Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For No Hollywood Movie
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2018 08:34 AM · On: Chapter 22

Such a great story...i am glad i read it..i like short stories without so much of angest etc.

Thank you for posting this!  I hope we see a lot more of your writing in the future.  I enjoyed this very much.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2018 08:16 AM · On: Chapter 21

Jennifer is awesome...lols.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2018 08:13 AM · On: Chapter 20

That was true...very childish of justin but what can u do when u r hurt and in love...u make stupid mistakes.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2018 08:08 AM · On: Chapter 19

I hope he does go after justin this time.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2018 08:05 AM · On: Chapter 18

Fabulous story

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2018 07:54 AM · On: Chapter 17

I knew it.. yessssss...great work.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2018 07:48 AM · On: Chapter 16

Amazing...they did it...yay...i liked this chapter very much.

Thank you.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2018 07:39 AM · On: Chapter 15

Very very good chapter.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2018 07:33 AM · On: Chapter 14

Uhhhh....yyyyyeeeeesssss.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2018 07:20 AM · On: Chapter 13

Take care of your self dear friend.

Awesome story..finally they are getting closer.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2018 07:09 AM · On: Chapter 12

OMG...SHIT..what a bomb of a twist.

 

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2018 07:05 AM · On: Chapter 11

What does chris want from justin ?? Brian was protective too when chris called justin names...hmm..interesting.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2018 07:00 AM · On: Chapter 10

Awww...he is jealous..soo good.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2018 06:56 AM · On: Chapter 9

What are ur plans brian .? U feel for justin something but in denial mode.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2018 06:54 AM · On: Chapter 8

That is awesome..good for justin.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2018 05:36 AM · On: Chapter 7

Love daphne..superb.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2018 05:22 AM · On: Chapter 6

Thank u for the great chapter.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2018 05:18 AM · On: Chapter 5

Fabulous chapter

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2018 05:14 AM · On: Chapter 4

Mikey a nice person..very good.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2018 05:09 AM · On: Chapter 3

Excellent team work..good going.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2018 05:04 AM · On: Chapter 2

Awww...he is an asshole alright...but a briken asshole...so sad.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2018 05:01 AM · On: Chapter 1

Poor sunshine..tormatized for life..lol.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2018 04:58 AM · On: Prologue

Wow...great start...something new ...looking forward to read .

Thank u for posting.

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2018 11:11 PM · On: Chapter 22

So glad you decided to end a good story with such a good ending.  Thank you. 



Author's Response:

thanks so much i rewrote it in POV form just waiting for it to be edited and 1400 more words needed until its ready to be sent to a publisher with the name changes of course

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2017 02:38 PM · On: Chapter 19

The only thing that I see as Brian's fault is that he didn't call Justin and explain. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2017 08:38 PM · On: Chapter 18

Usually I love Emmett, not so much in this case.  The least they could have done was call everyone and explain.  

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2017 01:17 AM · On: Chapter 17

What happened to Chapter 17?  Lets hope everything goes well.



Author's Response:

sorry i forgot to change it to 17.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2017 03:12 AM · On: Chapter 16

Finally, please tell me they don't back away from each other?

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2017 02:52 AM · On: Chapter 15

Just when it looked like they were going to get along.  Sigh.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2017 02:38 AM · On: Chapter 14

I love how this chapter ended. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2017 02:33 AM · On: Chapter 13

Wow.  I'm glad things are coming together.  

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2017 02:25 AM · On: Chapter 12

Oh no.  That's a cliff hanger if I ever saw one.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2017 02:21 AM · On: Chapter 11

Oh no.  I'm not feeling Chris at all.  It sounded like Justin and Brian weren't really all that close.  Maybe I've gotten it wrong.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2017 02:13 AM · On: Chapter 10

Shame Brian isn't showing that he really cares.  

Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2017 04:13 PM · On: Chapter 15

OH FFS!! both boys need a smack upside the head! Sheesh. 2 most stubborn men. honestly. If 1 could finish a sentence or form a complete thought, maybe they'd eventually get their shit together. Both are saying things the wrongway adn both are taking things the wrong way. I want to reach through and give them both a serious kick in the ass. LOL.

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2017 01:36 AM · On: Chapter 11

Hi, there! Just got caught up on your story so far.  Interesting plot.  Unique, having a Michael and Justin friendship where Michael isn't so supportive of Brian's actions.

Was shocked to find out who Brian's former brother-in-law was!  Poor man - ha! 

Neat idea to convert the former Babylon into Justin's dream cafe/gallery. 

Thanks for beginning to update this again! Really like the banner, BTW!  ~Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2017 07:35 PM · On: Chapter 9

So far so good.  What happens when Brian and Justin meet up?

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2017 03:02 PM · On: Chapter 8

Interesting chapter.  Now we have to wait for them to go to Los Angeles.

Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2016 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 7

Interessting view of Micheal. He has a backbone! He has his own sense of self. good to see, Definitely different than what we're used to. 

Definitely curious how M & J friendship effects Brian. LOL!! could be interesting.

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2016 03:10 PM · On: Chapter 7

This is a Michael we don't see much.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2016 01:00 PM · On: Chapter 7

OH dear poor Justin

Reviewer: hofee33 (Anonymous) · Date: February 04, 2016 06:06 AM · On: Chapter 6

Michael and Justin are getting along quite nicely.  And it's funny that Brian still wants to live with Mieky  with all the success he's had.

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2016 01:30 AM · On: Chapter 6

Interesting.  I like Michael in this story.  He certainly appears to be a better person than Brian.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2016 12:27 AM · On: Chapter 6

It appears that Michael and Justin are getting closer.  Is this a Mikey/Justin story?



Author's Response:

its a justin/brian story

Reviewer: hofee33 (Anonymous) · Date: January 31, 2016 05:31 AM · On: Chapter 5

Michael and Justin possible partners of Babylon.  This could lead to some interesting possiblities.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2016 03:14 AM · On: Chapter 5

The twists and turns in this tale!  Now Mikey's bought Babylon and might become partners with Justin.  And Brian suggested it?

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2016 11:37 PM · On: Chapter 5

Lol I am not a Michael fan so this chapter did not do it for me lol. I look forward to the next one thank you

Reviewer: hofee33 (Anonymous) · Date: January 28, 2016 03:32 AM · On: Chapter 4

This is different.  And I like different.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2016 04:07 PM · On: Chapter 4

This is a totally different look at the dynamics of Michael and Justin's relationship.

Reviewer: rainbow83 (Anonymous) · Date: January 27, 2016 03:33 PM · On: Chapter 4

I like this story a lot, it gets better in every chapter

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2016 08:51 PM · On: Chapter 3

Wow!  This is interesting!  Michael actually likes Justin in this story!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2016 05:33 AM · On: Chapter 3

This story gets more interesting as it goes.

Reviewer: charming1 (Anonymous) · Date: January 25, 2016 04:16 AM · On: Chapter 3

;)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Anonymous) · Date: January 24, 2016 03:29 AM · On: Chapter 2

You answer some of my questions then raise others.  So Brian had a fiance with whom he had two children?  No wonder he's such a n asshole.  This Michael is very different from the usual.  I could almost get to like him.

Reviewer: Tonya (Anonymous) · Date: January 24, 2016 03:11 AM · On: Chapter 2

I am a little confused. Ross took the children from who? This is what has me confused "Ross later returned for a short time to take their two young children away, telling Brian he was an unfit parent."



Author's Response:

he took the children away from Brian it says who it was. 

Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Anonymous) · Date: January 24, 2016 02:11 AM · On: Chapter 2

Interesting turn of events. I like this Mikey. Curious to see what happens next.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2016 02:50 AM · On: Chapter 1

My question is why was Brian using Justin's bed.  Were they sharing the bed?  What happened after Justin screamed?  Does Brian still live there?  Really interesting chapter.



Author's Response:

brian was using Justin's bed so that Justin could catch him in the act. no they weren't sharing the bed.

Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Anonymous) · Date: January 23, 2016 02:39 AM · On: Chapter 1

Nice update. Still intrigued. =]

Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Anonymous) · Date: January 22, 2016 04:35 AM · On: Prologue

OK, I am totally confused, but also totally amused and ready to read what's next!

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: January 21, 2016 08:59 PM · On: Prologue

ohhhh more more!!!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2016 05:35 AM · On: Prologue

Now this is truly unique.  Brian a straight guy claiming to be gay?  Bisexual?  That's gonna scar Justin for life.  LOL.



Author's Response:

thanks for comment

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