Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For I Doo, Doo
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2020 01:39 AM · On: Epilogue: Regrets...I've had a few...

I spent yesterday and today reading up on all of the Tricky stories...   Wow, he sure does keep things interesting.  It is never a dull moment with him around, that's for sure!!   LOL     



Author's Response:

Hi, Sarah! Yes, Tricky is quite the rebel rouser- ha! And now he has an accomplice. LOL. 

Thank you for reading his stories, and for taking the time to leave me your thoughts. I really appreciate that.  🙂 ~ Kim

Reviewer: Nanna Nat (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2020 05:41 AM · On: Dogged Determination

A really fun read! I

Reviewer: Bgriggs (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2019 11:46 PM · On: Cake...and Beefcake

Condoms...really. Is there no continuity between stories??  I mean really!



Author's Response:

Hello, Becky.  Thank you for trying this story and commenting. Umm...not quite sure how to respond to this.  I'm assuming at some point they were wearing condoms, and now they aren't, or vice versa?  If so, I'm sorry about the confusion.  My only excuse, I suppose, is that I not only write stories, but I also admin this site and our FB group page, as well as make banners and beta for other writers while working full-time. What that does, unfortunately, is make me very slow in between updates, and sometimes I forget some details. I've never left any stories unfinished, though. If I lost track of their monogamous status and was inconsistent, I apologize. I hoped you liked some part of the story.  If you wish to be more specific, I'll try to fix the mistake. ~Kim

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2019 05:27 AM · On: Epilogue: Regrets...I've had a few...

good one



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and for the comments, Angelika!  I appreciate you choosing this story to read. I hope you continue to enjoy other stories that I have written.  :)  ~Kim

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2019 03:40 AM · On: Giving In...or Giving Up

Is Justins and Gus fault about the ring

Reviewer: tataniastorm (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2017 10:22 AM · On: Epilogue: Regrets...I've had a few...

I have just read the whole story line today. Ty you so much for this wonderful story. I laughed and I cried. Thank you for all the timeyou put into creating such wondervul works for us readers.



Author's Response:

Hello, Tatiana!  How did I miss this review?  Ugh.  I'm so sorry for overlooking it.  I want to thank YOU for taking the time to read, but especially leave me feedback.  I am glad that you enjoyed it.  XOXO  ~Kim

Reviewer: BritinForever (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2016 10:43 PM · On: Epilogue: Regrets...I've had a few...

I truly loved this whole saga.  Every story in the Tricky Universe.  I hope maybe you'll give us a chapter or two in the future.  I'd love to see what happens.  Thanks for sharing.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you, Jessica!  I have enjoyed writing these stories; especially the scenes where Tricky torments Brian.  He's just a big, lovable beast, but he still adores his master's father - ha!  I may very well try to write another one in the future, since a lot of readers have found them enjoyable.

Thank you for reading, and especially for taking the time to comment.  Many readers who read the older stories don't leave any feedback, so I truly appreciate you doing that.  :)  ~Kim

Reviewer: TTFBarnett (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2015 05:07 PM · On: Dogged Determination

I love your writing and you're one of my favourite, if not my favourite, QaF fanfic writers. I've been following your Tricky Universe fanfics since just after you wrote Framed for Christmas and I always love seeing that you've started a new story (not just in this series). I think your Brian and Justin are the most 'in character' versions I've read in the QaF fandom. 

Keep up the good work :)

Tori x



Author's Response:

Hi, Tori! I know this is almost a year late (hiding under desk now).  But somehow I overlooked this one, so I wanted to still respond to it.  Your kind words make me very happy to read.  I was thinking about you the other day, and how I wish I could see a new story from you.  I hope you will consider doing that sometime. And when and if you do, I would be glad to help you with a banner.  :)

 

So a VERY belated thank you for reading, and especially for your kind comments.  I don't know if you're still reading QAF fic or not, but I miss you on here!  Hope you are well.  ~Kim

Reviewer: Avampiregirl (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2015 06:28 PM · On: Epilogue: Regrets...I've had a few...

Great story! I can't wait for the next Tricky story.

Reviewer: Avampiregirl (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2015 01:48 AM · On: Calm Before the Storm

Great chapter!

Reviewer: Avampiregirl (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2015 03:54 PM · On: Her Name is What?!

Loved the chapter. Justin needs to just crate train her, if it's possible.

Reviewer: Avampiregirl (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2015 03:32 PM · On: Dogged Determination

Thanks for the info on how to leave reviews! Every time I would try the numbers never matched.

I have just finished the other Tricky stories and can't wait to start this one. Such fun cute tales!!

Author's Response:

Hi, Amanda! I'm glad that it helped. :)  Thank you for reading the Tricky series, and for the comments. I'm happy that you've enjoyed them. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: rulisteningbj (Anonymous) · Date: October 23, 2015 09:25 PM · On: Epilogue: Regrets...I've had a few...

Yay!  Anther blue ribbon for a wonderful Tricky story.  I truely love these wonderful stories of family, fun, mischief and love.

Dee Dee



Author's Response:

I'm happy that you enjoy the Tricky stories, Dee Dee! Not sure if I will revisit the rambunctious pooch, but who knows?  Perhaps one day.  I AM working on a new story behind the scenes that is much lighter and less angst-filled than my two current WIPs. I want to either get it done, though, or close to done before I start posting it, so I can devote more time to finishing my two WIPs. Thank you for reading, and for allways being so supportive. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: LEE (Anonymous) · Date: October 23, 2015 04:02 PM · On: Epilogue: Regrets...I've had a few...

I AM SO SORRY I'M LATE IN REVIEWING. THIS STORY WAS DA BOMB. BRIAN AND DOGS AND WEDDING CATASTROPHIES WAS SO FUNNY. I HAVE BEEN SO BUSY HAVEN'T HAD MUCH FREE TIME AND WHEN I HAVD I SLEEP. BEEN WORKING DOUBLES FOR SOME EXTRA CASH SO I CAN MAKE DOUBLE PAYMENTS ON THE CONDO. WOULD LIKE TO GET IT PAID OFF SOONER RATHER THAN LATER. I HAVEN'T FORGOTTEN YOU, ALTHOUGH TO YOU IT MAY SEEM THAT WAY. STILL LOVE YOU.

Author's Response:

Hi, Sweetheart!  Don't ever apologize; I know how very busy you must be with your new home and all the work you're doing, so I am just honored that you continue to read and take the time to review. That means more to me than you will ever know.   I feel like you truly are a good friend, even though I have never had the privilege of meeting you. Who knows? Maybe one day.;) 

Please take care of yourself, and don't work too hard.  I am so proud of everything you have accomplished during the past few years, and how strong you have become.  You should be proud of your accomplishments, too.  I wish nothing but happiness for you, and I know that one day you will meet someone who will treat you like the very special person that you are.  Please keep in touch when you can, and know that I will always be thinking about you.  Sending love and hugs your way. ~Kim

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2015 01:06 PM · On: Epilogue: Regrets...I've had a few...

omg.  the wedding from HELL.  You know you've hit an all time low when your classy wedding devolves into cake wrestling with 'who let the dogs out' blaring in the background.

I wouldnt blame Brian one iota if he refused to allow Tricky to set one foot onto his property forever.  At the very least I'd demand the dog pass obedience school - and be prescribed Ritalin.

Lots of love, lots of sex, lots of making fun of Brian.  Oh, and waaaaay too much dog shit.

Thanks for the update.  I do hope you write another tory where Brian is back to his macho amazing self, totally in control of his household, and the dogs within it - just so he gets to remember what its like.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your feedback Michelle.  I know I tend to write a sweeter Brian than some others, but I AM working on a new story where he is more of Justin's pursuer, and they have not met yet, so I hope that will be more what you have in mind.:)  Thanks for reading.  ~Kim

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2015 09:16 AM · On: A Godzilla Hurricane Arrives

I guess, for the sake of this story, we are also deliberately forgetting Tricky was fixed?  I seem to remember a line about Brian being asphixiated, and Gus saying Tricky was already fixed.  LOL.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2015 08:56 AM · On: Cake...and Beefcake

Hi, just wanted to point out two things.

You are repeating yourself in this chapter, last chapter Justin stated,

"Brian and I are getting married soon!  And Brian doesn't know this yet...but Gus is planning on bringing Tricky with him when he and his moms come for the wedding.  Brian thinks he's leaving him with a friend while they're here. But Gus was so upset over having to be separated from him that he called here in tears the other day when Brian was out of town on business, bawling his eyes out and telling me how much he would miss Tricky if he couldn't come, too."

And one fourth into this chapter you have him saying something similar,

"Actually, he thinks Tricky is staying back home with some of Mel and Lindsay's friends. What he doesn't know yet is that Gus had such a fit about leaving him at home that the girls relented and asked me if they could bring him...and I said yes."

Then this second thing is that you have Brian putting on a condom here when the first story in the series established they were doing it raw.

Otherwise, I am so thrilled that you are still posting new stories and I look forward to every new chapter!

 

Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2015 09:18 AM · On: Epilogue: Regrets...I've had a few...

We have another home run from one of my favorite authors. As Elsa Rose would say, I've been holding a ribbon for this story - once completed. Good job Kimberly!



Author's Response:

Thank you for  the honor, Bob. It is appreciated.  ~Kim

Reviewer: Ersilia (Anonymous) · Date: October 18, 2015 01:26 AM · On: Epilogue: Regrets...I've had a few...

Predec2, you know I love your writing; but I'm one of those lazy readers who rarely spend their time commenting...sorry for that. Now I know you need a feedback from us. Here is mine: with your beautiful stories you bring me to a wonderland where everything is right, everything is perfect..all my dreams about Brian and Justin come true. Never say again you're thinking of stopping to write your stories, never. Your style, your imagination, your storylines are so perfect to me...please, be generous and go on on making my dreams come true.



Author's Response:

Hello, Ersilia! Wow, where do I begin to let you know how much I appreciate your comments?  To know that someone enjoys what I write is a supreme compliment to me. I cannot thank you enough for taking the time to let me know that. Thank you for reading my stories, and for your extremely kind words. Support such as yours truly helps me to stay motivated. I hope I can continue to write stories that you will enjoy. I love writing about these boys, and I have many ideas yet to write about. Thank you again for reading my stories, and for taking the time to let me know your thoughts. It means the world to me, especially during the doubtful times. *Hugs*  Kim

Reviewer: sharon (Anonymous) · Date: October 16, 2015 06:44 PM · On: Dogged Determination

loved this so much.... so sorry it had to end can not wait to see wot u write next



Author's Response:

Hi, Sharon!  How kind of you to read and especially take the time to comment! Thank you for both. I'm so happy that you enjoyed it! I'm going to concentrate on trying to wrap up my two WIPs soon, but I DO have a possible short story for Christmas that I will be working on behind the scenes. And, as usual, I have a ton of story ideas floating around in my head that I hope to get to eventually.:)

Thank you so much for reading this story, and for the support! They are both much appreciated. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2015 09:50 AM · On: Epilogue: Regrets...I've had a few...

Wonderful ending to a wonderful story! The humor, the feelings, the little dramatic moments – it has it all. I feel like your Brian and Justin from this universe are absolutely real, living somewhere out there, enjoying their lives together. Thank you for this amazing piece, Kim, and for the epilogue especially. I hope we’ll see more of Brian and Justin, Tricky and Xena and Gus in future!  



Author's Response:

Hi, Katrin! Thank you as always for reading, and for your thoughtful comments!  I may revisit them at some point if I can come up with another angle.  I'm delighted that you like our lovable, lumbering pooch! Thanks again for the support, my friend. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2015 09:45 AM · On: Three Chocolate Labs

The beginning of the chapter was so sweetly-tempting – Brian is a well known seducer. You always describe his technique so richly and precisely, I almost feel like I’m the one experiencing this bliss :D

The dance was perfect. Like Brian and Justin, I immediately thought of the prom dance, but this one was something special – like it symbolizes the new beginning for them. I hope they will remember this dance above that painful one.

--- Which clown threw up on our cake--- - oh my God. Oh my God, I’ll never stop laughing! That was *so* Brian, so in canon, so refreshing and realistic that I almost fell of my chair! I’ll never look at that cake the same now :)  Before Brian’s remark, though, I was astonished at how beautiful it looks. The rainbow cake! I’ve never even thought this might be possible. I still want to taste it!

The ending was amazing and hilarious. I think it’s a perfect story for anyone who’s in a bad mood – it’ll cheer them up 100%!     

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2015 03:10 PM · On: Epilogue: Regrets...I've had a few...

"He's Freddy Kruger, only with fur!"

I don't know how you come up with those clever, amusing sayings but please continue. This has to be my favorite Tricky story and even though it's not my decision, I think this is blue ribbon worthy.

S:)

Author's Response:

Thank you, Sandra, for reading, and especially for taking the time to leave feedback.  I'm happy to hear that this was your favorite Tricky story.;)  Perhaps one day I will revisit their world.  TY for the ribbon comment, too; that would be up to Bob, however.;)  It does help to know that readers appreciate my efforts, so I really appreciate the support. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2015 03:05 PM · On: Three Chocolate Labs

"I'll do it...because it makes you happy."

Awww... That's why I like this story. And loved the playful banter. Really, really loved the cake and chocolate fiasco.

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: October 14, 2015 04:21 AM · On: Epilogue: Regrets...I've had a few...

OMG What a funny screwed wedding. So funny and Brian had no regrets in the end. I have had chocolate pit on parts of my body and licked off. Quite a nice feeling. Whoops guess i have remembered a fun memory=don't mind me, anyway such a cute funny and nice ending story dogs and all. lol

Author's Response:

Thank you, Lindc. I'm glad you enjoyed it.  I promise I won't ask how you wound up with chocolate on YOUR body - ha! Thanks again. ~Kim

Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2015 06:45 PM · On: Epilogue: Regrets...I've had a few...

AS always, a terrific story. Am completely in love with the Tricky stories. I get such odd looks when I read them as it's usually either on a break at work, or curled up at home, adn having people wondering why I'm laughing out loud, quite often hysterically, when I'm reading. Oh if only they knew!! LOL!!

I can completely envision everything in this series and it's always hilarious seeing the interactions of Tricky and now Xeena in my head.

always happy to have another of your stories to save to my Kindle. I go back to them often to re-read again adn again...

thanks again for this one!! I honestly hust have to see the title of it and I start smiling. :)

Cheers, 

Elaine



Author's Response:

Hi, Elaine! I loved your comments! It makes me happy to know how much you enjoy the Tricky stories, and that this one made you laugh.  Thank you for the support, and for your kind words.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Elly (Anonymous) · Date: October 13, 2015 06:24 PM · On: Epilogue: Regrets...I've had a few...

Dear Kim, I enjoyed the last chapter and epilogue. Thank you so much for this wonderful and humorous story. Greetings El. xx



Author's Response:

Hi, Elly! Thank YOU for all the support. That means a lot to me. And thanks for taking the time to comment. *Hugs*~Kim

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2015 04:49 PM · On: Epilogue: Regrets...I've had a few...

BRAVO....BRAVO! ENCORE! ;)

Author's Response:

Thank you, Tamara! I'm very happy that you enjoyed it. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2015 05:47 AM · On: Epilogue: Regrets...I've had a few...

Very entertaining story, I will miss the updates but I guess you can't ask for much more than our boys happily married at long last:-D



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, and for the comments!  I'm happy that you enjoyed it. You never know; Tricky may make a reappearance at some point to check up on his daughter.;)  At least now I can devote more time to my two WIPs (and perhaps work behind the scenes on a holiday story as well). Thanks again for the support! *Hugs* ~Kim

P.S.  And thank you, also, for being selected as one of your favorite authors. I am very honored by that.

Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Anonymous) · Date: October 13, 2015 02:11 AM · On: Epilogue: Regrets...I've had a few...

And they lived happily ever after... barring anymore Tricky visits, LOL!

Sweet story!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, and for the comments, Trish!  I'm glad you enjoyed it.  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2015 02:11 AM · On: Epilogue: Regrets...I've had a few...

Wow, you really did end it with just one more chapter.  This was a really great story.  I love your Tricky Universe, hope we have more stories there in the future.  Bill



Author's Response:

Thank you, Bill! I appreciate the support.;)  Always mixed feelings when a story concludes, but now I can finally move back over to my two WIPs.;)  Hopefully, I'll get an inspiration regarding our rambunctious mutt down the road, and he can make a reappearance. Thanks again for reading, and for the feedback! *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: serendu (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2015 11:03 PM · On: Epilogue: Regrets...I've had a few...

Fab story sorry to see it end 



Author's Response:

Hello, Andrea!  I consider it a big compliment if you are sorry to see it end.;)  I do love that lovable, but mischevious mutt!  Thank you for reading, and for taking the time to leave feedback; I really appreciate that. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: B/J lover (Anonymous) · Date: October 12, 2015 08:30 PM · On: Epilogue: Regrets...I've had a few...

Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful and humorous story.
And I loved Brians confession at the end.
The things we do for love. :-)



Author's Response:

Thank YOU for reading, and for the support.  So happy you enjoyed it. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2015 08:26 PM · On: Epilogue: Regrets...I've had a few...

Love it :) As Justin said, it was one hell of a week, but it was definitely worth the ride ;P

Thank you for another great story!



Author's Response:

Hi, dear friend!  Yes, another Tricky tale has come to an end.  Not sure if he will make another visit, but you never know.:)  I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading, and for the support; it is deeply appreciated. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2015 07:25 PM · On: Epilogue: Regrets...I've had a few...

Brian has changed for the better.  He never did regrets anyways.  You had me worried, I could just see Brian falling through the glass shower and having to be rushed to the hospital.  I know it would have taken from the fun of this story, but perhaps they should have invested in some doggy tranquilizers?  Oh well, alls well that ends well.  How do you top this?



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend! Well, that would have definitely put a damper on things! I do think some tranquilizers could be necessary - ha!  Not sure if I will revisit the Tricky universe, but I have enjoyed writing about that lovable mutt.;)  Thank you for reading, and for the comments!  I truly appreciate  that. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2015 05:33 PM · On: Epilogue: Regrets...I've had a few...

Thanks Kim, for this lovely, with lot of humor, story. Sorry for not commenting everytime. But your story let me forget school (or rather the kids agggrr ) for a while. You got me smiling and laughing out loud a lot.

 * hugs *



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend! I'm happy that you enjoyed it, and it made you laugh.  I think when I write my new story and post it, it will be a lighter one as well. Need to move away from the angst for a while! Thanks for reading, and for your feedback; I really appreciate that. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: anym (Anonymous) · Date: October 12, 2015 05:08 PM · On: Epilogue: Regrets...I've had a few...

this is beautifull, love it



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, and for your comment! I am happy that you enjoyed it.  ~Kim

Reviewer: chandrika (Anonymous) · Date: October 12, 2015 03:20 PM · On: Epilogue: Regrets...I've had a few...

thank you for sharing this wonderful story

 



Author's Response:

Thank YOU for reading, and for taking the time to comment, Chandrika! I really appreciate that, and I'm glad that you enjoyed it.  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: starfire64 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2015 03:19 AM · On: Three Chocolate Labs

Hi Kim. OMG, this whole chapter gave me a bad case of the giggles, so funny ;  ) I think my favorite parts were the announcements Emmett and Deb made over the sound system and the dogs in the tent. Ha-  “Who let the dogs out”  I can just imagine the DJ putting that one on and everyone bursting into laughter. Looking forward to the epilogue  :  ) *Hugs* Janet

 



Author's Response:

Hi, Janet! So good to hear from you; I've been thinking about you and your mom. Will send you an email as soon as I can take a breath!  I'm happy that you enjoyed this chapter; I guess there's more than one way to create a chocolate lab - ha!  thank you for reading, and for your feedback, my friend. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2015 04:15 AM · On: Cake...and Beefcake

Testing using Bob acct.

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Reviewer: Alvin (Anonymous) · Date: October 11, 2015 04:13 AM · On: Dogged Determination

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Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2015 03:36 AM · On: Three Chocolate Labs

Testing email response action. Sent on 10/10 at 8:36 pm CT.

Reviewer: Rixa (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2015 12:54 AM · On: Three Chocolate Labs

It turns out that my review on chapter four where I predicted a Brady Bunch moment where the dogs would create havoc during the reception including knocking over the cake was right after all!
I must admit I hope that Brian's comment to Gus about always being the first son doesn't mean that he's thinking about him and Justin having children. I'm just not one of the those people who think Brian would ever want to be a full time father and I think adopting a dog would be as far as he would go in the parenting direction.

Author's Response:

Hi, Rixa! Yes, you were extremely accurate about that.;)  We all knew they wouldn't behave the entire time.;)  As for another child, not to worry. The story will end with the next chapter, and won't include that issue.

I'm glad you've been enjoying this 'verse. Thank you for reading, and especially for taking the time to comment. ~Kim

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2015 08:18 PM · On: Three Chocolate Labs

LOL The whole scene with the dogs was priceless! I also adore the boys's banter during all the chapter, and the cake...Wow! As colorful as Debbie, you got that right!

The boys's hapiness is a delight to read. Thank you for such a funny and lovely story, Kim. Eager to read the epilogue :)



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend - thank you for reading, and for taking the time to leave feedback; both are greatly appreciated.  Glad you enjoyed it, and I thought the cake was in line with what Emmett might have come up with. I would have loved to have seen how he staged their wedding on the show (if only we had had one!). Thanks again for the support.  ~Kim

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2015 06:20 PM · On: Three Chocolate Labs

Well we knew those dogs were going to escape eventually.  The chaos was great and I loved the chocolate lab remark from Gus.  Great chapter of this wonderful story!!!  Bill



Author's Response:

Thank you reading and for the comments, Bill. One more chapter to go, and then it's back to "Stallion."  Thanks for the support. ~Kim

Reviewer: mamaduck (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2015 03:09 PM · On: Three Chocolate Labs

Being owned by a black lab in my youth, I am rolling on the floor here.

I can see Brian's face as the cake is coming at him.  LOL!



Author's Response:

Hi, Sandra!  Yes, you have to love labs. Big, sweet, lovable lugs of a dog!  I adore them.:) Thank you for reading, and especially taking the time to comment! One more chapter to go.~Kim

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: October 10, 2015 02:50 PM · On: Three Chocolate Labs

What a great, funny chapter, laughed our butts off and would have loved to see that on the screen. Cake picture, fabulous. lol

Author's Response:

Thank you, Lindc. I'm glad you all enjoyed it. Thank you for reading, and for the feedback.  ~Kim

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2015 02:26 PM · On: Three Chocolate Labs

Great chapter! Tricky and crew sure made it memorable lol.

Btw....I think we got a double posting of the chapter my friend ;)

Author's Response:

Thanks, Tamara - I fixed it. Sometimes it's hard to tell when you post into that little text box that it's actually posted, so I must not have realized that. Thanks for pointing it out. Sigh...not sure how I felt about this chapter, TBH, and it appears from the lack of comments that perhaps others felt the same. I'm going to post the remaining epilogue in the next day or so, and then get back into my regular WIP posting again with Stallion. I'm itching to start a new story, but will hold off until I have it completely done, I think. I may post a one-shot here and there, though, for the holidays. Thank you for reading, Tamara, and for being so supportive. ~Kim

Reviewer: Prisca512 (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2015 06:08 AM · On: Three Chocolate Labs

My sides hurt from laughing!!!!!  But seriously, ever the romantic Brian insisting on their first dance before cutting the cake and choosing the perfect son for his Husband. I love to see Brian's softer side when it comes to Justin. 

Well done, my friend, I'll be chuckling over the image of Brian trying to save their cake for quite some time.  thanks for sharing!! :-)



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, and for the comments, Melinda. I appreciate that more than you know.  I'll have the epilogue up in the next day or so, and I CAN say that Tricky isn't quite done yet!  Thanks again. ~Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2015 05:52 AM · On: Three Chocolate Labs

I feel so bad for Emmett.  The cake was a masterpiece and all destroyed.  Tricky sure knows how to make a mess.  It took Ted and Carl to take him down and clean him up.  Let's hope the married couple manage to shower without the four legged contingent interrupting again.



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend - As always, I'm grateful for your reading, and for the feedback. Funny you should say that about Tricky, because he's not done quite yet! I will have the epilogue up shortly, and then it's back to Stallion. Thank you again for all the support you give me and so many other authors. Wish we could clone you! ~Kim

Reviewer: Elly (Anonymous) · Date: October 04, 2015 07:26 PM · On: The Real Superhero Ring

I loved this chapter, so romantic!

I read it with a big smile, loved every word.

But I held my breath for the dogs, haha ... they stayed away! Greetings Elly xx



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, Elly! I'm happy that you enjoyed the vows.;)  The mahem is about to commence!  I will have the next part up very shortly; just trying to do some last-minute tweaking and formatting changes.  Thank you for reading, and especially for the comments, my friend. They are both very much appreciated. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2015 07:10 AM · On: Without this Ring...I Thee Wed...

"You make my life...interesting..."

That was so romantic. I loved it.

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2015 07:01 AM · On: Giving In...or Giving Up

"You're just going to leave with that...that jewelry-eating homewrecker?"

Ha! That was my favorite line.

It was a shame that a small boy had to make Justin see the light. I loved the fight, though.

Author's Response:

Hi, Sandra!  So sorry for the delay in responding. RL and beta duties are kind of kicking my butt right now. :/  But I wanted you to know how much I appreciate your support and the comments. I will be posting the last part of this very soon. Just have to finish up some formatting and slight tweaking. Thank you for reading and for the feedback! *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2015 05:17 PM · On: The Real Superhero Ring

Hi, Kim! I finally caught up with another one of your wonderful stories and I’m so glad I did :) It’s a sheer pleasure to watch Brian and Justin’s life. I had such a pleasant time reading about them – for several hours I was immersed in their world, forgetting about ours. You made them incredibly vivid – they are talking, breathing, fighting, making up… they are so real that I truly feel like I’m a part of their life as well.

Xena is fantastic :) I knew from the start that Brian will allow Justin to have this dog, because even if he’s grumping and protesting, he still can’t deny him anything if Justin wants it strongly enough.

Gus is so sweet and caring… I wonder how he will go through teenage phase. Will he change for the worse? Right now it’s impossible to imagine it, he’s a little Sunshine. Every time he calls Justin ‘Papa’ my heart just freezes. It’s so touching, I wish in the show there was such a moment, too. Justin loves Gus so much.

Tricky still makes me laugh out loud with his antics :) Christ, I feel sorry for Brian, that man is a saint. He can be very patient when he knows something is important for his loves ones, but Xena and Tricky together?? Wow. I’m not sure I would be able to take it :)

‘Altar Boy’ – that’s hilarious!:) I’ve never heard it before. I always admired your ability to pick funny nicknames for every version of Brian and Justin you write. I remember them all.

The wedding was so very beautiful, as well as the vows – I even re-read this part and I smiled every time.

Thank you, Kim, for another wonderful story! Brian and Justin are so familiar and warm here, I can’t get enough of them. I look forward to the last chapter!  



Author's Response:

Hi, Katrin! I always love your thoughtful reviews. I'm sorry for the delay in responding. Things have been terribly busy for me the past few days. Thank you for your lovely words, my friend. I'm very happy that you are enjoying it so far.  And yes, father and daughter together - along with the neighbor's dog - is going to cause some mayhem, that's for sure.;)

I should have the next part up very soon - I'm doing some minor retweaking of it. Thanks again for your support and courtesy in leaving feedback, Katrin.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

 

Reviewer: Sunsuso65 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2015 09:52 PM · On: The Real Superhero Ring

Amazing chapter. 

The wedding was wonderful

i love this story.

kisses



Author's Response:

TYSM, Susana! I'm happy that you are enjoying this story. Kisses back to you! Can't wait to see you again next June! *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2015 02:56 PM · On: The Real Superhero Ring

Married at last......and even with the right ring and the dogs were reasonable well controlled - even if loud....LOL - poor Brian....

Sneaking off to the bathroom during their reception - it's soooooo Brian and Justin....LOL

Author's Response:

Hi, Monica! Thank you for continuing to read and review; I do appreciate that.;)  Yes, I thought I would at least let the boys get married without the dogs causing any further disaster...but that doesn't include the reception (hint, hint...!). I'll have the concluding part up very soon; just doing some minor revisions to it.  Thanks again for your support, Monica! *Hugs*~Kim

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: September 24, 2015 01:35 PM · On: The Real Superhero Ring

Sorry for all the spelling boo boos I really can spell-just tired and in a hurry. These doubles kill me. Ha!! lol

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: September 24, 2015 01:32 PM · On: The Real Superhero Ring

Sorry am sooo late reviewing. Too much going on here. Lee finally ensconced in his new place, going away party for BB, won't be back except for visits, (SAD!!!!) and last but not leasr had to read this wonderful chapter to listeners. Needless to say, not a dry eye in the room. It was the best chapter in the whole story so far. I have reas a long list of their wedding in many stories---but this was by far the very very veey best. The vows were sooooooo good say all the listeners. I had to read that part twice. See what you do to them. All in all quite a busy, happy and sad time for all of us. lol

Author's Response:

Hi, dear friend! I apologize for taking a while to answer your review. RL has been very difficult lately, and my free time is drastically reduced. But do not fear; I will never intentionally not respond to people who read and take the extra step to comment, especially with you.;)  I am so happy that you and the other listeners enjoyed this so much. I always get nervous writing wedding vows for the boys, so I'm glad that you and the others thought they were appropriate for them.

I will have the next/last part of this up soon. Doing some minor revisions to it. Oh, and I think I might have the udpate to "MHD" posted either today or tomorrow.  Tell Lee and everyone else I said my love and gratitude to them. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2015 11:30 AM · On: The Real Superhero Ring

Wonderfull romantic chapter Kim I loved it

Author's Response:

Thank you, Chris. I'm glad that you liked it so much. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2015 01:05 AM · On: The Real Superhero Ring

OK...I may have swooned myself a little bit on this one. that was wonderful! Everything about it was wonderful. Was a little concerned with the dogs there for a bitm bit whew...they behaved.

gus was adorable and I totally pictured JR dragging him along.

thanks for this one. I'm gushing a bit but I really loved it. I'm smiling right now and still swooning a little bit. :)

E



Author's Response:

Hi, Elaine! I'm so happy that you thought I did a good job on the chapter.  Anytime someone enjoyed what I wrote, that really makes me feel good, so thank you for that.  I will have the last part up very soon. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2015 12:49 PM · On: The Real Superhero Ring

Wonderfull romantic chapter Kim I loved it

Author's Response:

Thank you, Chris! I am so appreciative of all the times you have stopped to read and leave me feedback. We go back a long way!  Thank you for all the support you have given me. I will get the next part up very soon. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2015 11:11 AM · On: The Real Superhero Ring

I'm sick in bed and thinking about reading something to relax, so what better way to do that than to read your last wonderful chapters. Not sure how I missed the last one but that way I had a long read this morning :) And it was so beautiful! I'm happy the dogs didn't interrupt the ceremony; it would have been a shame not to have the privilege to be the witness to such wonderful vows between the men... But I suspect one last appearance of the dogs... I will have to wait for your next chapter to see if I'm right or not :) 



Author's Response:

Hello, my friend. I'm sorry to hear that you have not been feeling well. I hope by the time you read my response you will be feeling better.  But I'm glad that this chapter served as a good diversion for you.  And yes, I will admit that the trio of canines is not quite done yet wreaking havoc, but I have an inkling that everyone already suspects that.;)  Thank you for reading, and especially for the feedback!  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Diana (Anonymous) · Date: September 23, 2015 09:12 AM · On: The Real Superhero Ring

oh wow, i actually cried reading this chapter.

it was wonderful!

keep going ;)

Diana



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked it, Diana! I always get nervous whenever I have to write their vows; it's hard to make them realistic, so I'm relieved that you liked it. I will have the last part up very soon, and then it's back to my badly-neglected two WIPs. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Anonymous) · Date: September 23, 2015 05:28 AM · On: The Real Superhero Ring

Great update! You had me choked up a few times...  



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're still reading and enjoyed this chapter, Trish. Thank you for letting me know. I'll have the last part up very soon. Thanks for bearing with me. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2015 05:17 AM · On: The Real Superhero Ring

Thank you Kim....I am crying very happy tears. Their vows were beautiful and the ceremony was perfect.

Author's Response:

Thank you, Tamara. I'm glad you thought the vows were okay. I always get nervous wheneve I have to write vows for Brian, especially.  I will have the last part up soon (doing some slight retweaking of it and have to have time to reformat it to post here). Thank you for reading and for the comments. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2015 03:51 AM · On: The Real Superhero Ring

Beautiful chapter. When I got to the part about the rings, I cried my eyes out. That was so sweet and so Brian. Love this story.

Author's Response:

Thank you, Lorie! Wow, what lovely things to say. I'm delighted that you are enjoying this story so much, and I am glad that you liked the vows. I think that is one of the things I was disappointed with regarding the show. I would have loved to have seen what sort of vows B & J would have come up with. 

I'll have the last part up soon. My RL job, among other things, is slowing me down more than I would like but it will be finished, along with my two WIPs. Thanks again, Lorie. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: September 23, 2015 03:13 AM · On: The Real Superhero Ring

Loving this and wishing it never had to end



Author's Response:

So happy that you are enjoying this story, and want it to continue!  That is a big compliment to me.;)  Thank you for reading, and for all the support. There will be one more to conclude the story, and the fun is just beginning (well, at least for SOME of them).;)  Thank you again for the comments. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Larka (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2015 02:49 AM · On: The Real Superhero Ring

So wonderful and romantic!



Author's Response:

Thank you, Larka! I'm very happy that you are still reading and enjoying this story!  I will have the final part up soon. Of course, we all know the dogs can't be angels forever (hint, hint). So while the wedding may have gone smoothly, something tells me the wind's about to change.;)  Thanks for reading, and especially for taking the time to leave me feedback. It is greatly appreciated. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2015 02:35 AM · On: The Real Superhero Ring

Loved the wedding.  I knew Brian would get his ring cleaned and wear it.  Really, really enjoying this story.  Bill



Author's Response:

You're very kind, Bill. Thank you. I'm sorry I've kind of been MIA lately. This new job is kicking my butt, among other things. But I'm glad you're still reading and enjoying the story. I guess we all knew Brian was a big softy at heart when it comes to Justin. Thanks for reading, and for the comments. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2015 01:14 AM · On: The Real Superhero Ring

Glad to have been of assistance.  You did a great job and the vows were beautiful.  Glad Brian got over his fear of saying I do with doo doo on his ring.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you thought the vows were appropriate. And don't worry; the dogs aren't done yet! That wouldn't be much fun.;)  Will have the last part up very soon. Thank you for reading, for the support, and for your suggestion. They are all greatly appreciated.  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2015 08:24 AM · On: What Goes Up...Must Come Down

"Tell me you are NOT suggesting we...she...you mean...? Shit."

LOL!!!

I've heard of dogs swallowing a lot of strange things. I would think it's par for the course, but I couldn't believe Justin couldn't sympathize with Brian. But I also wouldn't throw away a 5000 ring.

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, and for the comments, Sandra! Always so good to hear from you, and I'm happy that you are enjoying the latest Tricky story.;p)  I just posted the next part; I hope you continue to enjoy it. Thank you as always for reading, and for all the support. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2015 06:47 AM · On: Calm Before the Storm

"I don't think that will be a problem...but it'll be a fucking turn on watching that ass trying to get away from me."

That was my favorite sentence. The sexual innuendos and banter were even more exceptional in this chapter. It was such a fun read.

:)

Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2015 06:08 PM · On: Thrice the Risk?

Finally able to read the last 2 chapters. the whole treasure hunt scenario was a riot! Was giggling through it all! Looking forward to seeinf what Brian has up his sleeve regarding the ring. Using Mikey's ring in subterfuge is my guess.

Almost at the actual wedding!1 Can't wait!! Curious if the dogs will behave. If they make it through the wedding without incident,  what about teh reception. Hey...it's Tricky and Xena we're talking about there. You knw it can't be entirely smooth sailing! LOL.

Wonderful story and looking forward to the next chapter and the actual wedding!

thanks Kim!

E



Author's Response:

Hi, Elaine! Please forgive me for the long pause before answering your review. Between everything going on in RL and the trip to Chicago, I am just now able to sit down and answer. I am happy that you are enjoying this story. While the dogs may seem to be behaving in this chapter, do not fear. You know that can't be permanent - ha!

I just posted the next-to-last part. I hope you continue to enjoy it! Thanks again for all the support. *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2015 07:51 AM · On: Thrice the Risk?

We're one step closer - must admit that I'm a little worried about what trouble your devious mind could have in store for the boys.....LOL Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Hi, Monica!  Who, me? Devious?:D  Let's just say it won't be your typical wedding or reception; there would be no fun in that.;)  And I don't think that Sadie's going to be a good influence on Tricky or their daughter.;)  I'll have the next part up shortly as soon as I can review it and get it reformatted. Been working insane hours lately, which is really affecting my free time - ugh. But it won't be long. Thank you again for the support. It is greatly appreciated. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: bctush (Anonymous) · Date: September 14, 2015 11:27 PM · On: Thrice the Risk?

loving this story, nothing funnier than Tricky and Xena throw in the little imp Gus and you have a great story and and constant trouble. Gus was so cute on the show and in this story you can invision how mini Brian gets himself in more trouble yet seems so innocent to his daddy, papa knows that father like son. I hope Brian abd Justin marry but you know something strange is around the corner. Hope we have many more chapters after the wedding there is so much trouble the trio can get into.



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend! Thank you for reading this story, and for your lovely comments; I appreciate that so much.;)  Yes, I could see Gus being a 'mini-me' of his father in a lot of ways, and I think the older he gets, the more like him he might become.;)  I CAN say the boys will get married, but will it be a conventional wedding? Even without the added possibility of some canine chaos ensuing, I don't think especially with Brian it would be the case.;) 

I will have the next part up soon. Was going to end it there, but we'll see how it goes.;)  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Rixa (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2015 09:55 PM · On: A Godzilla Hurricane Arrives

I really enjoy pet!fics and humorous stories which is why the Tricky stories are my favorites of all your works. Even though I knew Brian would give in and let Justin adopt Xena his concerns were certainly valid since adopting a dog or cat can be a fifteen or twenty year commitment.
I hope whoever will be looking over Tricky and Xena during the wedding will be doing so at a completely different location otherwise I can see them getting loose and creating havoc like in the pilot of the Brady Bunch series where the dog knocked over people and tables including the one with the wedding cake.

Author's Response:

Hi, Rixa! I'm delighted that you have enjoyed the Tricky adventures, and that you are enjoying this story. Thanks for letting me know that, and for the support.  I have a feeling you're right about the dogsitter, but even before the wedding I see unexpected trouble looming.;)  I'll probably have the next part up sometime tomorrow.

Thanks again for reading, and especially for the feedback! I really appreciate that. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2015 09:32 PM · On: A Godzilla Hurricane Arrives

Fun chapter.  Can't wait to see all the trouble Tricky and Xena can get up to together.  Love this story.  Bill



Author's Response:

Hi, Bill! Still good to see you reading along (in between writing your own story, which I need to catch up on myself).  And I'm happy that you're enjoying the latest Tricky adventure; this time with his very own accomplice.;)  I should have the next part up soon; working longer hours, which is drastically cutting into my spare time - ugh.

 

Thanks for all the support! And congrats on reaching your goal! With 85 chapters and no apparent end in sight, I'm sure there will be many more to come. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: gotb30 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2015 06:24 AM · On: A Godzilla Hurricane Arrives

This chapter was hilarious, especially when Brian was hiding behind the shield to guard against Tricky, not that it worked! LOL!!! Oh boy, it's going to be mayhem!! :D



Author's Response:

Hi, Lavender! So happy that you enjoyed the beginning of the mayhem!  With Tricky, that comes naturally, and now he's about to correct his daughter, too.;) Poor Brian, trying to defend himself to no avail - ha!  I'm so glad you're enjoying this story. Thank you for reading, and for the comments! *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 20, 2015 05:46 AM · On: A Godzilla Hurricane Arrives

I don't see how they're going to keep Tricky out of the wedding. I can't wait to see how this plays out.

S:)



Author's Response:

Let's just say the wedding will not go off without some hitches in it, to be sure.;)  Stay tuned; you will soon find out. Thanks for the comments! *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 20, 2015 05:40 AM · On: Cake...and Beefcake

"Brian, I have to tell you something..."

I think Justin was rigtht in that Brian would also have given in to Gus and I do like that Justin used Emmett's tactic to tell Brian.

Good chapter!

S:)



Author's Response:

LOL!  I do, too.  Not sure if Emmett was right in suggesting it, but with Brian you can always distract him that way, especially with a certain, beautiful blond (Justin, not Tricky - ha!).  I'm happy that you are enjoying this story, and I am grateful that you took the time to comment. Thank you for choosing to read this one! I should hopefully have the next part up later this evening. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Larka (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2015 02:54 AM · On: A Godzilla Hurricane Arrives

This is such a feel good story.  I love the antics with Tricky, Gus, Xena and the gang.  Brian's reaction to the dogs crack me up!



Author's Response:

Hi, Larka! I'm so glad that you're enjoying this story! Brian doesn't quite know what to do with either dog, but I think he realizes that his two boys and the dogs come as a package deal, so he's kind of stuck with them.;)  There's more chaos coming, some in ways that neither man will ever envision. But boy, will I have some fun with them - ha!  Thanks for reading this story, and for the encouragement; it really does motivate me. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Logan (Anonymous) · Date: August 20, 2015 01:03 AM · On: A Godzilla Hurricane Arrives

Hello. My name is Logan and I am a listener. Lindc said it would be ok to review this story. I have never done this so bear with me. This is a smart, clever and funny story. I can feel for Brian as I have gotten a Black Lab puppy and he is a handful. He has so much energy he wears me out. I named him Taylor. Lindc asked me if it has to do with QAF, but no I just like the name. We will be on deck for the next chapters as we all enjoy this story. At last count there were twelve of us. by 4 now Logan

Author's Response:

Hi, Logan!  How sweet you are to want to leave me feedback about this story! I'm delighted to read your comments, and I'm thrilled that you've been enjoying it.  You're very kind to let me know, and I hope you continue to enjoy it.  BTW, if you haven't read the other Tricky stories, I hope you will check them out. He gets into a LOT of trouble - ha! 

I do love labs - I have had two lab mixes before, and they are such lovable dogs.  I think it's hilarious that you named your puppy Taylor. What a coincidence!  I had to give an assessment test tonight to one of our students in welding named...Justin Taylor! Hard to keep a straight face when I see him, but he looks nothing like this one.;p

Thanks so much for taking the time to comment, Logan! Hope to hear from you again. And thanks for being part of the peep listeners! ~Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2015 12:49 AM · On: A Godzilla Hurricane Arrives

The day of reckoning is near and Brian wouldn't have it any other way.  I'm just worried about whose stomach those steaks are going to end up in.



Author's Response:

Ha!  Surely you don't think that Tricky would take those steaks off the grill, do you?;)  Actually, wish I had thought of that, but I think the steaks at least will be safe.p) More mayhem coming, though! Thank you for reading this latest chapter, and for all the feedback; it is much appreciated. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2015 07:50 PM · On: A Godzilla Hurricane Arrives

Lol...I see Tricky hasn't mellowed one bit. It will only be a matter of time before father and daughter cause some real mayhem ;)

Author's Response:

Hi Tamara!  No, you're right; when it comes to Tricky, at least, and seeing Brian, he still can't control himself. And I'm not sure how much of a good influence Tricky will be on his daughter, although something tells me that Xena can hold his own.;) So glad to see you reading this one, and enjoying it. Thanks for the support, and for letting me know. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: August 19, 2015 07:19 PM · On: A Godzilla Hurricane Arrives

What a hoot--laughed my a-- off. Listeners will love this one. The wedding is going to be a riot, I just know it. lol

Author's Response:

Hi, lindc!  So happy that you're enjoying this. I think I needed a little lighter fare to offset some of the angst, although I AM working on the update to "Heart's Desire," so tell Lee that I haven't forgotten him.  And yes, there will definitely be some twists and turns for the wedding; of course!:) Thanks so much for always being so supportive; I will have the next part up very soon. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: August 19, 2015 07:05 PM · On: A Godzilla Hurricane Arrives

Loving this but here is a piece of info to get you to change your dog food brand is made by purina and that is owned by nestle and nestle is owned by the koch brothers i buy nothing they make for obvious reasons 



Author's Response:

I'm normally well-read, but I admit I am not familiar with the Koch Brothers. The dog chow was meant more generically, rather than an actual brand.  But I am glad that you are enjoying this story despite that. Thanks for continuing to leave feedback; I should have the next part up hopefully tomorrow. Thanks again for the support. ~Kim

Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2015 06:27 PM · On: A Godzilla Hurricane Arrives

So my day at the office so far has been absolute shit! My boss is driving me nuts and has been all week. This was a welcome repreive even if it was only 30 min into my work day.

I was literally laughing out loud at Tricky's greeting of brian! The whole  armour and shield part was hysterical! How the hell did you think that up? All I need to do now for the rest of the day is think of that scene and I'll be grinning like a fool. thank you for that!!

The start of the birds and the bees chat was fun too. Always an interesting time for parents. 

The next few days with everyone around could prove to be very..........interesting to say the least. Looking forward t omore giggles ahead.

Thank you for brightening my morning. It was desparately needed!!



Author's Response:

Hi, Elaine - I'm sorry your day was so horrible, but I'm glad that this chapter helped at least somewhat to cheer you up.;)  It means a lot to me to know how much you are enjoying the story; thanks for letting me know that.;)  I will have the next part of this madcap adventure up probably tomorrow. I hope your day is better for you then.  Take care. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: samcdee (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2015 05:18 PM · On: A Godzilla Hurricane Arrives

He's baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaack!  What is it about Brian that Tricky loves so much? LOL This is such a fun fic!



Author's Response:

Hi, Shari! Yes...he's back, and he's bad to the bone.;)  Poor Brian!  (hee, hee...).  I'm so happy that you're enjoying this story! Thank you for continuing to read, Shari, and especially for the feedback. I will have the next part either tomorrow or Friday. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Anonymous) · Date: August 19, 2015 04:10 PM · On: A Godzilla Hurricane Arrives

I think my cousin used to have Tricky's brother... a giant yellow lab, who was the most loveable "bad dog" that I ever met! ;p

Justin may not get his version of a "perfect" wedding, but I'm sure it will be fun-filled. I somehow suspect that Tricky & Xena will not stand for being excluded, LOL!



Author's Response:

Hi, Trish!  I do love labs; you're correct. They are big, they are lumbering, but they are the sweetest, most lovable dogs in the world.;)  And they do like to give affection, especially if you're Tricky, and you're around your idol.;) 

As for the wedding, let's just say there will definitely be some ups and downs.  Poor guys!  But I'm going to have a lot of fun with it (hee,hee..).

Thanks so much for continuing to read this one, and for the feedback, Trish!  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Mariana (Anonymous) · Date: August 19, 2015 06:14 AM · On: Cake...and Beefcake

Kim I hope you are not serious about stop writing. Every story of your is a real treat.

I love them all. Your ability to portray Brian and Justin love is amazing.

Every time I read one of your stories I want more.

This new story is hilarious. I can't stop laughing. I'm so happy Tricky is coming to the wedding. Xena is adorable and will be a real challenge for both of the boys.

Anyway please continue writing and I'll read every word always.

Hugs

Mariana



Author's Response:

Hi, Mariana! I hung onto all of your kind comments. Thank you for continuing to read my stories, and especially for the feedback, letting me know how much you enjoy them. I think in the end that is all that ANY writer is looking for when they write. I know that some do it simply for the love of writing. And while I DO enjoy writing about B and J still - and have a lot more ideas in my head - it helps me more than people probably know, simply just to be told that others enjoy my efforts, so you taking the time to let me know that means the world to me.   I'm going to do my best - I am working 12-hr days sometimes, and have a lot of other things going on in RL, so it takes me a while to update, but I WILL finish my two other stories as soon as I can.  I won't, however, rush them simply to get them done; I think that does a disservice to those readers who have been following them so faithfully.  The only thing I can promise is that I will never leave one unfinished, and I will update just as fast as I humanly can.  I'm working on the next part of "MHD" now, so hopefully that will be up soon.;)  What I do after that, I wil have to think about.  Maybe by then, things won't be so crazy, and with at least one of the two WIPs done, I will have more time to write.

 

As for this story, yes, the arrival of Tricky will definitely add to the mix of chaos here. He has, shall we say, been missing his 'idol' in the extreme, so whether he's mellowed or not, seeing him will no doubt set off the excitement again, and maybe not in a good way for Brian.  But that's the fun, isn't it? And now he has a cohort in crime, thanks to Justin's decision to add Xena to their household.  She just may outdo her dad in the stunts department, too; only time will tell that.;)

 

I hope to get Ch. 4 up before I go to work today. I do hope you continue to enjoy it! Thanks again for the support, Mariana; it is deeply appreciated.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2015 10:14 PM · On: Cake...and Beefcake

Justin is so lucky Brian didn't call off the wedding.  Now that would have been a plot twist!  Waiting so long to tell him when they promised no more secrets is a nono.  However, Brian wouldn't have been able to refuse Gus and he realizes that.  Do they have doggy day care in Pittsburgh?  With two dogs in the house, something is going to have to give.  Maybe a bad guy will show up trying to mess up the wedding and it's Tricky and Zena to the rescue?



Author's Response:

Hi, there! I'm so happy to see you reviewing; you are always so great about reading and reviewing.) I'm so happy that you are enjoying this story!  As for Tricky and Xena becoming super heroes...hmmm...they may be too busy creating havoc, but only time will tell.;)

Thank you as always for reading and reviewing; I am most appreciative. Hoping to get the next part up tonight; Hurricane Tricky's about to arrive!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2015 09:38 PM · On: Her Name is What?!

Love the name of the new pup.  But I can see that Justin has his work cut out for him.  I've notice the more you ignore them the better behaved the dog is.  Maybe that would work?  How will Brian react when he finds out who all is coming to the wedding?

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2015 07:35 PM · On: Dogged Determination

Sorry it took me so long.  My daughter and her husband came in from Japan and stayed in the room with my computer, leaving me without a way to read and comment, not to mention no free time.  I can already see that I'm gonna love this story.  Justin comparing the dog to Brian - hilarious.  But then we all knew that it was a foregone conclusion.  Justin gets what Justin wants.

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: August 18, 2015 06:34 PM · On: Cake...and Beefcake

This is going to be exciting to see "the wooly mammoth" and off spring together-who knows he may just be nice and father her. Ha! I am afraid the wedding is going to havve t's ups and downs-can just see it now-both of them running down the aisle and interrupting all the goings-on sitter, my foot, something is going to happen--the listeners have bets on what??? so funny. will let you know how this plays out-depending on how you play it out. lol

Author's Response:

Hi, lindc! Yes, I don't think Tricky is going to be a good influence on his daughter, but then what would be the fun in that? Ha!  The chaos will be starting in the next chapter, although I think Xena is a troublemaker in a different way than Tricky. But who knows what may change after the daughter has a chance to see her famous father in action? 

And you don't think the sitter will be effective?  LOL!  Well, you may just be right about that.;)  I thiink it's great that you're placing bets on what's going to happen.  Let me know if anyone figures it out!  Thanks as always for the support and encouragement, Lindc.  Tell all the peeps I said hello, and said my best.;)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 18, 2015 06:11 PM · On: Cake...and Beefcake

So good!  I am so impressed with Brian and his acceptance of whatever Justin and Gus desire.  His love for them is so strong.  It seems Justin bit off more than he could chew trying to train Xena.  I can't wait for the bedlam once Tricky arrives and meets up with his daughter.  Briton will never be the same, and Brian will go off the deep end.



Author's Response:

Hi, there! Thank you for choosing to read this story, and especially for taking the time to comment.:)  Yes, Brian is definitely a man in love with his partner AND his son.;)  I always loved how tender he seemed with Gus on the show, and I try to carry that over in my stories whenever Gus is involved.  I'm so delighted that you are enjoying it.

 

And yes, "Hurricane Tricky" is about to arrive, and things will definitely ramp up in the crazy department!  I'm hoping to get Ch. 4 posted tonight; if not then, tomorrow.  So glad you are enjoying this story! Thanks again for taking the time to leave feedback. *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: cherub68 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2015 10:20 AM · On: Dogged Determination

What a treat to come back from holiday and find another instalment in this arc, just love it.

 



Author's Response:

Hi, there! I'm so glad that you enjoy the Tricky stories, and are enjoying this latest installment.  Things will start to get pretty hectic in the next chapter, when Xena's dad shows up at last.;) 

I'm hoping to get the next part up sometime tonight. Thank you again for taking the time to read, and especially comment! I realy appreciate you taking the time to do that.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Stella Bousquet (Anonymous) · Date: August 17, 2015 09:35 PM · On: Dogged Determination

Honestly, I don't like pets… So I'm not fan of stories about dogs. But, anyways, I'm reading your story with pleasure because it's a Brian & Justin fic… and I'm looking forward to see how you imagine their wedding !! Thanks Kim!



Author's Response:

Hi, there!  I appreciate you giving this story a try, even though pets are not your favorites.  I hope you do enjoy it nonetheless.  At least you had some B and J smut in this chapter.;)

I will have the next part up soon; thank you again for deciding to read this one, and especially for the feedback. I greatly appreciate that. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2015 08:01 PM · On: Cake...and Beefcake

I'm completely sympathetic to Brian's situation! (My cat sounds like he's as much of a problem as Xena is) Sounds like this new pup is going to be a challenge for quite some time!! 

AS for Tricky making another appearance. Glad I get to just read about it and not experience it!! LOL! You know it's going to  be hilarious! (Of course, as Brian said, we all know he'd give into Gus as well....) His level of patice is definitely going to be seted! Looking forward to the wedding! sounds like it's going to be..........memorable to say the least!

Thanks. terrific update to a great fic. Love this seies!!

Cheers,

Elaine



Author's Response:

Hi, Elaine - you're so kind to read and especially review. Thank you for your support, and for the feedback. And you are right; two versions of Tricky will just make for more mayhem, and in this case I think Xena just might surpass her father in the mischief department.;)  I should have Ch. 4 up by tomorrow; I hope you continue to enjoy it. Thanks again for taking the trouble to leave a comment; it is much appreciated. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Elly (Anonymous) · Date: August 17, 2015 03:19 PM · On: Cake...and Beefcake

Love this chapter, can't wait for Gus and Tricky arrival, silence for the storm, poor Brian! And Emmet, I love him!



Author's Response:

Hi, Elly!  You are right; Hurricane Tricky will be blowing in in the next chapter.  And he hasn't really changed too much; if he was too obedient, there wouldn't be any fun in that!:P 

I should have Ch. 4 up hopefully tomorrow. Thanks for all the support, Elly; I appreciate that so much. *Hugs* ~Kim

 

 

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2015 01:37 PM · On: Cake...and Beefcake

I love this chapter. Love the humor, the characterization, the relationship the y share. I love everything. Thank you and eager for the next one as always :)



Author's Response:

Hi, dear friend - so happy that you are reading this story and enjoying it.  I appeciate that so much.  I will have Ch. 4 up hopefully tomorrow.  Thank you for all the support. *Hugs*~Kim

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2015 09:19 AM · On: Cake...and Beefcake

Well, that was fun. I'm still laughing. Xena and Tricky together - hmmmm - going to be fun....NOT. Good idea getting a dog sitter. Brian so loves Justin. Oh, and I want some raspberry-chocolate cheesecake - although a virtual cake is the only one that will fit into my diet........

Author's Response:

Hi, Monica! Thank you for reading this latest chapter, and especially for the feedback! You know how much I appreciate that;)  Yes, the mayhem is about to ensue; Tricky and Gus, along with the Munchers, will show up in the next part, with the appropriate chaos resulting.  But we wouldn' have it any other way, right? 

I'll try to hopefully get the next part up later today. It's written, but I still need to review it and adjust the formatting.;)  Thanks so much for your support, Monica! *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2015 12:13 AM · On: Her Name is What?!

OK Pep talk over: Thoughts on the story

Cute as always, an unusual idea adding yet another dog into the mix. Love that you called the dog Xena. (I have recently been getting re-aquainted with the show) Lovin the pics and the dog bed/couch. Never seen anything like that.

Looking forward to what happens when Tricky and Xena meet. Something tells me, Britin's going to get a whole lot louder.....

Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2015 11:50 PM · On: Dogged Determination

Not enough reviews???? Doubting your writing ability??? Are you serious???? Or just seriously loco?

First.......Don't EVER doubt your ability. Like...EVER. Period.

As for reviews, well...there's always a steep difference in the readership and the reviews. You just have to take it in stride. But you get HUNDREDS of reviews per story. Let's say that again. HUNDREDS.  per story It makes me jealous just thinking of it. My record for review is 138 and the Little Merman while readership keeps going remains at ....59. That s the best thing I ever wrote ...and....59. So...yeah.

Lastly, fanfic should not be about the adoration or reviews or whatever. It's fiction to keeping our fanship of QAF alive despite the show regrettably ending before its time. There's another author....somewhere on this site, his name has slipped my mind right now..... who has purposely extended his story to reach 1000 reviews to satisfy a confessed ego trip. This is ridiculous.

If you need to take a break or even write something else, go ahead but for the Love of Spongebob and all things squooshy, don't stop because you think you're not good enough. I might be takin a break soon as well and I m for sure slowing down

We all love ya Kim



Author's Response:

Hi, Jon! You're very sweet. Thank you for the pep talk.;)  Not sure about 'hundreds' of reviews; if I do get that many, it's normally due to the longer stories I tend to write.;)  I treasure each and every review that I get, don't get me wrong. And while I agree that fan fiction should not be all about reviews, I still need that validation that what I'm writing continues to be interesting to readers.  I know I can write well as far as punctuation, spelling, and grammar goes, but is WHAT I'm writing still enjoyable and read-worthy? That is why I need the feedback.  That's just me; I can't speak for other writers. It's more difficult for me to keep updating as quickly as some others do on a more regular basis due to everything I have going on at the moment, but I hope readers will bear with me as I work through the stories.  Once I get done with the two WIPs, I haven't decided what I will do.  I would love to keep writing these, if others are interested. But time will tell, I suppose.

Thank you for always being so supportive, Jon. And after your slow down, I do hope you will return back to the site to write some more. It would not be the same without your quirky sense of humor in your stories, and the unique way only you can write them! *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2015 09:33 PM · On: Cake...and Beefcake

Wonderful chapter.

Everyone should have someone that loves them the way Brian loves Justin.

I cried thinking about Justin tearing up when Brian yelled. Great writing.

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2015 07:47 PM · On: Cake...and Beefcake

Fun chapter.  We knew that Brian couldn't stay angry with Justin.  Can't wait for Tricky's arrival and the first meeting with his daughter.  Really enjoying this story.  Bill



Author's Response:

Hi, Bill! Well, you will get your wish in the next chapter...and then the mayhem will REALLY start to ensue. This is somewhat tame compared to what's coming - ha! Thanks so much for continuing to read, and for your feedback, my friend. Both are greatly appreciated. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2015 05:13 PM · On: Cake...and Beefcake

Love this chapter, can't wait till the next update. Hurry.

* hugs *



Author's Response:

Thank you, my friend!  Glad that you are enjoying it. I will try to post the next chapter tomorrow (hopefully). It's written, but it's more of a time factor and the need to format the paragraphs first and doublecheck for mistakes. Thank you for reading this one, and especially for the comments.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: gotb30 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2015 05:05 PM · On: Cake...and Beefcake

LOL!! Hopefully the dog sitter (maybe two!) will help keep the dog situation handled. There is also doggy daycare. Well, at least Brian has calmed down now! :D



Author's Response:

Hi, Lavender!  Well, I'm not sure that ANY dog sitter, competent or not, is a match for THESE two, but time will soon tell.;)  Justin, at least, knows how to soothe the savage beast (Brian, I mean - LOL!).

Thanks so much for continuing to read, and especially for the feedback. I am very grateful. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: samcdee (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2015 04:39 PM · On: Cake...and Beefcake

Cake and Beefcake!  Yum!  ;)  Another great chapter.  I love the Trickyverse.



Author's Response:

Hi, Shari!  Sometimes the chapter titles give me fits when trying to come up with an appropriate title for them, but I thought this would be fitting here.;)  I'm glad you enjoy the Tricky stories; speaking of which, he should finally be making his appearance in the next chapter. Thank you for choosing to read this story, and especially for taking the time to comment. That means a lot to me.  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Anonymous) · Date: August 16, 2015 04:23 PM · On: Cake...and Beefcake

Nice update, thanks!



Author's Response:

Thanks, Trish! Hope you continue to enjoy it.;)  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: August 16, 2015 03:14 PM · On: Cake...and Beefcake

Wow wedding cake and sex there is no way for that to be anything but a great chapter even with a puppy in the house.



Author's Response:

Ha! Sounds like a good combination to me, too!  I hope you continue to enjoy the story! Thank you reading this one, and for your comments. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2015 02:50 PM · On: Cake...and Beefcake

Lol Brian loves his boys so much he cannot stay annoyed for long!

Author's Response:

Hi, Chris! You are so right.;)  He's really a marshmallow inside that crusty surface.;)  Thank you for the comments, and for continuing to read this one; I hope you enjoy the rest. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2015 02:40 PM · On: Cake...and Beefcake

Lol I can't wait to see how our boys manage to keep the canine members of their family under control on the big day.

Author's Response:

Hi, my friend! Well, who said anything about keeping them under control?  That wouldn't be too fun for us - ha!  There's more mayhem about to start, especially with Tricky about to show up.  Look out, world!  Thanks as always for being so supportive of my stories, Tamara.  *Hugs*~Kim

Reviewer: Prisca512 (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2015 08:20 PM · On: Her Name is What?!

I knew it would be too much to ask for that Justin's puppy be well behaved, it is Tricky's offspring after all!  But I have faith that Justin will be able to train Xena, oh, it will take a lot of time, patience and I'm sure blowjobs to calm Brian, but Justinis up to the task! I was just surprised at Brian's queen out over designer dog furniture!! I would think that would fit right in his style!  Thanks! 😋



Author's Response:

Hi, Melinda! Yeah, an obedient puppy just wouldn't do in this story - ha!  You may have a point about the designer furniture; I would think Brian would be much more comfortable with that than some cheesy model, but perhaps it was the opulence of the thing for a dog that got him all riled up.

I have a suspicion that things might get a little more crazy before they start to get better, but to me that's part of the fun.;) Thanks so much for continuing to read, and especially for the feedback, Melinda! I greatly appreciate that. *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2015 07:25 AM · On: Her Name is What?!

Hey Kim, just wanted to tell you friends introduce me to some of their friends and one was named "Lane" lol I just wanted you to now right off the back I didn't like him, nope not one bit. ;)

Author's Response:

LOL! Poor guy! And has no idea why you already dislike him - ha!  That's funny!  Thank you for reading that series; I enjoyed writing it, even though at times it was about quite serious subject matter. Thanks for letting me know.;)  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2015 06:02 AM · On: Her Name is What?!

Love the dog bed, it's gorgeous. Cute puppy, she matches the bed. I really hope that Justin can get this one trained so that Brian doesn't freak out about her.

I just love Emmett and his comments. Great chapter.

Author's Response:

Hi again, Lorie!  I like the name for the puppy; no 'spot' or 'cocoa' or normal name for THIS one. Glad you liked the bed, and enjoyed this chapter! I just posted Ch. 3. I hope you continue to enjoy it. Thank you, also for the feedback; it's most appreciated. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2015 05:56 AM · On: Her Name is What?!

Came across this story when I checked recent stories. Happy to see it is part of a series so got started on Tricky Universe - great stories, I love them, really enjoyable and can't wait to read more. Have read them all back to back and now that I am caught up will go and review them all. Keep up the good work -please:-)



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you've been enjoying all the Tricky stories! Thanks for letting me know. I love that big guy!  And I think Brian does, too, in his own way, but he DOES try his patience. He will be doing that again coming up, BTW. Thanks fo reading this story, and for the feedback. I am very grateful, and I hope you continue to enjoy it.  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2015 05:39 AM · On: Dogged Determination

Very sweet and hilarious. Love the way Justin gets what he wants. Brian is such a softy when it comes to the one he loves more than life itself.

Please don't stop writing, your stories are wonderful and so full of life.

Author's Response:

Hi, Lorie!  I am woefully behind on answering reviews; I normally get to them quicker than this, but it's been extremely busy for me this past week. First of all, thank you for your kind words about my writing; that really touches me, and lets me know if others are still enjoying what I write.  It means so much to me.:)

As for the story, yeah, Brian huffs and puffs a lot, but in the end he's pretty much powerless to say no to his two favorite boys.;)  In the upcoming chapters, he will have to do a lot of that.;) 

Thanks for reading this story, and especially for the feedback, Lorie! Much appreciated. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: vlsope2@yahoo.com (Anonymous) · Date: August 14, 2015 08:05 PM · On: Her Name is What?!

So happy you are doing another story with Tricky, the little Xena. I hope Tricky is better behaved, not perfect of course. If Brian had gone next door he wouldn't have the dog go the pound either, such a softy. I hope Brian remembers how Tricky saved Gus and Justin also. I loved the dog bed! Can't wait for more chapters.



Author's Response:

Hello, there!  I do think Tricky might be a little more calm, although his exuberance at seeing Brian will make him digress a little.;)  I tend to agree with you about Brian giving in if he found out the puppy's fate.;)  That IS some dog bed, isn't it? I think I would be happy with it myself!

I'm delighted that you are glad to read about Tricky again! Thank you so much for reading, and especially for the comments! That means a lot to me. *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 14, 2015 05:23 PM · On: Her Name is What?!

"My, what bad taste you have." 

LOL, I love that entire exchange between Brian and Emmett.

It looks like Xena is going to be more of a handful than Cujo. I can't wait to see Xena at the wedding.

I'm glad you wrote more in this universe.

:)



Author's Response:

Hi, there!  I couldn't help putting a little banter in there between Brian and Emmett; I enjoy writing about them. We all know they're actually friends, despite the insults.;)  As for Xena, well, let's just say that the apple doesn't fall from the tree - ha!

Thank you so much for reading and especially reviewing; I am very grateful.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 14, 2015 04:44 PM · On: Dogged Determination

"You took food over to that canine slut's owner?" 

I loved Brian's comments in this chapter. His love hate of Tricky and his progeny was as entertaining as always.  Even though Justin's persuasive tactics were eye opening for Brian, it was the the reminder of how Cujo/Tricky saved Justin and Gus' lives that did the trick. I could see that be the trump card only used when nothing else worked. Brian held out pretty well.

I hate to hear about you or any other devoted writer giving up. I don't know about about any other reader, but as I have have gotten up in years, so has my family and helath issues are escalating. I wonder if that is the case for other readers - an aging population. Nevertheless, I have always admired any writer who has taken the time out of their busy lives to provide some much needed relief and distraction from some of the drudgery or disappointment of RL. Again, I believe you were the first author I read in this fandom and you are one of the reasons I am still here today reading when I should be working on a resume`, lol.

As far as leaving reviews anonymously, I have tried several times to re-register after forgetting my password and I received no response. I took that as a sign. I needed to prioritize. I still read but not as timely as before or as I would like or as consistently. But I can't see myself ever leaving the QAF world, completely.

Sandra :)

PS: I keep forgetting to change the font size so there are probably more errors than norm.

 



Author's Response:

Hi, Sandra! I was delighted to hear from you.   I know you have been one of my most loyal followers pretty much since the beginning, and I really appreciate that.  To say that I am busy is an understatement. Sigh...I was at work last night until 8:00 p.m., and have two more late nights next week.  I won't get into everything that I have to do, but suffice to say that it keeps me just this shy of tearing what little hair I have left completely out - ha!

You may be right about the lack of responses, but I still get easily discouraged when I don't receive very many, and it always makes me wonder if the interest in them is waning. The readers who have taken time to leave comments on this story, though, have lifted my sprits somewhat. I stil have precious little time, and still am not sure how long I can keep writing and taking care of so many other things, but I will see once I get my two WIPs done. 

Thank you again for all the support.  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Anonymous) · Date: August 14, 2015 02:58 AM · On: Her Name is What?!

Ah, the challenges of puppyhood... I remember them well! I had a Lab/mix myself many years ago, and as much of handful as she was as a puppy, she was aboslutely one of the sweetest dogs I ever knew. I think Justin, and Brian will see that in Xena... eventually. 

Nice update...  looking forward to Tricky's arrival, probably just as much as Justin is dreading it, LOL!



Author's Response:

Hi, Trish! I couldn't agree with you more about labs; they remain puppies for a long time, but they are such sweet and loving dogs.  And yes, the arrival of father being reunited with his daughter could spell mayhem.;)

Happy that you're enjoying this story, Trish! Thanks for reading, and for your comments.  BTW, guess you noticed that Randy's in a play at P-town on 9/27. I think that's the same day as Justin Sayre's Meeting Tribute to Whitney Houston at Joe's Pub. Was hoping Randy would be participating, but looks like it's not going to happen. Darn!

Thanks again, Trish. Will try to get Ch. 3 up tomorrow night. *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: August 14, 2015 02:54 AM · On: Her Name is What?!

Sorry, guess I am more tired than I thiought. Forgot to say cute pictures and really nice doggie bed. lol

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: August 14, 2015 02:51 AM · On: Her Name is What?!

Cute, cute. cute chapter. The listeners are eating this one up. Worked a doublen so they got both chapters. This Xena is going to be a force to reckon with. This wedding is going to be fun I expect. Things will not go as planned. Can't wait to see what happens. The listeners love th Tricky stories as do we all.

Author's Response:

Hi, lindc! I'm thrilled that your peeps are enjoying this one. You know how much I enjoy tormenting Brian with Tricky; now he has TWO of them, with a little bit of Justin's frustration thrown in.  Xena will definitely impact the wedding.;)  And fun, yes; but maybe not for Brian - ha!

Thank you as always for your kindness and support.  Lee left me a very sweet note; he is such a nice man.  I feel very honored that you have read my stories for so long, and still continue to enjoy them. I'll try to get Ch. 3 up tomorrow - had to work 12 hrs today. Ugh!  Sending my love your way to you, Lee, and the peeps. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: samcdee (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2015 01:05 AM · On: Her Name is What?!

Justin definitely has a big challenge ahead of him with little Xena.

 



Author's Response:

Hi,Shari!  Thank you for continuing to read this story, and for your comments. I appreciate your support and thoughtfulness in leaving me your thoughts.

And yes, Xena may well turn out to be as incorrigible as Tricky. She will definitely be impacting the wedding in a way they will never anticipate. 

Thanks for reading!  Hope you continue to enjoy it. *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2015 09:38 PM · On: Her Name is What?!

Ah...so this is one of those occasions where Brian might have actually been right. Justin definitely has his work cut out for him with little Xena, let's hope that she'll be more subdued before the wedding lol.

Author's Response:

Hi, Tamara - yeah, I think Justin is more optimistic here than he should be. Just like with Tricky, Xena means well, but is a very overeager puppy and quite curious; that curiosity may well get her into a sticky situation that will impact the wedding, and not in a good way.;)

Thank you for reading this second chapter, my friend, and for the comments! I'm very grateful. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Elly (Anonymous) · Date: August 13, 2015 08:44 PM · On: Her Name is What?!

Last few days I read all your Tricky stories, I really enjoyed. So touchingly how Tricky and Gus stay with Justin and Brian on Britin.

"I Doo, Doo" again a beautiful beginning of a new story, I'm so excited how it will deal with little puppy Xena and Tricky together, looking forward to a new chapter.

Kim, can't wait to start reading your two other stories, when you finish them. Greetings Elly. xx



Author's Response:

Hi, Elly! So happy to hear from you; you're always so kind.;)  Thank you for reading this chapter, and for your comments. I'm glad that you have enjoyed all the Tricky stories. I do love writing about him and poor Brian.;) 

I should hopefully get Ch. 3 up tomorrow; had to work 12 hours today, and I'm pretty tired.  So happy that you're enjoying this, though, Elly! Thanks so much for your feedback. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2015 07:26 PM · On: Her Name is What?!

I have so many scenarios in my head right now! How this new addition is going to challenge Brian's patience. HAHHA Is going to be a hoot. Especially wiht the wedding soon approaching. I can't wait. As soon as Justin claims that neither will be near their wedding that...the "dum dum dum dum...DUM" tune went off in my head.

Xena is definitely going to be an interesting new member of the family.

 

 



Author's Response:

Hi, Elaine!  Well, I can tell you that Xena's about to do something that Tricky had never thought of, and it will NOT go over well with a certain brunet.;) But that's part of the fun (hee, hee)...  And you're right; Justin has NO idea...ha! Thanks so much for reading, and especially for the feedback! That really helps to keep me motivated. I'll try to get Ch. 3 up tomorrow. *Hugs ~Kim

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