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Reviewer: tataniastorm (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2017 10:22 AM · On: Epilogue: Regrets...I've had a few...

I have just read the whole story line today. Ty you so much for this wonderful story. I laughed and I cried. Thank you for all the timeyou put into creating such wondervul works for us readers.

Reviewer: BritinForever (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2016 10:43 PM · On: Epilogue: Regrets...I've had a few...

I truly loved this whole saga.  Every story in the Tricky Universe.  I hope maybe you'll give us a chapter or two in the future.  I'd love to see what happens.  Thanks for sharing.


Author's Response:

Thank you, Jessica!  I have enjoyed writing these stories; especially the scenes where Tricky torments Brian.  He's just a big, lovable beast, but he still adores his master's father - ha!  I may very well try to write another one in the future, since a lot of readers have found them enjoyable.

Thank you for reading, and especially for taking the time to comment.  Many readers who read the older stories don't leave any feedback, so I truly appreciate you doing that.  :)  ~Kim

Reviewer: TTFBarnett (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2015 05:07 PM · On: Dogged Determination

I love your writing and you're one of my favourite, if not my favourite, QaF fanfic writers. I've been following your Tricky Universe fanfics since just after you wrote Framed for Christmas and I always love seeing that you've started a new story (not just in this series). I think your Brian and Justin are the most 'in character' versions I've read in the QaF fandom. 

Keep up the good work :)

Tori x

Author's Response:

Hi, Tori! I know this is almost a year late (hiding under desk now).  But somehow I overlooked this one, so I wanted to still respond to it.  Your kind words make me very happy to read.  I was thinking about you the other day, and how I wish I could see a new story from you.  I hope you will consider doing that sometime. And when and if you do, I would be glad to help you with a banner.  :)


So a VERY belated thank you for reading, and especially for your kind comments.  I don't know if you're still reading QAF fic or not, but I miss you on here!  Hope you are well.  ~Kim

Reviewer: Avampiregirl (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2015 06:28 PM · On: Epilogue: Regrets...I've had a few...

Great story! I can't wait for the next Tricky story.

Reviewer: Avampiregirl (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2015 01:48 AM · On: Calm Before the Storm

Great chapter!

Reviewer: Avampiregirl (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2015 03:54 PM · On: Her Name is What?!

Loved the chapter. Justin needs to just crate train her, if it's possible.

Reviewer: Avampiregirl (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2015 03:32 PM · On: Dogged Determination

Thanks for the info on how to leave reviews! Every time I would try the numbers never matched.

I have just finished the other Tricky stories and can't wait to start this one. Such fun cute tales!!

Author's Response:

Hi, Amanda! I'm glad that it helped. :)  Thank you for reading the Tricky series, and for the comments. I'm happy that you've enjoyed them. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: rulisteningbj (Anonymous) · Date: October 23, 2015 09:25 PM · On: Epilogue: Regrets...I've had a few...

Yay!  Anther blue ribbon for a wonderful Tricky story.  I truely love these wonderful stories of family, fun, mischief and love.

Dee Dee

Author's Response:

I'm happy that you enjoy the Tricky stories, Dee Dee! Not sure if I will revisit the rambunctious pooch, but who knows?  Perhaps one day.  I AM working on a new story behind the scenes that is much lighter and less angst-filled than my two current WIPs. I want to either get it done, though, or close to done before I start posting it, so I can devote more time to finishing my two WIPs. Thank you for reading, and for allways being so supportive. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: LEE (Anonymous) · Date: October 23, 2015 04:02 PM · On: Epilogue: Regrets...I've had a few...


Author's Response:

Hi, Sweetheart!  Don't ever apologize; I know how very busy you must be with your new home and all the work you're doing, so I am just honored that you continue to read and take the time to review. That means more to me than you will ever know.   I feel like you truly are a good friend, even though I have never had the privilege of meeting you. Who knows? Maybe one day.;) 

Please take care of yourself, and don't work too hard.  I am so proud of everything you have accomplished during the past few years, and how strong you have become.  You should be proud of your accomplishments, too.  I wish nothing but happiness for you, and I know that one day you will meet someone who will treat you like the very special person that you are.  Please keep in touch when you can, and know that I will always be thinking about you.  Sending love and hugs your way. ~Kim

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2015 01:06 PM · On: Epilogue: Regrets...I've had a few...

omg.  the wedding from HELL.  You know you've hit an all time low when your classy wedding devolves into cake wrestling with 'who let the dogs out' blaring in the background.

I wouldnt blame Brian one iota if he refused to allow Tricky to set one foot onto his property forever.  At the very least I'd demand the dog pass obedience school - and be prescribed Ritalin.

Lots of love, lots of sex, lots of making fun of Brian.  Oh, and waaaaay too much dog shit.

Thanks for the update.  I do hope you write another tory where Brian is back to his macho amazing self, totally in control of his household, and the dogs within it - just so he gets to remember what its like.

Author's Response:

Thanks for your feedback Michelle.  I know I tend to write a sweeter Brian than some others, but I AM working on a new story where he is more of Justin's pursuer, and they have not met yet, so I hope that will be more what you have in mind.:)  Thanks for reading.  ~Kim

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2015 09:16 AM · On: A Godzilla Hurricane Arrives

I guess, for the sake of this story, we are also deliberately forgetting Tricky was fixed?  I seem to remember a line about Brian being asphixiated, and Gus saying Tricky was already fixed.  LOL.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2015 08:56 AM · On: Cake...and Beefcake

Hi, just wanted to point out two things.

You are repeating yourself in this chapter, last chapter Justin stated,

"Brian and I are getting married soon!  And Brian doesn't know this yet...but Gus is planning on bringing Tricky with him when he and his moms come for the wedding.  Brian thinks he's leaving him with a friend while they're here. But Gus was so upset over having to be separated from him that he called here in tears the other day when Brian was out of town on business, bawling his eyes out and telling me how much he would miss Tricky if he couldn't come, too."

And one fourth into this chapter you have him saying something similar,

"Actually, he thinks Tricky is staying back home with some of Mel and Lindsay's friends. What he doesn't know yet is that Gus had such a fit about leaving him at home that the girls relented and asked me if they could bring him...and I said yes."

Then this second thing is that you have Brian putting on a condom here when the first story in the series established they were doing it raw.

Otherwise, I am so thrilled that you are still posting new stories and I look forward to every new chapter!


Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2015 09:18 AM · On: Epilogue: Regrets...I've had a few...

We have another home run from one of my favorite authors. As Elsa Rose would say, I've been holding a ribbon for this story - once completed. Good job Kimberly!

Author's Response:

Thank you for  the honor, Bob. It is appreciated.  ~Kim

Reviewer: Ersilia (Anonymous) · Date: October 18, 2015 01:26 AM · On: Epilogue: Regrets...I've had a few...

Predec2, you know I love your writing; but I'm one of those lazy readers who rarely spend their time commenting...sorry for that. Now I know you need a feedback from us. Here is mine: with your beautiful stories you bring me to a wonderland where everything is right, everything is perfect..all my dreams about Brian and Justin come true. Never say again you're thinking of stopping to write your stories, never. Your style, your imagination, your storylines are so perfect to me...please, be generous and go on on making my dreams come true.

Author's Response:

Hello, Ersilia! Wow, where do I begin to let you know how much I appreciate your comments?  To know that someone enjoys what I write is a supreme compliment to me. I cannot thank you enough for taking the time to let me know that. Thank you for reading my stories, and for your extremely kind words. Support such as yours truly helps me to stay motivated. I hope I can continue to write stories that you will enjoy. I love writing about these boys, and I have many ideas yet to write about. Thank you again for reading my stories, and for taking the time to let me know your thoughts. It means the world to me, especially during the doubtful times. *Hugs*  Kim

Reviewer: sharon (Anonymous) · Date: October 16, 2015 06:44 PM · On: Dogged Determination

loved this so much.... so sorry it had to end can not wait to see wot u write next

Author's Response:

Hi, Sharon!  How kind of you to read and especially take the time to comment! Thank you for both. I'm so happy that you enjoyed it! I'm going to concentrate on trying to wrap up my two WIPs soon, but I DO have a possible short story for Christmas that I will be working on behind the scenes. And, as usual, I have a ton of story ideas floating around in my head that I hope to get to eventually.:)

Thank you so much for reading this story, and for the support! They are both much appreciated. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2015 09:50 AM · On: Epilogue: Regrets...I've had a few...

Wonderful ending to a wonderful story! The humor, the feelings, the little dramatic moments – it has it all. I feel like your Brian and Justin from this universe are absolutely real, living somewhere out there, enjoying their lives together. Thank you for this amazing piece, Kim, and for the epilogue especially. I hope we’ll see more of Brian and Justin, Tricky and Xena and Gus in future!  

Author's Response:

Hi, Katrin! Thank you as always for reading, and for your thoughtful comments!  I may revisit them at some point if I can come up with another angle.  I'm delighted that you like our lovable, lumbering pooch! Thanks again for the support, my friend. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2015 09:45 AM · On: Three Chocolate Labs

The beginning of the chapter was so sweetly-tempting – Brian is a well known seducer. You always describe his technique so richly and precisely, I almost feel like I’m the one experiencing this bliss :D

The dance was perfect. Like Brian and Justin, I immediately thought of the prom dance, but this one was something special – like it symbolizes the new beginning for them. I hope they will remember this dance above that painful one.

--- Which clown threw up on our cake--- - oh my God. Oh my God, I’ll never stop laughing! That was *so* Brian, so in canon, so refreshing and realistic that I almost fell of my chair! I’ll never look at that cake the same now :)  Before Brian’s remark, though, I was astonished at how beautiful it looks. The rainbow cake! I’ve never even thought this might be possible. I still want to taste it!

The ending was amazing and hilarious. I think it’s a perfect story for anyone who’s in a bad mood – it’ll cheer them up 100%!     

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2015 03:10 PM · On: Epilogue: Regrets...I've had a few...

"He's Freddy Kruger, only with fur!"

I don't know how you come up with those clever, amusing sayings but please continue. This has to be my favorite Tricky story and even though it's not my decision, I think this is blue ribbon worthy.


Author's Response:

Thank you, Sandra, for reading, and especially for taking the time to leave feedback.  I'm happy to hear that this was your favorite Tricky story.;)  Perhaps one day I will revisit their world.  TY for the ribbon comment, too; that would be up to Bob, however.;)  It does help to know that readers appreciate my efforts, so I really appreciate the support. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2015 03:05 PM · On: Three Chocolate Labs

"I'll do it...because it makes you happy."

Awww... That's why I like this story. And loved the playful banter. Really, really loved the cake and chocolate fiasco.

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: October 14, 2015 04:21 AM · On: Epilogue: Regrets...I've had a few...

OMG What a funny screwed wedding. So funny and Brian had no regrets in the end. I have had chocolate pit on parts of my body and licked off. Quite a nice feeling. Whoops guess i have remembered a fun memory=don't mind me, anyway such a cute funny and nice ending story dogs and all. lol

Author's Response:

Thank you, Lindc. I'm glad you enjoyed it.  I promise I won't ask how you wound up with chocolate on YOUR body - ha! Thanks again. ~Kim

Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2015 06:45 PM · On: Epilogue: Regrets...I've had a few...

AS always, a terrific story. Am completely in love with the Tricky stories. I get such odd looks when I read them as it's usually either on a break at work, or curled up at home, adn having people wondering why I'm laughing out loud, quite often hysterically, when I'm reading. Oh if only they knew!! LOL!!

I can completely envision everything in this series and it's always hilarious seeing the interactions of Tricky and now Xeena in my head.

always happy to have another of your stories to save to my Kindle. I go back to them often to re-read again adn again...

thanks again for this one!! I honestly hust have to see the title of it and I start smiling. :)



Author's Response:

Hi, Elaine! I loved your comments! It makes me happy to know how much you enjoy the Tricky stories, and that this one made you laugh.  Thank you for the support, and for your kind words.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Elly (Anonymous) · Date: October 13, 2015 06:24 PM · On: Epilogue: Regrets...I've had a few...

Dear Kim, I enjoyed the last chapter and epilogue. Thank you so much for this wonderful and humorous story. Greetings El. xx

Author's Response:

Hi, Elly! Thank YOU for all the support. That means a lot to me. And thanks for taking the time to comment. *Hugs*~Kim

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2015 04:49 PM · On: Epilogue: Regrets...I've had a few...


Author's Response:

Thank you, Tamara! I'm very happy that you enjoyed it. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2015 05:47 AM · On: Epilogue: Regrets...I've had a few...

Very entertaining story, I will miss the updates but I guess you can't ask for much more than our boys happily married at long last:-D

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, and for the comments!  I'm happy that you enjoyed it. You never know; Tricky may make a reappearance at some point to check up on his daughter.;)  At least now I can devote more time to my two WIPs (and perhaps work behind the scenes on a holiday story as well). Thanks again for the support! *Hugs* ~Kim

P.S.  And thank you, also, for being selected as one of your favorite authors. I am very honored by that.

Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Anonymous) · Date: October 13, 2015 02:11 AM · On: Epilogue: Regrets...I've had a few...

And they lived happily ever after... barring anymore Tricky visits, LOL!

Sweet story!

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, and for the comments, Trish!  I'm glad you enjoyed it.  *Hugs* ~Kim

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