Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For I Doo, Doo
Reviewer: Avampiregirl (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2015 03:54 PM · On: Her Name is What?!

Loved the chapter. Justin needs to just crate train her, if it's possible.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2015 09:38 PM · On: Her Name is What?!

Love the name of the new pup.  But I can see that Justin has his work cut out for him.  I've notice the more you ignore them the better behaved the dog is.  Maybe that would work?  How will Brian react when he finds out who all is coming to the wedding?

Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2015 12:13 AM · On: Her Name is What?!

OK Pep talk over: Thoughts on the story

Cute as always, an unusual idea adding yet another dog into the mix. Love that you called the dog Xena. (I have recently been getting re-aquainted with the show) Lovin the pics and the dog bed/couch. Never seen anything like that.

Looking forward to what happens when Tricky and Xena meet. Something tells me, Britin's going to get a whole lot louder.....

Reviewer: Prisca512 (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2015 08:20 PM · On: Her Name is What?!

I knew it would be too much to ask for that Justin's puppy be well behaved, it is Tricky's offspring after all!  But I have faith that Justin will be able to train Xena, oh, it will take a lot of time, patience and I'm sure blowjobs to calm Brian, but Justinis up to the task! I was just surprised at Brian's queen out over designer dog furniture!! I would think that would fit right in his style!  Thanks! 😋



Author's Response:

Hi, Melinda! Yeah, an obedient puppy just wouldn't do in this story - ha!  You may have a point about the designer furniture; I would think Brian would be much more comfortable with that than some cheesy model, but perhaps it was the opulence of the thing for a dog that got him all riled up.

I have a suspicion that things might get a little more crazy before they start to get better, but to me that's part of the fun.;) Thanks so much for continuing to read, and especially for the feedback, Melinda! I greatly appreciate that. *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2015 07:25 AM · On: Her Name is What?!

Hey Kim, just wanted to tell you friends introduce me to some of their friends and one was named "Lane" lol I just wanted you to now right off the back I didn't like him, nope not one bit. ;)

Author's Response:

LOL! Poor guy! And has no idea why you already dislike him - ha!  That's funny!  Thank you for reading that series; I enjoyed writing it, even though at times it was about quite serious subject matter. Thanks for letting me know.;)  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2015 06:02 AM · On: Her Name is What?!

Love the dog bed, it's gorgeous. Cute puppy, she matches the bed. I really hope that Justin can get this one trained so that Brian doesn't freak out about her.

I just love Emmett and his comments. Great chapter.

Author's Response:

Hi again, Lorie!  I like the name for the puppy; no 'spot' or 'cocoa' or normal name for THIS one. Glad you liked the bed, and enjoyed this chapter! I just posted Ch. 3. I hope you continue to enjoy it. Thank you, also for the feedback; it's most appreciated. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2015 05:56 AM · On: Her Name is What?!

Came across this story when I checked recent stories. Happy to see it is part of a series so got started on Tricky Universe - great stories, I love them, really enjoyable and can't wait to read more. Have read them all back to back and now that I am caught up will go and review them all. Keep up the good work -please:-)



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you've been enjoying all the Tricky stories! Thanks for letting me know. I love that big guy!  And I think Brian does, too, in his own way, but he DOES try his patience. He will be doing that again coming up, BTW. Thanks fo reading this story, and for the feedback. I am very grateful, and I hope you continue to enjoy it.  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: vlsope2@yahoo.com (Anonymous) · Date: August 14, 2015 08:05 PM · On: Her Name is What?!

So happy you are doing another story with Tricky, the little Xena. I hope Tricky is better behaved, not perfect of course. If Brian had gone next door he wouldn't have the dog go the pound either, such a softy. I hope Brian remembers how Tricky saved Gus and Justin also. I loved the dog bed! Can't wait for more chapters.



Author's Response:

Hello, there!  I do think Tricky might be a little more calm, although his exuberance at seeing Brian will make him digress a little.;)  I tend to agree with you about Brian giving in if he found out the puppy's fate.;)  That IS some dog bed, isn't it? I think I would be happy with it myself!

I'm delighted that you are glad to read about Tricky again! Thank you so much for reading, and especially for the comments! That means a lot to me. *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 14, 2015 05:23 PM · On: Her Name is What?!

"My, what bad taste you have." 

LOL, I love that entire exchange between Brian and Emmett.

It looks like Xena is going to be more of a handful than Cujo. I can't wait to see Xena at the wedding.

I'm glad you wrote more in this universe.

:)



Author's Response:

Hi, there!  I couldn't help putting a little banter in there between Brian and Emmett; I enjoy writing about them. We all know they're actually friends, despite the insults.;)  As for Xena, well, let's just say that the apple doesn't fall from the tree - ha!

Thank you so much for reading and especially reviewing; I am very grateful.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Anonymous) · Date: August 14, 2015 02:58 AM · On: Her Name is What?!

Ah, the challenges of puppyhood... I remember them well! I had a Lab/mix myself many years ago, and as much of handful as she was as a puppy, she was aboslutely one of the sweetest dogs I ever knew. I think Justin, and Brian will see that in Xena... eventually. 

Nice update...  looking forward to Tricky's arrival, probably just as much as Justin is dreading it, LOL!



Author's Response:

Hi, Trish! I couldn't agree with you more about labs; they remain puppies for a long time, but they are such sweet and loving dogs.  And yes, the arrival of father being reunited with his daughter could spell mayhem.;)

Happy that you're enjoying this story, Trish! Thanks for reading, and for your comments.  BTW, guess you noticed that Randy's in a play at P-town on 9/27. I think that's the same day as Justin Sayre's Meeting Tribute to Whitney Houston at Joe's Pub. Was hoping Randy would be participating, but looks like it's not going to happen. Darn!

Thanks again, Trish. Will try to get Ch. 3 up tomorrow night. *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: August 14, 2015 02:54 AM · On: Her Name is What?!

Sorry, guess I am more tired than I thiought. Forgot to say cute pictures and really nice doggie bed. lol

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: August 14, 2015 02:51 AM · On: Her Name is What?!

Cute, cute. cute chapter. The listeners are eating this one up. Worked a doublen so they got both chapters. This Xena is going to be a force to reckon with. This wedding is going to be fun I expect. Things will not go as planned. Can't wait to see what happens. The listeners love th Tricky stories as do we all.

Author's Response:

Hi, lindc! I'm thrilled that your peeps are enjoying this one. You know how much I enjoy tormenting Brian with Tricky; now he has TWO of them, with a little bit of Justin's frustration thrown in.  Xena will definitely impact the wedding.;)  And fun, yes; but maybe not for Brian - ha!

Thank you as always for your kindness and support.  Lee left me a very sweet note; he is such a nice man.  I feel very honored that you have read my stories for so long, and still continue to enjoy them. I'll try to get Ch. 3 up tomorrow - had to work 12 hrs today. Ugh!  Sending my love your way to you, Lee, and the peeps. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: samcdee (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2015 01:05 AM · On: Her Name is What?!

Justin definitely has a big challenge ahead of him with little Xena.

 



Author's Response:

Hi,Shari!  Thank you for continuing to read this story, and for your comments. I appreciate your support and thoughtfulness in leaving me your thoughts.

And yes, Xena may well turn out to be as incorrigible as Tricky. She will definitely be impacting the wedding in a way they will never anticipate. 

Thanks for reading!  Hope you continue to enjoy it. *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2015 09:38 PM · On: Her Name is What?!

Ah...so this is one of those occasions where Brian might have actually been right. Justin definitely has his work cut out for him with little Xena, let's hope that she'll be more subdued before the wedding lol.

Author's Response:

Hi, Tamara - yeah, I think Justin is more optimistic here than he should be. Just like with Tricky, Xena means well, but is a very overeager puppy and quite curious; that curiosity may well get her into a sticky situation that will impact the wedding, and not in a good way.;)

Thank you for reading this second chapter, my friend, and for the comments! I'm very grateful. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Elly (Anonymous) · Date: August 13, 2015 08:44 PM · On: Her Name is What?!

Last few days I read all your Tricky stories, I really enjoyed. So touchingly how Tricky and Gus stay with Justin and Brian on Britin.

"I Doo, Doo" again a beautiful beginning of a new story, I'm so excited how it will deal with little puppy Xena and Tricky together, looking forward to a new chapter.

Kim, can't wait to start reading your two other stories, when you finish them. Greetings Elly. xx



Author's Response:

Hi, Elly! So happy to hear from you; you're always so kind.;)  Thank you for reading this chapter, and for your comments. I'm glad that you have enjoyed all the Tricky stories. I do love writing about him and poor Brian.;) 

I should hopefully get Ch. 3 up tomorrow; had to work 12 hours today, and I'm pretty tired.  So happy that you're enjoying this, though, Elly! Thanks so much for your feedback. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2015 07:26 PM · On: Her Name is What?!

I have so many scenarios in my head right now! How this new addition is going to challenge Brian's patience. HAHHA Is going to be a hoot. Especially wiht the wedding soon approaching. I can't wait. As soon as Justin claims that neither will be near their wedding that...the "dum dum dum dum...DUM" tune went off in my head.

Xena is definitely going to be an interesting new member of the family.

 

 



Author's Response:

Hi, Elaine!  Well, I can tell you that Xena's about to do something that Tricky had never thought of, and it will NOT go over well with a certain brunet.;) But that's part of the fun (hee, hee)...  And you're right; Justin has NO idea...ha! Thanks so much for reading, and especially for the feedback! That really helps to keep me motivated. I'll try to get Ch. 3 up tomorrow. *Hugs ~Kim

Reviewer: Ro (Anonymous) · Date: August 13, 2015 02:14 PM · On: Her Name is What?!

boy Justin sure is going to have to pull out all the stops for this one. Between Gus bringing his dog and Xena getting bigger each day Justin sure is in a lot of trouble. I cannot wait to see it all played out!! Cannot wait to read more😄😄😄😄



Author's Response:

Hi, Ro! Thank you for reading this chapter, and for taking the time to leave your thoughts.;)  Yeah, I think between Tricky's return, and his rambunctious offspring, both Justin AND Brian will certainly be in for a challenge. So happy you're enjoying it! I'll try to get Ch. 3 up tomorrow. Had to work 12 hours today (ugh), so depends upon whether I can get the spacing/formatting done when I get home tomorrow. But will do my best.  More mayhem to follow! *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2015 11:35 AM · On: Her Name is What?!

Oh dear I can see tears on the horizon! Tricky and Zena do not make for a peaceful time for anyone let alone Brian!

Author's Response:

Hi, Chris!  Yes, you know that anytime Tricky (and now his offspring) is involved, things can get both crazy and bittersweet. I see both in this one coming up.  Thank you as always for all your encouragement, my friend. I will have the 3rd part up hopefully tomorrow (crazy work schedule notwithstanding!).  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 13, 2015 11:18 AM · On: Her Name is What?!

Welcome back Tricky, and nice to meet you Xena!

Glad to find this story, and I'm sure the next parts are going to be a lot of fun :)

Thanks for writing, I'm looking forward to more!



Author's Response:

Thank you for choosing to read this story, and especially for leaving feedback; I realize sometimes that can be difficult with those pesky security numbers you have to put it, so I really appreciate you doing that.;)  And yes, Brian might not find it 'fun,' but I think we're going to enjoy it - ha!

Thanks again for the support! I hope you continue to enjoy it.  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2015 10:07 AM · On: Her Name is What?!

** smiling widely **

I love the name. She sure is going to be a handful! I can't wait to see Brian reacting to her ha! If Justin is already losing patience, I think I'm going to enjoy this very much.

Can't wait for your next chapter! Eager to see her and Tricky together LOL



Author's Response:

Hello, dear friend!  Yes, I think Xena + Tricky = potential disaster! But that's half the fun, isn't it?:P 

And you know Brian - he's always all bluster and protestation, but somehow he still manages to be suckered into liking the pooches, however reluctantly. And he can never say no to either one of his boys.;)  So glad you're enjoying this.  Will have the next part up probably tomorrow. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2015 07:23 AM · On: Her Name is What?!

You have me smiling very early in the morning. Funny story to wack up with. Love the name Xena.

* hugs *



Author's Response:

Thank you, my friend! I think I needed to write something less angsty than what I've been working on, so I'm glad you're enjoying it.;)  Glad you like our little family addition's name, too.;)  I'll have the next part up soon. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: August 13, 2015 06:59 AM · On: Her Name is What?!

as the owner of a large golden retriever all I can say is look out puppydoom for retrievers lasts about 6 years and they only listen when they want to. But you love them for all their lumbering sweetness. Mine will be 9 soon he still has moments where that puppy comes out and I love every single moment of it. I suggest you find some way for Brian to learn how much Labs of any sort drool it's like a teething baby to the extreme. I actually loved puppy teeth I know most don't and I still have some of this dogs teeth. I forgot to grab a few when my first dog was losing his. Crate training might make it so Justin actually gets to marry just a suggestion



Author's Response:

Hi, there! Thank you for continuing to read, and for your comments.;)  I've had two black lab mix dogs before, and I just love them.  They have such sweet dispositions, don't they? And yes, their perpetual 'puppiness' is one of the things I love about them. My last one LOVED anything with water; didn't matter what it was, even a stinky ditch. If there was water, it was like a magnet to her!  I do love labs and retrievers. Wonderful dogs.

Thank you, too, for all the suggestions! I pretty much have the story all written, but there's always room for some slight editing.;)  I hope you continue to enjoy this lighthearted fun.;)  Will have Ch. 3 up probably tomorrow sometime.  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2015 06:18 AM · On: Her Name is What?!

I love Xena. As a 13 year old at 5'7", with fully adult body and with classmates barely coming to my shoulder I always felt large and ugly even though I was the correct weight for my height. Being called Mox the Ox by those classmates didn't help either. When Xena first appeared on TV with her height, strong body and 'attitude' (not to mention beauty....) it was the first time I felt it was okay to be taller and stronger than everyone else (although the classmates eventually caught up - well some of them anyway) Such a great name to give the puppy....poor poor Brian. Justin definitely has his work cut out for him.......LOL

Author's Response:

Hi, Monica! Thanks for continuing to read this, and especially for leaving feedback for me! I'm glad you liked the name. I knew I didn't want some typical name, or one that was on the submissive side. Not for OUR pooch!  And yes, I suspect the 'fun' is just beginning. ;)  Poor Brian, indeed.  But it's going to be such fun to torment him again - ha!

I will have Ch. 3 up probably tomorrow evening - have to work late tonight. Thank you again for the support and the encouragement, Monica. I appreciate that so much. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2015 06:13 AM · On: Her Name is What?!

Love the name Xena lol. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thank you, Tanya! I'm glad you like our little princess warrior's name.;)  A princess for ANOTHER princess. :D  Thank you, also, for continuing to read, and for the feedback.  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2015 05:21 AM · On: Her Name is What?!

Great second chapter.  Love the puppies name and the reference to Trisky;s moo moo made me laugh.  Love this story, cam't wait for more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill



Author's Response:

You're too kind, Bill! Glad you like Xena's name.  I knew it had to be something unique. I was always a big fan of that show.;)  Loved all the characters in it.

I could just see Brian's face when he finds out the name - ha!  And glad you caught the reference to a previous story with the cow. ;)

Thank you for reading, and for the feedback, Bill.  And thanks for your ongoing support of the site, and your participation.  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: gotb30 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2015 05:04 AM · On: Her Name is What?!

Omg, little Xena will probably grow up to the size of a small horse, LOL! Poor Brian, he has no idea what he's in for. I hope they have a great dog trainer!! :D



Author's Response:

I don't think anyone will be able to adequately train THIS pooch! But time will tell.;) Thanks again choosing to read this story! Much appreciated. ~Kim

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