Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Commencement.
Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2017 11:04 AM · On: Chapter 1

Awwwww! I loved your version of the prom. It was ridiculously romantic. Nicely done!

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2015 04:41 PM · On: Chapter 1

Yes, that was fucking fabulous! I love it! Thank You so much!

Such a perfect ending to a perfect fic, just the way it should have been...

Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

Kathleen,

Thank you so much. I love getting reviews, especially from authors that I admire. 

I had fun writing this. I really wish it had gone this way.

~Lorie~

Reviewer: rulisteningbj (Anonymous) · Date: November 15, 2015 09:24 PM · On: Chapter 1

What a wonderful ending to the prom.  Wish it would have happened that way.  Great story for your first time.  Congrats.  Looking forward to more.

Dee Dee



Author's Response:

Dee Dee,

Thank you for reading and reviewing. I wish the Prom had gone this way too. 

I am enjoying writing, my second story is up and I'm working on a third.

~Lorie~

Reviewer: taurus (Anonymous) · Date: November 11, 2015 06:28 AM · On: Chapter 1

Very ncely done.



Author's Response: Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it. ~Lorie~

Reviewer: BritianLover88 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2015 02:15 AM · On: Chapter 1

I adore this it's so sweet and hot, and so them. Love it :)



Author's Response: Thank you for the sweet review. Love the boys. Hugs, Lorie

Reviewer: Astrid (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2015 08:54 PM · On: Chapter 1

Really great story.



Author's Response: Thank you very much. Glad you enjoyed it. Hugs, Lorie

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2015 10:08 AM · On: Chapter 1

Much better outcome thank you d84;a039;

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and commenting. I'm glad you enjoyed it Hugs, Lorie

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: November 08, 2015 06:04 AM · On: Chapter 1

Sweet! Enjoyed it a lot.

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Lorie

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2015 12:46 AM · On: Chapter 1

Now this is the way things should have gone down.  Brian in a relationship - about time.



Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I really wish that Brian had acknowledged that they were in a relationship. Hugs, Lorie

Reviewer: mamaduck (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2015 12:46 AM · On: Chapter 1

What a great story!  For your first story you should be very proud.

Keep it up and think of another great story.

 

Sandy (Cheerleader of the LLLC)



Author's Response: Sandy, Maybe we will get you to write a story too. You are a great cheerleader, thanks for your review. Hugs, Lorie

Reviewer: femmegirl49 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2015 12:39 AM · On: Chapter 1

"I kneel, still wearing my tux...this must be love..."  I was killing myself laughing when I read that because, yeah.  That would be how our Brian would know.  I love this story and I wish this IS how the prom went.  So glad you wrote this.  I really enjoyed it!!!



Author's Response: Terri, Thank you for the great review. I wish they had done this in the show. Brian showed his love at the Prom and then blamed himself for what happened.

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2015 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 1

so proud of you - this is a wonderful first story - can't tell you how much I enjoyed reading it - and almost as much I enjoyed being there to share the excitement of your first time...lol

great job - keep writing - you've got so much talent!

Charle



Author's Response: Charle Thanks so much for the review and for being part of the LLLC. You girls are great and it is because of all of you that I wrote this story.

Reviewer: rainbow_roses (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2015 09:42 PM · On: Chapter 1

What a sweet, lovely story!  I truly enjoyed it!



Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Hugs, Lorie

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2015 09:28 PM · On: Chapter 1

So PROUD of you! Congrats on the beginning of your writing journey. I'm looking forward to seeing more from you!

This was HOT from the very beginning! And I ask you, who could possibly have a problem with SMUT? The first scene was sexy and smoldering while the second scene was sweet and satisfying. All the rest in between was completely gratifying and I found myself having "Emmett" moments...LOL

You've done a splendid job, Lorie! Happy Writing, Darling.

Hugs, 

~Chelle



Author's Response: Chelle, Thank you sooo much. You have been amazing, helping me sort out my thoughts, coming up with the perfect name for the story and doing an awesome banner. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Hugs, Lorie

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: November 07, 2015 09:12 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wonderful first effort, Lorie! I'm so proud of you for doing this! TAG



Author's Response: Tag, You girls were amazing and so supportive. Thank you so much. You made this possible. Hugs, Lorie

Reviewer: samcdee (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2015 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 1

Congrats on your maiden voyage of posting a story! I loved the romance of it!  Now it's time to start on the next one! :)



Author's Response: Shari, Thanks so much. All of you deserve credit for this. You are all very supportive. Never could have done it without you.

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