Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For The Big Sleep
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2015 04:05 AM · On: Part Two ~ Clean Slate…

I'm beginning to see a pattern here.  How many times does Brian lose his memory before he tosses Mikey and keeps Justin?



Author's Response: Yes, a pattern is developing and thankfully Brian and Justin's relationship will grow stronger... Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Astrid (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2015 02:32 PM · On: Part Two ~ Clean Slate…

Oh nooo, and I was already so happy for them! What a cliffhanger. Otherwise I really loved the second chapter though, especially the new Brian. Not that I don't like his usual attituded - I love it - but still, I also love seeing a happy Justin who has more open partner.



Author's Response: I know, I did it again... Have no fear the new Brian is still with us, only he's even more new and improved... Yes a happy Justin makes for a happy Brian.. Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2015 12:39 PM · On: Part Two ~ Clean Slate…

This is so full of angst - awesome! You have portrayed Mikey so in character, never was there someone more selfish, needy and traitorous towards his "best friend". As they saying goes " with friends like that who needs enemies". Eagerly awaiting next instalment.



Author's Response: Never was there someone more selfish, needy and traitorous towards his "best friend, " isn't that the truth! Last chapter just posted... I hope you enjoy it ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: XPO787 (Anonymous) · Date: August 15, 2015 10:54 AM · On: Part Two ~ Clean Slate…

Oh no! Not again. :( Will Brian change again? Hopefully not.



Author's Response: I know! How could I? Yes another change, but one is for the better... Later Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: rainbow83 (Anonymous) · Date: August 15, 2015 06:44 AM · On: Part Two ~ Clean Slate…

Oh, no, please, poor Brian. He has to be OK, he has just said "love you" to Justin. Why Michael is always getting in the way?? What an annoying tw*t 



Author's Response: I know poor Brian, especially now that he's admitted that he loves Justin... To bad Michael didn't end up with a head injury, he is so annoying... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2015 05:28 AM · On: Part Two ~ Clean Slate…

Well written as always but not sure if I like this story or not. It will depend on how poor Brian winds up after all his head injuries.  So much angst!  Wasn't going to read chapter 2 but I couldn't help myself, you had me hooked.



Author's Response: I know what you mean about 'not going to read this,' it's kind of like train wreck, and you can't look away... I hope you enjoy the ending, you know me I always end with our boys back together, head over heals in love... Later Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: gotb30 (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2015 12:34 AM · On: Part Two ~ Clean Slate…

So will the third fall bring back all his memories? This AU Brian is a bit of a klutz, Lol.



Author's Response: I like to think he's a victim of his circumstances... Memories are a funny thing, but you might be on to something... Later Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2015 10:50 PM · On: Part Two ~ Clean Slate…

Bit of role reversal in a very sweet way. Farewell once more to the chin-rat.

Now if dimwitted, jealous Michael hasn't caused too much damage, there will be a blending of the old and new Brians, so that a lovely future lies ahead for BJ.



Author's Response: Just like in the series, Ian's cheating leads to him losing Justin. Thankfully Brian's fall isn't as serious as it could have been and Justin's right there by his side, he's in it for the long haul... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2015 09:02 PM · On: Part Two ~ Clean Slate…

OHHHH NOOOOO!! If this is only 3 chapters  I hope this is the straw that brings all the memories back

But honestly, this is a great  amnesia fic and I encourage and urge you to do a little re write and....KEEP IT GOING!! This is like buying a chocolate bar and realizing there was only half a bar in the package.... Keep it going....pleeeeeeeeeeese??????



Author's Response: I don't know how I missed some of these comments, sorry... Yes it has now been confirmed that my fic needs an epilogue, I'll get started on that right away... Later Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: vlsope2@yahoo.com (Anonymous) · Date: August 14, 2015 08:19 PM · On: Part Two ~ Clean Slate…

Forgot to mention but that was a hell of a cliff hanger hope you update soon before all my finger nails are bitten off.



Author's Response: This fic does leave on the edge, but part three will be posted tomorrow. I hope you like the ending... Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: vlsope2@yahoo.com (Anonymous) · Date: August 14, 2015 08:15 PM · On: Part Two ~ Clean Slate…

As usual Mikey is an ass wipe, in his life he is so clueless. I love almost all anti-Mikey stories, he is so mentally unbalanced I don't understand why other characters pay any attentation to him. 



Author's Response: He likes to play like he's so innocent, but he's conniving, and manipulative, always taking advantage of others... Yep, no love loss here... He, he, he... Later Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2015 06:25 PM · On: Part Two ~ Clean Slate…

Oh no....not again I hope his memory isn't affected even more.

Author's Response: I know, how could I do that to Brian again... The brain is a funny thing, you never know what memories it might dredge up... But nothing to worry about this time, I'm a firm believer in happy endings... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: mamaduck (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2015 05:16 PM · On: Part Two ~ Clean Slate…

Can you do something EVIL to Michael, PLEASE???

Please let Brian be alright and Micheal not be a complete ass to Justin like he has been.

Sandy



Author's Response: Yes, Michael so deserves to get his ass kicked... Things aren't as bad as they seem, although Michael still continues to be a pain in the ass. Hang in there, Brian and Justin's future looks bright... Later Hon ~ Kathleen

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