Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
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Reviewer: femmegirl49 (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2016 12:03 AM · On: A Little Conversation and a Little Learning

Dying to see how this plays out!!



Author's Response:

Hi, Terri!  Well, there's going to be some twists and turns here, but I hope you enjoy them.;)  Next part will be up tomorrow morning. I'm so happy you're enjoying it! Thank you for the support. ~Kim

Reviewer: Noitish (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2016 09:55 PM · On: A Little Conversation and a Little Learning

I haven't even read the 3rd chapter yet, just wanted to drop by to say how hard it is to know you'll be updating daily and getting those updates in Finland in the evening! A part of me wants to save a few chapters but let's be honest, ain't gonna happen! Way too delicious!!! Come on, Brian, you won't be able to resist that bottom!



Author's Response:

Hi, there! You're so sweet to let me know how much you are enjoying this story! Thank you for the kind words, and for the support. It will be a relatively short story - at least from my normal ones - ha!  But I do hope you continue to enjoy it.

Thank you for reading, and especially for taking the time to comment. I really appreciate that. ~Kim

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: January 08, 2016 08:37 PM · On: A Little Conversation and a Little Learning

Well, there won't be much to tell Daphne, but 4 hours of conversation is a lot of getting to know you. Can't wait to see what Brian thought of the evening.

Author's Response:

Thank you for continuing to read, and for the comments!  Justin may have more to tell her than everyone knows.;)  More twists coming.;)  I'll have the next part up tomorrow morning. Thanks for the support.  ~Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2016 08:04 PM · On: A Little Conversation and a Little Learning

It's wonderful to see Daphne in this tale.  I have to agree that it seems odd that Brian at 40 would have no clue he might be gay.  Love the dogs, love the dinner.  Just have to wait and see where you go with this.



Author's Response:

I always loved the feistiness of Daphne's character, and how she stood up for Justin on the show.  She will be both a confidant as well as a solace to him coming up. Thank you once more for all the support, not only for me but for so many other writers on here.  I hope you continue to enjoy it.  I think you might see the next part taking a surprise turn.;)  ~Kim

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: January 08, 2016 07:22 PM · On: A Little Conversation and a Little Learning

Was waiting all night for this!!! So excited a chapter a day!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! It makes me very happy to know how much you were anticipating an update!  The next part will be up tomorrow morning, and with perhaps a surprising twist or two.  Thank you for reading, and for the feedback.  ~Kim

Reviewer: Alois (Anonymous) · Date: January 08, 2016 11:01 AM · On: It's Just Dinner...Right?

** smiling ** I love this! Patiently waiting for your update 😊 Thank you :)



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you're enjoying it so far.  Poor Brian doesn't know what he's about to get into - literally - ha!  Will have Part 3 up shortly.;)  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Alois (Anonymous) · Date: January 08, 2016 10:49 AM · On: Meet Mrs. Kinney

oh, this has potential! Very interesting and unique idea, Kim! And the dogs! Off to read the next part :)



Author's Response:

Thank you, dear friend!  I hope you continue to enjoy it.;)  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: January 08, 2016 08:49 AM · On: Meet Mrs. Kinney

Interesting AU.

Looking forward to seeing where you go with this.

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, and especially for taking the time to comment! I hope you continue to enjoy it.  ~Kim

Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2016 01:55 AM · On: It's Just Dinner...Right?

I've never read a story like this one with Brian new to the gay life. Granted, Justin's cute enough to make most straight men think twice when he was younger. You have the start of a very good story here Kimberly.



Author's Response:

Thank you, my friend, for your comments and support. XOXO  ~Kim

Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2016 01:34 AM · On: Meet Mrs. Kinney

It has been ages since I read fan fiction and this one drew my into it. Love your writing style as always, and laughed with your prose at the right places. Most entertaining story so far.



Author's Response:

Thanks, Sweetheart!  And I have dogs in this one, too - you should relate to that (secret joke) - ha! XOXO  ~Kim

Reviewer: Therese (Anonymous) · Date: January 08, 2016 12:25 AM · On: It's Just Dinner...Right?

So enjoying this story, thank you again



Author's Response:

Hi, Therese!  Thank YOU for reading, and especially for the feedback. That's pretty much the only way I have of knowing if anyone is enjoying this or not, so it is deeply appreciated.;)  Part 3 will be posted shortly.  Thanks again for the support!  ~Kim

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2016 12:19 AM · On: It's Just Dinner...Right?

Look out...somebody's in trouble lol.

Author's Response:

Now why would you think that, Tamara?  Just because a 'straight' man is fixated on a certain part of Justin's anatomy?  Hee, hee....If you think he's in trouble now, wait until you see what happens coming up soon...emphasis on the word 'come' - ha!  Thanks for reading this one!  Part 3 will be posted shortly. ~Kim

Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous) · Date: January 07, 2016 11:10 PM · On: It's Just Dinner...Right?

I m not sure who I love the most .. Brian, Justin or Mrs Kinney. Daily updates put you in the running too :)



Author's Response:

Hi, Carol!  Thank you for reading, and especially for the feedback; that is deeply appreciated. I'm happy that you are enjoying this characterization.  It's hard for me to keep Brian IC in this situation, but hopefully I will keep him as close to the character we know as possible.  I think he can still have doubts about his sexuality and still maintain a lot of the same qualities we all recognize in him.  I'm glad, too, that I can post daily.  I feel terrible about not being able to do that with my two WIPs, but once they are done, I'm going to try hard NOT to post any multi-chaptered ones until they are at least done, or mainly done, so readers don't have to wait so long in between my updates. But I WILL get the other two finished; I am always dedicated to doing that, and have never left one unfinished yet.;)

Thanks again for reading! Part three is coming up shortly.;)  ~Kim

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: January 07, 2016 09:29 PM · On: It's Just Dinner...Right?

just a rereview from last one. The listeners really loved this from beginning to the last word. They liked the differenc Brian ans how he evolved to the Brian they know and love. Hope you are ok. You mentioned being on meds. You take care of yourself you hear. We all are worried and don't forget we love you as you are part of our family/ lol

Author's Response:

Hi, dear friend. ;)  You are very kind to leave feedback on here for this one. I'm glad the 'peeps' enjoyed it.:)  As for the meds, I'm basically healthy physically; mentally, well, I guess that's another issue that would take up much too much space here to fully explain, but I'm doing okay.  I can't tell you what it means, though, to know that you care and are concerned. I so wish one day that we could meet so I could tell you and the others how much your support and encouragement have meant to me.  Some days just hearing that from you and other faithful readers is the only thing that gets me through the stress and insanity of RL, so never think I do not appreciate it. I do beyond words.

I'm working on Lee's favorite right now, BTW, and hope to have that update posted soon. Tell everyone as always how appreciative I am of all of you, and that I send my love. I consider you all family, too. :)  ~Kim

Reviewer: femmegirl49 (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2016 07:38 PM · On: It's Just Dinner...Right?

I like this!!!  I also love that you are posting daily.  I am already looking forward to tomorrow.  This is fun.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, Terri!  Yes, I know; very unusual for me (unfortunately) to be able to post daily.  But going forward - after my two WIPs are done, both of which are close to completion - I'm going to try to either have all the chapters written, or at least most of them so readers won't have to wait so long in between updates. I feel so bad about that.  I always finish every story I write, but with everything on here as an admin and RL, it's extremely difficult for me to update quickly. So I'm going to try and do better about that moving forward.  I'm glad that I can post this one daily, though, and I'm very happy that you're enjoying it.

I'll have the next part up shortly this morning. Thanks again for the support and especially for commenting!  ~Kim

Reviewer: Oliviatheolive (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2016 07:08 PM · On: It's Just Dinner...Right?

I don't like how your story is making me act. I'm feeling ridiculously giddy and squealing like a school girl. This is why I don't read fanfiction at my internship and especially why I don't read it during lunch- (I share an office with my supervisor.) I'm just breaking all my rules today.

Because-

I squealed when Brian mentioned pflag. I squealed when Justin asked if Brian missed him- and then Brian said no (perfect). I squealed when Justin got all shy and asked Brian to dinner...the questions and looks my coworkers were giving me..... I can't handle this mushy stuff. 

tomorrow....sigh... I'll be up and ready to read the next chapter (because I'm hooked)


Author's Response:

Hi, Olivia! You had me a little worried there with that first sentence - ha!  But I'm so happy that you're enjoying this story; that puts a smile on my face.;)  I had to laugh over your comment about your co-workers.  If you think this was bad, wait until what literally 'follows next' - LOL! 

So thrilled that like this story! I will have the next part up shortly. Thanks for reading, and for the support; it's always extremely encouraging to me.  ~Kim

Reviewer: steff (Anonymous) · Date: January 07, 2016 06:05 PM · On: It's Just Dinner...Right?

Mmh, a new story of yours! I would have read the first chapter any way, but than I found your anouncement that you will post a new chapter every day. Happy me - I'm not good in waiting for new chapters :-)

I like your Justin, and I like Claire and even the dogs. I like the light, a bit humoristic tone, the more feel-good than all-angsty start. Thank you for sharing!



Author's Response:

Hi, Steff!  I'm so happy you're going to be reading this one, and I'm glad that you are enjoying the characterizations in this story.  I know how you feel, too, about WIPs.  I'm guilty of that myself, with two presently, but except for one-shots here and there, I'm going to try and make my own, personal New Year's resolution not to post multi-chaptered stories until they are either all complete or near to complete. I don't like the guilt I feel when I can't update as quickly as I would like, and I'm sure it can get frustrating to readers when there's a while in between updates.  But I always finish my stories, and those will be no exception.

I hope you continue to enjoy the rest!  I'll have the next part up in just a little while. Thanks for reading, and especially for commenting! I greatly appreciate that. ~Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2016 02:56 PM · On: It's Just Dinner...Right?

It's interest to find that , I assume, Brian's nephew is gay. And that Brian missed Justin when he didn't show.  Plus we learn that Emmett cuts hair.  Not to mention that Brian isn't ready to admit he's gay too.



Author's Response:

Hi, there! As always, I'm grateful to you for reading and especially for commenting. :)

I thought Emmett with his styling flair would make a great hair stylist. Maybe I'll have to try and write another fic with him as that.;)  I hope you're continuing to enjoy the direction this story is going; I'll have Chapter 3 up tomorrow. ~Kim

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2016 02:33 PM · On: Meet Mrs. Kinney

Oooo....this is going to be good! I can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Thank you, Tamara!  Just posted Chapter 2. Brian's getting in deeper and deeper (wink, wink).  Hope you continue to enjoy it, my friend. ~Kim

Reviewer: Oliviatheolive (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2016 12:24 PM · On: Meet Mrs. Kinney

I can already tell that I'm going to fall madly in love with this story. It is amazing! I love this portrayal of Claire and I love semi straight Brian and confident gay Justin!! Yes!?'!!! I can't wait for what you concoct for the next chapter 



Author's Response:

Hi, Olivia!  First of all, thank you for being one of our writers on the site. We love having new authors on here, and I'm glad you are continuing to post stories.  I have so little spare time right now, it's hard for me to play catch up with my own reading, but hopefully I can do that soon.;P) 

Thank you for reading this one, and for the feedback!  And yes, while Justin is going to have some moments of angst coming up, he's going to be in the 'driver's seat' off and on here (wink, wink) until a certain hesitant older man figures it all out.;)  I do hope you enjoy the rest of the story!  Part Two is coming up shortly.:)  Thanks again.  ~Kim

P.S.  Love the lyrical author name, BTW. :) Too cute.

Reviewer: taurus (Anonymous) · Date: January 07, 2016 11:41 AM · On: Meet Mrs. Kinney

I like what I read so far.  Can't wait for the chapters that follow.



Author's Response:

Hi, there!  Thank you for reading the first part, and for your comments!  I'll have Part Two up shortly.;)  I hope you continue to enjoy Brian's journey.;)  Thanks for the support. ~Kim

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2016 05:08 AM · On: Meet Mrs. Kinney

oh Kim - I needed a giggle tonight - and this definitely fit the bill

poor Brian - believing he is straight - whatever will he do as he find that this blond bundle of joy is everything he never knew he wanted - can't wait to see him figure out how it all works...*wink wink

and Mrs Kinney - what a hoot!

so much fun - thanks for that

Charle



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend!  Always delighted to see you reading a story of mine.:)  I'm so glad this one gave you a smile.  Yes, it's definitely a departure from Brian's norm; hopefully, though, I'm still going to keep him IC as much as possible. There's the rub, though; how do you do that when all his life he's been led to believe he's straight?  But he's about to find out how wrong he is. (tee, hee).  And don't worry; Justin will give him the 'help' he needs coming up. (wink, wink)

 

Thanks so much for reading, and especially for commenting, Charle! I appreciate so much. Ch. 2 will be posted shortly.  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: therese (Anonymous) · Date: January 07, 2016 12:17 AM · On: Meet Mrs. Kinney

Loving this and so looking forward to the next chapter. it is just totally heart warming, thank you



Author's Response:

Thank you, Therese!  I'm so happy you're enjoying it.  I'll have Chapter Two up tomorrow morning.  Thank you for taking the time to leave a comment, also; it is greatly appreciated.  ~Kim

Reviewer: Cemegh (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2016 08:32 PM · On: Meet Mrs. Kinney

This is a great first chpt Kim. I'm very excited to read the rest.

Can't wait until Justin "unstraightens" Brian. 

Also love Mrs Kinney. You certainly know how to write good dog 



Author's Response:

Hi, Kearney!  I'm delighted to see you reading this one.;)  Thank you for the feedback, also.  I'm glad that you are enjoying it so far. This is one finished; I see probably eight chapters by the time I divide it up.;)  I'll have Part 2 up tomorrow.  Thank you again for the encouragement and the support!  Glad that you like Mrs. Kinney, too! ~Kim

Reviewer: kimi (Anonymous) · Date: January 06, 2016 05:29 PM · On: Meet Mrs. Kinney

Interesting premise, looking forward to reading more.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, and for the comments, Kimi!  I'll have Chapter Two up tomorrow. ;)  It should be about 8 chapters in all (it IS finished).  ~Kim

Reviewer: lauren49ers (Anonymous) · Date: January 06, 2016 05:29 PM · On: Meet Mrs. Kinney

I've enjoyed your writing and the storyline a lot. It's quite unusual to hve a straight Brian in a story and I can't wait to see his interactions with Justin.



Author's Response:

Hi, Lauren!  Well, let's just say that Brian thinks he's straight; he's soon going to find out that's not exactly the case. *g* 

I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far. I'll have the next part up tomorrow. Thank you for reading, and for the comments.  ~Kim

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2016 05:12 PM · On: Meet Mrs. Kinney

Well that was fun. Brian is definitely a late bloomer. It's going to be an interesting journey for the boys. Love Deb as the housekeeper. Brian naming the dog Mrs Kinney - what a hoot....LOL

Author's Response:

Hi, Monica!   Well, let's just say that Brian is going to be a fast learner.;)  Glad you liked the name he picked out for his new companion, and I just couldn't resist putting Debbie in that role; it was too perfect.  Thanks for reading, and for the comments!  I'll have the next chapter up tomorrow. :)  ~Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2016 04:27 PM · On: Meet Mrs. Kinney

Now this is what I call different.  Brian, retired, over 30.  Claire his 'younger sister' married 9 times?  Deb a housekeeper.  When you had a trainer mentioned I thought ahhh Justin.  Wrong!  I like how they meet and both have dogs.  French bulldog and pug - at least they are both short.  I look forward to seeing who else shows up.  Michael?  Emmett?  Ted?  Lindsay or Melanie?  The possibilities are endless.



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend!  Yeah...don't think Claire's the best person to give out lovelorn device - ha!  Can you imagine the joining of a pug and a French bulldog?  Would not be pretty - LOL!

Thanks for reading this one. It IS complete. I will post another chapter tomorrow. And yes, there will be at least one more well-known character being introduced in a different role. :)  Thanks for the comments!  ~Kim

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