Reviewer: Oliviatheolive (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2016 01:23 AM · On: Chapter 1
I really liked that line: "I walked right out the front door of Babylon and head-on into my future." I think I mentioned this before in another one of your stories but you do a really great job of getting Brian and Justin's voice-with the use of first pov. I tend to stay away from 1st pov stories nor do I usually write them, because it can go bad really fast. But a lot of this was just so Brian. I love drabbles- mostly because I don't have a lot of time to read long fanfiction but because although they may be short, they have this ability to pack a lot of emotions- that's what I'm getting here.
Olivia
Author's Response: Thank you so much for such a wonderful comment, I'm so glad you like my Gale voice. I just write what comes from my heart, and my love of QAF. I guess I'm channeling Brian... He, he, he... Thanks again Darling ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2016 01:59 AM · On: Chapter 1
How very accurate my friend.
Author's Response: It's hard to not see all the love and passion between the two of them... Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2016 09:46 PM · On: Chapter 1
I absolutely agree, this is exactly how Brian thinks and feels about his life and Justin:-)
Author's Response: Thanks, I think he ran from love, not because he didn't believe in it, but because he's been hurt by it... Thankfully Justin could see behind his mask, helping him open his heart to love... Later Hon ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2016 03:39 AM · On: Chapter 1
we are all glad that he didn't give up. Great story as always. Bill
Author's Response: So true, besides I kind of think Brian liked being chased... Maybe he needed to really feel wanted and loved... Hugs ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2016 01:22 AM · On: Chapter 1
<3 Love this internalization of Brian's thoughts after years with Justin. He so desperately needed a loving partner, and then serendipity struck (and stuck). :)
Great banner and end photo--as always. I often read your stories on AO3, download, and then come over to MW to see the graphics and leave a comment.
Author's Response: Thanks so much, I'm so happy you enjoy my fics... I wish it was easier to insert pics into my stories on AO3. But you have to use a service like photobucket, and with them being so public, and family friendly, many or should I say, most of my pics and banner are banned for the graphic content... Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2016 11:12 PM · On: Chapter 1
Ooh I loved it persistence pays dividends yay
Author's Response: He was one determined boy, but he got his man... Later Sweetheart ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2016 04:35 PM · On: Chapter 1
nice!
Author's Response: Thanks! ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: marie-france (Anonymous) · Date: January 25, 2016 11:52 AM · On: Chapter 1
i love it Thank you
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm so happy you liked it! Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2016 05:26 AM · On: Chapter 1
So that's how the whole thing started.
Author's Response: Yeah, I think Brian was smitten right from the start, he just couldn't admit it... Later Darling ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: cookiebun (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2016 01:11 AM · On: Chapter 1
so beautiful!
Author's Response: Thanks so much Darling ~ Kathleen
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