Reviewer: Bgriggs (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2021 11:43 AM · On: Chapter 21

Please please please finish this story. I’ve read both parts 4 times now. 

Reviewer: LucretiaSeeks (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2020 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 21

I really enjoyed your story - twice now! If ever you're able to come back and write in this universe, I hope you will. Thank you!

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2019 02:54 AM · On: Chapter 6

I really think Lindsey has a bunch of screws loose

Reviewer: tataniastorm (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2017 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 1

I hope all is well. Is this story going to go on. I miss it. Ty for sharing.

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: February 28, 2017 04:29 AM · On: Chapter 21

so gld you are writing again. Missed this story. Great update. I loved how Gus defends his sister against the moms. Ugh. Brian and Justin still make a great couple and Shane and Gus- I lvoe their interaction and how they both treat JR great.

 

 

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your feedback!  I'm thrilled to know you're still enjoying the story!!  I'm working on getting the next chapter posted soon.

I greatly appreciate your patience during my unintended and unexpected, hiatus!!

Reviewer: xJustSayingx (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2017 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 21

This is my favourite story, love it so much! I always enjoy reading every second of it, especially as I think it's so in character and I can imagine that the future played out just like that.

Thank You for updating this incredible story :)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I'm delighted that you are still enjoying this story!

I'm happy you can see the "reality" of the future with these special characters. I've tried to keep everyone as in-character as I could, taking into consideration how they would each evolve and grow with time, age, and maturity. 

The next chapter will be updated soon :)

 

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2017 10:46 AM · On: Chapter 21

Welcome back. Missed this story so much. Thanks for the long update, so much happening in this chapter. Love it all.

 

* hugs *

Author's Response:

Thank you, Marny!  I'm going to continue with this story, all the way!  I'm delighted you liked the chapter...thanks for your feedback!!

Hugs,

Aislin

Reviewer: Linda (Anonymous) · Date: February 25, 2017 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 21

So Happy to see the update. Love this story. I'm not giving up on this.....I know you'll finish it. 

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: February 25, 2017 08:05 AM · On: Chapter 21

Dear Aislin,

Welcome back. When I saw the notification, I wasn't sure is a story or an update on your status. No matter what I'm happy to see it.

I want to say thank you for your commitment and your passion to continue this magnificent story. I haven't read the story yet as I want to say Thank You to you first.

 

Reviewer: neetaskita (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2016 07:36 PM · On: Update - Author's Note

Thank you Predec2 for the updates on behalf of rainbow_roses.  Prayers for her and her family.

 

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: September 14, 2016 02:41 AM · On: Chapter 15

been reading this story for over a week-  I love your writing style and your story telling is wonderful.  I hate that Justin's hand is giving out but everyone is handling it wel.  Just thought I'd drop a line and say I'm  enjoying it.

Reviewer: BritinForever (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2016 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 8

Wow!  That chapter was an emotional roller coaster.  I'm so glad Gus woke up.  Now comes the hard part, him finding out about Connor and healing.

Reviewer: Acadian Proud (Anonymous) · Date: August 28, 2016 03:08 PM · On: Author's Note

Please tell her that we, her readers will patiently wait until she is able to update.  There are many things more important then updating.   WE will keep her in your thoughts.

Reviewer: BritinForever (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2016 09:38 AM · On: Chapter 1

Loving the start of this.  They really had Brian going there for a minute.  Can't wait to see how this story develops.

Reviewer: zelldrake (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2016 11:44 PM · On: Author's Note

MUCH LOVE

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2016 07:45 PM · On: Author's Note

Best wishes to Aislin and her family.  Hope everything turns out well.  Family is the most important thing to take care of.  I look forward to you resuming updates to this wonderful story.  Bill

Reviewer: MissMerlot (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2016 06:25 PM · On: Author's Note

Sending my best wishes and a huge hug to them all xx

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: July 20, 2016 09:05 AM · On: Chapter 18

Hi,

Please when can we have the next chapter. Really really looking forward to it.

Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2016 10:01 PM · On: Chapter 18

a great chapter. love the puppy and all the new developments.

Reviewer: Mariana (Anonymous) · Date: May 18, 2016 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 18

Thanks for the update. I'm so happy to see your long chapters apear again. It's pure joy to read.

Reviewer: Elaine (Anonymous) · Date: May 17, 2016 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 18

So I was thiiiiiiiiiiiiis close to tears of joy when I saw this update!! I had just finished re-reading this for the upmteenth time. :) Both of the series are just brilliant! 

what a great chapter. Loved everything about it! It's so nice being able to sit down and just read for awhile. A very long well-written (and well read) chapter. 

Gus and Shane........*sigh* while for many I'd agree that they are both young, but there's something about Gus that oozes maturity. He's seem to always known what he wants and goes after it, yet he's also patient enought to wait for the right timing. they make a great pair those 2, and with the support of B&J as well as supportive family members. I somehow don't see Lindsey reacting well to the news, but oh well......tough titties!! haha.

shadow should be an intersting addition. Animals always add a fun aspect. They tend to soften en the wildest and hardest of hearts. Brian may want to think he's an asshole, but we all know differently. He's just a marshmallow and he's shown it once again with Shadow.

Glad ben adn Micheal werea ble to come around. It's hard to have to let go of your kids, espcecially for them as they only just got her, but they needed to let her live her life and make her choices. Good thing the otheres were able to make them see things correctly.

Seems like almost everyone is growing up and will be starting to live their own lives. Well, kinda. I had to laugh at how Gus adn Shane were still wanting to live with B&J. usually with kids that age it's arace out the door, but with them, it just the opposite. show what a terrific relatioship they have with Dad adn poppa.

So good. Sooo happy. So relieved!!

Many thanks!

cheers,

Elaine

Author's Response:

Tears of joy can be a good thing :)  I'm delighted that posting the latest chapter made you so happy!  I greatly appreciate your wonderful feedback!  It's so good to know that you enjoyed both of my series stories!

This latest chapter was indeed very busy; a lot of things going on.  Gus isn't a typical young man, he's mature beyond his years, and he's also inherited a lot of his father's characteristics.  One of them being the ability to make choices and never second-guess himself or ever regret his decisions.  For sure, he and Shane are a great couple, and both of them have the full support of Brian and Justin.  (Like you said, if Lindsay doesn't react well to it...tough titties) LOL!!

I think that Shadow will continue to be a positive and lovable addition to the Kinney family (especially for Brian).  You're right...isn't it amazing how sometimes having a pet can turn many hardened hearts into complete marshmallows :)  Then again, Brian has always had a soft spot in his heart, though he didn't want to show it often. 

Ben and Michael eventually came around in favor of Jenny Rebecca going away to college.  Parenting isn't always easy, and it doesn't come with an instruction manual.  Their initial response would probably be kinda normal for a lot of parents.  Luckily, Jenny Rebecca did have the others there to help and support her.

Gus and Shane are certainly unique young men, and their relationship with Brian and Justin, as fathers and sons, is very special and rare.  The two 'youngsters' truly like spending time with the dads.

Thank you immensely for your encouragment and comments!!

Sláinte!

Aislin

 

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2016 08:24 AM · On: Chapter 18

Thanks for this wonderful and very long chapter.

* hugs *

Author's Response:

Thanks, Marney! :)  I'm extremely delighted to know that you are reading and enoying this story! 

I'm immensely thankful for your encouraging feedback and continued support!!

*Hugs*

Aislin

Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2016 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 17

I just discovered this. It was mentioned in FB and i thought I'd take a look. I didn't read the first installment yet, but do so for sure. This still made sense though.

Can I just say WOW! I love your portraysl of the characters! I love all teh angst and teh family entanglements. At times so gut wrentching and at others, it made me smile. Through out it all I completely taken in. I love fics like this. Where teh story is realistic. That B&J are so strong and supportive of each other. Gus and Jenny are portrayed beaurifully!! Seeing how they lived when with the gorls, compared to now, lifing with their perspective fathers. How they are so incredibly supportive of each other. Micheal is still pretty self absorbed at times, but at least he's able to come down from his emotionally charged rants and see reality.

I know you updated about a month ago, and I get why it takes awhile for new chapters. they are incredibly long! I love that! I enjoy being able to take an hour or so to read a chapter. 

Having said that, I'm definitely waiting on baited breath for a new chapter. :) I can see this is going to be one of those fics where I put it on my kindle as is so I can go back and read it comfortably again as I wait.

Thank you!!!!! thanhk you for giving us this wonderful story.

Cheers!

Elaine

Author's Response:

Thank you so very much, Elaine, for your insightful and wonderful feedback!  I'm utterly thrilled that you are enjoying this story :)  My goal was to make it as canon as possible, yet also taking into consideration that the characters have aged, that Brian and Justin are full-time fathers to Gus, who is now in his early twenties and has a steady boyfriend, and that Ben and Michael are fathers to a teenaged girl who is a lesbian, and has a girlfriend, in addition to the quote, normal, life experiences we all gain through the years.  

In the prequel to this story, it has much, much shorter chapters, and I also ended most of them with cliffhangers.  I made a conscious decision this time that I would not leave any cliffhangers on the chapters.  I've received only positive feedback to the very long chapters in this story, so I've continued on with it.  I'm so happy you too, enjoy them!

This story certainly has moments of angst, though I've tried to keep some of it 'light', and sometimes even humorous, while other times are indeed more emotional.  I've had the most enjoyable time in bringing Gus and Jenny Rebecca to life in this story; first as children, then as teenagers, and now into early adultood.  I could only imagine that their brother/sister bond with each other would be a strong one, as their mothers usually seemed so focused on their careers, and also bickered quite often.  As now as young adults, I trust it would only continue to grow.

There are a few aspects to Michael's personality that will never change.  On the show, he displayed moments of maturity (in his mind), and even criticized Brian for being an "over the hill club boy", at least by his standards.  Yet there were times when his "old" behaviors would come to the surface (as is common in real life).  But I believe that now, in this particular story, when they do, he is more apt to listen to reason, and make changes accordingly when a situation calls for it; though it might take a little time to get to that point.

When the series ended, I truly believed that Brian was completely in love with Justin, and the changes he was willing to make came from a sincere heart.  He might not have had a clear understanding of some aspects of what being in a committed relationship meant, and was a little misguided internally, as he was putting what he thought Justin wanted him to be in the forefront.  But then we remember that he had never seen in his own life an honest example of love between his own parents, so he didn't have any true resources to refer to.  It would understandably take him and Justin a bit of time to work through it all and to find the balance in their relationsip, but I believe they both would feel that each other was worth whatever they invested into the relationship.  Brian admitting his love to Justin was the first major step in that direction; their journey could only continue from there :)  They do experience bumps in the road, but their amazingly tight connection to one anoter, based on honesty, seems to always get them through.

Thanks again for your thoughtful comments!

Sláinte!

Aislin

 

 

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2016 03:27 PM · On: Chapter 17

Still reading, still enjoying every chapter.

* hugs *

Author's Response:

I'm so delighted!!  Thank you for commenting and supporting the story!  It always means so much!  I've just posted the latest chapter...I hope you enjoy it, too :)

*Hugs*

Aislin

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2016 03:56 AM · On: Chapter 17

Mine came through blank.  I want to see the pictures.  Any suggestions?

Fantastic chapter!  I was so worried when the test results were positive. So glad things were resolved.  Love how Justin went after Brian's oncologist.  

Author's Response:

The pictures should now be available for you to see at the end of the chapter.  Sorry about that :)

I'm overjoyed you liked this chapter!  Yep, Justin is equally as protective of Brian, as Brian is for him.

Thank you for your feedback, and for your ongoing support!  So greatly appreciated!!

Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: March 13, 2016 02:14 AM · On: Chapter 17

Thank you.
Wonderful long chapter. Brian and Justin should have no qualms about having Gus and Shane working for Kinnetik when they retire.
Jenny, to be abandoned by her mother and to feel it more is tough. Good thing she has Ben.
Cancer scare...happy it was a mistake.

Author's Response:

You're very welcome :)  I'm so delighted you liked this chapter.  Indeed, Gus and Shane have learned a lot about Kinnetik and have proven their business skills to Brian and Justin.  We'll have to see where that all leads...

Jenny Rebecca still has some issues with her moms, but thankfully, she has a huge support system with her dads, brother, grandparents, and her uncles, especially with B & J. 

I appreciate your encouraging feedback immensely!!  Thank you very much!!

Reviewer: Henri (Anonymous) · Date: March 12, 2016 10:46 PM · On: Chapter 17

How lovely to find another update to your story. So, well crafted and it must take a lot of time and dedication to prepare the next instalment. I like that all roads seem to heading back to Britin & Pittsburgh. Characters very close to canon while at the same time in a different but related contexts.

Author's Response:

I'm so delighted you enjoyed reading this chapter!  Your encouraging comments are so appreciated!!

I tried to keep the characters as close to canon as possible, yet also take into consideration the years that have passed, in which everyone has also evolved and grown through life experiences.  Brian and Justin, now that they've been married for more than 10 years and been totally monogomous, and the fact that their son is now in his early twenty's, would likely handle a situation differently than they would have 20 years ago.  Yet, their personalities are still the same.  I hope I've been able to keep true to that dynamic and found the balance :)

Thank you imeensely for your support of the story!!

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: March 12, 2016 08:28 AM · On: Chapter 17

Hi,

I have not read this chapter yet but I got to write this. I so so so..excited and scream out loud when I saw the notification new chapter of your story. 

Waited almost close to 2 months for this chapter but I'm not complaining, just happy. 

Now back to reading.

Author's Response:

:)  I'm so glad you're excited about the new chapter!!  I certain hope it doesn't dissapoint!!  (Unfortunately, some personal tragedies within my family delayed my story update before now.)

I'll let you get back to your reading, now.  Enjoy!!

Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: February 25, 2016 05:02 AM · On: Chapter 16

Was just curious if you're planning on continuing this story which I adore so much. Hope the answer is seeing a new chapter posted soon.
Thanks

Author's Response:

Yes, the story is still ongoing.  I haven't abandoned it, I'm just sorry it has taken me longer recently to post my updates.  I am so humbled and appreciative for your continued support and feedback!!  Thank you!!

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: February 13, 2016 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 15

Just to let u know I did not abandon this story, just been very busy & back on track.

The editorial you put for Justin is good and well written.

Understand how difficulty Justin had to give up things that is important to him but he need do it for his hand sake.

Love it

Author's Response:

I'm happy you are still liking the story :)  A lot is appening in this chapter, and there are a lot of emotions appening as well.  Luckily, Justin and Brian have each other, and they are one another's strongest support system!

I'm so very grateful for your support and encouragement!!  Thank you!!

Reviewer: Henri (Anonymous) · Date: January 21, 2016 09:43 PM · On: Chapter 16

i am really enjoying this story and always look forward to sitting down with a cuppa to read the next instalment when it is posted 😊

Author's Response:

I'm so touched to know how much you are enjoying the story!  Having a cuppa while reading, sounds wonderful :)  Thank you so very much for your comments and for supporting the story!!  Both are greatly appreciated!!!

Reviewer: Jane (Anonymous) · Date: January 20, 2016 09:22 PM · On: Chapter 16

Is the plan for Brian and Justin (or maybe not Justin) to work in the PA office?   A bonus would be they'd be with their "family" especially JR and Gus/Shane.  I hope so, I love the business Brian...

Author's Response:

Oh, I'm sorry, I can't give away any spoilers about Brian and Justin :o 

However, I can say that their family, including the kids, Gus, Shane, and Jenny, will always 'stick together'.

Yep, business Brian can be a force to be reckoned with; he has a brilliant business sense.

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2016 11:21 AM · On: Chapter 16

I love these long chapters - very rich and full of character. Craig is unbelievable - Jennifer was so lucky to wise up and leave him. I like the way Brian protected Justin and Justin allowing him.

With the selling of the New York branch I'm feeling a bit confused - I don't know whether to be angry with Brian for not telling Justin straight away because he's trying to protect him or sympathize with him because he's trying to protect Justin.....talk about complicated. At least Brian is planning carefully. And with less pressure Justin should fare much better.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I do try to pack a lot of information into each chapter :)  I'm delighted you enjoy reading them!

Brian has always shown his protectiveness towards Justin, and as the years go by, I believe that aspect only strengthens.  With age and a bit more maturity, I think Justin realizes there are times when he needs to let Brian know he appreciates his protective nature.

Regarding Kinnetik, Brian's motives were pure of heart.  He didn't tell Justin initially for two reasons: one, he knew Justin would argue the point with him and try to insist he not sell it, and two, the most important, was if he had told him about it at the very beginning, which was at the time when Justin's hand was giving him extreme complications and affecting the quantity of his work at Kinnetik, it would have taken a hit on Justin's self esteem.  He would know undoubtedly that Brian was selling because of him, and neither man would ever condone the other making that much of a sacrifice for the other.  It was yet anoter spectre of Brian believing he was protecting Justin.

Thanks for your supportive feedback and for readng the story!  I apreciate both, immensely!

Reviewer: femmegirl49 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2016 09:19 PM · On: Chapter 16

This is a great story and I am so glad you didn't make us wait until the next chapter to find out what Brian was up to.  It's hard to imagine him not working, so that shoud be interesting to watch.  I love B&J in love like this....so special.

Now, I just have to comment with respect.  WHY is Brian still smoking?  I mean seriously, with his BP/heart issues it's not smart.  I think there is no way Justin would smoke still, especially not in front of Brian...and he would probably actively try to get Brian to quit.  I know this is a work of fiction, but everytime he lights up I cringe...please quit Brian!!

Thanks for giving us this wonderful story anyway.  I love it.  Peace.

Author's Response:

I'm so happy you're enjoying this story!

I totally agree that it's difficult to imagine Brian not working...we'll have to wait and see how that aspect plays out :)

Brian and Justin indeed have a very special and loving relationship; I'm so glad you like how they interact with each other.

Brian still struggles with his various vices, one of which is cigarettes.  I agree that in this verse, where he has blood pressure and heart issues, it would be better for him to stop.  If he does quit, Justin would certainly support him, like you said :)

Thank you so much for reading and for your insightful feedback!  I appreciate both, immensely!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2016 08:01 PM · On: Chapter 16

Wow.  Several things occurred to me.  Brian and Justin are truly not their fathers.  Craig really expected Justin to bail him out, irregardless of how he'd treated Justin over the years.  I would dearly love to know why he needs money.  Gus is not his father, he even gave him advice.  Now as to the sell of Kinnetik, I feel that Brian should have discussed it first with Justin, because even starting all inquires Justin is 1/2 owner and as such should have been involved.  At first I thought he might be turning the business over to Gus and Shane, guess I was wrong.  Exciting chapter.

Author's Response:

Very true, Brian and Justin are nothing like their fathers...thankfully :)   And they together have become wonderful dads to Gus, and treat Jenny Rebecca and Shane like they were also their kids.

Gus is an insightful young man and is very attentive to what's going on around him (at least in that way he IS like Brian).  It was good to see im giving is dad elpful and caring advice.

Brian's intentions of starting the process of selling Kinnetik New York without Justin's initial knowledge, were pure, and his heart was in the right place.  There's definately more to come regarding Kinnetik, but I can't give away any spoilers ;)

Thank you so much for your thoughtful feedback, and for reading the story!  Both are so apprecited!  I'm thrilled to have your continued support and encouragement!

Reviewer: Cemegh (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2016 02:50 AM · On: Chapter 15

I want to congratulate you on a beautifully written emotional rollercoaster of a story. It is certainly one of the best I've read in a long time. Thank you.

I think you've hit the nail on the head as far as Mels motivations are with her kids and her career. She acts as though they are possessions and only pays attention to them when others question her actions. Her treatment of Jenny is heartbreaking. At times she seems to understand how appallingly she is behaving but her career is simply too important to her to change.

Lindsay seems in complete and utter denial though. I'm struggling to find any rationale behind her actions. She appears totally under Mels thumb, yet she had the wherewithall to have an affair. Yet she couldn't find the backbone to go against Mel, even a little, when it comes to her kids? It's utterly infuriating.

Anyway, enough ranting. I look forward to the next updates. I really don't want this story to end

Author's Response:

Thank you immensley for your kind and thoughtful words!  I'm so thrilled to know you are enjoying this story!

Yes, Mel is a unique and selfish character in this fic, and her actions are indeed appalling.  Lindsay, as well, is a bit complex, and not in a positive way.  Thank goodness that Jenny Rebecca is now with her dads :)

Don't worry about 'ranting', I truly enjoy reading the feedback and gaining insight from the readers; it is truly encouraging!  Thank you again for reading this story and for commenting!  It's so greatly appreciated!!

Reviewer: zelldrake (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2015 05:25 PM · On: Chapter 15

this is one of my top ten gus stories

Author's Response:

Oh, I am so glad to hear that!  Thank you for your kind comment!  I'm thrilled to know how much you enjoy this story :)  Thank you!!

Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2015 09:47 AM · On: Chapter 14

This was f-ing awesome!

Author's Response:

Thank you very much!  I'm thrilled you enjoyed this chapter!  :)

Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: December 29, 2015 01:28 AM · On: Chapter 15

The rebuttal to the editorial made this a powerful chapter. Michael's childness is something hell never grow out of. Pity for Ben and Jenny.
Shane have a great example of what a loving couple and an accepting family is. Lucky.
Think Mel and Lindsay should just stay away. I don't feel that Jenny needs them.
I adore these long long chapters and now I can't wait for the next update.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I'm truly trilled you liked the powerful editorial of Justin's rebutal in this chapter!  It was an intense moment of of the story, and I also hoped it was encouraging, too...glad to know that it was :)

Shane does have a great and loving example of family dynamics from Gus, Brian, and Justin.

Jenny is indeed very happy now with her life and living with her dads.   Also, from this point onward in the story, we won't hear much from Mel or Lindsay.

I'm very glad you are enjoying the long chapters, and I immensely appreciate your supportive feedback!!

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2015 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 15

Omg...I can't even get my thoughts together. The first part of this chapter was HILARIOUS! Then it took a very emotional turn with Brian saying some very ominous things. I'm a little nervous about what it could be all about. Please update soon.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading! I'm delighted you enjoyed the humor in this chapter!  There is often so much emotion in this story, I wanted to inject a bit of playful banter :)

Justin dealing with the issues of his hand and how it's now affecting his career and personal life, forcing him to make drastic changes, is difficult.  Thankfully, Brian is still his biggest supporter.  However, Brian will also make some changes in the near future.  (Don't get too nervous about it, though.)

Thank you so very much for your ongoing support and encouraging comments!  They're greatly appreciated!!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2015 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 15

This was an emotion packed chapter.  I'm pleased that the interaction with Lindsay and Mel were kept to a minimun.  There was enough screaming and shouting from Michael.  All his 'it's all about me, me, me!' shit had me wanting to smack him.  I think Justin did the right thing on both the editorial and the new work policy.  You done good and I'm alway excited to read another chapter from you.

Author's Response:

I'm thrilled you liked this chapter!  Thanks for reading and commenting!

The Lindsay and Mel componant will be at a minimum from this point onward in the story.  We might, however, see a couple more queen-out moments from Michael.  Yes, getting him to grasp a concept can sometimes be difficult, and can incite thoughts of smacking him, LOL!

Justin is going through a bit of a rough patch at the moment, but as always, he has the full support and love of Brian, and their little family :)

I'm so very appreciative of your encouraging feedback!  Thank you!!

Reviewer: Larka (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2015 11:28 PM · On: Chapter 14

Poor Shane!  So glad he found Gus, Justin and Brian.

What a horrible mom Melanie turned out to be!

 

Author's Response:

It is a wonderful thing that Shane has Gus in his life, and that he also has the support of Justin and Brian as well!

The emotional pain Mel caused J.R. is sad, but now that Michael and Ben have full custody of her, I think she's going to be much happier :) 

Thank you so very much for your feedback!  I'm so happy that you are continuing to enjoy the story!  Your comments and support are immensely appreciated!!

Reviewer: Lady Luciole (Anonymous) · Date: December 13, 2015 11:04 AM · On: Chapter 14

Is it me or Emmet and Drew aren't in the 2nd part of your story ?

By the way, I'm a little bit aggravated because I read this part of the story before "To be or not to be" because I didn't know it was a sequel. It is better to know before reading them !! It's an amazing story who trully should be read in order...

I can't wait to know what you have in store for their fammilly. Your plots are incredible, full of emotion and I love those stories !

Author's Response:

I'm immensely grateful for your comment about the sequel, "To Be, Or Not To Be."  I should have put that bit of information in the summary section of this story, but I guess I simply overlooked it.  However, thankfully, it as now been corrected :)

Regarding Emmett and Drew...I've mentioned them in this story, although only very briefly.  I didn't have any intentions on omitting or ignoring them, and I definately have nothing negative regarding either character.  This second part of the story focuses mainly on the lives of Gus, J.R., Brian, and Justin, but Emmett and Drew will be mentioned a few more times :)

I'm so grateful for your insightful feedback!  Thank you for reading this story and it's prequel; I'm deligted to know you are enjoying it!!  Your support is greatly appreciated!!

Reviewer: zelldrake (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2015 11:17 AM · On: Chapter 14

so damn good

Author's Response:

I'm so delighted you enjoyed this capter!  Thank you!!

I deeply appreciate your continued support, and your feedback!  I'm so very grateful!!

Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: December 11, 2015 03:15 PM · On: Chapter 14

I got the feeling during the show and now here in this chapter, Mel never really wanted to be a mother. She just wanted to prove she could. I think that why in the show she went and had the operation to clear her endometreosus (sp).
Anyhow, Brian hit it right on the head. It was always about the case. Proof in point was how you had her say good-bye to Jenny. She'll be much better without Mel and Lindsay.
Amazing how quickly Shane became attuned to the onset of Gus' anxiety and panic attacks. Certainly made good in Brian's book. He has a whole new family. It's what he needs. His father belongs right up there vying for father of the year with Jack and Craig.
This is a wonderful story, and you're doing a great job.

Author's Response:

Thank you so very much!!

I totally agree with you...I got the same impression when watching the show about Mel being a mother.  In one episode, right after Mel discovered she was pregnant, Mel stated to Lindsay she'd, "Never be the type of moter who would be willing to give everything up to be with their kid 24/7."  Mel's life centered on her career, and in this story, with harsh consequences.  Yes, the goodbye scene was sad for sweet J.R., yet I thought it fit with the whole of Mel's behavior.  I don't think it would have worked had Mel been emotional, sentimental, or motherly, as we haven't seen those aspects to her character in this story.

I believe that Shane, at 26-years-old, would have a more deliberate focus after Gus told him all about his tragic accident.  He was then able to observe Gus and become more attuned to him.  Also, the very first time Gus ever met Shane, he had a panic attack right in front of him.  And Shane also witnessed a few more, directly after that.

Indeed, Shane is definately growing on our illustrious Brian Kinney :)  And Shane now has the support of the three Kinney men. 

I'm immensely grateful for your continued support and encouraging words!  It's so wonderful to hear that you are enjoying the story, and your insightful feedback is much apprecited!!

 

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2015 03:32 AM · On: Chapter 14

such an emotional roller coaster that was - but beautifully written and heartfelt

well done

Charle

Author's Response:

Thank you so much, Charle, for your encouraging comment!  I agree, there were a lot of emotions in this capter, yet the family's suuport remained strong throughout.

I'm so thrilled you're reading and enjoying this story, and am so very grateful for your ongoing support and feedback!!

Aislin

Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2015 08:27 AM · On: Chapter 13

Wow! This was good stuff, like a soap opera. I know I'm hooked. Soooooo glad JR is outta there. Mel was losin' it!  Also glad to see Shane is continuing to be good for Gus.

Author's Response:

Thanks!! :)  It does read a bit like a soap opera, doesn't it?  I hand't thought about that aspect before :)  I am so delighted to know you are enjoying the story!!

Yep, JR is now with her dads, but the next chapter will reveal the battle for her permanent custody.

I think that Shane and Gus are good together, and they are good for each other.  More will appear in upcoming chapters about their relationsip, as it blossoms.

I'm very appreciative of your continued support of this story, and your perceptive and encouraging comments!  Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Cristina (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2015 12:10 PM · On: Chapter 13

Loving this history so much! Without angst among our boys just perfect! It's a pleasure to read! Thank you. :)))))

 

Love Gus & Shane. <3

Author's Response:

You are very welcome :)  I'm thrilled to hear you are enjoying this story!!

Yes, you're right...  Altough our boys may face some diffucult situations, Brian and Justin always stay by each other's side and support one another.

I'm glad you like the coupling of Gus and Shane.  They are good for each other :)

Thank you immensely for reading, and for your inspiring feedback!!  Both are so greatly appreciated!!

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2015 12:29 AM · On: Chapter 13

I'm crying happy tears over here. Thank everything holy that J R is going to live with her dads. I could just reach out and strangle Mel for putting her through that bullshit. Please update soon my friend, I can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response:

Awww...I'm glad the tears are happy ones ;)

I completely understand about wanting to strangle Mel.  I htink there might be a few people in line for that one, LOL!  We'll discover in the next chapter what happens in regards to JR's permanent custody.

I can't say 'Thank You' enough, my friend, for your continued support and your kind, inspiring comments!!

 

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2015 09:36 PM · On: Chapter 13

Love this story so much. Finally Jennyis with her dads ... and I hope permantly.

* hugs *

Author's Response:

I am so deeply appreciative for your kind support!  So delighted to hear you are continuing to love this story!

The next chapter will reveal the outcome of Jenny's custody.  A wee bit of angst will of course accompany that particular part of the story :)

Thank you very much for your encouraging comments!

*hugs*

 

Reviewer: Jane (Anonymous) · Date: November 30, 2015 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 13

OH HAPPY DAY - CHAPTER 13 IS UP

 

 

 

 

Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm thrilled to know you were happy to see the new chapter :)   I sincerely hope you enjoyed reading it! 

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2015 08:46 AM · On: Chapter 13

Another great lovely long chapter. The custody twists are surprising - Mel should have covered her back better but then it's a good thing she didn't - she probably would never have been found out if she just let Jenny see her dads without all the shit she caused. It's good to see the kids are where they're the happiest - those girls need to learn if you're going to have kids they become a priority (I could go on a complete rant right now about selfish and harmful parenting - but I'm sure you get the idea...) Now that the kids are sorted I'm starting to feel a little worried about Justin. Getting older and having painful joints from previous injuries beginning to hinder the things I love doing and feeling like I'm losing part of myself, I feel complete sympathy for Justin. Drugs are helpful but the side affects suck. Justin's heart must be slowly breaking knowing that bit by bit he's losing the use of his hand. I love how you show Brian's love and understanding. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your dedicated, ongoing supoort of this story!  I'm greatly apprecitive of your insightful feedback!

Regarding Mel...sometimes in life, it is the simplest things that go unnoticed or get overlooked (which in this case was a good thing).  I'm certain that she never thought about the aspect of JR's custody or citizenship being callenged, at least by Michael.  Unfortunately for her, she also didn't give consideration to the fact that if Brian ever found out, coupled with her sore lacking of parenting skills, that he wouldn't do someting to help JR.  The next chaper will reveal the solution to JR's permanent custody.  I completely understand about wanting to rant against selfish and harmful parenting :)

You're exactly right about how previous injuries to one's joints only compounds and worsens with age.  It isn't pleasant, and actually becomes more painful and debilitating.  Brian is certainly Justin's stronghold through it all, however it doesn't make the situation any less heartbreaking for Justin, as you said.

I'm so very delighted you enjoyed this chapter!!  Thank you again for reading and commenting!

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2015 06:19 AM · On: Chapter 13

Wow! Great Chapter! So much happened! I'm so happy for JR... Gus is in love, Brian growing fond of Shane, miracles never cease...

Now the battle begins, I can't wait for the showdown... Mel and Linds really are delusional...

Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

I can't thank you enough, my dear friend, for your wonderfully encouraging comments! 

There was a lot happening in this chapter, and the next one will also be full of action; we'll find out the solution of Jenny's custody battle.

Gus and Shane are a neat couple, although Brian is still struggling at times about accepting the fact his son is in love :)  But we wouldn't want Brian any other way, LOL!

Mel and Lindsay clearly have issues.  A bit more light will be shed on that aspect, too, in the next chapter.

Thank you again for your attentive feedback!  I'm so inspired by your ongoing support!!

Hugs, hon.

Aislin

Reviewer: Tasha (Anonymous) · Date: November 30, 2015 04:42 AM · On: Chapter 13

Yay for Michael and Ben such touch felt chapter and intense Brian to the rescue I so love this story so much

Author's Response:

Wow, thank you so much for your kind and encouraging feedback!  I'm so very grateful for the continuing support!!  It's wonderful to know you are reading and enjoying this story!!

Reviewer: mamaduck (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2015 03:37 AM · On: Chapter 13

I love that the Karma train ran Mel over spectacularly.

I also love that Gus has found Shane.  He will be good for Gus, if he can survive Brian. (LOL)

Author's Response:

Sure enough, Brian is a challenging and daunting force to be reckoned with, LOL!

You're absolutely right...Karma did indeed come face-to-face with Mel.  Of course having Brian's assistance certainly helped :)

I'm very grateful for your ongoing feedback and for reading this story!  Thank you!

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: November 28, 2015 02:50 AM · On: Chapter 11

Great Gus set his decision to study at NYU, not allowing his moms to manipulate his mindset.

Oh dear, how can Linds make use of his son for her own purpose.

Mm... Look like Shane Ryan is not in Brian good book. Ok you will not make Shane to come in between Brian and Justin. Hope my guessing is right.

1 more episode to go, catching up on your story is done.

Author's Response:

Yes, your guessing is right...Shane won't come between Brian and Justin :)  Althoug in this chapter, he's not quite yet in Brian's good book.

Gus is very much like his father in that when he makes his mind up about something, he doesn't steer away from it; he's a determined and free-thinking young man.

Lindsay has had, and still has, an odd perspective of her relationship with Brian.  Sadly, she seems to think that she must retain some connection to him.

It's so encouraging to know that you are reading and enjoying this story!!  Thank you so much for your supportive and insightful feedback!!

 

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: November 27, 2015 07:29 AM · On: Chapter 9

Another brilliant chapter. 

Brian is awesome dad and commend him for undertaking Gus road to recovery responsibility.

Author's Response:

Thank you!!  So happy to know how much you enjoyed this chapter :)

Yes, Brian understood tat Gus' healing was not only about the pysical, but the emotional and psychological as well.  The atmosphere in Brian and Justin's home is calm, and both dads are loving, patient, and committed to their son.  In their care is the absolute best place Gus can be!

I'm so very grateful for your feedback, and your encouragment!!

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: November 25, 2015 04:10 PM · On: Chapter 7

Great chapter and truly enjoying it.

Author's Response:

Marvelous!!  I can't tell you how wonderful it is to know you are liking this story!!  I'm happy you are reading it, and enjoying it as well!!  I'd like to thank you for your supportive feedback!! :)

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: November 25, 2015 02:16 AM · On: Chapter 5

OMG, Linds again didn't learn her lesson from her previous affair. She hurt Mel and now Gus into a situation with extensive of unnecessary medication. Some more for young teenage boy to cope the overall situation himself. How can a mom does that to her child and ignore that is her fault. I just can't believe it.

Understandable Mel action bcos of Linds affair but as Brian said the adults had to be responsible for their own action not to put burden on the children.

Good job.

Author's Response:

Thank you so very much!  I'm so thrilled to know you enjoyed this chapter!  It was an intense one, especially the communication between all four parents.  Brian doesn't mince words and he's always blut and no-nonscense, which, particularly in this situation, was appropriate.  His honesty is what Mel and Lindsay needed to hear.

I appreciate your feedback immensely!  Thank you again for taking the time to read and to comment!!

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: November 24, 2015 04:12 PM · On: Chapter 4

Oh I feel for Justin on his limitations and grateful Brian is always there for him.

Poor Gus & JR on their own when sick but lucky grandma is there for them unlike their mums not putting their children as priority.

Just wonder how long more Brian had to clean up the Mel & Lindsay mess.

Author's Response:

I can totally imagine Deb being utterly devoted to her grandkids :)  And, she doesn't pull any punches, either, which is a good thing in this situation!

Brian and Justin are truly a devoted couple.  They are precisely where, and with whom, they want to be, and both will do anyting for each other.

Regarding Mel and Lindsay, well, let's just say that as you continue through the story, Brian and Justin will be cleaning up a few more messes for the two women ;)

Thank you so very much for your feedback!  I appreciate it tremendously, and I'm happy you are enjoying reading this story!!  :)

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: November 22, 2015 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 2

Dun understand what the munchers is thinking. Parenting is not about competition. Is love and understanding parent towards their children. The dads did a much better job in parenting skills than the moms.

Love the bonding and support Gus and JR had for each other. The brotherly love Gus show JR is priceless.

Brian stay true to his principle that "I'm not my Father" and vow never to be like his father. His love for his son is just beyond words.

Love it.

Author's Response:

Thank you immensely for your insightful  feedback!  And I'm so happy you are enjoying the story!

There are a lot of interesting dynamics going on between all the characters.  Clearly, Lindsay and Mel haven't quite figured out the whole 'parenting is not a competition' thing :)  Indeed, Brian and Justin are not self-absorbed in their parenting skills, and look out as best they can for their son, and even JR.  Gus and JR have a very special bond, and Gus seems to be one who will always be the protective big broter.

Brian has determined to be NOTHING like is own father, especially when it comes to Gus.  And Justin, too, I think, can share in a bit of that because he is nothing like his own dad, Craig Taylor.  I'm delighted you like the aspect of how loving and devoted Brian and Justin are with Gus!

I appreciate your comments, and for taking time to read the story!!  Again, thank you!

Reviewer: Jane (Anonymous) · Date: November 22, 2015 05:06 AM · On: Chapter 12

And I hope the judges ruling is that Mel is an unfit mother who will lose custody of JR. Start packing JR hopefully you are heading for Pittsburgh.

Shane is exactly what Gus needs and aren't his fathers just the very best.

Thank you for continuing this wonderful story.

 

 

Author's Response:

I'm so delighted you are continuing to enjoy this story!!  Thank you so much for such encouraging comments!!  They are truly appreciated!!

Shane will be very good for Gus; and Gus for Shane :)  Indeed, Brian and Justin are the perfect match!  They compliment each other so wonderfully.

The next chapter will focus heavily on the custody battle for JR.  Let's keep our fingers crossed that she can soon be packing that suitcase.

Thanks again for reading, and for your feedback!!

Reviewer: Larka (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2015 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 12

I'm so happy for Gus!  He deserves someone sweet like Shane.  I'm glad Brian has started the ball rolling to get Ben and Michael custody of Jenny.  Poor kid.  Mel is unbelievable!

 

Author's Response:

Awww...I'm so happy to hear that you like the budding relationship between Gus and Shane!  Gus certainly does deserve it, doesn't he?!!

Yep, Mel is something else!  The next chapter will reveal the custody solution for JR, along with what they all went through to get to that point.  Of course Brian and Justin are right there, all the way!

I'm so very grateful for your continued supportive comments and for reading the story!!  Thank you so much!!