Reviewer: Calliesky (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2020 10:21 AM · On: Key to My Heart - Conclusion

I wasn't sure about this. But I loved it. Off to read more of your work 💞

Reviewer: Leather Cuff (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2019 03:38 PM · On: A Little Conversation and a Little Learning

You can cut the tension with a knife in this one... Phew! 

Reviewer: The Lantern keeps shining (Anonymous) · Date: March 06, 2016 10:23 AM · On: It's Just Dinner...Right?

My friend Mary wanted to get me off with this guy who looked like an ex-hippy with a huge beard and was a religious nut. I DON'T THINK SO! 

Author's Response:

I'm glad you're checking this story out. Thank you. I hope you enjoy it. ~Kim

Reviewer: Cristina (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2016 07:16 PM · On: Key to My Heart - Conclusion

So interesting and refreshing. Brian, as straight man. Wow! And Claire... my god, she is good person :D I liked her!!

Love the way you describe Justin, struggling feelings. Beautifully written! It's the way that i like see Justin's personality in stories, strong, pure,caring.

One word for this story "Wonderful"

                                              **Thank you for writing**   

Author's Response:

Hi, Cristina!  Thank you for choosing to read this story, and for your lovely comments. I normally write in 3rd person, but occasionally feel like using 1st person as in this story. Hopefully I didn't confuse a lot of readers by switching back and forth between Brian and Justin, but I thought it was important to show how each one was feeling at certain times. I'm happy you liked Justin's portrayal in here.  And while I know that Claire was anything but caring on the show, she was perfect in here as one of the characters from the film. And I loved the French bulldog they used! If you get a chance, check the film out. it's very cute. Although I think it's actually called, "What HAPPENS Next." I think I had misspoken in my story notes, so I'll try to go fix that.

Thanks again for the support. I hope I can continue to write stories that you will enjoy.;)  ~Kim

Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2016 03:56 PM · On: Key to My Heart - Conclusion

Hi, Kim! I was amazed when I saw this long story from you. I read it in one gulp back when you first published it during Christmas – it’s so interesting and rather unusual. I enjoyed seeing Brian here, how he grows, how he changes his cynical views, how he first realizes what’s going on and why he feels this way about another man.

Justin was incredible as well – so lonely, genuine, strong and loyal. I loved spending time in his head, his inner voice was unique – I was always anxious because he worried so much about Brian and whether or not his feelings would be returned.

This is one of the few stories where I liked Claire. She had her bad moments, but mostly she was really supportive and loving to Brian.

Thank you for this wonderful present, I loved it!I can't wait to see your other updates - amd new stories :)

Author's Response:

Hi, Katrin! Always great to hear from you.;)  I'm glad you enjoyed this story.  I enjoyed writing this one in first-person perpective; I don't often do that, but I may try to do that more often now.  I like to get into their heads, and I think it does shed more light on what they are feeling and thinking.

Thank you for reading this on LJ, and especially for taking the time to leave me feedback on here.  Both are much appreciated.  ~Kim

Reviewer: Ersilia (Anonymous) · Date: January 21, 2016 12:52 PM · On: Meet Mrs. Kinney

here I am reading your last completed story..I have no words.....and now I know why I'm waiting for your completed FF! They are so worth it! I love your way of stay put to the carachters even in a completely twisted plot. I love the way you describe their feelings and your graohic lyrics are so in tune with my sensibility. I love you as a writer..and hope you'll never stop to amaze me...

Author's Response:

Hi, Ersilia!  You don't know how much I appreciate your words of support and encouragement.  My family is going through a very rough time right now, and writing is my refuge to at least temporarily escape all the stress and sadness. So your review could not have come at a better time. Thank you is not really sufficient to describe how grateful I am at the moment, but I want you to know how much I appreciate your comments.  I still love to write about these two amazing characters, and have numerous story ideas. What I DON'T have, sadly, is enough time to write them all quickly!  But I DO hope to have more time next month while my mother is vacationing in Florida, so that will hopefully help me to write faster.  And I will definitely finish any story that I begin. I just wish I could update quicker.  In this case, this story was for a fan fiction challenge, and it had a deadline that had to be met, so that is why I was able to finish this one.;)

I probably will try to at least write something shorter for Valentine's Day (hard to pass that holiday up!), and I will have some additional new stories coming as well.  But I am working right now on the update to "My Heart's Desire," and then "Stallion," which are both close to completion. That will give me time to work on the new ones. :)

Thank you again for taking the time to comment, and for your wonderful words.  ~Kim

Reviewer: cookiebun (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2016 04:13 PM · On: Key to My Heart - Conclusion

I enjoyed this story so much.

I like AU stories, but I was unsure at first of such a "different" Brian... but he totally worked for me.  they all did actually.  Deb and Daphne were close enough to how we know them, but I really enjoyed the "nice" Claire and how this Brian and Justin were different, but still seemed familiar.  Enough of the ones we know shined thru.  I could read about these characters more and more.

 

Any thoughts of making this a universe with more stories?

Author's Response:

Hi, Kathy! Thanks for reading this one, and for your kind comments. I enjoyed the challenge that presenting Brian not so IC presented me, and I'm glad that you were okay with it.  And yes, it was kind of refreshing to actually have a supportive Claire.  Thank you again for the support.  And if I can think of a good plot, I would definitely think about a sequel!  Looking forward to more of your story as well. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2016 06:42 AM · On: Key to My Heart - Conclusion

Reading this fic encouraged me to finish the movie and I was just as impressed with it as your story. I think I enjoyed your story more only because you have written such insight into the characters. It made it all the more romantic. And I love how cute Brian was in this fic.

Delightful! :)

Author's Response:

Hi, my friend!  First of all, apologies for repeating part of the last chapter! Ugh. Didn't realize I had done that until someone kindly pointed it out.  I revised it somewhat as you may have noticed. I really enjoyed writing in this perspective, and have a new story coming up that will do the same thing. I do hope you like that one as well, but for now I'm moving back to my two WIPs to finish them.

 

I am happy that you enjoyed this fic!  You've always been so supportive from Day 1, and it is much appreciated. Thank you for reading, and especially for commenting.  ~Kim

Reviewer: Elly (Anonymous) · Date: January 18, 2016 12:37 PM · On: Key to My Heart - Conclusion

Thank you, Kim, for another beautiful story. My thoughts are with you and your family. Hugs!

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, and for your concern, Elly. My brother is doing much better physically, but he will have some major issues up ahead. The best I can do is keep providing my support to him.  Long story, but a sad one.  Writing does help me to forget for a while, though, and comments and support from people like you mean more than I can say. Thank you, my friend. ~Kim

Reviewer: Julie (Anonymous) · Date: January 18, 2016 01:12 AM · On: Key to My Heart - Conclusion

Kim,  loved the story!  I'm usually skeptical of the 'take a movie and make it a qaf fanfic' but you did an excellent job!  I loved the movie and I loved your story just as much!

 

Author's Response:

Hi, Julie!  Yes, I admit I was a little hesitant about writing Brian this way, but I am glad you enjoyed it. My beta suggested it, and I liked writing in 1st person POV here. I may try to do that with some other stories in the future. Thank you for reading, and especially for taking the time to comment. I greatly appreciate that.  ~Kim

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2016 08:56 PM · On: Key to My Heart - Conclusion

I loved this happy little love story:-)

Author's Response:

Hi, my friend!  Yes, for the most part angst-free. And I enjoyed writing in 1st-person POV. Normally it is 3rd person. I may try to do that some more in the future. Thank you for reading, and for taking the time to comment! Both are greatly appreciated.  ~Kim

Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Anonymous) · Date: January 17, 2016 04:18 PM · On: Key to My Heart - Conclusion

This was lovely! Justin and Brian should always be togther, no matter the circumstances. And although I really can't imagine Brian wearing baseball caps - or Justin either for that matter... somehow invisioning Gale wearing one is not so far off, LOL!

Author's Response:

Hi, Trish!  Yeah, not sure that either one would be ballcap wearers, either.  But I'm glad you liked it. And with Gale, he's definitely more of a hat wearer, isn't he? And all kinds, too, but he sure likes that little beret of his!  And beards. Lots and lots of grizzly beards - ha! Thanks for reading, my friend. See you in June! ~Kim

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2016 10:38 AM · On: Key to My Heart - Conclusion

Hi Kim! Beautiful ending :) I especially love Brian's declaration to Justin. So sweet!

Thank you for another beautiful story. I hope everything is okay for you, though. Take care and talk to you soon!

Author's Response:

Hello, my friend. Thank you for reading this one, and for your comments.  I'm glad you enjoyed it.  Long story about the family emergency. Let's just say things won't be settled for quite some time. Will elaborate in an email when I send the next part of your story back (which I am working on now). Thanks for all your support.  ~Kim

Reviewer: soirsagrey (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2016 01:32 AM · On: Key to My Heart - Conclusion

Hiya Kim,

I read this little story in one go and once again I know why you are in my list of fave authors. This one was delightful. Loved, loved, loved the way you portrayed an insecure, lonely and a bit shy Brian being lured out of the closet by Justin.

I also loved the way you portrayed Claire. She was such a tragic character in the series. So to see here this way is heartwarming. The "love affair" between the dogs was a very cute sub plot. What is it with you and dogs? I guess you're as crazy about them as I am.

So sorry to hear about the family emergency. Hoping it will get better soon.

I started reading on "Stallion". It will take me a while to read it though. RL is kicking me around at the moment. Work and the care of an 81 year old mother takes up most of my time. But still happy about it....

Thank you for this lovely story.

XOXO

Soirsa

Author's Response:

Hi, Meriam!  I loved your comments.;)  Thank you for reading, and for the thoughtful feedback. And I am more honored than you know to be considered one of your favorite authors. Thank you for telling me that. :)

You are right, BTW; I am a huge dog lover!  Mainly larger dogs, though, like labs and golden retrievers. Would love to have a labradoodle.  Maybe I'll write about one sometime.;)  Cheaper and less expensive to feed - ha! 

I was a little nervous about portraying Brian as less confident in his sexuality, but I'm delighted that you enjoyed reading about his slowly growing attraction and love for Justin.  Thank you again for all the support! I hope you enjoy Stallion. It is close to being finished, but probably about 3 - 4 more chapters to go. ~Kim

Reviewer: Therese (Anonymous) · Date: January 17, 2016 12:26 AM · On: Key to My Heart - Conclusion

Thank u so much for a really great story, it will be re-read many more times, 'sounds about right' for a sequel !!! loved it.

 

Author's Response:

Thank you, Therese!!  I am delighted that you enjoyed it so much.;)  Thank you for reading, and for letting me know that. Perhaps one day I may revisit Reggie and Mrs. Kinney.;)  ~Kim

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2016 11:47 PM · On: Key to My Heart - Conclusion

Really enjoyed this story.  Sorry to hear about the family emergency, hope everything turns out ok. Bill

Author's Response:

Hi, Bill - thank you for reading, and for all the feedback. Brother was in an auto accident, and has some other issues going on.  Won't be resolved short-term, either, but all I can do is provide support for him.  Was on a breathing tube for two days, though, but doing much better physically. Thank you for the concern, Bill. I reallly appreciate that. ~Kim

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2016 11:20 PM · On: Comfort and Fate

Interesting how you tied everybody together.  Can't wait to see what Brian does when he ses Justin.

Author's Response:

Thanks! A few more surprises to come. :) ~Kim

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2016 10:45 PM · On: Lesson No. 2

just catching up with yur story.  Great chapter.  Poor Brina has a lot to deal with in the light of day.  Bill

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading this one, Bill!  I really appreciate that.  ~Kim

Reviewer: Prisca512 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2016 09:36 PM · On: Key to My Heart - Conclusion

always so happy to see an update from you and a new story....over the moon!  I love the au stories with the boys and this one with Brian finding his sexualty was a great new twist and still kept Brian pretty true to his character.  You're so talented as a writer and I so enjoy reading the stories you paint.  thanks for sharing, this was a great read!! :-)

Author's Response:

Hi, Melissa!  Thanks again for commenting on both sites.  Comments like yours make me very happy, and definitely motivate me.  I really enjoyed writing this story.  My beta sent me the DVD this story is based upon, and suggested I try to adapt it to B and J. I found it a challenge keeping Brian IC here, but hopefully I succeeded sufficiently.;)

Thanks again for all the feedback and support, Melissa! I'll be working on updates to my two WIPs, but I have plenty of new story ideas. As long as others enjoy what I write, I would like nothing better than to keep writing about these two amazing men.;) *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: addicted-to-romione-bedward (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2016 03:29 PM · On: You're Gay?

Only one more chapter? Oh no! I'm loving this so much!

Author's Response:

I'm so glad you've been enjoying it!  Yes, just posted the last part! Thanks again for reading, and for all your comments; they are deeply appreciated, my friend. ~Kim

Reviewer: addicted-to-romione-bedward (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2016 02:53 PM · On: Doubts and Discoveries

It was a good chapter.

This story is the only one where I like Claire. Maybe she'll help Brian too...

Author's Response:

I know what you mean! Claire on the show was a total jerk! But I think here she's just misinformed but well-intentioned. Thanks again for all the feedback!  ~Kim

Reviewer: addicted-to-romione-bedward (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2016 01:38 PM · On: Teach Me

Holy shit! That was smokin' hot!

Author's Response:

Thanks! (Blushing)....How would you like to be HIS teacher!  Yum. :D  ~Kim

Reviewer: addicted-to-romione-bedward (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2016 11:53 AM · On: It's Just Dinner...Right?

This AU world is so beautiful for our boys.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for taking time to comment after each chapter! Very kind of you ~Kim

Reviewer: starfire64 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2016 09:03 PM · On: You're Gay?

Hi Kim- Now it’s my turn to play catch up – again : / LOL, Reggie is making me want a pug now, really cute dogs too. My sister-in-law used to have one. The banter between Daphne and Justin  in chapter 7 is always fun to read, like two peas in a pod, those two ;  ) Clare’s reaction (chapter 8) to finding out it isn’t her son who is gay, but her brother, that was pretty funny, and Daphne – LOL, never, ever, get on that girl’s bad side. Looking forward to the epilogue :  ) *hugs* Janet

Author's Response:

Hi, Janet! I love bulldog Daphne!  And I used to have a neighbor across the street who would have nothing but pugs as pets, one after the other.  They are cute in an ugly sort of way.;) 

 

Thanks for reading and for all the comments, my friend! It is greatly appreciated.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2016 10:46 AM · On: Doubts and Discoveries

It's interesting that Claire has Emmett as her hairdresser and that she meets Justin at PFLAG. What a small world! I enjoyed the interactions here :)

Author's Response:

Hi, my friend! Yes, I liked writing all the 'six degrees of separation' parts where so many of the characters were interconnected.;)  I couldn't resist Emmett as the flashy hairdresser; he seemed perfect for that role.;)  Thank you for letting me know that you enjoyed this part, and especially for the feedback.  ~Kim

Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous) · Date: January 14, 2016 03:13 PM · On: You're Gay?

Nicely done .. 

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, Carol, and for the comment. ~Kim

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2016 09:00 AM · On: You're Gay?

Yay!!! Brian got his head out of his ass and now he can move on with his Sunshine. And I knew Claire's wasn't gay in the least lol...but she can still put all that PFLAG conversation to good use 😉

Author's Response:

Hi, Tamara! Yes, I suspect Claire is going to need her new-found knowledge coming up (hint, hint).  I will have the last part of this up before the end of the day. Thank you as always for reading and for the feedback, my friend. ~Kim

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2016 07:09 AM · On: You're Gay?

That was fun - poor Claire - it was rather easy to shock her. At least checking out PFLAG she had the right intentions even if she was wrong about her son - so many parents don't even try. Kudos to those who love their children no matter their sexual orientation. Love Daphne - little pitbull terrior.  Now on to getting these boys together forever.......

Author's Response:

Hi, Monica!  Very thoughtful comments!  You're right.  We should love our family and friends regardless of who or what they are.  I think Justin did a good job of convincing Claire of that.;)  Now the boys just have to get on the same page.;)

I'll have the rest of this posted before the end of the day.  THANK YOU for being so supportive of this story!  Gets discouraging at times with lack of comments. :(  I appreciate each and every reader, however, but those who take that extra step to leave feedback are extra special.;) Thank you.  ~Kim

Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Anonymous) · Date: January 14, 2016 04:08 AM · On: You're Gay?

See? No matter the situation fate always brings Brian & Justin together! 

Author's Response:

I do like to think of them as soul mates.;) Thanks for reading and for your comments, Trish. ~Kim

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: January 14, 2016 03:24 AM · On: Doubts and Discoveries

I like this very much. Thanks for taking time to share.

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, and for your comments.  I know sometimes if you review anonymously, it can be hard to leave feedback, so I appreciate you taking the extra effort to do that. ~Kim

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2016 02:59 PM · On: Comfort and Fate

Such an evil evil cliffie....can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response:

I missed both of your reviews! Sorry, Tamara.;)  You're very kind to read and review.  Thank you. I start to really doubt myself at times.  Not sure if I still have the 'touch' or not anymore. :(  I'm glad you're enjoying it, though. And I hope you enjoy the rest. Thank you for your kindness. ~Kim

P.S. Sorry - in a real melancholy mood tonight, I guess.

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2016 03:20 AM · On: Comfort and Fate

Lots of twists and turns happening. Can't wait until they all come to 'a head'. At least Brian is having time to come to grips with everything. He's got a lot to make up for. Perhaps he lunch with his nephew might open up lines of discussion which could be helpful???? Whichever way you go in the next chapter I'm looking forward to it.

Author's Response:

Hi, Monica!  Ha! I just answered another review before reading yours, and I used the same 'come to a head' phrase! How weird is that?  You are exactly right. Both men don't know what's about to happen.  You may be surprised by what happens coming up, though.;) 

I will probably be able to post all of the remainder today; will depend upon how long it is, but I will defninitely get another part up sometime today. Thanks again for reading, and for all the comments. They have really waned in the last two chapters, so I greatly appreciate the support. ~Kim

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2016 02:03 PM · On: Doubts and Discoveries

In the words of Martin Lawrence....DAMN IT GINA!!! (meaning Brian lol) Why did he have act like an ass. I can't wait to see how everyone will react when they find out they have been weaving a nice little web between them.

Author's Response:

Hi, Tamara!  Sorry I overlooked your review.  I just posted the next part, so hopefully you will like this Brian better.;)  Thank you for reading and for commenting. And congrats to you three on your blue ribbon for "Barefoot Blond."  I got so busy with my job, my own writing, admin work on here, and other things that I am woefully behind in reading other stories, but everyone really seemed to enjoy it. Kudos. ~Kim

Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Anonymous) · Date: January 12, 2016 05:52 AM · On: Doubts and Discoveries

Now who doesn't love Emmett??? He certainly has given both Claire and Brian something to think about... just by being Emmett Nice scene outside the PFLAG meeting with Justin. 

Author's Response:

Hi, Trish!  Yes, I love Emmett.  Peter Paige was so perfect for that character. And to think that he had initially auditioned for Ted!  Now the question is:  will Claire and Justin figure out who they have in common?  Hmm....that will be resolved before I'm done.

Thanks for continuing to read and comment, my friend. I greatly appreciate that. ~Kim

P.S.  How about that video of Randy in HIS new role?  OMG, can't wait to see him in that!  What an opportunity for him!

Reviewer: starfire64 (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2016 01:12 AM · On: Doubts and Discoveries

Hi Kim  :  ) Ha- I think Brian swallowed his foot instead of just inserting it, hopefully he can get his mind, and his way of thinking, straightened out ( bad choice of words, I know) soon before Derrick starts thinking he has another chance with Justin. I really like this take on Clare; it’s different but refreshing at the same time, hopefully that made sense ;  ) *Hugs* Janet  

Author's Response:

Hi, Janet!  Yeah, Brian didn't exactly impress Justin there, did he?  But he's slowly learning and disovering his way.  I'm glad you like the way that Claire is portrayed here, and I'm happy that you're enjoying the story. Thank you for the support, and the comments, my friend.  *Hugs* back ~Kim

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2016 06:39 PM · On: Teach Me

oohh wauwww ... * sigh * ... mmmm ...  I've no words for this chapter ... it's more than wonderful ... breathtaking.

* runs to the next chapter *

Author's Response:

Hi, Marian!  What lovely comments! Thank you.  I'm glad you're liked Justin's 'lesson.'  Can you imagine being in charge of teaching THAT man?  (Fans self...)  Thank you for the comments, and for reading. So glad that you are enjoying this one!  ~Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2016 06:01 PM · On: Doubts and Discoveries

It was nice, the talk that Justin had with Claire.  I hope it helps.  I hope that Brian decides who and what he wants as well.  Mrs Kinney will not be happy if she doesn't get to see Reggie.

Author's Response:

LOL!  Yes, those two furry friends have bonded by now; it's only fair that their owners do the same, right?:)  I'm glad you liked Justin and Claire's talk. Kind of ironic, isn't it?  I'll have the next part up tomorrow.  Thank you for continuing to read and comment!  Very much appreciated.  ~Kim

Reviewer: arakiss (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2016 06:00 AM · On: Lesson No. 2

Great story!
I kind of cheated - went and read all of it before comment here :(
but you know me :)
What surprise me was that I actually liked Claire here :)
Anyway, it was perfect New Year gift for me!

I wish you a wonderful year, Kim, happiness, sunshine and many new stories!

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and for the comments, Arakiss! I am happy that you liked it. It's a challenge keeping Brian IC here, but I'm trying to do that as much as possible, considering the circumstances. And thank you for all the support of my stories. I really appreciate that. ~Kim

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2016 04:07 AM · On: Lesson No. 2

Oh no Brian...don't hide now.

Author's Response:

Hi, Tamara!  Poor Brian...so attracted to Justin and scared shitless at the same time!  They're about to be some angst introduced here coming up, but hopefully they can resolve any issues that arise.

Thanks for all the support and encouragement! Next part's coming up sometime today. Hope you have a good week, my friend. ~Kim

Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Anonymous) · Date: January 11, 2016 01:43 AM · On: Lesson No. 2

I saw chapter 4 posted the other day and was just coming to read that when I saw Chpater 5! Bonus!

Things certainly have move quickly with these two! It's a bit weird to see Justin as the experienced teacher and Brian as the pupil, even with the same age difference as we're used to in the show. 

Great update!

Author's Response:

Hi, Trish! Thanks for continuing to read!  Yes, I can see your point about that.  Hopefully it's not TOO unbelievable.  Brian's not sexually inexperiened by any means, but I think he's kind of been so accustomed to thinking along the same traditional/hetero lines (with his sister's matchmaking help) into thinking that's the way he should be that until Justin came along he really didn't think much about it.  Hopefully I'm still managing to keep him pretty much IC despite that.

I hope you enjoy the rest. I will try to get the next part up shortly, but it will definitely be sometime today. Thanks again for all the support, my friend. ~Kim

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2016 01:24 AM · On: Teach Me

Oooo....the heat just turned up!

Author's Response:

Yes, indeedy! And so does the angst.;)  Next part's up today. Thanks again for the feedback; much appreciated. ~Kim

Reviewer: Alois (Anonymous) · Date: January 10, 2016 02:45 PM · On: A Little Conversation and a Little Learning

The tension is burning up! Enjoying this immensely Kim :)

Author's Response:

Thank you, my friend!  It's definitely going to get hotter in the next part! 

 

BTW, will send your next part over later today.;)  Thanks for your support as always.  ~Kim

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2016 08:15 AM · On: Teach Me

Great hot, hot, hot chapter. Not fair where it ended though. Good thing tomorrow isn't that far away...LOL Can't wait.

Author's Response:

Hi, Monica!  I know - horrid spot to stop! But at least you know there will be more today - let's just say they're not done yet (wink, wink).  It may be a few hours yet, but I definitely will be posting the next part sometime today. Thanks for continuing to read, and for the feedback! It is most appreciated. ~Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2016 05:07 AM · On: Teach Me

Gosh, you really went all out.  Very realistic in MHO.  The next chapter should be a doozy.

Author's Response:

Hi, my dear!  I'm glad you thought it was realistic. I definitely didn't want it to feel rushed, but after the furtive glances and more-or-less flirting going on over dinner, I thought it would not be out of the question for it to progress this way.;)  And yes, let's just say they're not done yet (wink, wink).  Things are about to take a bit of a roller coaster ride here!  Thank you for continuing to read and review.  I really do appreciate it. ~Kim

Reviewer: Oliviatheolive (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2016 01:49 AM · On: Teach Me

YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!  AHAHAHAHAMAZING! Last chapter was all cute and adorable! and then this chapter was all sexy and steamy and yummy. PERFECT! Justin is amazingly patient and understanding. I love Justin in this story, and how considerate he is of Brian's on feelings. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

 

Olivia

Author's Response:

Hi, Olivia!  I'm so happy (and relieved in a way) that you liked this chapter.  I know Brian is normally such a dominant person - and in some ways he still he is here - but to keep him true to this story, he needs to be a bit more on the restrained side, so not sure how everyone will react to this.  Next chapter, too.  But it is a progression - and Brian is still learning here. He knows what he wants - and WHO he wants now - but he needs a little coaching by a certain blond first.;) 

So glad you liked this update!  Will have the next part up tomorrow.  Things won't be all smooth sailing between them just yet (have to throw just a bit of angst in there to keep it interesting, but you know how I like to make them happy eventually).

Thank you for continuing to read and review! I appreciate that so much. ~Kim

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2016 08:35 PM · On: A Little Conversation and a Little Learning

I feel bad that Mrs Kinney didn't get to go and see her friend.  Maybe the dogs will get "together" before Justin and Brian.  I wonder if Brian will run scared now and not show up in the park for a couple days.  Great story, as always.  Bill

Author's Response:

Hi, Bill!  Not to worry; they will see each other again (the dogs, I mean - ha!).  You're about to find out when they meet up again, and it might just surprise you.  The next part's coming up shortly. Thanks again for reading, and for your support. It is always greatly appreciated.  ~Kim

Reviewer: The Lantern keeps Shining (Anonymous) · Date: January 09, 2016 05:08 PM · On: Meet Mrs. Kinney

'Met any interesting guys yet?'' Where do you you find them?'

For whom is Brian asking?

It's funny how a person can be oblivious to attraction of another when it's staring them in the face so to speak. All the signs are there.

How funny! 'Mrs Kinney'' to  annoy his well meaning sister. Well it certainly did.

Author's Response:

Hi, there! I'm delighted to see you reading this one.;) Poor Brian - experienced in the world of hetero sex, but he has no clue what he's doing, other than he knows he's attracted to a different sort of blond now.;)  But he's about to get a lesson (wink, wink).  I  hope you enjoy the rest of the story. Thank you for reading, and especially for taking the time to comment.~Kim 

Reviewer: Deborah (Anonymous) · Date: January 09, 2016 03:33 AM · On: A Little Conversation and a Little Learning

Very interesting

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and commenting, Deborah.  I hope you enjoy the rest of the story. I will have the next part up tomorrow morning.  ~Kim

Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Anonymous) · Date: January 09, 2016 03:14 AM · On: A Little Conversation and a Little Learning

Happy to be able to read the next installment!

Kinda hard to imagine Brian as a shy, insecure 40 year old virgin! Hopefully Justin will remedy that soon!

Author's Response:

Hi, Trish! Well, he would only be considered that when it comes to Justin; I'm sure he's had his share of hetero sex up until now, but this is definitely new territory for him.  And I'm not sure I see him as shy for the most part; hesitant and unsure about what he is feeling for Justin, but definitely able to speak his mind in other cases.  At any rate, I hope you enjoy the story. Thanks for reading and for the comments. ~Kim

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2016 01:01 AM · On: Meet Mrs. Kinney

Great beginning.  I don't usually like AU but this is a really interesting premise.  Can't wait to see where you go with it.  You are breaking records with your fast updates!!  Bill

Author's Response:

Hi, Bill!  Well, it's funny how everyone's interpretation of AU differs, but I'm assuming you mean b/c Brian is portrayed here as straight (or at least he's deluded into thinking that - ha!).  But I'm glad you're going to give it a try.  And while I wish I could be this speedy with ALL my stories (i.e., my two WIPs), it's only because I had it completely done before I started posting it. I'm going to try my best going forward after I finish my two WIPS to finish any new multi-chapter stories first, or at least have most of it done.  I just feel too bad when I can't update them regularly like you are so good at doing with your own story.;)  And, of course, out of courtesy to the other writers, I won't post more than one chapter a day of this story until it's completely finished.

Thanks for trying this one out! I hope you continue to enjoy it. And BTW, thanks, too, for your kind words about the site, and for the support. As Bob said, we are very lucky to have you as a writer on here. :)  ~Kim

Reviewer: Noitish (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2016 09:55 PM · On: A Little Conversation and a Little Learning

I haven't even read the 3rd chapter yet, just wanted to drop by to say how hard it is to know you'll be updating daily and getting those updates in Finland in the evening! A part of me wants to save a few chapters but let's be honest, ain't gonna happen! Way too delicious!!! Come on, Brian, you won't be able to resist that bottom!

Author's Response:

Hi, there! You're so sweet to let me know how much you are enjoying this story! Thank you for the kind words, and for the support. It will be a relatively short story - at least from my normal ones - ha!  But I do hope you continue to enjoy it.

Thank you for reading, and especially for taking the time to comment. I really appreciate that. ~Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2016 08:04 PM · On: A Little Conversation and a Little Learning

It's wonderful to see Daphne in this tale.  I have to agree that it seems odd that Brian at 40 would have no clue he might be gay.  Love the dogs, love the dinner.  Just have to wait and see where you go with this.

Author's Response:

I always loved the feistiness of Daphne's character, and how she stood up for Justin on the show.  She will be both a confidant as well as a solace to him coming up. Thank you once more for all the support, not only for me but for so many other writers on here.  I hope you continue to enjoy it.  I think you might see the next part taking a surprise turn.;)  ~Kim

Reviewer: Alois (Anonymous) · Date: January 08, 2016 11:01 AM · On: It's Just Dinner...Right?

** smiling ** I love this! Patiently waiting for your update 😊 Thank you :)

Author's Response:

I'm so glad you're enjoying it so far.  Poor Brian doesn't know what he's about to get into - literally - ha!  Will have Part 3 up shortly.;)  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: January 08, 2016 08:49 AM · On: Meet Mrs. Kinney

Interesting AU.

Looking forward to seeing where you go with this.

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, and especially for taking the time to comment! I hope you continue to enjoy it.  ~Kim

Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2016 01:34 AM · On: Meet Mrs. Kinney

It has been ages since I read fan fiction and this one drew my into it. Love your writing style as always, and laughed with your prose at the right places. Most entertaining story so far.

Author's Response:

Thanks, Sweetheart!  And I have dogs in this one, too - you should relate to that (secret joke) - ha! XOXO  ~Kim

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2016 12:19 AM · On: It's Just Dinner...Right?

Look out...somebody's in trouble lol.

Author's Response:

Now why would you think that, Tamara?  Just because a 'straight' man is fixated on a certain part of Justin's anatomy?  Hee, hee....If you think he's in trouble now, wait until you see what happens coming up soon...emphasis on the word 'come' - ha!  Thanks for reading this one!  Part 3 will be posted shortly. ~Kim

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: January 07, 2016 09:29 PM · On: It's Just Dinner...Right?

just a rereview from last one. The listeners really loved this from beginning to the last word. They liked the differenc Brian ans how he evolved to the Brian they know and love. Hope you are ok. You mentioned being on meds. You take care of yourself you hear. We all are worried and don't forget we love you as you are part of our family/ lol

Author's Response:

Hi, dear friend. ;)  You are very kind to leave feedback on here for this one. I'm glad the 'peeps' enjoyed it.:)  As for the meds, I'm basically healthy physically; mentally, well, I guess that's another issue that would take up much too much space here to fully explain, but I'm doing okay.  I can't tell you what it means, though, to know that you care and are concerned. I so wish one day that we could meet so I could tell you and the others how much your support and encouragement have meant to me.  Some days just hearing that from you and other faithful readers is the only thing that gets me through the stress and insanity of RL, so never think I do not appreciate it. I do beyond words.

I'm working on Lee's favorite right now, BTW, and hope to have that update posted soon. Tell everyone as always how appreciative I am of all of you, and that I send my love. I consider you all family, too. :)  ~Kim

Reviewer: Oliviatheolive (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2016 07:08 PM · On: It's Just Dinner...Right?

I don't like how your story is making me act. I'm feeling ridiculously giddy and squealing like a school girl. This is why I don't read fanfiction at my internship and especially why I don't read it during lunch- (I share an office with my supervisor.) I'm just breaking all my rules today.

Because-

I squealed when Brian mentioned pflag. I squealed when Justin asked if Brian missed him- and then Brian said no (perfect). I squealed when Justin got all shy and asked Brian to dinner...the questions and looks my coworkers were giving me..... I can't handle this mushy stuff. 

tomorrow....sigh... I'll be up and ready to read the next chapter (because I'm hooked)

Author's Response:

Hi, Olivia! You had me a little worried there with that first sentence - ha!  But I'm so happy that you're enjoying this story; that puts a smile on my face.;)  I had to laugh over your comment about your co-workers.  If you think this was bad, wait until what literally 'follows next' - LOL! 

So thrilled that like this story! I will have the next part up shortly. Thanks for reading, and for the support; it's always extremely encouraging to me.  ~Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2016 02:56 PM · On: It's Just Dinner...Right?

It's interest to find that , I assume, Brian's nephew is gay. And that Brian missed Justin when he didn't show.  Plus we learn that Emmett cuts hair.  Not to mention that Brian isn't ready to admit he's gay too.

Author's Response:

Hi, there! As always, I'm grateful to you for reading and especially for commenting. :)

I thought Emmett with his styling flair would make a great hair stylist. Maybe I'll have to try and write another fic with him as that.;)  I hope you're continuing to enjoy the direction this story is going; I'll have Chapter 3 up tomorrow. ~Kim

Reviewer: Oliviatheolive (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2016 12:24 PM · On: Meet Mrs. Kinney

I can already tell that I'm going to fall madly in love with this story. It is amazing! I love this portrayal of Claire and I love semi straight Brian and confident gay Justin!! Yes!?'!!! I can't wait for what you concoct for the next chapter 

Author's Response:

Hi, Olivia!  First of all, thank you for being one of our writers on the site. We love having new authors on here, and I'm glad you are continuing to post stories.  I have so little spare time right now, it's hard for me to play catch up with my own reading, but hopefully I can do that soon.;P) 

Thank you for reading this one, and for the feedback!  And yes, while Justin is going to have some moments of angst coming up, he's going to be in the 'driver's seat' off and on here (wink, wink) until a certain hesitant older man figures it all out.;)  I do hope you enjoy the rest of the story!  Part Two is coming up shortly.:)  Thanks again.  ~Kim

P.S.  Love the lyrical author name, BTW. :) Too cute.

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2016 05:08 AM · On: Meet Mrs. Kinney

oh Kim - I needed a giggle tonight - and this definitely fit the bill

poor Brian - believing he is straight - whatever will he do as he find that this blond bundle of joy is everything he never knew he wanted - can't wait to see him figure out how it all works...*wink wink

and Mrs Kinney - what a hoot!

so much fun - thanks for that

Charle

Author's Response:

Hi, my friend!  Always delighted to see you reading a story of mine.:)  I'm so glad this one gave you a smile.  Yes, it's definitely a departure from Brian's norm; hopefully, though, I'm still going to keep him IC as much as possible. There's the rub, though; how do you do that when all his life he's been led to believe he's straight?  But he's about to find out how wrong he is. (tee, hee).  And don't worry; Justin will give him the 'help' he needs coming up. (wink, wink)

 

Thanks so much for reading, and especially for commenting, Charle! I appreciate so much. Ch. 2 will be posted shortly.  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Cemegh (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2016 08:32 PM · On: Meet Mrs. Kinney

This is a great first chpt Kim. I'm very excited to read the rest.

Can't wait until Justin "unstraightens" Brian. 

Also love Mrs Kinney. You certainly know how to write good dog 

Author's Response:

Hi, Kearney!  I'm delighted to see you reading this one.;)  Thank you for the feedback, also.  I'm glad that you are enjoying it so far. This is one finished; I see probably eight chapters by the time I divide it up.;)  I'll have Part 2 up tomorrow.  Thank you again for the encouragement and the support!  Glad that you like Mrs. Kinney, too! ~Kim

Reviewer: lauren49ers (Anonymous) · Date: January 06, 2016 05:29 PM · On: Meet Mrs. Kinney

I've enjoyed your writing and the storyline a lot. It's quite unusual to hve a straight Brian in a story and I can't wait to see his interactions with Justin.

Author's Response:

Hi, Lauren!  Well, let's just say that Brian thinks he's straight; he's soon going to find out that's not exactly the case. *g* 

I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far. I'll have the next part up tomorrow. Thank you for reading, and for the comments.  ~Kim