Reviewer: Sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: January 05, 2017 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 6
I think these are great. Brian's a bit sugary, but since it's only between them it's ok.
Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: I'm happy you think Brian is a bit sugary I still feel like I am not getting him right. I do love writing this this way it's easy to be sappy when it's between just the two of them. Thanks for your kind words I'm hoping to get a few chapters done this weekend :)
Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2016 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 5
They have only been apart for a short time e but everything is going along smoothly for Justin thanks to Brian and his own determination to make it in the Big Apple.
Author's Response: There will be some drama eventually. I don't want the letters to be sad all the time they are meant to build their love not test it. We will have to wait to see what happens with Justin getting his career started. I'm hoping to sort out Lindsay and her contacts very soon!! Thanks for reading and the review!!
Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2016 02:05 PM · On: Chapter 3
I like how Brian's letter updated him on the family. And he is respecting Justin's need for independence by offering his assistance instead of just acting on his own.
Author's Response: Of course Brian will keep him updated on everyone. He doesn't want Justin to worry over much. I had to write it that Brian is offering assistance and Justin is accepting it they have both grown so much in their relationship. I seem them as equals at this point in time. Thanks for the review!!
Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2016 01:59 PM · On: Chapter 1
Brian initiating intimacy through letter wrong? Will wonders never ceases...I am going to enjoy reading their thoughts.
Author's Response: Thank you that is exactly what I am going for when writing from Brian's POV. I just wish I could get into his head as easily as I do Justin's. I do hope you continue to enjoy!
Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2015 11:52 PM · On: Chapter 4
Thanks for the story/letters.
I thought Brian’s offer to pay for Justin’s supplies and
Justin’s acceptance made a lot of sense to me. Given the kind
of work that Brian does, Justin would be smart to let him and
Cynthia try to find him an agent. Reaching out to companies
to try to get their business is a large part of what Brian and
Cynthia do. We shall see.
Again, thank you for the story. It is unique and fun reading
it. It is a really good B/J story.
DavidR
Author's Response: Thank you!! Your kind words have really made my day. I have had your thoughts in mind regarding Brian and Cynthia. I thank you for reading and for saying it's a good story. Means so much to me :)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2015 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 4
I'm glad to see that Justin is not stuborn and insisting on paying for things himself. But it seems a bit sneaky that he wants Brian to keep an eye out for his mother and Daphne. Afterall it's a two way street and if Brian trys to keep something from Justin for his own good, he'll find out from him mom and Daphne. lol.
Author's Response: LOL it would be easy for Justin to be stubborn in this. But he's grown up enough to know when he needs help. His focus is getting back to Brian and any help to reach that goal is fine with him. Yes it is a two way street but that can be a good thing for Justin knowing they are all watching over each other! :)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2015 05:06 PM · On: Chapter 3
Love this look at Brian's mindset. He writes the things he cannot say. Telling Justin that he will back his dreams if he needs anything monatary. Best of all admitting that he misses Justin.
Author's Response: Thank you! I feel like Brian was a tiny bit easier to write this time. I hope with time it will be smooth for me like it is with Justin. It's easy for Brian to be soft with Justin no one else will ever see his words. So he feels safe :)
Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2015 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 4
I really like this concept. So much you can say in a letter - it's so private and personal. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you!! That is my exact reason for writing this this way!! I'm happy to know you like it as well :)
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2015 10:52 AM · On: Chapter 4
I am really enjoying this series but the chapters are too short lol
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you are enjoying this. I'm sorry the letters are short. I don't see Brian ever writing really wordy letters Justin will at some point. So I guess there is that to look forward to? :)
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2015 09:12 PM · On: Chapter 2
From watching the show and even now, I always felt like Lindsay wasn't being completely altruistic in shoving that critic review in the boys faces. It just seemed so harsh that not only was she instrumental in sending Justin running to New York, but she also took his son away in the process. I know that there are quite a few who believe that what happened at the end was fitting....I'm not one of them. I think the writers really dropped the ball here. There is no way in hell someone would make that big of a move without a plan. I can't wait to see where you take this ;)
Author's Response: All I can say to you is I am not a Lindsay fan. At all. But I am trying to use this series of mine to get over my anger with the finale. Writing from Justin's POV I'm fairly sure he went to NYC trusting Linds and her "connections". I can't say much more as I'm still figuring out my plot but I will say as much as it pains me this most likely will not be Anti-Michael or Anti-Lindsay. That has to wait for another story lol I do truly see where you are coming from and I appreciate your thoughts. I'll try to keep them in mind because they are really true about it all. Thank you!! :)
Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2015 11:35 AM · On: Chapter 1
oh - I'm intrigued - this will be quite a challenge for you - but I love the tone of Brian's letter already - and have a feeling that this will allow him to say things he could never do say face to face - don't worry about rough...its still Brian! lol This is about as gushy as he gets...at least until he finds himself able to reveal in distance what he never could if he had to look in Justin's eyes as he did
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm still not at all satisfied with Brian's voice but I do hope I will get better at writing him as this goes along. I did set myself a challenge but I really wanted to follow up n Daylight and this was the only way it made sense to me. Plus at some point I can write a mushy letter from Brian. LOL I can't wait :)
Reviewer: rainbow83 (Anonymous) · Date: September 19, 2015 03:12 AM · On: Chapter 2
Justin left to make his way in the world of painting, and his assertiveness is helping to him to achive that. Hope Brian be his muse and "coming home" the excuse to get back as soon as possible
Author's Response: Of course Brian is his Muse though New York could become a Muse as well. Justin is in a rush to get home but we will see how long it takes :)
Reviewer: rainbow83 (Anonymous) · Date: September 19, 2015 03:08 AM · On: Chapter 1
Great that you have continued the Daylight saga. I love Brian being in love with his only sunshine. Because that's for him, besides the fact that Justin is blonde and his smile, he brought clear, bright light to Brian's dark world and you are keeping that in mind. Good jobe. Keep it up!
Author's Response: Thank you! I plan to keep it up and hopeflly get better at writing from Brian's POV :)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2015 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 2
Are these snail mail? Could you put up dates so we know how much time passes? Looking forward to the next two letters.
Author's Response: Brian's letters are sent overnight FedEx. Justin's are snail mail lol you know because he is struggling and all. I wanted to date them but I wasn't sure if there was ever a stated ending date in canon for the last episode. I'll rethink that though and maybe add a date to these. Very happy you are looking forward to more :)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2015 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 1
Putting feelings into words isn't easy for Brian. This is a great start.
Author's Response: Thank you! I had the hardest time writing this first chapter. I don't think Brian;s letters will ever be easy for me. But I'm gonna keep going :)
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