Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2020 12:05 AM · On: Chapter 15
the O" Brians taking advantage off Jennifer and Justin
Author's Response: i don't think that Jennifer or Justin feel that way.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: November 25, 2016 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 15
i love this fanfic, but its starting to get a bit annoying with Justin and Brian spending so much money on other people. Maybe its because I've witnessed it in my own life, but ive always found that when people are too generous it fucks with their relationships with others. Maybe im just nit picking, but I still love this
Author's Response: They have been spending a lot of money but my excuse is that it is Christmas and a time to be extravagant. Most of what they spent was on the kids. I appreciate the feedback and I think you are correct in too much genorosity can damage relationships. I will keep that in mind but it is fun to think about having enough money to pretty much do whatever you want. Thanks for taking time to review and I will keep your comments in mind!!!! Bill
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2016 01:32 AM · On: Chapter 15
Brian eating hotdogs, Justin really has changed him... I'm glad Carl and Deb had their own get-away, and what a great surprise for Deb when she returns...
Hugs ~ Kathleen
Author's Response: Hi Kathleen, no telling what Brian will do to make his Sunshine happy! Carl is really good for Debbie. Thanks for reviewing!!!! Hugs back, Bill
Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2016 06:07 AM · On: Chapter 15
Since I'm behind on my reading again, I get to read two chapters of your wonderful story. That puts a smile on my face!
I really like the conversation between Roxanne and Jennifer. It's so evocative of the way a mother would feel when someone else suddenly seems more special to her son. I had to smile at what Jennifer said about Justin in regard to Brian. So very true! LOL
I laughed at the way Brian and Justin took care of the Nosy Parker in the Liberty Air lounge.
On to the next chapter!
Karynn
Author's Response: I think it is always a little shock to parenst when someone else appears to take first place with their child. Easy for grandparenst to do that since they are rarely around for the less happy attractive aspects of parenthood. People who listen to other people's conversation have to be ready for anything. Gald you enjoyed this chapter. Thanks for the review!!! Bill
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: July 30, 2016 12:50 AM · On: Chapter 15
This was just what I needed after a tough day at work. Gus and Kevin--laughter and fun and so, so adorable. Could just see them asleep in Gus' bed. And their little chef's outfits--too cute! Their interactions with Jennifer are just icing on the cake. I thought the scene with the busybody was hilarious! Sounds as though Michael isn't being the ideal father. Spoils the kid and then dumps her on his mother. Is Debbie the enabler here? Kind of think so. Great chapter. Enjoyed it tremendously. Can't wait for the next one.
Author's Response: Happy to know I made your day better. I do enjoy writing the interactions between Gus & Kevin. I agree that Grandmom Jen is the icing on that cake. The woman in the lounge heard more than she expected. I think B&J were just being sure Debbie didn't get upset so they topped her F bomb. Brian always enjoys topping. No shock that Mikey is not exactly father of the year. I think you are correct that Debbie is the enabler that never made Michael accept adult reponsibilities. Thanks for the nice commenst. Love to read reviews!!! Bill
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: July 27, 2016 05:32 PM · On: Chapter 15
My Sweet Baboo, you did it again, an amazing update, the day spent with Jen and Gus, and Kevin. The way it was written you see the boys baking and decorating cookies, I loved the way Kevin ask Jen if his mother was right about the decorating with sugar crystals and Jen said yes, but I'm sure sugar was spread everywhere. Thought Jen seeing Gus and Kevin were sleeping butt to butt and hugging their stuffed animals was so cute, and Gus wondering if daddy knew a walk was the same as a hike. Have we seen the last of Craig? I think the only reason he's interested in Justin is because B&J's wealth. I also wonder about Lindsay and her wanting to help with the painting in the children's rooms, I know she is some what better but I won't be surprisr if it isn't payback because Justin fired her. Will charges be filed against her parents? So many questions and I want to know more about the babies. your Sally
Author's Response: Darling Sally, what could be better than Grandmom Jen spending the day with her boys. Grandmothers are mysterious creatures that are great sources of love and information about the world. Moms are familiar creatures useful for day to day life. I often accuse another reviewer of being in my mind now you are doing the same thing. I was just thinking about Craig this morning while I was walking in the park - or was I on a hike?? We may hear more about him soon. I am undecided about Craig, not sure if he is truly evil or just misguided. The mural painting hasn't happened yet, more about Lindsay over Christmas. I don't think there will be any charges filled against Ron & Nancy. Not sure about the statute of limitations and Lindsay is too fragile to be exposed to a court battle. The babies are coming in the next story. This story will end in 3 or 4 chapters and I will start "To Have and To Hold" which will begin with the twin's arrival. Always love seeing your comments!!!! Thanks for the review, your sweet B
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2016 03:40 PM · On: Chapter 15
Wonderful chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks, happy to know you enjoyed it!!! Glad to hear from you. Thanks for taking time to review!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2016 01:53 AM · On: Chapter 15
Thanks for the chapter.
In this chapter we see clearly the difference between Debbie and Jennifer. Debbie has done some wonderful things for Brian. Maybe even save his life. But that was then, and now is now. I resented, and so did Justin, her remark that Brian probably went to a bar while Justin walked around the museum. You see, what bothers me is that she knows better. Brian is a successful businessman, who is brilliant, creative, etc. etc. Whether with or without Justin, Brian would enjoy a museum, would enjoy a good book, maybe even enjoy stories here at MW. Who knows? I just don’t quite understand her continually putting down Brian. She knows better.
As I said in my last feedback, as compared to Debbie, Jennifer does that extra thing to make people feel good. As an example she went out and bought the two boys aprons and chef hats. It made them feel special. How does Debbie make Brian feel special? Jennifer is what Debbie should be.
DavidR
Author's Response: Hi David, I always enjoy your reviews, you always have an interestng point of view. Makes me think about the characters and how I make them behave in the story. I think there shouldn't be any doubt about where Mikey got his aversion to change! I think maybe because Brian always acts like things come easily to him that most people don't realize how hard he works and how important things are to him. I belive that people should do nice things because it is the right thing to do, you shouldn't expect excessive gratitude or lifelong devotion. Debbie has done nice things but she needs to let it go. I don't think Justin changed Brian I just think he loves him and allows Brian to be himself and encourages him to be himself.
Jennifer is the grandmother everyone should have. I suspect she has been wanting grandchildren for a while and now that some have appeared she is making the most of it. The bys are reaping the benefits of all that pent up Grandmother love. I suspect when the new little girl arrives she is going to have a bunch of folks spoiling her. Glad you enjoyed this chapter and thanks for all your reviews!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2016 09:49 PM · On: Chapter 15
Hi, Bill! Always am delighted to see another new chapter from you. Again, I am always amazed by the way you put so many thoughtful details into your story. The part about Justin creating the cards that were 'works of art' for his mother was lovely. I'm glad that Roxanne was put at ease regarding her place in her son's life. And that image of Gus and Kevin in bed together with their stuffed animals was just too precious! I could see that in my mind.
Chuckled at the scene in the Liberty Air Lounge. I love how both B and J are so protective and supportive of each other.
Thank you for the update, Bill! As always, I will be looking forward to your next update, my friend. ~Kim
Author's Response: HI Kim, thanks for all the kind comments. I thought it was fun that Grandmom Jen recognized that Gus & Kevin's efforts weren't up to Justin's standards but she loved their cards anyway. I'm sure she valued Molly's cards as much as Justin's but knew they weren't "works of art". Gus & Kevin are great buddies. A lot of readers have commentsed how much they love the Kevin character which I think is great. The lounge scene gave Brian & Justin a chance to be juvenile but also to put Debbie at ease. They offended the woman way more than Debbie!
Thanks for the review, everyone knows I love to read reviews!!! Anyone who enjoys my story should be grateful to you because your encouragment is one of the reasons it exists. Anyone who enjoys my reply to their review should know that you are the one who told me I should always reply to reviews, great advice!!! Always happy to know you enjoy the latest chapter. Bill
Reviewer: shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: July 26, 2016 01:57 AM · On: Chapter 15
I loved Gus and Kevin with Grandma Jen. The projects even making sure Kevin had gluten free bread and cookies. I also loved them admitting jR is not the easiest child to deal wth. My favorite part though was Brian and Justin annoying the women in the Libérty Lounge. Also Debbie getting a glimpse at the Brian Justin knows and loves. More soon please.
Author's Response: Grandmom Jen and her boys, an unbeatable combination. Alice gets some vredit for gluten free cooike dough and bread, even Grandmom Jen has limits. JR: stubborn genes from her mother and whiney genes from her father, how could she anything other than difficult. Justin tried to tell Debbie that some consistency was needed but I don't think she got the message. B&J let the busybody really have it. It was juvenile but lots of fun. Glad you enjoyed the latest chapter. Always look forward to your comments!!!! Thanks for all your support. Bill
Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2016 01:28 AM · On: Chapter 15
great chapter. I always love reading this story. It is really great that you have incorporated a child with a disability into a big secondary character.
Author's Response: Thank you for the kind words I really appreciate them!!! I LOVE Kevin and I am really thrilled that so many readers have embraced him. Thanks for the review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2016 10:46 PM · On: Chapter 15
I love Jen's relationship with the boys. She is the "ultimate "grandma."
Author's Response: Her boys love Grandmom Jen and she loves all her boys. Her concept of a "love family" instead of a blood family is great. Glad you enjoyed this chapter, thanks for the review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2016 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 15
It's Monday, and you know what that means!! I'm baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaack!! lol
Your update was a balm to my soul this week. Have been enjoying catching up with a lot of fics this weekend, most of which had a lot of angst to them. I enjoy that thoroughly, don't get me wrong, but having this to read calmed me down. It's always always such a joy to read an update. I know...I've said it a million times, but it stands true every time I read a new update.
I feel for Roxanne. It's always difficult to let go, especially when it initially happens. when they start discovering their independance. I can see it being particulalry hard on her since she's been Kevin's main source for so long. It huts a bit, but it's far too benficial for the child to discover this. She'll really grow to appreciate it once she has more free time. LOL. Having someone so dependant on you is......tiring!! :)
The boys are becoming real little men aren't they. Not many young men like them would be as helpful as they are. It's so heartwarming to see their growth.
Glad that Justin was able to make Deb open her eyes a bit more. She really needs to sto passuming things and see Brian for who he is now rather than who he used to be, or who Michael assumes he is. He has become a wonderful husband and father and Deb needs to really see that. I'm sure she will get better especua=ially now that she's aware. May just take time. Old habits die hard as they say.
Not sure about this whole issue with JR...definitly some concern there. She definitely seems like a spoiled little brat, but she is also in desparate need of some stability. Her father is useless and her moms......nuff said.
thank you thank you thank you!!!!!!!! I think I'm due a re-read of the whole things soon.
cheers!
Elaine
Author's Response: Hello Elaine, I made sure to post this last night before I went to bed so you would have something to read this morning. You can tell me it is a joy to read my story as many times as you want, I will never get tired of hearing it. I think Roxanne knows how lucky she is to have the Taylor-Kinneys in her life but still dislikes her little boy wanting to spend time with someone else. Grandmom Jen is the Pied Piper of the family, all the boys following where she leads. I believe John & Peter are thrilled at their life with the uncles. They know how much better they have it instead of living with their drug addicted mother. They want to be sure they don't do anything to screw things up plus they love Grandmom Jen and she loves them.
Justin is always trying to make people understand how wonderful Brian is. He had his mother convinced but Deb is a harder nut to crack but Justin keeps at it every chance he gets. No need to look too far to see where Michael learned his averson to change and the inabiility to see change. I agree JR does not have much stability in her life. When you can't get a five year old to do what you, want watch out for the teen years, they are going to be ROUGH. I am always impressed by anyone saying they re-read the whole saga!!! thank you thank you thank you for your review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2016 02:48 PM · On: Chapter 15
What an intersting weekend. Jen is a wonderful influence and had a great time with Gus and Kevin. Justin and Brian treated Debbie and Carl and Debbie realized she sometimes came across as ungrateful. Her little talk about JR was enlightening. You have to feel sorry for the poor kid. What was up with that rude lady in the airport lounge? She was strange. As always a wonderful chapter!!!!
Author's Response: Everyone enjoyed their weekend, especially Gus & Kevin. They had a great time cooking, making cards, reading and even going on a hike. Michale not really behaving like an adult, not a huge surprise. The busybody in the lounge was just a good excuse for B&J to behave like juveniles. Always happy to hear from you my friend!!!!! Thanks for the all the reviews!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2016 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 15
So many great moments in this chapter thank you
Author's Response: What could be better than "great moments", thanks for the nice comment and I'm happy to know you enjoyed this chapter. Thanks for the review!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: BritinForever (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2016 11:08 AM · On: Chapter 15
Gus and Kevin are so damn adorable! I love when they spend time with Grandma Jen. :)
Author's Response: I love Grandmom Jen time too!! I enjoy writing about Gus & Kevin and they seem to be popular among the readers. Thanks for taking time to review, love to get them!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2016 08:50 AM · On: Chapter 15
Great afternoon read while having my cuppa.... Brian and Justin are sooooo bad - well the woman at the airport deserved it. It's good for Deb to finally realize that Brian isn't 14 any more. Love Jen's attitude to everyone. Kevin is such a cutie.
Author's Response: You and Grandmom Jen enjoy a cuppa. The busybody sure got an earful. Pretty juvemile of B&J but a lot of fun!!! Kevin has become a favorite character in the story which is great!!! Thanks for all yoru support, you know I love to read reviews!!!!!!! Bill
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