Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
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Reviewer: Bgriggs (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2019 11:46 PM · On: Cake...and Beefcake

Condoms...really. Is there no continuity between stories??  I mean really!



Author's Response:

Hello, Becky.  Thank you for trying this story and commenting. Umm...not quite sure how to respond to this.  I'm assuming at some point they were wearing condoms, and now they aren't, or vice versa?  If so, I'm sorry about the confusion.  My only excuse, I suppose, is that I not only write stories, but I also admin this site and our FB group page, as well as make banners and beta for other writers while working full-time. What that does, unfortunately, is make me very slow in between updates, and sometimes I forget some details. I've never left any stories unfinished, though. If I lost track of their monogamous status and was inconsistent, I apologize. I hoped you liked some part of the story.  If you wish to be more specific, I'll try to fix the mistake. ~Kim

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2015 08:56 AM · On: Cake...and Beefcake

Hi, just wanted to point out two things.

You are repeating yourself in this chapter, last chapter Justin stated,

"Brian and I are getting married soon!  And Brian doesn't know this yet...but Gus is planning on bringing Tricky with him when he and his moms come for the wedding.  Brian thinks he's leaving him with a friend while they're here. But Gus was so upset over having to be separated from him that he called here in tears the other day when Brian was out of town on business, bawling his eyes out and telling me how much he would miss Tricky if he couldn't come, too."

And one fourth into this chapter you have him saying something similar,

"Actually, he thinks Tricky is staying back home with some of Mel and Lindsay's friends. What he doesn't know yet is that Gus had such a fit about leaving him at home that the girls relented and asked me if they could bring him...and I said yes."

Then this second thing is that you have Brian putting on a condom here when the first story in the series established they were doing it raw.

Otherwise, I am so thrilled that you are still posting new stories and I look forward to every new chapter!

 

Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2015 04:15 AM · On: Cake...and Beefcake

Testing using Bob acct.

1/10/15

 Sent at 9:15 PM CT

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 20, 2015 05:40 AM · On: Cake...and Beefcake

"Brian, I have to tell you something..."

I think Justin was rigtht in that Brian would also have given in to Gus and I do like that Justin used Emmett's tactic to tell Brian.

Good chapter!

S:)



Author's Response:

LOL!  I do, too.  Not sure if Emmett was right in suggesting it, but with Brian you can always distract him that way, especially with a certain, beautiful blond (Justin, not Tricky - ha!).  I'm happy that you are enjoying this story, and I am grateful that you took the time to comment. Thank you for choosing to read this one! I should hopefully have the next part up later this evening. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Mariana (Anonymous) · Date: August 19, 2015 06:14 AM · On: Cake...and Beefcake

Kim I hope you are not serious about stop writing. Every story of your is a real treat.

I love them all. Your ability to portray Brian and Justin love is amazing.

Every time I read one of your stories I want more.

This new story is hilarious. I can't stop laughing. I'm so happy Tricky is coming to the wedding. Xena is adorable and will be a real challenge for both of the boys.

Anyway please continue writing and I'll read every word always.

Hugs

Mariana



Author's Response:

Hi, Mariana! I hung onto all of your kind comments. Thank you for continuing to read my stories, and especially for the feedback, letting me know how much you enjoy them. I think in the end that is all that ANY writer is looking for when they write. I know that some do it simply for the love of writing. And while I DO enjoy writing about B and J still - and have a lot more ideas in my head - it helps me more than people probably know, simply just to be told that others enjoy my efforts, so you taking the time to let me know that means the world to me.   I'm going to do my best - I am working 12-hr days sometimes, and have a lot of other things going on in RL, so it takes me a while to update, but I WILL finish my two other stories as soon as I can.  I won't, however, rush them simply to get them done; I think that does a disservice to those readers who have been following them so faithfully.  The only thing I can promise is that I will never leave one unfinished, and I will update just as fast as I humanly can.  I'm working on the next part of "MHD" now, so hopefully that will be up soon.;)  What I do after that, I wil have to think about.  Maybe by then, things won't be so crazy, and with at least one of the two WIPs done, I will have more time to write.

 

As for this story, yes, the arrival of Tricky will definitely add to the mix of chaos here. He has, shall we say, been missing his 'idol' in the extreme, so whether he's mellowed or not, seeing him will no doubt set off the excitement again, and maybe not in a good way for Brian.  But that's the fun, isn't it? And now he has a cohort in crime, thanks to Justin's decision to add Xena to their household.  She just may outdo her dad in the stunts department, too; only time will tell that.;)

 

I hope to get Ch. 4 up before I go to work today. I do hope you continue to enjoy it! Thanks again for the support, Mariana; it is deeply appreciated.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2015 10:14 PM · On: Cake...and Beefcake

Justin is so lucky Brian didn't call off the wedding.  Now that would have been a plot twist!  Waiting so long to tell him when they promised no more secrets is a nono.  However, Brian wouldn't have been able to refuse Gus and he realizes that.  Do they have doggy day care in Pittsburgh?  With two dogs in the house, something is going to have to give.  Maybe a bad guy will show up trying to mess up the wedding and it's Tricky and Zena to the rescue?



Author's Response:

Hi, there! I'm so happy to see you reviewing; you are always so great about reading and reviewing.) I'm so happy that you are enjoying this story!  As for Tricky and Xena becoming super heroes...hmmm...they may be too busy creating havoc, but only time will tell.;)

Thank you as always for reading and reviewing; I am most appreciative. Hoping to get the next part up tonight; Hurricane Tricky's about to arrive!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: August 18, 2015 06:34 PM · On: Cake...and Beefcake

This is going to be exciting to see "the wooly mammoth" and off spring together-who knows he may just be nice and father her. Ha! I am afraid the wedding is going to havve t's ups and downs-can just see it now-both of them running down the aisle and interrupting all the goings-on sitter, my foot, something is going to happen--the listeners have bets on what??? so funny. will let you know how this plays out-depending on how you play it out. lol

Author's Response:

Hi, lindc! Yes, I don't think Tricky is going to be a good influence on his daughter, but then what would be the fun in that? Ha!  The chaos will be starting in the next chapter, although I think Xena is a troublemaker in a different way than Tricky. But who knows what may change after the daughter has a chance to see her famous father in action? 

And you don't think the sitter will be effective?  LOL!  Well, you may just be right about that.;)  I thiink it's great that you're placing bets on what's going to happen.  Let me know if anyone figures it out!  Thanks as always for the support and encouragement, Lindc.  Tell all the peeps I said hello, and said my best.;)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 18, 2015 06:11 PM · On: Cake...and Beefcake

So good!  I am so impressed with Brian and his acceptance of whatever Justin and Gus desire.  His love for them is so strong.  It seems Justin bit off more than he could chew trying to train Xena.  I can't wait for the bedlam once Tricky arrives and meets up with his daughter.  Briton will never be the same, and Brian will go off the deep end.



Author's Response:

Hi, there! Thank you for choosing to read this story, and especially for taking the time to comment.:)  Yes, Brian is definitely a man in love with his partner AND his son.;)  I always loved how tender he seemed with Gus on the show, and I try to carry that over in my stories whenever Gus is involved.  I'm so delighted that you are enjoying it.

 

And yes, "Hurricane Tricky" is about to arrive, and things will definitely ramp up in the crazy department!  I'm hoping to get Ch. 4 posted tonight; if not then, tomorrow.  So glad you are enjoying this story! Thanks again for taking the time to leave feedback. *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2015 08:01 PM · On: Cake...and Beefcake

I'm completely sympathetic to Brian's situation! (My cat sounds like he's as much of a problem as Xena is) Sounds like this new pup is going to be a challenge for quite some time!! 

AS for Tricky making another appearance. Glad I get to just read about it and not experience it!! LOL! You know it's going to  be hilarious! (Of course, as Brian said, we all know he'd give into Gus as well....) His level of patice is definitely going to be seted! Looking forward to the wedding! sounds like it's going to be..........memorable to say the least!

Thanks. terrific update to a great fic. Love this seies!!

Cheers,

Elaine



Author's Response:

Hi, Elaine - you're so kind to read and especially review. Thank you for your support, and for the feedback. And you are right; two versions of Tricky will just make for more mayhem, and in this case I think Xena just might surpass her father in the mischief department.;)  I should have Ch. 4 up by tomorrow; I hope you continue to enjoy it. Thanks again for taking the trouble to leave a comment; it is much appreciated. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Elly (Anonymous) · Date: August 17, 2015 03:19 PM · On: Cake...and Beefcake

Love this chapter, can't wait for Gus and Tricky arrival, silence for the storm, poor Brian! And Emmet, I love him!



Author's Response:

Hi, Elly!  You are right; Hurricane Tricky will be blowing in in the next chapter.  And he hasn't really changed too much; if he was too obedient, there wouldn't be any fun in that!:P 

I should have Ch. 4 up hopefully tomorrow. Thanks for all the support, Elly; I appreciate that so much. *Hugs* ~Kim

 

 

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2015 01:37 PM · On: Cake...and Beefcake

I love this chapter. Love the humor, the characterization, the relationship the y share. I love everything. Thank you and eager for the next one as always :)



Author's Response:

Hi, dear friend - so happy that you are reading this story and enjoying it.  I appeciate that so much.  I will have Ch. 4 up hopefully tomorrow.  Thank you for all the support. *Hugs*~Kim

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2015 09:19 AM · On: Cake...and Beefcake

Well, that was fun. I'm still laughing. Xena and Tricky together - hmmmm - going to be fun....NOT. Good idea getting a dog sitter. Brian so loves Justin. Oh, and I want some raspberry-chocolate cheesecake - although a virtual cake is the only one that will fit into my diet........

Author's Response:

Hi, Monica! Thank you for reading this latest chapter, and especially for the feedback! You know how much I appreciate that;)  Yes, the mayhem is about to ensue; Tricky and Gus, along with the Munchers, will show up in the next part, with the appropriate chaos resulting.  But we wouldn' have it any other way, right? 

I'll try to hopefully get the next part up later today. It's written, but I still need to review it and adjust the formatting.;)  Thanks so much for your support, Monica! *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2015 09:33 PM · On: Cake...and Beefcake

Wonderful chapter.

Everyone should have someone that loves them the way Brian loves Justin.

I cried thinking about Justin tearing up when Brian yelled. Great writing.

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2015 07:47 PM · On: Cake...and Beefcake

Fun chapter.  We knew that Brian couldn't stay angry with Justin.  Can't wait for Tricky's arrival and the first meeting with his daughter.  Really enjoying this story.  Bill



Author's Response:

Hi, Bill! Well, you will get your wish in the next chapter...and then the mayhem will REALLY start to ensue. This is somewhat tame compared to what's coming - ha! Thanks so much for continuing to read, and for your feedback, my friend. Both are greatly appreciated. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2015 05:13 PM · On: Cake...and Beefcake

Love this chapter, can't wait till the next update. Hurry.

* hugs *



Author's Response:

Thank you, my friend!  Glad that you are enjoying it. I will try to post the next chapter tomorrow (hopefully). It's written, but it's more of a time factor and the need to format the paragraphs first and doublecheck for mistakes. Thank you for reading this one, and especially for the comments.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: gotb30 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2015 05:05 PM · On: Cake...and Beefcake

LOL!! Hopefully the dog sitter (maybe two!) will help keep the dog situation handled. There is also doggy daycare. Well, at least Brian has calmed down now! :D



Author's Response:

Hi, Lavender!  Well, I'm not sure that ANY dog sitter, competent or not, is a match for THESE two, but time will soon tell.;)  Justin, at least, knows how to soothe the savage beast (Brian, I mean - LOL!).

Thanks so much for continuing to read, and especially for the feedback. I am very grateful. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: samcdee (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2015 04:39 PM · On: Cake...and Beefcake

Cake and Beefcake!  Yum!  ;)  Another great chapter.  I love the Trickyverse.



Author's Response:

Hi, Shari!  Sometimes the chapter titles give me fits when trying to come up with an appropriate title for them, but I thought this would be fitting here.;)  I'm glad you enjoy the Tricky stories; speaking of which, he should finally be making his appearance in the next chapter. Thank you for choosing to read this story, and especially for taking the time to comment. That means a lot to me.  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Anonymous) · Date: August 16, 2015 04:23 PM · On: Cake...and Beefcake

Nice update, thanks!



Author's Response:

Thanks, Trish! Hope you continue to enjoy it.;)  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: August 16, 2015 03:14 PM · On: Cake...and Beefcake

Wow wedding cake and sex there is no way for that to be anything but a great chapter even with a puppy in the house.



Author's Response:

Ha! Sounds like a good combination to me, too!  I hope you continue to enjoy the story! Thank you reading this one, and for your comments. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2015 02:50 PM · On: Cake...and Beefcake

Lol Brian loves his boys so much he cannot stay annoyed for long!

Author's Response:

Hi, Chris! You are so right.;)  He's really a marshmallow inside that crusty surface.;)  Thank you for the comments, and for continuing to read this one; I hope you enjoy the rest. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2015 02:40 PM · On: Cake...and Beefcake

Lol I can't wait to see how our boys manage to keep the canine members of their family under control on the big day.

Author's Response:

Hi, my friend! Well, who said anything about keeping them under control?  That wouldn't be too fun for us - ha!  There's more mayhem about to start, especially with Tricky about to show up.  Look out, world!  Thanks as always for being so supportive of my stories, Tamara.  *Hugs*~Kim

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