lovingly keep her on teh right path. He also won't put up with Michael's crap.
I wish we could see pictures of Ted, blake and Nina in full costume! That would be a site! I have the feeling Brian will appreciate and enjoy that visual more than anyone else. Heck...He already is! I can fully imagine him snickering at the thought. Of course ted and Blake will dress up and play along with Nina. JR is going to absolutely love it too!
You always know when a child has been raised right, and Alice made sure that Brian knoew that it was his and Justin's influence on gus that had him have such a loving and giving heart. My goodness...tears were welling reading that part. It was perfectly done. I'm coming away from this with a light heart adn a big assed smile now. thank you!!
While Michael is always a disappointment to some degree....he's sinking further adn further to a level of utter disbelief. His ability to make excuses for things, for his behavior etc is astonishing. He fought for JR, yet now...hasn't a care about it. It's all about himself, not even seeing his own part in his downfall. You know when you pull the pug in teh bath, and you see that swirl going down the drain. almost like a tiny water spout. That's how I see his life at the moment. that's the visual I often get with regards to him. I guess time will only tell if he ever gets his shit together. Stop feeling sorry for himself. Like Isaid, I'm not holding my breath, but for every one;s sake, includinghis own, I can only hope. (Just not too soon as his troubles are always fun to read about, What can I say...I'm bitchy with regards to him. lol)
AS always it's such a gift to receive an update to this absolutely incredible story.
Many many thanks for sharing your gift and talent with is.
cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response: Hi Elaine, Sorry for the long wait for this chapter. RL is good just had friends visiting me and did some visiting myself, all good stuff but took time from writing. Debbie felt she always had to protect Michael but sadly that kept him from ever standing on his own. Sadly now she is seeing the error of her ways. Poor Linds & Mel have done nothing to impress Alice or Jennifer, they are both firmly on the side of Brian and Justin and always will be. Mikey just deends on others to give JR a soeca Christmas and lucky for her Uncle Bri & Uncle Jus are there to make sure Santa doesn't disappoint her. Mikey doing down the drain has a certain poetic ring to it. I think he may pull himsefl together enough to get a job. But where will that job be, that is the question???? I'm not seeing smooth sailing on the job front for Mikey.
I am happy to know that you still find this long saga interesting!! I am always happy to read your reviews, thank you for never disappointing me!!!! Bill
Reviewer: Glo (Anonymous) · Date: September 23, 2016 05:41 PM · On: Chapter 19
Love Gus! He is the true meaning of Christmas!
I hope Michael can get his head out of his ass...jeez
Author's Response: Gus is the spirit of Christman Present!!!! Not so sure about Michael performing that task sucessfully! Thanks for the review I love to hear from the readers!!!!!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2016 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 19
Happy I am to see a new chapter. Sadly Deb is finally seeing what all her over protectiveness has caused. Michael expects to be rescued from whatever trouble he gets himself into. Brian on the other hand is a happy camper. In spite of the troubles during the past year, he's contented with his lot. That being Justin. Justin has a bit day planned. Talking Alice into accepting her bonus, stopping to get stocking stuffers for the younger set, getting JR and Nina's gifts. Wish I could have a picture of the two girls in their finery and their dolls. Brian picking up the rest of items for the little girls and finding a few things for Ted and Blake. Too funny. Everyone gets a bonus! Then we come to Michael who isn't actively looking for a job and doesn't think HE needs to get JR more gifts. Selfish much? So much trouble to schedule time with Gus. At least Deb is having her usual Christmas get together. Last day of school and Brian and Justin along with John and Peter pick Gus up before going to the diner, which is decorated for Christmas much to Gus' delight. I'm not surprised that they come upon a young boy in need of help, or that Gus is insistent that the boy not go hungry. Great chapter every way you look at it.
Author's Response: Hello my friend, I like the Yodaest start to your review. When Deb looks at how she is treated by her other "boys" she can't help but see Michae;'s flaws. Brian knows how much happier he is now than he was pre-Justin. Justin got a lot done in a single day. JR & Nina will go crazy over their princess dolls and matching dresses. I think Nina will be happy to see King Teddy Man and Prince Daddy in their crowns & capes. Brian learned from Justin that you get the kids on your side and you can get indulgent parents to do almost anything. Michael depends on other people to take up the slack for him. Luckily JR had people in her life looking out for her. I am thinking Deb will not be able to resist helping Michael find a job. Melanie knows she is playing in the major leagues when Jennifer comes up to bat. Grandmom Jen hit a home room with the Christmas scheduling. Debbie is ging to be proud showing off her new kitchen to everyone on Christmas Eve. I think we may here more from Joe in future chapters. Thanks, as always, for all your kind comments!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2016 11:33 AM · On: Chapter 19
Oh that was awesome chapter and I am glad Debbie is at last getting some insight into Michaels selfish thinking process
Author's Response: Happy to know you enjoyed this much delayed chapter. I think Debbie can't help noticing how well she is treated by other people while her son thinks only of himself. Thanks for the review!!!!!!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: September 23, 2016 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 19
I am not sure why we are always amazed when we hear someone has raised an amazing child. President Obama spoke about a letter he received from a 6 year old who spoke about taking in the little Syrian boy who was all over the news after a bomb went off near his home and he was injured he wanted to share his toys and teach him to ride his bike. I know Brian would say this is all Justin's doing but Gus sees that his Daddy doesn't fight it so he knows it's both of them. I can't wait to see what everyone gets for the holiday maybe most of all what Brian gets Justin. I do love this chapter was just the most important 5 with only a little Deb and Alice thrown in those are always my favorite chapters can't wait till it's 7 with the babies. Just FYI I minded the long delay but here comes my October beg fest since it's my birthday month and while I would love to demand 4 new chapters I will happily settle for 3, 2 if they are extra long. Thanks for continuing to write this I still love it.
Author's Response: I think children view the world in a simple way - things are good or bad, people are happy or sad. As we get older we start analyzing, some of that is good but some clouds our view of the world. I belive Gus sees all the good things that his Daddy does and also his Daddy is always there for Gus. Glad you enjoyed this mostly family chapter. Every once in a while I do feel the other characters need their turn but I do want the sotry to be centered around Brian & Justin. September is my borthday month so I appreciate you not giving me too hard a time about the delay between updates. I will try my best to comply with your October "requests". Thanks for continuing to provide so much support for this long saga!!!!!! I do LOVE to get reviews and you never disappoint me. Bill
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