Midnight Whispers :: QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2015 11:31 PM · On: Father and Son…

Wow amazing thank you

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm so happy you enjoyed it... Later Sweetheart ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2015 11:12 PM · On: Father and Son…

Well put.

Author's Response: Thanks! 😊😊😊 Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2015 02:40 AM · On: Father and Son…

You mon chere have summed Mel up perfectly. She never did see the emotional toll that asking Brian to give up Gus was taking on him.

Great job :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I think she spent so much time being angry with Brian about anything and everything, that she never considered how hard it was for him to relinquish his parental rights... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: rainbow_roses (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2015 07:37 PM · On: Father and Son…

This was thoroughly enjoyable! Even on the sow, without Brian ever saying a word, his tenderness and facial expressions when he would hold Gus in his arms, his love for his son was undeniable! You captured Brian perfectly, my dear! (Of course you also hit the nail on the head for Melanie, too, LOL!) You also touched on an aspect regarding Mel that I hadn't thought about before. Very well written!!

Aislin

Author's Response: Thanks so much! It's so true, you could see all the love and emotions Brian had for Gus just by looking onto his eyes... God I miss Gale being on TV... I'm now running off to start reading "I am not my father." Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Blossomlegs (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2015 07:54 AM · On: Father and Son…

Beautifully written. Brian did love Gus the moment he held im and et eye on him, all could see, esp. Justin.

Thanks for sharing!

JoAnn

Author's Response: Yes I think the others saw it, but Melanie didn't want to accept it. It would have ruined her need to always make him the bad guy... Later Sweetheart ~ Kathleen

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