Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2015 11:59 PM · On: Better Than He Thinks…

Linsday and Melanie were probably meant for each other (or at least deserved each other), although the way they committed themselves to each other (communicated with one another/cheated on each other) leaves one in perpetual doubt. Melanie clearly felt threatened by Brian, but that was largely because Lindsay constantly stirred that pot. She told Brian to grow up in one breath and in the next wanted him to stay her Peter Pan. Yikes! Scary role models as parents.

As Justin notes, a bit ironic that the ones in couple's counseling judge Brian's fitness to be a parent. And he's the one who helps them financially too!

Great photos, especially the banner photo, LOL.



Author's Response: Wow! You really nailed Mel and Lindsay relationship and it's wasn't pretty. Scary role models is right! Yea those pics are perfect! Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: rainbow_roses (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2015 10:38 PM · On: Better Than He Thinks…

Loved it!  You captured that moment perfectly!  Justin tagged Mel and Lindsay so precisely!  Thanks for sharing :)

Hugs, Aislin

 



Author's Response: It's such a shame they had to reinforce Brian's insecurities, manipulating him in the process... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2015 09:27 PM · On: Better Than He Thinks…

Yeah that is exactly why the girls need to control Brian being keeping him insecure

Author's Response: I know, I hated how Lindsay would manipulate Brian using Gus to get what she wanted... Later Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2015 05:51 PM · On: Better Than He Thinks…

Liked this little story.  I think Lindsay always played on Mel's insecurituies to help her control Brian.  You always manage in capture so much in so few words!!!!!!  Bill



Author's Response: I so agree, what ever issues Mel had about Lindsay's feelings for Brian, was their problem to resolve. Because there's no way Brian was in love with Lindsay. Thanks,I guess it's years of practice writing drabbles. Plus they everyone already knowing the back story really helps fill in the unspoken details... Later Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2015 03:32 PM · On: Better Than He Thinks…

So what are you going to have Sunshine do to correct this?  You wrote exactly what was going on.



Author's Response: What he should do is try and gets his parental right restored, similarly to Michael's right with JR... That would only be fair, after all he is the biological father and Mel should apply for third party adoption... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

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