Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For I Doo, Doo
Reviewer: Elly (Anonymous) · Date: October 04, 2015 07:26 PM · On: The Real Superhero Ring

I loved this chapter, so romantic!

I read it with a big smile, loved every word.

But I held my breath for the dogs, haha ... they stayed away! Greetings Elly xx



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, Elly! I'm happy that you enjoyed the vows.;)  The mahem is about to commence!  I will have the next part up very shortly; just trying to do some last-minute tweaking and formatting changes.  Thank you for reading, and especially for the comments, my friend. They are both very much appreciated. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2015 05:17 PM · On: The Real Superhero Ring

Hi, Kim! I finally caught up with another one of your wonderful stories and I’m so glad I did :) It’s a sheer pleasure to watch Brian and Justin’s life. I had such a pleasant time reading about them – for several hours I was immersed in their world, forgetting about ours. You made them incredibly vivid – they are talking, breathing, fighting, making up… they are so real that I truly feel like I’m a part of their life as well.

Xena is fantastic :) I knew from the start that Brian will allow Justin to have this dog, because even if he’s grumping and protesting, he still can’t deny him anything if Justin wants it strongly enough.

Gus is so sweet and caring… I wonder how he will go through teenage phase. Will he change for the worse? Right now it’s impossible to imagine it, he’s a little Sunshine. Every time he calls Justin ‘Papa’ my heart just freezes. It’s so touching, I wish in the show there was such a moment, too. Justin loves Gus so much.

Tricky still makes me laugh out loud with his antics :) Christ, I feel sorry for Brian, that man is a saint. He can be very patient when he knows something is important for his loves ones, but Xena and Tricky together?? Wow. I’m not sure I would be able to take it :)

‘Altar Boy’ – that’s hilarious!:) I’ve never heard it before. I always admired your ability to pick funny nicknames for every version of Brian and Justin you write. I remember them all.

The wedding was so very beautiful, as well as the vows – I even re-read this part and I smiled every time.

Thank you, Kim, for another wonderful story! Brian and Justin are so familiar and warm here, I can’t get enough of them. I look forward to the last chapter!  



Author's Response:

Hi, Katrin! I always love your thoughtful reviews. I'm sorry for the delay in responding. Things have been terribly busy for me the past few days. Thank you for your lovely words, my friend. I'm very happy that you are enjoying it so far.  And yes, father and daughter together - along with the neighbor's dog - is going to cause some mayhem, that's for sure.;)

I should have the next part up very soon - I'm doing some minor retweaking of it. Thanks again for your support and courtesy in leaving feedback, Katrin.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

 

Reviewer: Sunsuso65 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2015 09:52 PM · On: The Real Superhero Ring

Amazing chapter. 

The wedding was wonderful

i love this story.

kisses



Author's Response:

TYSM, Susana! I'm happy that you are enjoying this story. Kisses back to you! Can't wait to see you again next June! *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2015 02:56 PM · On: The Real Superhero Ring

Married at last......and even with the right ring and the dogs were reasonable well controlled - even if loud....LOL - poor Brian....

Sneaking off to the bathroom during their reception - it's soooooo Brian and Justin....LOL

Author's Response:

Hi, Monica! Thank you for continuing to read and review; I do appreciate that.;)  Yes, I thought I would at least let the boys get married without the dogs causing any further disaster...but that doesn't include the reception (hint, hint...!). I'll have the concluding part up very soon; just doing some minor revisions to it.  Thanks again for your support, Monica! *Hugs*~Kim

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: September 24, 2015 01:35 PM · On: The Real Superhero Ring

Sorry for all the spelling boo boos I really can spell-just tired and in a hurry. These doubles kill me. Ha!! lol

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: September 24, 2015 01:32 PM · On: The Real Superhero Ring

Sorry am sooo late reviewing. Too much going on here. Lee finally ensconced in his new place, going away party for BB, won't be back except for visits, (SAD!!!!) and last but not leasr had to read this wonderful chapter to listeners. Needless to say, not a dry eye in the room. It was the best chapter in the whole story so far. I have reas a long list of their wedding in many stories---but this was by far the very very veey best. The vows were sooooooo good say all the listeners. I had to read that part twice. See what you do to them. All in all quite a busy, happy and sad time for all of us. lol

Author's Response:

Hi, dear friend! I apologize for taking a while to answer your review. RL has been very difficult lately, and my free time is drastically reduced. But do not fear; I will never intentionally not respond to people who read and take the extra step to comment, especially with you.;)  I am so happy that you and the other listeners enjoyed this so much. I always get nervous writing wedding vows for the boys, so I'm glad that you and the others thought they were appropriate for them.

I will have the next/last part of this up soon. Doing some minor revisions to it. Oh, and I think I might have the udpate to "MHD" posted either today or tomorrow.  Tell Lee and everyone else I said my love and gratitude to them. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2015 11:30 AM · On: The Real Superhero Ring

Wonderfull romantic chapter Kim I loved it

Author's Response:

Thank you, Chris. I'm glad that you liked it so much. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2015 01:05 AM · On: The Real Superhero Ring

OK...I may have swooned myself a little bit on this one. that was wonderful! Everything about it was wonderful. Was a little concerned with the dogs there for a bitm bit whew...they behaved.

gus was adorable and I totally pictured JR dragging him along.

thanks for this one. I'm gushing a bit but I really loved it. I'm smiling right now and still swooning a little bit. :)

E



Author's Response:

Hi, Elaine! I'm so happy that you thought I did a good job on the chapter.  Anytime someone enjoyed what I wrote, that really makes me feel good, so thank you for that.  I will have the last part up very soon. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2015 12:49 PM · On: The Real Superhero Ring

Wonderfull romantic chapter Kim I loved it

Author's Response:

Thank you, Chris! I am so appreciative of all the times you have stopped to read and leave me feedback. We go back a long way!  Thank you for all the support you have given me. I will get the next part up very soon. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2015 11:11 AM · On: The Real Superhero Ring

I'm sick in bed and thinking about reading something to relax, so what better way to do that than to read your last wonderful chapters. Not sure how I missed the last one but that way I had a long read this morning :) And it was so beautiful! I'm happy the dogs didn't interrupt the ceremony; it would have been a shame not to have the privilege to be the witness to such wonderful vows between the men... But I suspect one last appearance of the dogs... I will have to wait for your next chapter to see if I'm right or not :) 



Author's Response:

Hello, my friend. I'm sorry to hear that you have not been feeling well. I hope by the time you read my response you will be feeling better.  But I'm glad that this chapter served as a good diversion for you.  And yes, I will admit that the trio of canines is not quite done yet wreaking havoc, but I have an inkling that everyone already suspects that.;)  Thank you for reading, and especially for the feedback!  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Diana (Anonymous) · Date: September 23, 2015 09:12 AM · On: The Real Superhero Ring

oh wow, i actually cried reading this chapter.

it was wonderful!

keep going ;)

Diana



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked it, Diana! I always get nervous whenever I have to write their vows; it's hard to make them realistic, so I'm relieved that you liked it. I will have the last part up very soon, and then it's back to my badly-neglected two WIPs. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Anonymous) · Date: September 23, 2015 05:28 AM · On: The Real Superhero Ring

Great update! You had me choked up a few times...  



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're still reading and enjoyed this chapter, Trish. Thank you for letting me know. I'll have the last part up very soon. Thanks for bearing with me. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2015 05:17 AM · On: The Real Superhero Ring

Thank you Kim....I am crying very happy tears. Their vows were beautiful and the ceremony was perfect.

Author's Response:

Thank you, Tamara. I'm glad you thought the vows were okay. I always get nervous wheneve I have to write vows for Brian, especially.  I will have the last part up soon (doing some slight retweaking of it and have to have time to reformat it to post here). Thank you for reading and for the comments. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2015 03:51 AM · On: The Real Superhero Ring

Beautiful chapter. When I got to the part about the rings, I cried my eyes out. That was so sweet and so Brian. Love this story.

Author's Response:

Thank you, Lorie! Wow, what lovely things to say. I'm delighted that you are enjoying this story so much, and I am glad that you liked the vows. I think that is one of the things I was disappointed with regarding the show. I would have loved to have seen what sort of vows B & J would have come up with. 

I'll have the last part up soon. My RL job, among other things, is slowing me down more than I would like but it will be finished, along with my two WIPs. Thanks again, Lorie. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: September 23, 2015 03:13 AM · On: The Real Superhero Ring

Loving this and wishing it never had to end



Author's Response:

So happy that you are enjoying this story, and want it to continue!  That is a big compliment to me.;)  Thank you for reading, and for all the support. There will be one more to conclude the story, and the fun is just beginning (well, at least for SOME of them).;)  Thank you again for the comments. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Larka (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2015 02:49 AM · On: The Real Superhero Ring

So wonderful and romantic!



Author's Response:

Thank you, Larka! I'm very happy that you are still reading and enjoying this story!  I will have the final part up soon. Of course, we all know the dogs can't be angels forever (hint, hint). So while the wedding may have gone smoothly, something tells me the wind's about to change.;)  Thanks for reading, and especially for taking the time to leave me feedback. It is greatly appreciated. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2015 02:35 AM · On: The Real Superhero Ring

Loved the wedding.  I knew Brian would get his ring cleaned and wear it.  Really, really enjoying this story.  Bill



Author's Response:

You're very kind, Bill. Thank you. I'm sorry I've kind of been MIA lately. This new job is kicking my butt, among other things. But I'm glad you're still reading and enjoying the story. I guess we all knew Brian was a big softy at heart when it comes to Justin. Thanks for reading, and for the comments. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2015 01:14 AM · On: The Real Superhero Ring

Glad to have been of assistance.  You did a great job and the vows were beautiful.  Glad Brian got over his fear of saying I do with doo doo on his ring.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you thought the vows were appropriate. And don't worry; the dogs aren't done yet! That wouldn't be much fun.;)  Will have the last part up very soon. Thank you for reading, for the support, and for your suggestion. They are all greatly appreciated.  *Hugs* ~Kim

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